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Weaver Since: Jan, 2001
#1: Jan 26th 2011 at 2:02:55 PM

My current WIP (well, the plans for it anyway) has the internet playing a rather important role in proceedings. Unfortunately I haven't a clue as to how to present forum posts and/or chatroom activity in writing. Is there anyone who can give me any advice?

Tzetze DUMB from a converted church in Venice, Italy Since: Jan, 2001
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#3: Jan 26th 2011 at 2:08:13 PM

Just present it like normal dialogue, only instead of them going to a club, they're staring at their screen?

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#4: Jan 26th 2011 at 2:08:46 PM

But, there are ways to do textdumps that can entice readers. I can't believe I'm doing this, but check out the logs for Homestuck. Your Mileage May Vary.

I don't think presenting it as normal dialogue would work. They aren't really "saying" it. They are typing it.

edited 26th Jan '11 2:09:33 PM by Saturn

BobbyG vigilantly taxonomish from England Since: Jan, 2001
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#5: Jan 26th 2011 at 2:29:29 PM

Homestuck's approach is to present all the online dialogue in the form of chat transcripts. It works, but it'd be a very unconventional thing to include in a novel. It reads more like a playscript than anything.

I remember somebody here once linked to a short story about time travel which was written in the style of an Internet forum. Can't remember who that was or what it was called, but it worked OK as a storytelling medium.

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Tzetze DUMB from a converted church in Venice, Italy Since: Jan, 2001
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#6: Jan 26th 2011 at 2:32:18 PM

This one, probably.

That just works as an epistolary story, though.

edited 26th Jan '11 2:32:47 PM by Tzetze

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BobbyG vigilantly taxonomish from England Since: Jan, 2001
colbertimposter Since: Dec, 1969
#8: Jan 27th 2011 at 8:17:27 AM

Just turn it into a back and forth dialogue proceeding, but have the person using the computer thinking things instead of saying them. I'll try to show what I mean:

I'm so eager to see her message I might explode in my pants, so I turn on the computer and open her message as quickly as I can.

I open it and begin reading, "Dear Bob, you're a great guy, and I had a lot of fun last night..."

Yay! Looks like I'll be permitted into boob-town soon!

I read a little further, "But I've met someone else. I'm truly sorry. Best wishes, Sarah."

No! What could have possibly went wrong? I mean, sure I told her she looked like a hooker, but I meant it as a compliment!

[and so on...]

edited 27th Jan '11 8:39:35 AM by colbertimposter

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