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** This goes triple for ''[[WebVideo/MyLittlePonyTheMentallyAdvancedSeries Rainbow Dash Presents]]'' "[[ItMakesSenseInContext Captain Hook the Biker Gorilla]]''. [[spoiler:Rainbow is still appointed supervisor, but [[TruerToTheText is much more in line with her canon self]], [[AdaptationalHeroism being horrified by the titular machine and going out of her way to sabotage it on a few occasions]]. Even [[CanonForeigner Surprise]], who more or less adopts the BigBad position from Rainbow Dash, [[AffablyEvil is equally sincere and horrified by the machine]] and is only NecessarilyEvil for the good of Ponykind rather than going full psychopath. The ending revealing that [[AllForNothing they didn't really need to sacrifice anyone]] and that the Rainbow Factory will still work with just a box of crayons and a family portrait really lays the retardant on thick and leads into a SurprisinglyHappyEnding]].
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** An increasing number of people know about this fic through the [[WebVideo/MyLittlePonyTheMentallyAdvancedSeries Rainbow Dash Presents]] parody, to the point of accusing Aurora Dawn of ripping [=FimFlamFilosophy=] off. [=FimFlamFilosophy=] is trying to rectify this by crediting Aurora Dawn every time his characters are used in other videos and linking to the original fic on his blog.
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** An increasing A surprisingly large number of people know knew about this fic through the [[WebVideo/MyLittlePonyTheMentallyAdvancedSeries Rainbow Dash Presents]] parody, to the point of accusing thinking Aurora Dawn of was ripping [=FimFlamFilosophy=] off. [=FimFlamFilosophy=] is trying off [[FanNickname "Captain Hook the Biker Gorilla"]]. The creators of the latter attempted to rectify this by crediting Aurora Dawn every time his characters are were used in other videos and linking to the original fic on his blog.
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* AuthorsSavingThrow: One of the most common criticisms of the original story was that, in order for the weather factory to be producing rainbows regularly, they would logically have had to be killing way more foals than just the few that failed their flight tests. ''Pegasus Device'' explains that a few of the instructors were told to intentionally fail many of the foals taking their flight exams in order to keep up the factory's quota.
