Do you have any actual text for it?
Read my stories!Not yet. I'm still working on it. I don't want to reveal too many spoilers as I would like to turn this into a web novel one of these days this year.
The premise sounds nice enough, this could be written to be a good story, one would have to judge the execution, which is why you should probably post up some actual text to judge.
Edit: ahh, ninjad.
edited 21st Jan '12 7:47:06 AM by fanty
To be frank, I was wondering if it's acceptable for me to add my own ideas and remove some elements from the original mythology. I would like to avoid Did Not Do The Research and based on what I read about the entire mythology, there are some aspects that I would not want to put in the story, as well as adding some new ideas of mine to compensate the ones that I have removed.
Writers generally mess around with legends and mythology so much that I don't really think that anyone would have any objections to you doing too. I mean, I have a retelling of Arthurian legend on my bookshelf where he's just a dumb warlord who never achieves anything and just makes enemies all the time, and that book received an award. So you're totally safe adding and removing stuff.
edited 22nd Jan '12 6:04:57 AM by fanty
I've been working on this story for some time now and I would like to hear some feedback from anyone who has visited this thread and is interested. I have to tell you that my story's heavily based on Norse Mythology and I'm unsure if I could add some new races that I've made for the story alongside the races that appeared in the original mythology. Of course, they are relevant plot-wise. Is it okay to take some creative liberties of it? (I actually did research on Norse mythology, just that there are certain aspects of it that has to be changed in order to suit the setting of my story.)
Basically in my story, the people in each important country worship one of the gods in Norse mythology and have different backstories of how they were defeated and all that. Which leads to many arguments between different countries (sometimes political, occasionally religious) as the backstories differs to a certain extent, depending on who a person may ask.
My story begins with a housewife around her thirties opening a book that transports her into a fantasy world. The fantasy world is mostly 18th/19th century-ish in terms of its technology, fashion, politics (not totally) and architecture but medieval in several aspects. Before that, we get to see the housewife's little wish of being a hero like the knights in shining armors she reads to her son in his bedtime stories.
So she unintentionally interrupted a ceremony and was luckily saved by a knight from another country, claiming the people in the ceremony that she's The Chosen One going to save the world from despair (as well as preventing another Ragnarok, which killed many of the gods from happening).
Okay, the story may sound a little overused; just to let you know the background of the story I'm talking about. As for the main protagonists (All of them actually have last names. I'm still trying to find appropriate last names and will be revealed in future):
So guys, what do you think? Feedback is greatly appreciated.
edited 21st Jan '12 7:33:03 AM by MrHollowRabbit