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* CoveredInKisses: Marjorie Butterworth does this to Max in her first scene with him.
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* JerkassHasAPoint: While Mary's mother isn't exactly a shining beacon of parenthood, she isn't exactly wrong to object to the idea of her eight-year-old daughter being pen pals with a strange 44-year-old man, especially with the two exchanging pictures.
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* WhaleEgg: When Mary asks Max how babies are made, he says his mother told him that babies hatch from eggs lain by a rabbi.
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* WhaleEgg: When Mary asks Max how babies are made, he says his mother told him that Jewish babies hatch from eggs lain by a rabbi.rabbi, Christian babies by nuns, and atheists by prostitutes.
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* CrazyEnoughToWork: Max's suggestion that Mary tell a bully that [[spoiler: her birthmark is made of chocolate, which means she'd be in charge of chocolate when she got to heaven]]. This made the bully ''cry''.
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* CrazyEnoughToWork: Max's suggestion that Mary tell a bully that [[spoiler: her birthmark is made of chocolate, which means she'd be in charge of chocolate when she got to heaven]].heaven, and she would make sure that he didn't get any]]. This made the bully ''cry''.
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* NonStandardCharacterDesign: In contrast to the other characters' {{Gonk}}-ish, bug-eyed looks, Mary has a notably "cuter" appearance with BlackBeadEyes.
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* NonStandardCharacterDesign: In contrast to the other characters' {{Gonk}}-ish, bug-eyed looks, looks as per Adam Elliot's style, Mary has a notably "cuter" cuter appearance with BlackBeadEyes.
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* WhaleEgg: When Mary asks Max how babies are made, he says his mother told him that babies hatch from eggs layed by a rabbi.
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* WhaleEgg: When Mary asks Max how babies are made, he says his mother told him that babies hatch from eggs layed lain by a rabbi.rabbi.
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Max rubs himself with onions in the hopes that it'll repel Marjorie Butterworth. We never find out if it worked or not.
* WhatHappenedToTheMouse: Max rubs himself with onions in the hopes that it'll repel Marjorie Butterworth. We never find out if it worked or not.
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** The subject of [[spoiler:Damian's sexuality is foreshadowed as well -- he wanted to be in theater, he made Mary's wedding dress, they honeymooned at Mykonos, and the aforementioned ambiguous attitude towards his and Mary's consummating their marriage]].
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** The subject of [[spoiler:Damian's sexuality is foreshadowed as well -- he wanted to be in theater, he wore a shirt that advertised him as a fan of Boy George, he made Mary's wedding dress, they honeymooned at Mykonos, and the aforementioned ambiguous attitude towards his and Mary's consummating their marriage]].
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Max forgives Mary and she comes to visit him for the first time with her newborn baby... only to find that he passed away, albeit peacefully, on the very morning that she arrives.]] And then [[spoiler:Mary looks ''up'' to see that Max has laminated all of her letters and attached them to the ceiling in his home]].
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* BittersweetEnding: [[spoiler:Max forgives Mary and she comes to visit him for the first time with her newborn baby... only to find that he passed away, albeit peacefully, on the very morning that she arrives.]] And then [[spoiler:Mary looks ''up'' to see that Max has laminated all of her letters and attached them to the ceiling in his home]].home. In his final moments of life, Max gazed at the ceiling smiling. Dying peacefully and happy in the end]].
