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* AcceptableTargets: Soap operas. And angsty teens.
%%* EnsembleDarkhorse: Abel.
%%** Very recently, Chicki.
%%** Mink is also working hard to be one.
%%* EnsembleDarkhorse: Abel.
%%** Very recently, Chicki.
%%** Mink is also working hard to be one.
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** When Merlitz tells Dan that his new Cubi girlfriend wants to kill him, Dan gets [[HornyDevils distracted]] and starts asking if she can introduce him to a canine succubus. She will, in fact, bring him to the attention of such a Cubi and Dan will be a lot less happy to meet her.
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** When Merlitz tells Dan that his new Cubi girlfriend wants to kill him, Dan gets [[HornyDevils distracted]] distracted and starts asking if she can introduce him to a canine succubus. She will, in fact, bring him to the attention of such a Cubi and Dan will be a lot less happy to meet her.
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Indentation
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* FridgeBrilliance: The fae can travel in time as easily as we'd walk down the street. That'd explain why Mab's personality varies so much -- we're not seeing the same Mab every plotline.
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* FridgeBrilliance: FridgeBrilliance:
** The fae can travel in time as easily as we'd walk down the street. That'd explain why Mab's personality varies so much -- we're not seeing the same Mab every plotline.
** The fae can travel in time as easily as we'd walk down the street. That'd explain why Mab's personality varies so much -- we're not seeing the same Mab every plotline.
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Fa'lina, quote, "gives off no emotions" but her clan's affinity is "hope". "Hope" isn't exactly an emotion, it's more like a state of mind, and, psychology knowledge be damned, a state of mind isn't easily expressed like emotions tend to be.
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**Why does Fa'lina seem emotionless? Emotions/some facet thereof are feelings that're expressed, however, hope isn't exactly a emotion, it's a state of mind. How might one express a state of mind?
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* WhatAnIdiot: [[http://www.missmab.com/Comics/Ab_100.php Abel really should have known better than to shoot off snarky quips to Destania]] consequently pissing her off and [[NoHoldsBarredBeatdown ensuring himself a smackdown from her]]. [[http://www.missmab.com/Comics/Ab_102.php This page and the few afterwards show her brutality as the head of the Terror and Pain Department of SAIA.]]
** And yes, she ''is''[[spoiler: [[MoralEventHorizon slitting his throat]] [[CruelMercy without killing him]].]]
** And yes, she ''is''[[spoiler: [[MoralEventHorizon slitting his throat]] [[CruelMercy without killing him]].]]
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* TearJerker: [[TearJerker/DanAndMabsFurryAdventures Here]].
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* TearJerker: [[TearJerker/DanAndMabsFurryAdventures Here]].UnintentionalPeriodPiece: The 1997 story arc that saw ''Franchise/{{Pokemon}}'' becoming popular InUniverse (a case of EarlyInstallmentWeirdness) was based both on its incredible fame at the time and the idea that it was a fad that would eventually die out--and in the comic, it does. Today, with ''Pokémon'' remaining a CashCowFranchise in real life, the arc looks dated even compared to the rest of the pre-ArtEvolution strips--especially after [[http://www.missmab.com/Comics/Vol_993.php one comic from 2009]] was titled with a reference to the franchise only those who played the games would get.
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* TheWoobie: Abel, via his tragic backstory. Jyrras also becomes this for some fans.
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* TheWoobie: Abel, via his tragic backstory. Jyrras also becomes this for some fans.fans.
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YMMV can't be played with. And not YMMV.
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* AngstWhatAngst
** Apparently, [[spoiler:Mink's mother was murdered by an adventurer.]] Mink got over it.
*** Averted. Mink went through [[RealityIsUnrealistic a mourning period]] which they admit included [[DeathSeeker wanting to die]], but the length of this period is unknown, and it happened to a Cubi with an [[EmotionEater affinity for Joy]].
*** And Mink is [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness only ever]] [[BerserkButton seen angry]] after witnessing someone being antagonized while in mourning after losing his mother.
*** VERY much averted with [[spoiler:Cyra]]. The mere mention of [[spoiler: Hizell]] is enough to trigger a [[SuperPowerMeltdown nasty]] bout of [[HeroicBSOD PTSD]].
** [[http://www.missmab.com/Comics/Vol_833.php Heavily suggested to exist in universe]] with the fae; [[JustifiedTrope justified]] by their [[WeAreAsMayflies near immortality]].
* EnsembleDarkhorse: Abel.
** Very recently, Chicki.
** Mink is also working hard to be one.
** Apparently, [[spoiler:Mink's mother was murdered by an adventurer.]] Mink got over it.
*** Averted. Mink went through [[RealityIsUnrealistic a mourning period]] which they admit included [[DeathSeeker wanting to die]], but the length of this period is unknown, and it happened to a Cubi with an [[EmotionEater affinity for Joy]].
*** And Mink is [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness only ever]] [[BerserkButton seen angry]] after witnessing someone being antagonized while in mourning after losing his mother.
*** VERY much averted with [[spoiler:Cyra]]. The mere mention of [[spoiler: Hizell]] is enough to trigger a [[SuperPowerMeltdown nasty]] bout of [[HeroicBSOD PTSD]].
** [[http://www.missmab.com/Comics/Vol_833.php Heavily suggested to exist in universe]] with the fae; [[JustifiedTrope justified]] by their [[WeAreAsMayflies near immortality]].
* EnsembleDarkhorse: Abel.
** Very recently, Chicki.
** Mink is also working hard to be one.
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** Apparently, [[spoiler:Mink's mother was murdered by an adventurer.]] Mink got over it.
*** Averted. Mink went through [[RealityIsUnrealistic a mourning period]] which they admit included [[DeathSeeker wanting to die]], but the length of this period is unknown, and it happened to a Cubi with an [[EmotionEater affinity for Joy]].
*** And Mink is [[OOCIsSeriousBusiness only ever]] [[BerserkButton seen angry]] after witnessing someone being antagonized while in mourning after losing his mother.
*** VERY much averted with [[spoiler:Cyra]]. The mere mention of [[spoiler: Hizell]] is enough to trigger a [[SuperPowerMeltdown nasty]] bout of [[HeroicBSOD PTSD]].
** [[http://www.missmab.com/Comics/Vol_833.php Heavily suggested to exist in universe]] with the fae; [[JustifiedTrope justified]] by their [[WeAreAsMayflies near immortality]].
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* VillainHasAPoint: The VanHelsingHateCrimes and the FantasticRacism are bad, yes, but on the other hand, the FantasticRacism ''is'' a two-way street in this setting, and Creatures, especially the Demons, ''are'' prone as a species to running around killing, [[MindRape Mind Raping]] and eating any Being who isn't strong enough to stop them. Even wanting to assassinate Kria Soulstealer isn't that evil when you remember she ''is'' a ChaoticEvil mass-murdering cannibal, and openly proud of it.
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*** VERY much averted with [[spoiler:Cyra]]. The mere mention of [[spoiler: Hizell]] is enough to trigger a nasty bout of PTSD.
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*** VERY much averted with [[spoiler:Cyra]]. The mere mention of [[spoiler: Hizell]] is enough to trigger a nasty [[SuperPowerMeltdown nasty]] bout of PTSD.[[HeroicBSOD PTSD]].
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*** VERY much averted with [[spoiler:Cyra]]. The mere mention of [[spoiler: Hizell]] is enough to trigger a nasty bout of PTSD.
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* HarsherInHindsight: At the hands of CharacterisationMarchesOn
** First, Matilda's fear of pancakes, [[http://missmab.com/Comics/Vol_660.php mocked in strip 660]], is revealed to be the result of [[http://missmab.com/Comics/Ma_054.php a life-threatening adverse reaction]].
** Second, Regina's first rampage, initially played as a joke about [[BlueAndOrangeMorality demon priorities]] and an example of [[AlwaysChaoticEvil lazy demons-be-rampaging writing]], is revealed to be [[ATragedyOfImpulsiveness a tragic]] [[MistakenForPedophile misunderstanding]]
** First, Matilda's fear of pancakes, [[http://missmab.com/Comics/Vol_660.php mocked in strip 660]], is revealed to be the result of [[http://missmab.com/Comics/Ma_054.php a life-threatening adverse reaction]].
** Second, Regina's first rampage, initially played as a joke about [[BlueAndOrangeMorality demon priorities]] and an example of [[AlwaysChaoticEvil lazy demons-be-rampaging writing]], is revealed to be [[ATragedyOfImpulsiveness a tragic]] [[MistakenForPedophile misunderstanding]]
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* TearJerker: [[http://www.missmab.com/Comics/Ab_082.php These]] [[http://www.missmab.com/Comics/Ab_083.php two]] updates to Abel's Story.
** Seriously, how many tropers cried upon reading these?
** Abel's Story, PERIOD.
** [[http://www.missmab.com/Comics/Vol_824.php Mab's final goodbye to her mother.]]
** [[http://missmab.com/Comics/Vol_1363.php Pyroduck has to choose between Alexsi or his sense of security.]] [[spoiler:He chooses Alexsi.]]
** [[http://www.missmab.com/Comics/Ma_038.php "B... Brother?"]]
** Seriously, how many tropers cried upon reading these?
** Abel's Story, PERIOD.
** [[http://www.missmab.com/Comics/Vol_824.php Mab's final goodbye to her mother.]]
** [[http://missmab.com/Comics/Vol_1363.php Pyroduck has to choose between Alexsi or his sense of security.]] [[spoiler:He chooses Alexsi.]]
** [[http://www.missmab.com/Comics/Ma_038.php "B... Brother?"]]
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* TearJerker: [[http://www.missmab.com/Comics/Ab_082.php These]] [[http://www.missmab.com/Comics/Ab_083.php two]] updates to Abel's Story.
** Seriously, how many tropers cried upon reading these?
** Abel's Story, PERIOD.
** [[http://www.missmab.com/Comics/Vol_824.php Mab's final goodbye to her mother.]]
** [[http://missmab.com/Comics/Vol_1363.php Pyroduck has to choose between Alexsi or his sense of security.]] [[spoiler:He chooses Alexsi.]]
** [[http://www.missmab.com/Comics/Ma_038.php "B... Brother?"]][[TearJerker/DanAndMabsFurryAdventures Here]].
** Seriously, how many tropers cried upon reading these?
** Abel's Story, PERIOD.
** [[http://www.missmab.com/Comics/Vol_824.php Mab's final goodbye to her mother.]]
** [[http://missmab.com/Comics/Vol_1363.php Pyroduck has to choose between Alexsi or his sense of security.]] [[spoiler:He chooses Alexsi.]]
** [[http://www.missmab.com/Comics/Ma_038.php "B... Brother?"]]
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** When Merlitz tells Dan that his new Cubi girlfriend wants to kill him, Dan gets [[HornyDevils distracted]] and starts asking if she can introduce him to a canine succubus. She will, in fact, bring him to the attention of such a Cubi and Dan will be a lot less happy to meet her.
