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Idiot Plot is now Flame Bait
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* IdiotPlot: Steph blackmailing Verna for liking Pokemon. Verna has no reason to go along with it considering their teammate Korpse also plays Pokemon, and nobody bats an eye.
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** Nelson is either a likable protagonist or he TastesLikeDiabetes depending on who you ask.
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** Nelson is either a likable protagonist or he TastesLikeDiabetes depending is unbearably cutesy on who you ask.
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* DesignatedHero: Mozart, considering he seems very content with stealing Yentoulis' things and messing with them.
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* DesignatedHero: DesignatedHero:
** Mozart, considering he seems very content with stealing Yentoulis' things and messing withthem.them.
** Thunder is incredibly opinionated and can be a bigger {{Jerkass}} than some of the villains, but he's still treated like a hero.
** Mozart, considering he seems very content with stealing Yentoulis' things and messing with
** Thunder is incredibly opinionated and can be a bigger {{Jerkass}} than some of the villains, but he's still treated like a hero.
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* MoralEventHorizon: [[{{Big Bad}} Steph]] gets herself one of these before a challenge, in which she [[spoiler: sends a heartbroken Nelson out to look for a flower for his love interest, Korpse. During a huge thunderstorm. Turns out, the flower doesn't exist, and she also sics a huge, poisonous spider after him. She sent Nelson out there, which could have cost Nelson his life, had not been for Korpse finding out the truth and saving Nelson [[{{BigDamnHeroes}} just in time]].]]
* TheScrappy: Thunder is incredibly opinionated and can be a bigger {{Jerkass}} than some of the villains, but he's still treated like a hero.
* TheScrappy: Thunder is incredibly opinionated and can be a bigger {{Jerkass}} than some of the villains, but he's still treated like a hero.
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* MoralEventHorizon: [[{{Big Bad}} [[BigBad Steph]] gets herself one of these before a challenge, in which she [[spoiler: sends a heartbroken Nelson out to look for a flower for his love interest, Korpse. During a huge thunderstorm. Turns out, the flower doesn't exist, and she also sics a huge, poisonous spider after him. She sent Nelson out there, which could have cost Nelson his life, had not been for Korpse finding out the truth and saving Nelson [[{{BigDamnHeroes}} [[BigDamnHeroes just in time]].]]
* TheScrappy: Thunder is incredibly opinionated and can be a bigger {{Jerkass}} than some of the villains, but he's still treated like a hero.----
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* BaseBreaker: Drake. People either love him for being the nicest, most caring character in the story, despite being a tall, bulky Popular, or hate him for being a wimp who won’t man up despite his tall, imposing stature.
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* BaseBreaker: BaseBreakingCharacter:
** Drake. People either love him for being the nicest, most caring character in the story, despite being a tall, bulky Popular, or hate him for being a wimp who won’t man up despite his tall, imposing stature.
** Drake. People either love him for being the nicest, most caring character in the story, despite being a tall, bulky Popular, or hate him for being a wimp who won’t man up despite his tall, imposing stature.
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* MoralEventHorizon: [[{{Big Bad}} Steph]] gets herself one of these before a challenge, in which she [[spoiler: sends a heartbroken Nelson out to look for a flower for his love interest, Korpse. During a huge thunderstorm. Turns out, the flower doesn't exist, and she also sics a huge, poisonous spider after him. Had not been for Korpse finding out the truth, Nelson could have been voted out of the island… with his life gone as well.]]
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* MoralEventHorizon: [[{{Big Bad}} Steph]] gets herself one of these before a challenge, in which she [[spoiler: sends a heartbroken Nelson out to look for a flower for his love interest, Korpse. During a huge thunderstorm. Turns out, the flower doesn't exist, and she also sics a huge, poisonous spider after him. Had She sent Nelson out there, which could have cost Nelson his life, had not been for Korpse finding out the truth, truth and saving Nelson could have been voted out of the island… with his life gone as well.[[{{BigDamnHeroes}} just in time]].]]
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* MoralEventHorizion: [[{{Big Bad}} Steph]] gets herself one of these before a challenge, in which she [[spoiler: sends a heartbroken Nelson out to look for a flower for his love interest, Korpse. During a huge thunderstorm. Turns out, the flower doesn't exist, and she also sics a huge, poisonous spider after him. Had not been for Korpse finding out the truth, Nelson could have been voted out of the island… with his life gone as well.]]
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* MoralEventHorizion: MoralEventHorizon: [[{{Big Bad}} Steph]] gets herself one of these before a challenge, in which she [[spoiler: sends a heartbroken Nelson out to look for a flower for his love interest, Korpse. During a huge thunderstorm. Turns out, the flower doesn't exist, and she also sics a huge, poisonous spider after him. Had not been for Korpse finding out the truth, Nelson could have been voted out of the island… with his life gone as well.]]
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* MoralEventHorizion: [[{{Big Bad}} Steph]] gets herself one of these before a challenge, in which she [[spoiler: sends a heartbroken Nelson out to look for a flower for his love interest, Korpse. During a huge thunderstorm. Turns out, the flower doesn't exist, and she also sics a huge, poisonous spider after him. Had not been for Korpse finding out the truth, Nelson could have been voted out of the island… with his life gone as well.]]
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Removed the unnecessary Les Yay and added some audience reception tropes.
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** Nelson is either a likable protagonist or he TastesLikeDiabetes depending on who you ask.
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* [[spoiler: LesYay: Grace is this. She also referenced [[{{TotalDramaLetterz}} Irene]], who is part of her LGBT Support Group.]]
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* [[spoiler: LesYay: Grace is this. She DesignatedHero: Mozart, considering he seems very content with stealing Yentoulis' things and messing with them.
* EnsembleDarkhorse: Yentoulis, to the point were his elimination has been pushed back a few episodes (he was originally going to be the second boot).
* IdiotPlot: Steph blackmailing Verna for liking Pokemon. Verna has no reason to go along with it considering their teammate Korpse alsoreferenced [[{{TotalDramaLetterz}} Irene]], who plays Pokemon, and nobody bats an eye.
* TheScrappy: Thunder ispart incredibly opinionated and can be a bigger {{Jerkass}} than some of her LGBT Support Group.]]the villains, but he's still treated like a hero.
* EnsembleDarkhorse: Yentoulis, to the point were his elimination has been pushed back a few episodes (he was originally going to be the second boot).
* IdiotPlot: Steph blackmailing Verna for liking Pokemon. Verna has no reason to go along with it considering their teammate Korpse also
* TheScrappy: Thunder is
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As per TRS, Fan Favorite is being cut
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* FanFavorite: Sting, for being an original, positive character who isn’t portrayed as a saint while staying likable.
** Also Yentoulis, despite being the somewhat opposite.
** Also Yentoulis, despite being the somewhat opposite.
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** Also Yentoulis, apparently.
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** Also Yentoulis, apparently.despite being the somewhat opposite.
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** Also, apparently Yentoulis.
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** Also, apparently Yentoulis.Also Yentoulis, apparently.
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* [[spoiler: LesYay: Grace is this.]]
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* [[spoiler: LesYay: Grace is this. She also referenced [[{{TotalDramaLetterz}} Irene]], who is part of her LGBT Support Group.]]
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* FanFavorite: Sting, for being an original, positive character who isn’t portrayed as a saint while staying likable.
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* BaseBreaker: Drake. People either love him for being the nicest, most caring character in the story, despite being a tall, bulky Popular, or hate him for being a wimp who won’t man up despite his tall, imposing stature.
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* CreepyCute: Cherri's love of bugs can come off as unsettling, but her design is surprisingly cute.
* [[spoiler: LesYay: Grace is this.]]
* [[spoiler: LesYay: Grace is this.]]
