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** [[AdultFear Just imagine what Riley's Parents are going through at this moment.]] It's only been a little over a year since you moved and your child almost ran away from home, and now all of a sudden one of her friends says that she might have some kind of mental illness. Then when you try to calm her down about the idea, she pushes you away, just like before.
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** [[AdultFear Just imagine what Riley's Parents are going through at this moment.]] moment. It's only been a little over a year since you moved and your child almost ran away from home, and now all of a sudden one of her friends says that she might have some kind of mental illness. Then when you try to calm her down about the idea, she pushes you away, just like before.
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** [[spoiler: Joy, faced with a SadisticChoice, chooses to get sucked away from HQ AGAIN in order to save the lost core memories and get rid of Isolation Island's, risking leaving Riley in the care of the other emotions and too distressed to feel any sort of happiness. ''And'' she's unable to hold onto any of the core memories she goes after!]] As if things couldn't get any worse.
** This chapter reveals [[spoiler:the intercom can never be fixed with their current "technology", and damaging it further--which could happen ''on its own''--could cause Riley to hear voices that ''aren't'' her emotions AKA TRUE Schizophrenia]]. Eeyup, things just got worse.
** Riley contemplates taking drugs to [[spoiler: experiment with finding ways to stop hearing her emotions if only temporarily.]] And getting around needing a prescription by using money through her friends. [[SarcasmMode Clearly, getting the same reaction from Fear as Disgust gave Anger when he broke Honesty Island will only bode well for this part of Riley's planning.]]
** This chapter reveals [[spoiler:the intercom can never be fixed with their current "technology", and damaging it further--which could happen ''on its own''--could cause Riley to hear voices that ''aren't'' her emotions AKA TRUE Schizophrenia]]. Eeyup, things just got worse.
** Riley contemplates taking drugs to [[spoiler: experiment with finding ways to stop hearing her emotions if only temporarily.]] And getting around needing a prescription by using money through her friends. [[SarcasmMode Clearly, getting the same reaction from Fear as Disgust gave Anger when he broke Honesty Island will only bode well for this part of Riley's planning.]]
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** [[spoiler: Joy, faced with a SadisticChoice, chooses to get sucked away from HQ AGAIN in order to save the lost core memories and get rid of Isolation Island's, risking leaving Riley in the care of the other emotions and too distressed to feel any sort of happiness. ''And'' she's unable to hold onto any of the core memories she goes after!]] after! As if things couldn't get any worse.
** This chapter reveals[[spoiler:the the intercom can never be fixed with their current "technology", and damaging it further--which could happen ''on its own''--could cause Riley to hear voices that ''aren't'' her emotions AKA TRUE Schizophrenia]].Schizophrenia. Eeyup, things just got worse.
** Riley contemplates taking drugs to[[spoiler: experiment with finding ways to stop hearing her emotions if only temporarily.]] temporarily. And getting around needing a prescription by using money through her friends. [[SarcasmMode Clearly, getting the same reaction from Fear as Disgust gave Anger when he broke Honesty Island will only bode well for this part of Riley's planning.]]
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** Then at night, Riley [[spoiler:confronts her parents about looking at her drawings and going into her room without permission]]. This lead her to yell at her parents to get out of her room, and scream in fear and anger into her pillow. And worse, declare she hates her family, which leads Family Island to begin ''falling!''
** Finally, Riley ends the chapter by saying she wants to go to the Mind World--but not before she renews her resolve to [[spoiler:take medication without a prescription]].
** Finally, Riley ends the chapter by saying she wants to go to the Mind World--but not before she renews her resolve to [[spoiler:take medication without a prescription]].
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** Then at night, Riley [[spoiler:confronts confronts her parents about looking at her drawings and going into her room without permission]].permission. This lead her to yell at her parents to get out of her room, and scream in fear and anger into her pillow. And worse, declare she hates her family, which leads Family Island to begin ''falling!''
** Finally, Riley ends the chapter by saying she wants to go to the Mind World--but not before she renews her resolve to[[spoiler:take take medication without a prescription]].prescription.
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** Combined with {{tearjerker}}, the chapter also reveals Riley's Plan B: [[spoiler:to to never wake up and stay in the Mind World forever]].forever. If you think about it hard enough, this brings up some ''[[DeathSeeker seriously]]'' [[DeathSeeker dark overtones...]]]]
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* Chapter 13, ''Hidden Depths''
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* Chapter 24, ''What Could Have Been'', shows that the story would've been ''even darker'' than the final product. Several scenes that were planned before the author had actually seen the movie included a NightmareSequence where Riley sees a future version of herself, driven completely mad by her emotions. Dream-Riley also would have been the main antagonist of the story, and the author likened her to the Joker from ''Franchise/{{Batman}}''.
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** Several scenes that were planned before the author had actually seen the movie included a NightmareSequence where Riley sees a future version of herself, driven completely mad by her emotions. Dream-Riley also would have been the main antagonist of the story, and the author likened her to the Joker from ''Franchise/{{Batman}}''.
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* The premise itself. Imagine it yourself: for your entire life, you consider yourself to be a normal, mentally healthy person, and then one day, out of the blue, you suddenly begin hearing five voices, each with their own personality, claiming that they all can see you ''and'' have some control over what you do.
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* The Although the story doesn't ''exactly'' portray it as a scary thing, but the premise itself.itself qualifies. Imagine it yourself: for your entire life, you consider yourself to be a normal, mentally healthy person, and then one day, out of the blue, you suddenly begin hearing five voices, each with their own personality, claiming that they all can see you ''and'' have some control over what you do.
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* Chapter 24, ''What Could Have Been'', brings up several ideas shows that the story would've been ''even darker'' than the final product. Several scenes that were planned for before the story originally, including author had actually seen the movie included a NightmareSequence where Riley sees a future version of herself, driven completely mad by her emotions. Dream-Riley also would have been the main antagonist of the story, and the author likened her to The the Joker from Batman.''Franchise/{{Batman}}''.
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** Riley's fallout from her day lead to some...problems with Imagination land, turning it into something closer to a ghost town with broken signs, burnt french fries, foggy cloud houses, fallen card houses, and creepy storybooks.
** This chapter reveals Riley's Plan B: [[spoiler:to never wake up and stay in the Mind World forever]].
* Chapter 25
** Riley's fallout from her day lead to some...problems with Imagination land, turning it into something closer to a ghost town with broken signs, burnt french fries, foggy cloud houses, fallen card houses, and creepy storybooks.
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* Chapter 24 24, ''What Could Have Been'', brings up several ideas that were planned for the story originally, including a NightmareSequence where Riley sees a future version of herself, driven completely mad by her emotions. Dream-Riley would have been the main antagonist of the story, and the author likened her to The Joker from Batman.
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** Riley's fallout from her day lead to some... problems with Imagination land, turning it into something closer to a ghost town with broken signs, burnt french fries, foggy cloud houses, fallen card houses, and creepy storybooks.
**This Combined with {{tearjerker}}, the chapter also reveals Riley's Plan B: [[spoiler:to never wake up and stay in the Mind World forever]].forever]]. If you think about it hard enough, this brings up some ''[[DeathSeeker seriously]]'' [[DeathSeeker dark overtones...]]
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*** It's not at all a surprise that this happened either, considering she is technically dreaming at the time. It's not at all uncommon for people's fears and worries to directly become "reality" in dreams. And of course this means it could happen again.
*** One reviewer summed it up nicely:
---> '''gamby004:''' And Riley sees the memory dump. For her, it's equal to Mind World Hell.
*** One reviewer summed it up nicely:
---> '''gamby004:''' And Riley sees the memory dump. For her, it's equal to Mind World Hell.
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** This chapter reveals Riley's Plan B: [[spoiler:to never wake up and stay in the Mind World forever]].
** Riley's fallout from her day lead to some...problems with Imagination land, turning it into something closer to a ghost town with broken signs, burnt french fries, foggy cloud houses, fallen card houses, and creepy storybooks.
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* Chapter 24 brings up several ideas that were planned for the story originally, including a NightmareSequence where Riley sees a future version of herself, driven completely mad by her emotions. Dream-Riley would have been the main antagonist of the story, and the author likened her to The Joker from Batman.Batman.
* Chapter 25 reveals Riley's Plan B: [[spoiler:to never wake up and stay in the Mind World forever]].
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*** Making things worse is that Mrs. Andersen brings up that the drawings of the Mind World seem like an idealized place to retreat to... which is what Riley ''has'' been using it as.
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* Chapter 24 bring sup several ideas that were planned for the story originally, including a NightmareSequence where Riley sees a future version of herself, driven completely mad by her emotions. Dream-Riley would have been the main antagonist of the story, and the author likened her to The Joker from Batman.
* Chapter 24 bring sup several ideas that were planned for the story originally, including a NightmareSequence where Riley sees a future version of herself, driven completely mad by her emotions. Dream-Riley would have been the main antagonist of the story, and the author likened her to The Joker from Batman.
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** Riley's mental state continues to deteriorate as she blows up at Ann and Jordan, then [[spoiler:confronts her parents about looking at her drawings and going into her room without permission]]. The stress causes Friendship Island to begin crumbling and Family Island to begin ''falling'', and Riley ends the chapter by saying she wants to go to the Mind World--but not before she renews her resolve to [[spoiler:take medication without a prescription]]. Making things worse is that Mrs. Andersen brings up that the drawings of the Mind World seem like an idealized place to retreat to... which is what Riley ''has'' been using it as.
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** Riley's mental state continues to deteriorate as she blows up at Ann Ann, still biting back at her for what happened at Hockey, and Jordan, then refusing to think of herself as sick...which causes Friendship Island to lose even more parts.
** Then at night, Riley [[spoiler:confronts her parents about looking at her drawings and going into her room without permission]].The stress causes Friendship Island This lead her to begin crumbling yell at her parents to get out of her room, and scream in fear and anger into her pillow. And worse, declare she hates her family, which leads Family Island to begin ''falling'', and ''falling!''
** Finally, Riley ends the chapter by saying she wants to go to the Mind World--but not before she renews her resolve to [[spoiler:take medication without aprescription]]. prescription]].
*** Making things worse is that Mrs. Andersen brings up that the drawings of the Mind World seem like an idealized place to retreat to... which is what Riley ''has'' been using it as.
** Then at night, Riley [[spoiler:confronts her parents about looking at her drawings and going into her room without permission]].
** Finally, Riley ends the chapter by saying she wants to go to the Mind World--but not before she renews her resolve to [[spoiler:take medication without a
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** Riley's mental state continues to deteriorate as she blows up at Ann and Jordan, then [[spoiler:confronts her parents about looking at her drawings and going into her room without permission]]. The stress causes Friendship Island to begin crumbling and Family Island to being ''falling'', and Riley ends the chapter by saying she wants to go to the Mind World--but not before she renews her resolve to [[spoiler:take medication without a prescription]]. Making things worse is that Mrs. Andersen brings up that the drawings of the Mind World seem like an idealized place to retreat to... which is what Riley ''has'' been using it as.
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** Riley's mental state continues to deteriorate as she blows up at Ann and Jordan, then [[spoiler:confronts her parents about looking at her drawings and going into her room without permission]]. The stress causes Friendship Island to begin crumbling and Family Island to being begin ''falling'', and Riley ends the chapter by saying she wants to go to the Mind World--but not before she renews her resolve to [[spoiler:take medication without a prescription]]. Making things worse is that Mrs. Andersen brings up that the drawings of the Mind World seem like an idealized place to retreat to... which is what Riley ''has'' been using it as.
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** Riley's outburst over her teacher discussing schizophrenia creates a new core memory, and Isolation Island, much darker colored than the others and with a statue of a despondent Riley about to be swept away by a wave of negative emotions. And then it starts pulling the color from the others.
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** Riley's outburst over her teacher discussing schizophrenia creates a new core memory, and Isolation Island, much darker colored than the others and with a statue of a despondent Riley about to be swept away by a wave of negative emotions. And then it starts pulling the color from the others.others.
* Chapter 23 ''Rage and Betrayal'', has Riley's mental state continue to deteriorate as she blows up at Ann and Jordan, then [[spoiler:confronts her parents about looking at her drawings and going into her room without permission]]. The stress causes Friendship Island to begin crumbling and Family Island to being ''falling'', and Riley ends the chapter by saying she wants to go to the Mind World--but not before she renews her resolve to [[spoiler:take medication without a prescription]]. Making things worse is that Mrs. Andersen brings up that the drawings of the Mind World seem like an idealized place to retreat to... which is what Riley ''has'' been using it as.
* Chapter 23 ''Rage and Betrayal'', has Riley's mental state continue to deteriorate as she blows up at Ann and Jordan, then [[spoiler:confronts her parents about looking at her drawings and going into her room without permission]]. The stress causes Friendship Island to begin crumbling and Family Island to being ''falling'', and Riley ends the chapter by saying she wants to go to the Mind World--but not before she renews her resolve to [[spoiler:take medication without a prescription]]. Making things worse is that Mrs. Andersen brings up that the drawings of the Mind World seem like an idealized place to retreat to... which is what Riley ''has'' been using it as.
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** Riley contemplates taking drugs to [[spoiler: experiment with finding ways to stop hearing her emotions if only temporarily.]] And getting around needing a prescription by misusing money through her friends. [[SarcasmMode Clearly, getting the same reaction from Fear as Disgust gave Anger when he broke Honesty Island will only bode well for this part of Riley's planning.]] Granted, [[MoralityChain the emotions get her to reconsider]], but still.