I'm an aspiring TV writer (like everyone else) and I was hoping to get some critiques on my Glee spec script from fans of the show (or at least people who watch it and are pop culture savvy!!) I would love any critique I can get! I'm willing to trade reviews if any one wants to, just let me know!
Either post your thoughts here, PM me, or you can e-mail me at surpriseofthecentury@hotmail.com
Any critiques will be useful, but I'm especially interested in:
- overall story structure
- does it capture the tone/characters of the show?
- thematic strength/clarity
- originality/uniqueness
NOTE: The episode is set between DUETS and ROCKY HORROR GLEE SHOW
this is a questionaire you can use (if you find it helpful):
1. OVERALL RATING (out of 10):
2. WHAT ASPECTS DID YOU LIKE MOST:
3. WHAT ASPECTS DID YOU LIKE LEAST:
4. WERE THERE ANY PLOT POINTS/SCENES YOU ESPECIALLY LIKED/DISLIKED?
5. DID YOU FIND THE PLOT COMPELLING AND ORIGINAL?
6. WERE THE CHARACTERS AND TONE TRUE TO THE SHOW?
7. WHAT WOULD YOU SAY WAS THE THEME OF THE EPISODE?
8. WHAT ARE SOME WAYS THE SCRIPT MIGHT CONVEY THE THEME BETTER?
9. WHAT DID YOU THINK OF THE CHARACTER ARCS? PUCK'S? QUINN/SAM'S?
10. HOW WAS THE DIALOGUE? ANYTHING THAT STANDS OUT GOOD/BAD?
11. WHAT ARE SOME AREAS/SCENES THAT COULD BE CUT OR SHORTENED?
12. WHAT ARE SOME AREAS/SCENES THAT COULD BE EXPANDED OR CHANGED?
13. CAN YOU PICTURE THIS AS AN EPISODE IN THE SERIES? WHY/WHY NOT?
Thanks again for your help!
edited 23rd Dec '10 1:07:05 AM by SurpriseoftheCentury
I'm an aspiring TV writer (like everyone else) and I was hoping to get some critiques on my Glee spec script from fans of the show (or at least people who watch it and are pop culture savvy!!) I would love any critique I can get! I'm willing to trade reviews if any one wants to, just let me know!
You can get the script here: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=D3H51Y6P
Either post your thoughts here, PM me, or you can e-mail me at surpriseofthecentury@hotmail.com
Any critiques will be useful, but I'm especially interested in: - overall story structure - does it capture the tone/characters of the show? - thematic strength/clarity - originality/uniqueness
NOTE: The episode is set between DUETS and ROCKY HORROR GLEE SHOW
this is a questionaire you can use (if you find it helpful):
1. OVERALL RATING (out of 10):
2. WHAT ASPECTS DID YOU LIKE MOST:
3. WHAT ASPECTS DID YOU LIKE LEAST:
4. WERE THERE ANY PLOT POINTS/SCENES YOU ESPECIALLY LIKED/DISLIKED?
5. DID YOU FIND THE PLOT COMPELLING AND ORIGINAL?
6. WERE THE CHARACTERS AND TONE TRUE TO THE SHOW?
7. WHAT WOULD YOU SAY WAS THE THEME OF THE EPISODE?
8. WHAT ARE SOME WAYS THE SCRIPT MIGHT CONVEY THE THEME BETTER?
9. WHAT DID YOU THINK OF THE CHARACTER ARCS? PUCK'S? QUINN/SAM'S?
10. HOW WAS THE DIALOGUE? ANYTHING THAT STANDS OUT GOOD/BAD?
11. WHAT ARE SOME AREAS/SCENES THAT COULD BE CUT OR SHORTENED?
12. WHAT ARE SOME AREAS/SCENES THAT COULD BE EXPANDED OR CHANGED?
13. CAN YOU PICTURE THIS AS AN EPISODE IN THE SERIES? WHY/WHY NOT?
Thanks again for your help!
edited 23rd Dec '10 1:07:05 AM by SurpriseoftheCentury