They were character voice exercises, but then they turned into monologues. I'm thinking of making a bigger story (or a play) out of them, maybe.
A possible main story: Three men want to make it in Studio Town (this world's version of Hollywood), but one of them is letting his rapidly growing ego get in the way.
I want to know if they sound awkward or unnatural, or just like they wouldn't happen.
They were character voice exercises, but then they turned into monologues. I'm thinking of making a bigger story (or a play) out of them, maybe.
A possible main story: Three men want to make it in Studio Town (this world's version of Hollywood), but one of them is letting his rapidly growing ego get in the way.
I want to know if they sound awkward or unnatural, or just like they wouldn't happen.
They're here:
http://kaleilieghphant.livejournal.com/15661.html
I'd also like to know if they seem to have a deeper meaning or a message.
(Also, if I do make them into a story, I'll definitely make up my own celebrities, instead of using real ones.)
I'm an elephant. Rurr.