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* Jack's flashback in the beginning of the book to the time when he broke Danny's arm. The description of how it happened is gut-wrenching both in that a small boy is put through so much harm for something he was too young to know he was doing wrong (destroying Jack's manuscript and tearing up the papers on his desk), and because Jack didn't intend to hurt him that badly--he was trying to spank him but was clumsy from being drunk. He's so traumatized by how badly he felt both at hurting Danny and at Wendy's reaction that he still feels intense shame and guilt even thinking about it. Taken in context with what happens later just makes it worse.
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* Jack's flashback in the beginning of the book to the time when he broke Danny's arm. The description of how it happened is gut-wrenching both in that a small boy is put through so much harm for something he was too young to know he was doing wrong (destroying Jack's manuscript and tearing up the papers on his desk), and because Jack didn't intend to hurt him that badly--he badly -- he was trying to spank him but was clumsy from being drunk. He's so traumatized by how badly he felt both at hurting Danny and at Wendy's reaction that he still feels intense shame and guilt even thinking about it. Taken in context with what happens later just makes it worse.
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*** It wasn't dislocated, it was straight-up broken. Not a small mistake- and the novel heavily implies that it wasn't entirely unintentional, at least not on every level.
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* The novel's description of how both Wendy and Jack were thinking about divorce - Wendy thinking about how Jack had broken Danny's arm and beaten up George Hatfield, Jack thinking of how things might be better if he left, even considering suicide at one point. Even filtered through Danny's perspective and limited knowledge, it comes across as a hard thing for a child to deal with.
-->The greatest terror of Danny’s life was DIVORCE, a word that always appeared in his mind as a sign painted in red letters which were covered with hissing, poisonous snakes.[...] The most terrifying thing about DIVORCE was that he had sensed the word — or concept, or whatever it was that came to him in his understandings — floating around in his own parents’ heads, sometimes diffuse and relatively distant, sometimes as thick and obscuring and frightening as thunderheads. It had been that way after Daddy punished him for messing the papers up in his study and the doctor had to put his arm in a cast. That memory was already faded, but the memory of the DIVORCE thoughts was clear and terrifying. It had mostly been around his mommy that time, and he had been in constant terror that she would pluck the word from her brain and drag it out of her mouth, making it real. DIVORCE.
-->The greatest terror of Danny’s life was DIVORCE, a word that always appeared in his mind as a sign painted in red letters which were covered with hissing, poisonous snakes.[...] The most terrifying thing about DIVORCE was that he had sensed the word — or concept, or whatever it was that came to him in his understandings — floating around in his own parents’ heads, sometimes diffuse and relatively distant, sometimes as thick and obscuring and frightening as thunderheads. It had been that way after Daddy punished him for messing the papers up in his study and the doctor had to put his arm in a cast. That memory was already faded, but the memory of the DIVORCE thoughts was clear and terrifying. It had mostly been around his mommy that time, and he had been in constant terror that she would pluck the word from her brain and drag it out of her mouth, making it real. DIVORCE.
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* The novel's description of how both Wendy and Jack were thinking about divorce - -- Wendy thinking about how Jack had broken Danny's arm and beaten up George Hatfield, Jack thinking of how things might be better if he left, even considering suicide at one point. Even filtered through Danny's perspective and limited knowledge, it comes across as a hard thing for a child to deal with.
-->The greatest terror of Danny’s life was DIVORCE, a word that always appeared in his mind as a sign painted in red letters which were covered with hissing, poisonous snakes.[...] The most terrifying thing about DIVORCE was that he had sensed the word— -- or concept, or whatever it was that came to him in his understandings — -- floating around in his own parents’ heads, sometimes diffuse and relatively distant, sometimes as thick and obscuring and frightening as thunderheads. It had been that way after Daddy punished him for messing the papers up in his study and the doctor had to put his arm in a cast. That memory was already faded, but the memory of the DIVORCE thoughts was clear and terrifying. It had mostly been around his mommy that time, and he had been in constant terror that she would pluck the word from her brain and drag it out of her mouth, making it real. DIVORCE.DIVORCE.
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-->The greatest terror of Danny’s life was DIVORCE, a word that always appeared in his mind as a sign painted in red letters which were covered with hissing, poisonous snakes.[...] The most terrifying thing about DIVORCE was that he had sensed the word
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* The novel's description of how both Wendy and Jack were thinking about divorce - Wendy thinking about how Jack had broken Danny's arm and beaten up George Hatfield, Jack thinking of how things might be better if he left, even considering suicide at one point. Even filtered through Danny's perspective and limited knowledge, it comes across as a hard thing for a child to deal with.
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* The novel's description of how both Wendy and Jack were thinking about divorce - Wendy thinking about how Jack had broken Danny's arm and beaten up George Hatfield, Jack thinking of how things might be better if he left, even considering suicide at one point. Even filtered through Danny's perspective and limited knowledge, it comes across as a hard thing for a child to deal with.with.
-->The greatest terror of Danny’s life was DIVORCE, a word that always appeared in his mind as a sign painted in red letters which were covered with hissing, poisonous snakes.[...] The most terrifying thing about DIVORCE was that he had sensed the word — or concept, or whatever it was that came to him in his understandings — floating around in his own parents’ heads, sometimes diffuse and relatively distant, sometimes as thick and obscuring and frightening as thunderheads. It had been that way after Daddy punished him for messing the papers up in his study and the doctor had to put his arm in a cast. That memory was already faded, but the memory of the DIVORCE thoughts was clear and terrifying. It had mostly been around his mommy that time, and he had been in constant terror that she would pluck the word from her brain and drag it out of her mouth, making it real. DIVORCE.
-->The greatest terror of Danny’s life was DIVORCE, a word that always appeared in his mind as a sign painted in red letters which were covered with hissing, poisonous snakes.[...] The most terrifying thing about DIVORCE was that he had sensed the word — or concept, or whatever it was that came to him in his understandings — floating around in his own parents’ heads, sometimes diffuse and relatively distant, sometimes as thick and obscuring and frightening as thunderheads. It had been that way after Daddy punished him for messing the papers up in his study and the doctor had to put his arm in a cast. That memory was already faded, but the memory of the DIVORCE thoughts was clear and terrifying. It had mostly been around his mommy that time, and he had been in constant terror that she would pluck the word from her brain and drag it out of her mouth, making it real. DIVORCE.
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-->"Doc," Jack Torrance said. "[[RedemptionEqualsDeath Run away. Quick.]] [[PlatonicDeclarationOfLove And remember how much I love you."]]
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-->"Doc," Jack Torrance said. "[[RedemptionEqualsDeath Run away. Quick.]] [[PlatonicDeclarationOfLove And remember how much I love you."]]]]"
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* There's a very sad scene late in the novel where poor Danny has a minor breakdown over having to face down the evil of the hotel essentially by himself, because his parents cant help him and Halloran is miles away.
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* There's a very sad scene late in the novel where poor Danny has a minor breakdown over having to face down the evil of the hotel essentially by himself, because his parents cant can't help him and Halloran is miles away.
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-->"Doc," Jack Torrance said. "[[RedemptionEqualsDeath Run away. Quick. And remember how much I love you."]]
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-->"Doc," Jack Torrance said. "[[RedemptionEqualsDeath Run away. Quick. ]] [[PlatonicDeclarationOfLove And remember how much I love you."]]
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--> '''Jack''': That boy... We don't deserve him.
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--> '''Jack''': That boy... We don't deserve him.him.
* The novel's description of how both Wendy and Jack were thinking about divorce - Wendy thinking about how Jack had broken Danny's arm and beaten up George Hatfield, Jack thinking of how things might be better if he left, even considering suicide at one point. Even filtered through Danny's perspective and limited knowledge, it comes across as a hard thing for a child to deal with.
* The novel's description of how both Wendy and Jack were thinking about divorce - Wendy thinking about how Jack had broken Danny's arm and beaten up George Hatfield, Jack thinking of how things might be better if he left, even considering suicide at one point. Even filtered through Danny's perspective and limited knowledge, it comes across as a hard thing for a child to deal with.
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** The miniseries, for how flawed it is, shows how [[MyGodWhatHaveIDone guilty Jack feels about breaking Danny's arm]], from Wendy seeing Jack's ''half drank bottle of alcohol'' and screaming "What did you do to Danny!?" to Jack quietly calling for Danny as he's laying in bed with an arm cast and slowly crying from what he did. ''Damn''.
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** Halloran's death in the film. Poor guy.
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*** It wasn't dislocated, it was straight-up broken. Not a small mistake- and the novel heavily implies that it wasn't entirely unintentional, at least not on every level.
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--> '''Danny''': I'm only five! Doesnt anyone care?! ''I'm only five!!''
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--> '''Danny''': I'm only five! Doesnt Doesn't anyone care?! ''I'm only five!!''
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* When Halloran is almost overtaken by the remnants of the hotels spirit during the escape in the climax, he only snaps out of it because of Danny's desperate sobbing after him.
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** Not to mention a little while later, when Jack has been completely overtaken, and is trying to hunt down Danny, with Wendy and Halloran both too injured to do anything. The narration specifically mentions that Danny has "his very first ''adult'' thought", realizing that he has to survive this by himself.
--> '''Danny''': Mommy and Daddy cant help me now...
* When Halloran is almost overtaken by the remnants of the hotels spirit during the escape in the climax, he only snaps out of it because of Danny's desperate sobbing after him.
* There's a few scenes in the novel where both Jack and Wendy despairs over how their own failures and shortcomings as parents, especially their trouble dealing with Danny's sombre personality and WiseBeyondTheirYears intellect. This is especially poignant when they visit the pediatrician in Sidewinder.
--> '''Jack''': That boy... We dont deserve him.
--> '''Danny''': Mommy and Daddy cant help me now...
* When Halloran is almost overtaken by the remnants of the hotels spirit during the escape in the climax, he only snaps out of it because of Danny's desperate sobbing after him.
* There's a few scenes in the novel where both Jack and Wendy despairs over how their own failures and shortcomings as parents, especially their trouble dealing with Danny's sombre personality and WiseBeyondTheirYears intellect. This is especially poignant when they visit the pediatrician in Sidewinder.
--> '''Jack''': That boy... We dont deserve him.
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** Jack mentions to Lloyd the bartender that the arm breaking incident happened "three years ago."
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** Jack mentions to Lloyd the bartender that the arm breaking incident happened "three years ago.""
* There's a very sad scene late in the novel where poor Danny has a minor breakdown over having to face down the evil of the hotel essentially by himself, because his parents cant help him and Halloran is miles away.
--> '''Danny''': I'm only five! Doesnt anyone care?! ''I'm only five!!''
* When Halloran is almost overtaken by the remnants of the hotels spirit during the escape in the climax, he only snaps out of it because of Danny's desperate sobbing after him.
* There's a very sad scene late in the novel where poor Danny has a minor breakdown over having to face down the evil of the hotel essentially by himself, because his parents cant help him and Halloran is miles away.
--> '''Danny''': I'm only five! Doesnt anyone care?! ''I'm only five!!''
* When Halloran is almost overtaken by the remnants of the hotels spirit during the escape in the climax, he only snaps out of it because of Danny's desperate sobbing after him.
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* Danny manages to bring out Jack for one last time.
-->The face in front of him changed. It was hard to say how; there was no melting or merging of the features. The body trembled slightly, and then the bloody hands opened like broken claws. The mallet fell from them and thumped to the rug. That was all. But suddenly his daddy was there, looking at him in mortal agony, and a sorrow so great that Danny's heart flamed within his chest. The mouth drew down in a quivering bow.
-->"Doc," Jack Torrance said. "[[RedemptionEqualsDeath "Run away. Quick. And remember how much I love you."]]
* Jack's flashback in the beginning of the book to the time when he broke Danny's arm. The description of how it happened is gut-wrenching both in that a small boy is put through so much harm for something he was too young to know he was doing wrong (destroying Jack's manuscript and tearing up the papers on his desk), and because Jack didn't intend to hurt him that badly--he was trying to spank him but was clumsy from being drunk. He's so traumatized by how badly he felt both at hurting Danny and at Wendy's reaction that he still feels intense shame and guilt even thinking about it. Taken in context with what happens later just makes it worse.
** FridgeBrilliance in that this is somewhat TruthInTelevision. Dislocations can be fairly common in small children, although it's more commonly elbows. (Hence the name, Nursemaid's Elbow.) It can be caused by something as innocent as swinging a child by the arms during play.
* Wendy's telling of it in the 1980 film is equally heartbreaking. She's smiling to hide the pain, and while the way she tells it makes it sound like it was years ago, she finishes that in the last 5 ''months'' Jack hasn't had a drink. It was actually very recent.
** Jack mentions to Lloyd the bartender that the arm breaking incident happened "three years ago."
-->The face in front of him changed. It was hard to say how; there was no melting or merging of the features. The body trembled slightly, and then the bloody hands opened like broken claws. The mallet fell from them and thumped to the rug. That was all. But suddenly his daddy was there, looking at him in mortal agony, and a sorrow so great that Danny's heart flamed within his chest. The mouth drew down in a quivering bow.
-->"Doc," Jack Torrance said. "[[RedemptionEqualsDeath "Run away. Quick. And remember how much I love you."]]
* Jack's flashback in the beginning of the book to the time when he broke Danny's arm. The description of how it happened is gut-wrenching both in that a small boy is put through so much harm for something he was too young to know he was doing wrong (destroying Jack's manuscript and tearing up the papers on his desk), and because Jack didn't intend to hurt him that badly--he was trying to spank him but was clumsy from being drunk. He's so traumatized by how badly he felt both at hurting Danny and at Wendy's reaction that he still feels intense shame and guilt even thinking about it. Taken in context with what happens later just makes it worse.
** FridgeBrilliance in that this is somewhat TruthInTelevision. Dislocations can be fairly common in small children, although it's more commonly elbows. (Hence the name, Nursemaid's Elbow.) It can be caused by something as innocent as swinging a child by the arms during play.
* Wendy's telling of it in the 1980 film is equally heartbreaking. She's smiling to hide the pain, and while the way she tells it makes it sound like it was years ago, she finishes that in the last 5 ''months'' Jack hasn't had a drink. It was actually very recent.
** Jack mentions to Lloyd the bartender that the arm breaking incident happened "three years ago."
