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** Chapter 30 is one for the handling of the Cerulean Sisters: several commentators found their treatment by the author to be unusually harsh for the fic, which generally avoids nearing bashing territories for characters a lot more maligned than they are. Many were pleasantly surprised to see the Eevee brothers, who are similar to the sisters in canon behavior, treated not only well, but made more sympathetic than their canon selves, up to and including their treatment of Mikey and their reasons for being pushy about evolution.
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** Chapter 30 is one for the handling of the Cerulean Sisters: several commentators found their treatment by the author to be unusually harsh for the fic, which generally avoids nearing bashing territories for characters a lot more maligned than they are. Many were pleasantly surprised to see the Eevee brothers, who are similar to the sisters in canon behavior, treated not only well, but made more sympathetic than their canon selves, up to and including their treatment of Mikey and their reasons for being pushy about evolution. That said, the Eevee Brothers being treated better than the Cerulean Sisters didn't satisfy ''everyone'', and the fic is still in the black list of the latters' fans and Tracey/Daisy shippers.
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* TheWikiRule: [[https://pokemon-reset-bloodlines.fandom.com/wiki/Pokemon_Reset_Bloodlines_Wiki As of November 2019]], though still a work in progress.
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About not liking working with the character in their work (only including them if forced), not what they think of them in the source work.
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* CreatorsPest:
** There are several notes at the beginning of the story, one of them being how much the author hates [[{{Jerkass}} Paul]], and [[StopHavingFunGuys what he represents]].
** [[OriginalCharacter John Archer]], who took up sizeable parts of Chapter 20. Cross outright states at the start of the chapter he really does not like writing him. He outright compares it to Creator/AkiraToriyama's dislike of [[Manga/DragonBall Vegeta]], except he won't 'Dragon Ball him back'. He even later admitted he regrets the name as it was suggested by an old correspondent and he didn't know that the name was shared by [[Series/StarTrekEnterprise a Starfleet captain]] at the time.
** Comments made by Cross suggest that his least favorite of Ash's Pokemon is Poipole and that, along with the logistics of Ultra Space, will hamper the mon's inclusion into the fic in any capacity.
** There are several notes at the beginning of the story, one of them being how much the author hates [[{{Jerkass}} Paul]], and [[StopHavingFunGuys what he represents]].
** [[OriginalCharacter John Archer]], who took up sizeable parts of Chapter 20. Cross outright states at the start of the chapter he really does not like writing him. He outright compares it to Creator/AkiraToriyama's dislike of [[Manga/DragonBall Vegeta]], except he won't 'Dragon Ball him back'. He even later admitted he regrets the name as it was suggested by an old correspondent and he didn't know that the name was shared by [[Series/StarTrekEnterprise a Starfleet captain]] at the time.
** Comments made by Cross suggest that his least favorite of Ash's Pokemon is Poipole and that, along with the logistics of Ultra Space, will hamper the mon's inclusion into the fic in any capacity.
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* CreatorsPest:
** There are several notes at the beginning of the story, one of them being how much the author hates [[{{Jerkass}} Paul]], and [[StopHavingFunGuys what he represents]].
**CreatorsPest: [[OriginalCharacter John Archer]], who took up sizeable parts of Chapter 20. Cross outright states at the start of the chapter he really does not like writing him. He outright compares it to Creator/AkiraToriyama's dislike of [[Manga/DragonBall Vegeta]], except he won't 'Dragon Ball him back'. He even later admitted he regrets the name as it was suggested by an old correspondent and he didn't know that the name was shared by [[Series/StarTrekEnterprise a Starfleet captain]] at the time.
** Comments made by Cross suggest that his least favorite of Ash's Pokemon is Poipole and that, along with the logistics of Ultra Space, will hamper the mon's inclusion into the fic in any capacity.time.
** There are several notes at the beginning of the story, one of them being how much the author hates [[{{Jerkass}} Paul]], and [[StopHavingFunGuys what he represents]].
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** Comments made by Cross suggest that his least favorite of Ash's Pokemon is Poipole and that, along with the logistics of Ultra Space, will hamper the mon's inclusion into the fic in any capacity.
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** In response to a review, the writer has confirmed that Melissa is a transwoman.
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** In response to a review, the writer has confirmed that Melissa is a transwoman.trans woman.
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** Chapter 30 is one for the handling of the Cerulean Sisters: several commentators found their treatment by the author to be unusually harsh for the fic, which generally avoids nearing bashing territories for characters a lot more maligned than they are. Many were pleasantly surprised to see the Eevee brothers, who are similar to the sisters in canon behavior, treated not only well, but made more sympathetic than their canon selves, up to and including their treatment of Mikey and their reasons for being pushy about evolution.
** The same chapter also has one for the fic's tendency to slip too long: the Author noted this and split the chapter in progress up early as to prevent another long gap while the chapter was made after the author noted it was getting notably long due to the Eevee Bros. adaption. Chapters have from that point moved to a once a month schedule, with slips at the end of 2018 only due to story development issues and personal issues.
** Erika Interlude was criticized for not really being about its title character. Viroro-kun has plans to make an Erika Interlude II that focuses more on her.
** As per the authors' notes in the first chapter of Katie Gaiden, the original result of the match (namely of Katie losing to Rubrum) was changed since the authors took notice that [[spoiler:the Ash-siblings]] were having few on-screen losses (most of their defeats happening either off-screen or to each other).
** Chapter 30 is one for the handling of the Cerulean Sisters: several commentators found their treatment by the author to be unusually harsh for the fic, which generally avoids nearing bashing territories for characters a lot more maligned than they are. Many were pleasantly surprised to see the Eevee brothers, who are similar to the sisters in canon behavior, treated not only well, but made more sympathetic than their canon selves, up to and including their treatment of Mikey and their reasons for being pushy about evolution.
** The same chapter also has one for the fic's tendency to slip too long: the Author noted this and split the chapter in progress up early as to prevent another long gap while the chapter was made after the author noted it was getting notably long due to the Eevee Bros. adaption. Chapters have from that point moved to a once a month schedule, with slips at the end of 2018 only due to story development issues and personal issues.
** Erika Interlude was criticized for not really being about its title character. Viroro-kun has plans to make an Erika Interlude II that focuses more on her.
** As per the authors' notes in the first chapter of Katie Gaiden, the original result of the match (namely of Katie losing to Rubrum) was changed since the authors took notice that [[spoiler:the Ash-siblings]] were having few on-screen losses (most of their defeats happening either off-screen or to each other).
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* BonusMaterial: Chapter 15 has two Creator/{{Nintendo}} themed omakes at the end. The first involves Hunter J being turned into a trophy after [[Franchise/{{Metroid}} Samus]], [[Franchise/SuperMarioBros Mario]], and Franchise/{{Kirby}} come to the rescue of Ash and Pikachu. [[VideoGame/SuperSmashBros And Pikachu knows them]], looking forward [[VideoGame/SuperSmashBrosForNintendo3DSAndWiiU to face]] the returning [[VideoGame/FireEmblemTheBindingBlade Roy]] and [[Franchise/StreetFighter Ryu]], and wondering if the [[VideoGame/{{Splatoon}} Inklings are going to show up]]. The second omake was a rejected submission to ''Fanfic/TheInfiniteLoops'' that involved the popularity of Nintendo's Toys/{{amiibo}}s.
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* BonusMaterial: Chapter 15 has two Creator/{{Nintendo}} themed Creator/{{Nintendo}}-themed omakes at the end. The first involves Hunter J being turned into a trophy after [[Franchise/{{Metroid}} Samus]], [[Franchise/SuperMarioBros Mario]], and Franchise/{{Kirby}} come to the rescue of Ash and Pikachu. [[VideoGame/SuperSmashBros And Pikachu knows them]], looking forward [[VideoGame/SuperSmashBrosForNintendo3DSAndWiiU to face]] the returning [[VideoGame/FireEmblemTheBindingBlade Roy]] and [[Franchise/StreetFighter Ryu]], and wondering if the [[VideoGame/{{Splatoon}} [[Franchise/{{Splatoon}} Inklings are going to show up]]. The second omake was a rejected submission to ''Fanfic/TheInfiniteLoops'' that involved the popularity of Nintendo's Toys/{{amiibo}}s.
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Now a disambiguation.
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** Chapter 39 was meant to come out in June, missing it by one day because Cross [[CriticalResearchFailure forgot that June didn't have a June 31st]].
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** Chapter 39 was meant to come out in June, missing it by one day because Cross [[CriticalResearchFailure forgot that June didn't have a June 31st]].31st.
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** [[OriginalCharacter John Archer]], who took up sizeable parts of Chapter 20. Cross outright states at the start of the chapter he really does not like writing him. He outright compares it to Creator/AkiraToriyama's dislike of Vegeta, except he won't 'Dragon Ball him back'. He even later admitted he regrets the name as it was suggested by an old correspondent and he didn't know that the name was shared by [[Series/StarTrekEnterprise a Starfleet captain]] at the time.
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** [[OriginalCharacter John Archer]], who took up sizeable parts of Chapter 20. Cross outright states at the start of the chapter he really does not like writing him. He outright compares it to Creator/AkiraToriyama's dislike of Vegeta, [[Manga/DragonBall Vegeta]], except he won't 'Dragon Ball him back'. He even later admitted he regrets the name as it was suggested by an old correspondent and he didn't know that the name was shared by [[Series/StarTrekEnterprise a Starfleet captain]] at the time.
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** Ander is also the writer of the Naruto story ''Fanfic/SonOfTheSannin''.
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** Ander {{Creator/Ander|Arias}} is also the writer of the Naruto story ''Fanfic/SonOfTheSannin''.
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* BonusMaterial: Chapter 15 has two Creator/{{Nintendo}} themed omakes at the end. The first involves Hunter J being turned into a trophy after [[Franchise/{{Metroid}} Samus]], [[Franchise/SuperMarioBros Mario]], and Franchise/{{Kirby}} come to the rescue of Ash and Pikachu. [[VideoGame/SuperSmashBros And Pikachu knows them]], looking forward [[VideoGame/SuperSmashBrosForNintendo3DSAndWiiU to face]] the returning [[VideoGame/FireEmblemTheBindingBlade Roy]] and [[Franchise/StreetFighter Ryu]], and wondering if the [[VideoGame/{{Splatoon}} Inklings are going to show up]]. The second omake was a rejected submission to ''Fanfic/TheInfiniteLoops'' that involved the popularity of Nintendo's Toys/{{amiibos}}.
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* BonusMaterial: Chapter 15 has two Creator/{{Nintendo}} themed omakes at the end. The first involves Hunter J being turned into a trophy after [[Franchise/{{Metroid}} Samus]], [[Franchise/SuperMarioBros Mario]], and Franchise/{{Kirby}} come to the rescue of Ash and Pikachu. [[VideoGame/SuperSmashBros And Pikachu knows them]], looking forward [[VideoGame/SuperSmashBrosForNintendo3DSAndWiiU to face]] the returning [[VideoGame/FireEmblemTheBindingBlade Roy]] and [[Franchise/StreetFighter Ryu]], and wondering if the [[VideoGame/{{Splatoon}} Inklings are going to show up]]. The second omake was a rejected submission to ''Fanfic/TheInfiniteLoops'' that involved the popularity of Nintendo's Toys/{{amiibos}}.Toys/{{amiibo}}s.
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* BonusMaterial: Chapter 15 has two Creator/{{Nintendo}} themed omakes at the end. The first involves Hunter J being turned into a trophy after [[Franchise/{{Metroid}} Samus]], [[Franchise/SuperMarioBros Mario]], and Franchise/{{Kirby}} come to the rescue of Ash and Pikachu. [[VideoGame/SuperSmashBros And Pikachu knows them]], looking forward [[VideoGame/SuperSmashBrosForNintendo3DSAndWiiU to face]] the returning [[VideoGame/FireEmblemTheBindingBlade Roy]] and [[Franchise/StreetFighter Ryu]], and wondering if the [[VideoGame/{{Splatoon}} Inklings are going to show up]]. The second omake was a rejected submission to ''Fanfic/TheInfiniteLoops'' that involved the popularity of Nintendo's Toys/{{amiibos}}.
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** He also mentioned Brock, Lucy, and ''Croagunk'' were originally going to appear during the Fuchsia Tag TournamentArc, which would have involved a scene of Brock and Lucy mutually "Brocking" at one another -- and giving Anabel one heck of a DirtyMindReading moment in the process that would have made her {{faint|ing}} -- until Croagunk jabbed both of them. Croagunk would later appear in Chapter 31.
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** He also mentioned Brock, Lucy, and ''Croagunk'' were originally going to appear during the Fuchsia Tag TournamentArc, which would have involved a scene of Brock and Lucy mutually "Brocking" at one another -- and giving Anabel one heck of a DirtyMindReading moment in the process that would have made her {{faint|ing}} [[FaintInShock faint]] -- until Croagunk jabbed both of them. Croagunk would later appear in Chapter 31.
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** According to the notes of Chapter 54, Ash and Belladonna's SharedDream was originally going [[NotWearingPantsDream to have them naked]] by playing off on Iris' WaterfallShower gags, and to make a joke about in the next chapter with Misty. At Viroro's suggestion, the setting was changed to a school and both of them are wearing uniforms.
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** Az appeared in the Holiday Special, by the author's own admission, because of ''Anime/PokemonGenerations'' episode 18, which aired on the 23rd of December.
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** Az AZ appeared in the Holiday Special, by the author's own admission, because of ''Anime/PokemonGenerations'' ''WebAnimation/PokemonGenerations'' episode 18, which aired on the 23rd of December.
