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The author is also making a [[ShowWithinAShow comic within a comic]] called Red Sorena. It's about a griffon ''Comicbook/RedSonja'' type character.
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The author is also making a [[ShowWithinAShow comic within a comic]] called Red Sorena. It's about a griffon ''Comicbook/RedSonja'' ''ComicBook/RedSonja'' type character.
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* [[ShowWithinAShow Comic Within A Comic]]: Red Sorena, Comicbook/RedSonja with griffons.
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* [[ShowWithinAShow Comic Within A Comic]]: Red Sorena, Comicbook/RedSonja ComicBook/RedSonja with griffons.
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** doubles as FridgeHorror: [[spoiler: Looks like Derpy ''really'' could have done with some better sex-ed.]]
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** doubles Doubles as FridgeHorror: [[spoiler: Looks like Derpy ''really'' could have done with some better sex-ed.]]
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* MythologyGag: Two of the Junior Speedsters, Surprise and Firefly, are basically exported straight from G1 MyLittlePony series, with Surprise being the proto-Pinkie personality that Creator/LaurenFaust had intended to use.
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* MythologyGag: Two of the Junior Speedsters, Surprise and Firefly, are basically exported straight from G1 MyLittlePony ''Franchise/MyLittlePony'' series, with Surprise being the proto-Pinkie personality that Creator/LaurenFaust had intended to use.
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Dewicking per TRS decision.
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* BiTheWay: [[spoiler: Rainbow Dash. Her first crush was Billy, but she's currently having feelings for Firefly.]]
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* ShoutOut: While Junior Speedsters [[http://sorcerushorserus.deviantart.com/art/Dash-Academy-3-Crash-Course-8-282859597 are training in the gymnasium]], the drama club is simultaneously rehearsing ThePhantomOfTheOpera.
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* ShoutOut: While Junior Speedsters [[http://sorcerushorserus.deviantart.com/art/Dash-Academy-3-Crash-Course-8-282859597 are training in the gymnasium]], the drama club is simultaneously rehearsing ThePhantomOfTheOpera.''Theatre/ThePhantomOfTheOpera''.
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Linking directly instead of through redirect.
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* TheCameo: Almost all the background ponies in the comic are actually fan-submitted OCs.
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* TheCameo: Almost all the background ponies in the comic are actually fan-submitted OCs.{{Original Character}}s.
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* RelationshipUpgrade: [[spoiler: As of Chapter 6, Rainbow Dash and Firefly become a couple.]]
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* ToxicFriendInfluence: Billy, ''big time''. When he overhears Rainbow and [[spoiler:Firefly]] getting close and lovey, he finds it absolutely hilarious and later tries to deflect all guilt when Gilda rightfully calls him out on eavesdropping. [[spoiler:Over the course of one chapter, he provokes Gilda into hitting him, plays himself up as the victim when she attempts to do so, makes her feel guilty, and works in several insults toward Rainbow - including what could easily be considered a homophobic remark - and starts actively trying to convince Gilda to cut ties with her. She lets this all go and even seems ready to have sex with him about two seconds later, after he makes a potentially hollow promise to give Dash another try at friendship.]]
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* ToxicFriendInfluence: Billy, ''big time''. When he overhears Rainbow and [[spoiler:Firefly]] [[spoiler: Firefly]] getting close and lovey, he finds it absolutely hilarious and later tries to deflect all guilt when Gilda rightfully calls him out on eavesdropping. [[spoiler:Over [[spoiler: Over the course of one chapter, he provokes Gilda into hitting him, plays himself up as the victim when she attempts to do so, makes her feel guilty, and works in several insults toward Rainbow - including what could easily be considered a homophobic remark - and starts actively trying to convince Gilda to cut ties with her. She lets this all go and even seems ready to have sex with him about two seconds later, after he makes a potentially hollow promise to give Dash another try at friendship. [[FromBadToWorse THEN when Gilda finds out that Billy has all but blackmailed Dash and Firefly and calls him out on it, he trashes her for saying, rightly, that revenge was her call and her responsibility and then, after Dash tells him to "stallion up", locks both females in the room and flies off to trash Firefly and Dash's reputations, all without a hint of guilt because he thinks Dash is a stuck up brat]].]]
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* ToxicFriendInfluence: Billy, ''big time''. When he overhears Rainbow and [[spoiler:Firefly]] getting close and lovey, he finds it absolutely hilarious and later tries to deflect all guilt when Gilda rightfully calls him out on eavesdropping. [[spoiler:Over the course of one chapter, he provokes Gilda into hitting him, plays himself up as the victim when she attempts to do so, makes her feel guilty, and works in several insults toward Rainbow - including what could easily be considered a homophobic remark - and starts actively trying to convince Gilda to cut ties with her. She lets this all go and even seems ready to have sex with him about two seconds later, after he makes a potentially hollow promise to give Dash another try at friendship.]]
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* MythologyGag: Two of the Junior Speedsters, Surprise and Firefly, are basically exported straight from G1 MyLittlePony series, with Surprise being the proto-Pinkie personality that LaurenFaust had intended to use.
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* MythologyGag: Two of the Junior Speedsters, Surprise and Firefly, are basically exported straight from G1 MyLittlePony series, with Surprise being the proto-Pinkie personality that LaurenFaust Creator/LaurenFaust had intended to use.
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* BeautyIsBad: [[spoiler: Pokey Pierce. He's good looking, charming, sophisticated and willingly goes along with Dash's deception to use him to end speculation about her sexuality. Oh, and he thinks that this entitles him to [[FaceOfAnAngelMindOfADemon sleep with Dash, and blackmail her into sex by outing her deception if she refuses.]] And when she ditched him, it's implied, then later shown, that [[MoralEventHorizon he took advantage of Derpy.]] Oh, and if that wasn't creepy enough he's a [[DrJerk medical Intern]] who works with Foals.]]
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* HotGuysAreBastards: [[spoiler: Pokey Pierce. He's good looking, charming, sophisticated and willingly goes along with Dash's deception to use him to end speculation about her sexuality. Oh, and he thinks that this entitles him to [[FaceOfAnAngelMindOfADemon sleep with Dash, and blackmail her into sex by outing her deception if she refuses.]] And when she ditched him, it's implied, then later shown, that [[MoralEventHorizon he took advantage of Derpy.]] Oh, and if that wasn't creepy enough he's a [[DrJerk medical Intern]] who works with Foals.]]
