Review my fanfic?

Hiyo. I'm not entirely sure if I should put this here, but I don't know where else it could go.

I'm making a Pokémon fanfic, and so far it has 4 chapters, 6,508 words, and 782 hits. It has 7 reviews, all of which are positive, which is a little worrying because the whole point of the fanfic is to increase my ability as a writer, and that won't happen without unbiased criticism. I feel like I'm doing something wrong, but the reviews I have are keeping me in the dark as to whether or not I am doing a good job.

So I guess, I want you guys to tell me if I'm doing fine, or if I'm just embarrassing myself. And I don't want smoke blown up my rear end: I want you to tell me exactly what's wrong with it and suggestions on what I can do to improve. Be as caustic as you need to be to get the point across, I won't be mad. Even Trolling can have some good insight.

Here's the link to the fanfic: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6443835/1/Pokemon_Getto_Da_Ze

If someone could help me make a trope page too, I'd be grateful.

edited 20th Feb '11 8:34:47 PM by Odonata

I believe this belongs in Writer's Block instead.

@OP: it goes in Writer's Block.

EDIT: Ninja'd.

edited 20th Feb '11 8:35:42 PM by drunkscriblerian

If I were to write some of the strange things that come under my eyes they would not be believed. ~Cora M. Strayer~

Really? I don't really have writer's block, I'm just looking for an opinion...

EDIT: Oh well. How do I move the thread?

EDITEDIT: BAH! I'll just make a new one over there. Thanks for the directions, guys.

edited 20th Feb '11 8:40:03 PM by Odonata

You can use the Writer's Block fora for that too.

I don't know, I think only the mods can do that.

Go here & start editing.

Thank you, Frodo Goofball! I'm sorry for inconveniencing everyone with my lurker...ish...ness.

Courtesy link to other thread.

I wish I had known it was that easy to get reviews around here.

Fractured, my Harry Potter Fic: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6655978/1/Fractured

Well, just post a link to your fanfic or other literature, and I'm sure someone will review it.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6655978/1/Fractured This one is my new ongoing work, its straight HP.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6559803/1/Images_of_Power This is my Doctor Who Harry Potter crossover starring Ginny and the Doctor.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6510880/1/The_Slap_Bet This is my Alternate Universe Ginny/Hermione comedy romance.

Fractured, my Harry Potter Fic: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6655978/1/Fractured