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* CompleteMonster: Dereath implicitly caused the downfall of the preceding Lord Fardew and discredited and displaced anyone else who could have taken the job. He also unrepentantly engineered two deaths and framed Volle and Streak for the murders. When confronted over the deaths he ridicules Volle for clinging to the past, with regards to Volle's first love, Xiller, and confesses that he was planning on killing his accomplice. What's more, the only reason he targeted Volle in the first place was because Volle rejected his sexual advances.
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* CompleteMonster: Dereath implicitly caused the downfall of the preceding Lord Fardew and he discredited and displaced anyone else who could have taken the job. He also unrepentantly engineered two deaths and framed Volle and Streak for the murders. When confronted over the deaths he ridicules Volle for clinging to the past, with regards to Volle's first love, Xiller, in the first book and confesses that he was planning on killing to kill his accomplice. accomplice as well. What's more, the only reason he targeted Volle in the first place was because that Volle rejected his sexual advances.
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* CompleteMonster: Dereath implicitly caused the downfall of the preceding Lord Fardew and discredited and displaced anyone else who could have taken the job. He also unrepentantly engineered two deaths and framed Volle and Streak for the murders. When confronted over the deaths he ridicules Volle for clinging to the past, with regards to Volle's first love, Xiller, and confesses that he was planning on killing his accomplice. What's more, the only reason he targeted Volle in the first place was because Volle rejected his sexual advances.
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* CompleteMonster: Dereath implicitly caused the downfall of the preceding Lord Fardew and discredited and displaced anyone else who could have taken the job. He also unrepentantly engineered two deaths and framed Volle and Streak for the murders. When confronted over the deaths he brags about having also engineered the death of Volle's first love, Xiller, in the first book and confesses that he was planning on killing his accomplice as well. What's more, the only reason he targeted Volle in the first place was because Volle rejected his sexual advances.
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* CompleteMonster: Dereath implicitly caused the downfall of the preceding Lord Fardew and discredited and displaced anyone else who could have taken the job. He also unrepentantly engineered two deaths and frames Volle and Streak for the murders. When confronted over the deaths he brags about having also engineered the death of Volle's first love, Xiller, in the first book and confesses that he was planning on killing his accomplice as well.
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* CompleteMonster: Dereath implicitly caused the downfall of the preceding Lord Fardew and discredited and displaced anyone else who could have taken the job. He also unrepentantly engineered two deaths and frames framed Volle and Streak for the murders. When confronted over the deaths he brags about having also engineered the death of Volle's first love, Xiller, in the first book and confesses that he was planning on killing his accomplice as well. What's more, the only reason he targeted Volle in the first place was because Volle rejected his sexual advances.
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* TearJerker: Tish's account of what happened to his friend Archer in Pendant of Fortune.
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* TearJerker: Tish's account of what happened to his friend Archer in Pendant of Fortune.Fortune.
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* CompleteMonster: Dereath implicitly caused the downfall of the preceding Lord Fardew, Fardew and discredited and displaced anyone else who could have taken the job. He also unrepentantly engineered two deaths and frames Volle and Streak for the murders. When confronted over the deaths he brags about having also engineered the death of Volle's first love, Xiller, in the first book and confesses that he was planning on killing his accomplice as well.
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* CompleteMonster: Dereath implicitly caused the downfall of the preceding Lord Fardew, discredited and displaced anyone else who could have taken the job. He also unrepentantly engineers engineered two deaths and frames Volle and Streak for the murders. When confronted over the deaths he brags about having also engineered the death of Volle's first love, Xiller, in the first book and confesses that he was planning on killing his accomplice as well.
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* CompleteMonster: Dereath unrepentantly engineers two deaths and frames Volle and Streak for their the murders. When confronted over the deaths he brags about having also engineered the death of Volle's first love, Xiller, in the first book and confesses that he was planning on killing his accomplice as well.
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* CompleteMonster: Dereath.Dereath unrepentantly engineers two deaths and frames Volle and Streak for their murders. When confronted over the deaths he brags about having also engineered the death of Volle's first love, Xiller, in the first book and confesses that he was planning on killing his accomplice as well.
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* CompleteMonster: Dereath.
* TearJerker: Tish's account of what happened to his friend Archer in Pendant of Fortune.
* TearJerker: Tish's account of what happened to his friend Archer in Pendant of Fortune.
