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* HarsherInHindsight: Some may be a little put off by Scootaloo's [[spoiler: complete indifference about not being able to fly at end of the story]], after watching "Flight to the Finish".
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* HarsherInHindsight: Some may be a little put off by Scootaloo's [[spoiler: complete indifference about not being able to fly at the end of the story]], after watching "Flight to the Finish".
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** The fic has a TakeThat at ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'', as every pony within three blocks shouts "NO THEY DON'T!" at Bon Bon's claim that vampires sparkle in the sun. The sequel features a Twilight who acts like Bella Swan, ie Twilight Twilight.
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** The fic has a TakeThat at ''Literature/{{Twilight}}'', ''[[Literature/TheTwilightSaga Twilight]]'', as every pony within three blocks shouts "NO THEY DON'T!" at Bon Bon's claim that vampires sparkle in the sun. The sequel features a Twilight who acts like Bella Swan, ie Twilight Twilight.
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** The reveal that Scootaloo's parents [[spoiler: are a pegasus mare and an earth pony stallion. The Last Crusade, where we meet her parents, reveals that defender2222 was correct on that mark]]
*** The fact that defender2222 thought [[spoiler: Scootaloo's parents would be boring when in fact they are characters who would have easily fit into an insane origin story]]
*** The fact that defender2222 thought [[spoiler: Scootaloo's parents would be boring when in fact they are characters who would have easily fit into an insane origin story]]
