blackcat
Since: Apr, 2009
#2: Jun 22nd 2011 at 7:08:54 PM
Restructured, got rid of some excess verbiage and neutralized the tone.
FastEddie
Since: Apr, 2004
#3: Jun 26th 2011 at 10:50:46 AM
Sweet. I'm going to start saying that certain articles need to be 'blackcatted' when they need that treatment.
Nobody will have any idea what I'm going on about, but I'll get a giggle out of doing it.
Goal: Clear, Concise and Witty
Total posts: 3
Alot of the article seems focused on putting a negative look on the particular genre.
Wondering if someone who knows the genre better can take a stab at re-writing it in a more neutral tone.