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* PlayingSick: Tegan pretends to be close to fainting and sends Jim off to fetch The Doctor, so that she can steal the car keys he's dropped.
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* PlayingSick: Tegan pretends to be close to fainting and sends Jim off to fetch The the Doctor, so that she can steal the car keys he's dropped.
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* CaptainObvious: Lampshaded.
-->'''Tegan''': Turlough, the crystals even cover your face now!
-->'''Turlough''': Yes, Tegan, I’m aware of what’s happening to my own body.
-->'''Tegan''': Turlough, the crystals even cover your face now!
-->'''Turlough''': Yes, Tegan, I’m aware of what’s happening to my own body.
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* CaptainObvious: Lampshaded.
-->'''Tegan''': Turlough,GoMadFromTheIsolation: Unlike his first exile, Eldrad's mind didn't go into stasis after "Hand of Fear", and being trapped at the crystals even cover your face now!
-->'''Turlough''': Yes, Tegan, I’m awarebottom of what’s happening to my own body.an empty chasm for untold years has not affected him well.
-->'''Tegan''': Turlough,
-->'''Turlough''': Yes, Tegan, I’m aware
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** As a sequel to [[Recap/DoctorWhoS14E2TheHandOfFear "The Hand of Fear"]], there are, naturally, many references to the events of that episode.
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** As a sequel to [[Recap/DoctorWhoS14E2TheHandOfFear "The Hand of Fear"]], there are, naturally, are many references to the events of that episode.
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--> Tegan: Turlough, the crystals even cover your face now!
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* ShoutOut: Shocked upon seeing Turlough again after 30 years, Gibbs remarks that he must have [[Literature/ThePictureOfDorianGrey "a painting in the attic"]].
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* ShoutOut: Shocked upon seeing Turlough again after 30 years, Gibbs remarks that he must have [[Literature/ThePictureOfDorianGrey [[Literature/ThePictureOfDorianGray "a painting in the attic"]].
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An old enemy of the Doctor returns. Written by Marc Platt.
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A nuclear icebreaker, foundering in Arctic waters. Seabirds washed up in the fishing resort of Ambermouth, their wings encrusted with crystals. A shining artefact of uncertain provenance, up for sale on an auction site.
All of these things are linked, as the Doctor, Nyssa, Tegan and Turlough are about to discover. Linked to the rebirth of a genocidal tyrant, presumed dead many years ago…
For the sake of the
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!!''Eldrad Must Die!'' contains examples of:
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* CallBack:
** As a sequel to [[Recap/DoctorWhoS14E2TheHandOfFear "The Hand of Fear"]], there are, naturally, many references to the events of that episode.
** There are several mentions of [[Recap/DoctorWhoS20E3MawdrynUndead Brendon School]] and Turlough's time there.
** Turlough's hallucinations involve him being on a mission with [[Recap/BigFinishDoctorWho147KissOfDeath his old girlfriend, Deela]].
** As a sequel to [[Recap/DoctorWhoS14E2TheHandOfFear "The Hand of Fear"]], there are, naturally, many references to the events of that episode.
** There are several mentions of [[Recap/DoctorWhoS20E3MawdrynUndead Brendon School]] and Turlough's time there.
** Turlough's hallucinations involve him being on a mission with [[Recap/BigFinishDoctorWho147KissOfDeath his old girlfriend, Deela]].
* HumanAliens: Gibbs is an exile from Trion, like Turlough, and it seems they were far from the only two off-worlders in attendance at Brendon.
* JerkJock: Gibbs was apparently the Brendon School answer to this, and 30 years away doesn't seem to have changed him much.
* MoreThanMindControl: Mulkris' affect on Turlough sends him into a dream-state, where he imagines he is back at Brendon School.
* MoreThanMindControl: Mulkris' affect on Turlough sends him into a dream-state, where he imagines he is back at Brendon School.
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* RememberTheNewGuy: Gibbs is introduced as being a classmate of Turlough's at Brendon School, but wasn't seen in "Mawdryn Undead" or mentioned elsewhere before.
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* RememberTheNewGuy: Gibbs is introduced as being a classmate of Turlough's at from Brendon School, but wasn't seen in "Mawdryn Undead" or mentioned elsewhere before.before.
* SequelEpisode: To [[Recap/DoctorWhoS14E2TheHandOfFear "The Hand of Fear"]].
* ShoutOut: Shocked upon seeing Turlough again after 30 years, Gibbs remarks that he must have [[Literature/ThePictureOfDorianGrey "a painting in the attic"]].
* SequelEpisode: To [[Recap/DoctorWhoS14E2TheHandOfFear "The Hand of Fear"]].
* ShoutOut: Shocked upon seeing Turlough again after 30 years, Gibbs remarks that he must have [[Literature/ThePictureOfDorianGrey "a painting in the attic"]].
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* FlatCharacter: All the characters in this story seem a bit flat, as it were.
* RecycledScript: Turlough's mind being attacked by Mulkris feels like a copy of the dream sequence/possession in "Cradle Of The Snake", another story by Marc Platt.
* RecycledScript: Turlough's mind being attacked by Mulkris feels like a copy of the dream sequence/possession in "Cradle Of The Snake", another story by Marc Platt.
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* FlatCharacter: All TheEmpath: Nyssa's psychic sensitivity comes into play again, when she is able to sense and soothe Skipper the characters in whale.
* HeroStoleMyBike: Tegan nicks Jim's keys and makes off with his jeep so she can chase after Turlough and Gibbs.
* InsistentTerminology: It's not an iceberg, [[ItMakesSenseInContext it's a ''quartzberg'']].
* MyGrandsonMyself: Averted, though Turlough is presented with an ample opportunity to pull thisstory seem when he runs into one of his schoolmates 30 years after "Mawdryn Undead". He is even asked if he is his own son, but instead thinks nothing of affirming he is who he appears to be, despite the strangeness of a bit flat, man who should be in his 50s still being extremely youthful, not to mention presumably [[LimitedWardrobe still in his old school uniform]].
* PlayingSick: Tegan pretends to be close to fainting and sends Jim off to fetch The Doctor, so that she can steal the car keys he's dropped.
* RememberTheNewGuy: Gibbs is introduced asit were.
* RecycledScript:being a classmate of Turlough's mind being attacked by Mulkris feels like at Brendon School, but wasn't seen in "Mawdryn Undead" or mentioned elsewhere before.
* SmugSnake: Charlie Gibbs has acopy of cocky grin so strong it's actually audible. Tegan derisively refers to him as a "smarmy yuppie".
* SpeaksFluentAnimal: The Doctor is able to understand thedream sequence/possession whale Skipper when it says "Eldrad must die", even though the humans in "Cradle Of the room only heard squeaks and groans.
* TheVirus: TheSnake", another story by Marc Platt.silicone particles act in this way, infecting and spreading over all life they touch.
* HeroStoleMyBike: Tegan nicks Jim's keys and makes off with his jeep so she can chase after Turlough and Gibbs.
* InsistentTerminology: It's not an iceberg, [[ItMakesSenseInContext it's a ''quartzberg'']].
* MyGrandsonMyself: Averted, though Turlough is presented with an ample opportunity to pull this
* PlayingSick: Tegan pretends to be close to fainting and sends Jim off to fetch The Doctor, so that she can steal the car keys he's dropped.
* RememberTheNewGuy: Gibbs is introduced as
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* SmugSnake: Charlie Gibbs has a
* SpeaksFluentAnimal: The Doctor is able to understand the
* TheVirus: The
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An old enemy of the doctor returns in a story thats rather weak.
Doctor returns. Written by Marc Platt.
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* CaptainObvious: LampshadedLampshaded.
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* FlatCharacter: All the characters in this story, seem abit flat as it were.
* RecycleScript: Turlough mind being attack by Mulkris feels like a copy of the dream sequence/possession in Cradle of the Snake), another story done by Marc Platt.
* RecycleScript: Turlough mind being attack by Mulkris feels like a copy of the dream sequence/possession in Cradle of the Snake), another story done by Marc Platt.
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* FlatCharacter: All the characters in this story, story seem abit flat a bit flat, as it were.
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i\'m sorry but this story is weak., feel free to add more, but i only added this cause it needed more data.
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* CaptainObvious: Lampshaded
--> Tegan: Turlough, the crystals even cover your face now!
-->Turlough: Yes, Tegan, I’m aware of what’s happening to my own body.
* FlatCharacter: All the characters in this story, seem abit flat as it were.
* RecycleScript: Turlough mind being attack by Mulkris feels like a copy of the dream sequence/possession in Cradle of the Snake), another story done by Marc Platt.
!!Tropes
* CaptainObvious: Lampshaded
--> Tegan: Turlough, the crystals even cover your face now!
-->Turlough: Yes, Tegan, I’m aware of what’s happening to my own body.
* FlatCharacter: All the characters in this story, seem abit flat as it were.
* RecycleScript: Turlough mind being attack by Mulkris feels like a copy of the dream sequence/possession in Cradle of the Snake), another story done by Marc Platt.
