BetsyandtheFiveAvengers
Since: Feb, 2011
#2: Apr 11th 2011 at 12:59:00 PM
Did you maybe try a panel showing Nicky's reaction to Hunter and Libby's threats? I know that is sort of typical...
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#3: Apr 11th 2011 at 1:00:00 PM
Well, that's where the page ends, and I want to...
actually that could work.
Show Nicky whining and flailing about, and have the narration muse on his traits.
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BetsyandtheFiveAvengers
Since: Feb, 2011
#4: Apr 11th 2011 at 1:13:38 PM
That feels like the most natural place to take it, considering that the other two characters there are set up to be sort of tough...the people that the reader would be the most interested in, even though the narrator tells us they are focus should be elsewhere.
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So, ever have one of those places where you REALLY want to write, and you have point A and point C, but no idea how to get to point B?
Yeah, that's what I'm having issues with.
Where I am right now (for the record, this is a graphic novel script):
CAP 1:
Unfortunately, this is not the case.
CAP 2 (by Libby):
Libby Tremaine is not our protagonist.
CAP 3 (by Hunter):
Hunter Shicklegrüber is not our protagonist.
Panel 5. Hunter is now picking up Nicky by the scruff of his neck, grinning wickedly. Libby is cracking his knuckles.
SFX (Libby’s knuckles):
Krk—!
LIBBY:
Oh it’s payback time now.
CAP(by Nicky)
Instead, our protagonist is this…this thing.
NICKY:
Eep.
And this is the narration that happens (more or less, I will edit it a lot, I just have an outline I am working on) next, but I don't know how to start it:
Quite the tragedy, really.
Help?
edited 11th Apr '11 12:21:22 PM by MrAHR
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