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Spelling/grammar fix(es): corrected name spelling
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* BrokenPedestal: [[spoiler:Damien discovers his grandfather was in league with Trigon.]]
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* BrokenPedestal: [[spoiler:Damien [[spoiler:Damian discovers his grandfather was in league with Trigon.]]
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Spelling/grammar fix(es); spellcheck on Googling which one is right had the prompt complain about "e"
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* OhMyGods: When the corrupters are taking over the Justice League and later when Trigon is rising from the portal Wonder Woman says "Great Hera."
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* OhMyGods: When the corrupters corruptors are taking over the Justice League and later when Trigon is rising from the portal Wonder Woman says "Great Hera."
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* WorfHadTheFlu: Batman takes himself out of the picture by injecting himself with a concoction designed to drop ''Bane'' to prevent a corrupter from taking hold.
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* WorfHadTheFlu: Batman takes himself out of the picture by injecting himself with a concoction designed to drop ''Bane'' to prevent a corrupter corruptor from taking hold.
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General clarification on works content: making clearer why the demons are relevant.
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* MeaningfulLook: Shortly after a group of demons attack the carnival, Raven pointedly looks away from the other Teen Titans for a while, conveying her shame both for her DarkSecret and for concealing so much information from the rest of the team.
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* MeaningfulLook: Shortly after a group of demons attack Raven at the carnival, group carnival outing and force Raven to admit that she's been hiding things, Raven pointedly looks away from the other Teen Titans for a while, conveying her shame both for her DarkSecret (that she's part-demon) and for concealing so much information from the rest of the team.
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General clarification on works content: Starfire relays the claim, and it's a precise 14, not 14-18
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* AgeLift: The Titans are usually depicted as around the same age, here Starfire, Cyborg, and Dick are all 18-20 whereas the younger members Blue Beetle and Beast Boy are 13-16 and Raven claims she's 14-18 unlike in her previous incarnation.
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* AgeLift: The Titans are usually depicted as around the same age, here Starfire, Cyborg, and Dick are all 18-20 whereas the younger members Blue Beetle and Beast Boy are 13-16 and Starfire says Raven claims she's 14-18 is 14 unlike in her previous incarnation.
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Minor edit for wordflow and to convey the shame is part of the "Meaningful" in Meaningful Look
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* MeaningfulLook: Shortly after a group of demons attack the carnival, Raven can't do anything but look away from the others, conveying her shame both for her DarkSecret and for concealing so much information from the rest of the Teen Titans.
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* MeaningfulLook: Shortly after a group of demons attack the carnival, Raven can't do anything but look pointedly looks away from the others, other Teen Titans for a while, conveying her shame both for her DarkSecret and for concealing so much information from the rest of the Teen Titans.team.
