The Place for Purging Porn and Pedo-Pandering (AKA P5 flag evaluations)

Yeah, that's a different Virgin Night.

Here's the Virgin Night the page is on.

(NSFW) http://g.e-hentai.org/g/16279/bd22d86054/

Deserving's butchery to the english language makes me frown.

It's also on a porn site, so that's not very good for it, so at the very least it needs to lose the link to the actual fic.

I'll skim through Virgin Night in a bit.

I'm going to have to agree that Hentai Kamen isn't even close to being porn from what I've reviewed so far. I haven't even seen anything that would explain why someone thought to flag it, unless they were just going by the title.

Resolving this one to keep.

Finished Webcomic.Druids (shorter than I thought). Edges the line, but I'm voting not porn. I'd say we need to make sure to clean the page, but it only has two tropes, so that's really not an issue.

Virgin Night seems to be more slice of life, for sure. There's porn in every story, but it feels more like there's more going on with these stories than being an excuse for porn.

I assume you are referring to the manga not the anime?

Yeah. I'm not going to hunt for the anime at the moment.

Looking through the voting queue, I noticed I hadn't voted on Dream Savior Gakuen. Subjective's review suggests it should be OK to keep, but there's a devilhead. Would whoever did so care to elaborate? Was there something Subjective missed?

Let's not make any assumptions. I want to make sure I have all my bases covered here before I vote.

edited 8th Aug '12 8:19:12 PM by tdgoodrich1

Martello?

There was that string of devils on the front page of the voting tool when he left maybe one of those?

Other then that I got nothing there is no data base page for it so I cant really help.

I have nothing to add except that I saw no evidence of anything more objectionable than what I covered.

I think a playthrough of a route took me about three hours, and I thought it likely the author's own content summary was right.

Did you just look at the one, or all of them? If you only looked at the one, I'll probably look over it myself for completeness's sake. If so, I need to know which so I won't retread the same ground. If you played through a couple, then I'll go ahead and vote angel unless whoever devilheaded it steps forward and convinces me otherwise.

edited 8th Aug '12 9:07:36 PM by tdgoodrich1

I only played one, and haven't played more since. Certainly if you have the time it won't hurt to look over more.

I angled for Jaja's brother. Obviously I don't think there's a walkthrough so you'll just have to try the best you can to find a the routes.

I think I previously suggested mesaging the creator for info.

edited 8th Aug '12 9:43:25 PM by UltimatelySubjective

Probably unnecessary. I'll take a look at it tomorrow.

God, Deserving is a fucked-up fanfic. And everyone is totally out of character.

The first chapter is about setting up the premise of the story - wizards who lost people in the Wizarding War are given ex-Death Eaters to watch over and... impregnate. Somehow that's a logical leap. There is a sex scene, but it's terribly written and involves the author saying THRUST! a lot, so it's also unintentionally funny. I don't know if I can read the fifty-plus chapters this involves though. The writing is terrible.

edited 9th Aug '12 8:57:29 AM by LargoQuagmire

Three chapters in to Deserving. There's only been two sex scenes, and they were both rapes and both horribly repulsive, but thankfully, not very long. Other than that, this woman cannot write to save her ass, so I'll probably cap off reading today at ten chapters. Thankfully, she doesn't write much.

Read enough to get a feel for it, then. Select a several chapters at random. It worked for Tales of MU.

At least they're all adults,eh?

Angelheaded Dream Savior Gakuen. Nothing in violation of our content policy that I could find. It's rated 13+ on the site you download it from anyways. (For reference, there is also a 16+ category for borderline stuff)

Nine chapters in and it's pretty obvious that this isn't porn. There is far too much plot for it to be considered so, and, even though everyone in this fic is grossly out of character, they are not mindless sex machines by any means. I'll read a few more random chapters tomorrow, to see if maybe it turns into something ridiculously sex-filled, but given the way the author has presented this, it should be an easy angel-head.

(It still sucks ass as a story, but we aren't judging on quality, *coughfiftyshadesofgraycough*)

Voted devil on Kleinhasa. Looking over the discussion on it, it's probably too much porn to meet our standards. The review Komodin linked earlier didn't do it any favors.

Also voted angel on Deserving. What should I look at next?

edited 9th Aug '12 12:36:13 PM by tdgoodrich1

Well demonbane Is still on the list with one angel, I can help with that one and we have a ton of info on it over in post-links.

Other then that take your pick and we will do our best to help.

P.s.We are down to only two pages way to go 5p.

edited 9th Aug '12 12:59:06 PM by shadis

Already voted on it. What next?

OK so that was your vote got it.

Webcomic/Linburger has no votes ether way.

Looked through about 100 pages. It's probably too porny to keep. Seemed like the chapters were just setups for a sex scene. Devilhead.