I've actually written five pages of this story. Here's a summary I wrote up on the spot. Tell me what you think.
Young Mickey is living in a nameless city that, by day, is covered by a dense mist that leaves the whole city looking gray. But a night, the mist departs, the lights come on and the fun starts.
All is fine as Mickey and his friends go through the routine of going out every night... Until he spots a young woman dressed up in victorian clothing, being lead around by some guy like a child. They peak his interest. Nick naming them "Baby Doll" and "The Master", he decides to ask around about them, despite vague warnings from friend and stranger alike.
Is it coincidence that the same time Baby Doll shows up, warnings are painted all over town?
Reveal a truth you cannot bare, for soon we will all be cleansed
Now secrets of his friends are being brought to light, some that should be kept hidden away.