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Erock Proud Canadian from Toronto Since: Jul, 2009
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#1: Jul 15th 2011 at 1:20:15 PM

I've started really writing for the first time. I'm not having any trouble with actually getting down to it. Hwoever, I could use an opinion on my style and prose. I know it used to be good in middle school, but I could use some guidance. Where could I dump the first bit of my story?

If you don't like a single Frank Ocean song, you have no soul.
QQQQQ from Canada Since: Jul, 2011
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Erock Proud Canadian from Toronto Since: Jul, 2009
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#4: Jul 15th 2011 at 1:27:26 PM

It's like 4 pages of Word.

If you don't like a single Frank Ocean song, you have no soul.
QQQQQ from Canada Since: Jul, 2011
#5: Jul 15th 2011 at 1:28:56 PM

I think it's alright to have your own thread for that, to not overwhelm the others waiting their turn in the Critique club. Perhaps split it up into a few parts. I might look.

deathjavu This foreboding is fa... from The internet, obviously Since: Feb, 2010
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#6: Jul 15th 2011 at 1:49:44 PM

[up][up] I've posted 12 pages of word (double spaced) on the critique club before, but yeah, there are quite a few people on there right now.

Look, you can't make me speak in a logical, coherent, intelligent bananna.
MrAHR Ahr river from ಠ_ಠ Since: Oct, 2010 Relationship Status: A cockroach, nothing can kill it.
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#7: Jul 15th 2011 at 1:59:43 PM

Wow. Four pages. So long.

No, really, it's fine. People have read more, people have read less. Just post and be ready to duck and cover.

Stop stalling and do it.

Read my stories!
Erock Proud Canadian from Toronto Since: Jul, 2009
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#8: Jul 15th 2011 at 9:37:43 PM

Shit, forgot about this thread. I'm not stalling. Alright, I'll post it tommorrow when I get on my desktop.

If you don't like a single Frank Ocean song, you have no soul.
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