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* Roscoe and [=DeSoto=] are electrocuted ''onscreen'' in their last battle with Dodger. Despicable as they were, it's a horrible way to go. Their whimpers as they pass on certainly don't help, even Dodger and Oliver show nothing but pity for them.
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* Roscoe and [=DeSoto=] are electrocuted ''onscreen'' in their last battle with Dodger.Dodger, the former ''onscreen''. Despicable as they were, it's a horrible way to go. Their whimpers as they pass on certainly don't help, even Dodger and Oliver show nothing but pity for them.
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(''Dodger sulks recliner chair, while Tito, Rita, Francis and Einstein look sadly at Oliver, before he sadly heads for the door'')
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(''Dodger sulks in the recliner chair, chair while Tito, Rita, Francis and Einstein look sadly at Oliver, before he sadly heads for the door'')
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* When the ransom meeting is planned through, and Fagin is confronted by Jenny, an emotional frightened child with clearly not enough money to meet to Fagin's now life-endangering debts. Fagin, clearly guilt ridden by the situation, is now stuck in a MortonsFork and after gazing at Oliver, who looks as defeated as him, he decides to [[HeroicSacrifice pretty much sign his own death sentence and give the girl back her kitty]].
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* When the ransom meeting is planned through, and Fagin is confronted by Jenny, an emotional emotional, frightened child with clearly not enough money to meet to Fagin's now life-endangering debts. Fagin, clearly guilt ridden guilt-ridden by the situation, is now stuck in a MortonsFork and after gazing at Oliver, who looks as defeated as him, he decides to [[HeroicSacrifice pretty much sign his own death sentence and give the girl back her kitty]].
