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* If you accept any of Corfus's deals:
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* If you accept any of Corfus's Corvus' deals:
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*** One second they are in there bed, maybe dreaming of their husband (or [[IceQueen justice]]), the next Corfus takes them. WHAT DOES HE EVEN DO WITH THEM!!!
*** One can only imagine what is going through the second, third, FOURTH!?! Wifes mind.
*** One can only imagine what is going through the second, third, FOURTH!?! Wifes mind.
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*** One second they are in there bed, maybe dreaming of their husband (or [[IceQueen justice]]), the next Corfus Corvus takes them. WHAT DOES HE EVEN DO WITH THEM!!!
*** One can only imagine what is going through the second, third, FOURTH!?!Wifes wifes mind.
*** One can only imagine what is going through the second, third, FOURTH!?!
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-->"By the seven, commander, what has happened in the Town of Harrowridge is truly abominable. Such crimes committed by my kinsmen...I can hardly believe it."
** The atrocities committed by the undead were apparently so hanese, that it left Henery, a veteran general, shell shocked. Because when he recounts the events of Harrowridge he has not a word of his trademark racism.
* You are but a simple orc, or sick undead, but you have been invited to have tea with the Empress herself! What a good day! However, when you go for sip of what you think is tea, a sharp pain raises through your gut. Suddenly you are helpless, only able to watch as your body begins to collapse upon itself. Every fiber of your being grumbling to dust, and all you can do is wait for deaths embrace....but it never comes. When your body, who you are, desolves away till there is nothing but dust, you are left, not alive, but not dead ether. You have been rendared into nothing more than a soul, you can not touch, can not feel, and may not even be able to speak.....but you can see and hear everything...
** The atrocities committed by the undead were apparently so hanese, that it left Henery, a veteran general, shell shocked. Because when he recounts the events of Harrowridge he has not a word of his trademark racism.
* You are but a simple orc, or sick undead, but you have been invited to have tea with the Empress herself! What a good day! However, when you go for sip of what you think is tea, a sharp pain raises through your gut. Suddenly you are helpless, only able to watch as your body begins to collapse upon itself. Every fiber of your being grumbling to dust, and all you can do is wait for deaths embrace....but it never comes. When your body, who you are, desolves away till there is nothing but dust, you are left, not alive, but not dead ether. You have been rendared into nothing more than a soul, you can not touch, can not feel, and may not even be able to speak.....but you can see and hear everything...
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-->"By the seven, commander, what has happened in the Town of Harrowridge is truly abominable. Such crimes committed by my kinsmen... I can hardly believe it."
** The atrocities committed by theundead Undead were apparently so hanese, heinous that it left Henery, Edmund, himself a veteran general, shell shocked. Because when His recounting of what he recounts the events of Harrowridge he has not a word had witnessed is completely devoid of his trademark racism.
snark and racism, driving home just how abominable what transpired must have been.
* You are but a simple orc, or sickundead, Undead, but you have been invited to have tea with the Empress herself! What a good day! However, when you go for sip of what you think is tea, a sharp pain raises through your gut. Suddenly you are helpless, only able to watch as your body begins to collapse upon itself. Every fiber of your being grumbling crumbling to dust, and all you can do is wait for deaths embrace....but it never comes. When your body, who you are, desolves dissolves away till there is nothing but dust, you are left, not alive, but not dead ether. You have been rendared rendered into nothing more than a soul, you can not cannot touch, can not cannot feel, and may not even be able to speak.....speak, but you can see and hear everything...
** The atrocities committed by the
* You are but a simple orc, or sick
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** The atrocities committed by the undead were apparently so hanese, that it left Henery, a veteran general, shell shocked. Because when he recounts the events of Harrowridge he has not a word of his trademark racism.
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** The atrocities committed by the undead were apparently so hanese, that it left Henery, a veteran general, shell shocked. Because when he recounts the events of Harrowridge he has not a word of his trademark racism.racism.
* You are but a simple orc, or sick undead, but you have been invited to have tea with the Empress herself! What a good day! However, when you go for sip of what you think is tea, a sharp pain raises through your gut. Suddenly you are helpless, only able to watch as your body begins to collapse upon itself. Every fiber of your being grumbling to dust, and all you can do is wait for deaths embrace....but it never comes. When your body, who you are, desolves away till there is nothing but dust, you are left, not alive, but not dead ether. You have been rendared into nothing more than a soul, you can not touch, can not feel, and may not even be able to speak.....but you can see and hear everything...
* You are but a simple orc, or sick undead, but you have been invited to have tea with the Empress herself! What a good day! However, when you go for sip of what you think is tea, a sharp pain raises through your gut. Suddenly you are helpless, only able to watch as your body begins to collapse upon itself. Every fiber of your being grumbling to dust, and all you can do is wait for deaths embrace....but it never comes. When your body, who you are, desolves away till there is nothing but dust, you are left, not alive, but not dead ether. You have been rendared into nothing more than a soul, you can not touch, can not feel, and may not even be able to speak.....but you can see and hear everything...
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-->"Oh Harrowridge...what has happened in that little town.."
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**The atrocities committed by the undead were apparently so hanese, that
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* The town of
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* The town ofof Harrowridge...
**[[TheFundamentalist Yorrick]] sums it up best
-->"Oh Harrowridge...what has happened in that little town.."
**[[TheFundamentalist Yorrick]] sums it up best
-->"Oh Harrowridge...what has happened in that little town.."
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*** What are they supposed to do, tell the [[Weredragon shapeshifting, fire breathing, giant lizard monster]] [[SorcerousOverlord with complete executive authority]] 'no?'
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*** What are they supposed to do, tell the [[Weredragon [[WereDragon shapeshifting, fire breathing, giant lizard monster]] [[SorcerousOverlord with complete executive authority]] 'no?'
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-Enemy Soldiers the Dragon Kills
—Dragons abilities (Pillar of Fire for example, that is some biblical s@#^)
-Enemy Soldiers the Shamans kill
-Juggernaut Imp Bunker Buster (aka nuke)
—Dragons abilities (Pillar of Fire for example, that is some biblical s@#^)
-Enemy Soldiers the Shamans kill
-Juggernaut Imp Bunker Buster (aka nuke)
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—Dragons abilities (Pillar of Fire for example, that is some biblical s@#^)
-Enemy Soldiers
****What are they supposed to do, tell the
-Juggernaut Imp Bunker Buster (aka nuke)
*The town of
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* The Princesses:(Depending on deals, the player may, or may not, take) Just think what must be going through the next Brides Mind after you make that deal with Corvo. (I was going to write the entry out here, but I don't want to bog down the page)
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* The Princesses:(Depending on deals, the player may, or may not, take) Just think what must be If you accept any of Corfus's deals:
**Entire chunks of populations dying, goingthrough insane, or just disappearing.
**Dear lord the pure weaponised Nightmare Fuel of the Princesses!
***One second they are in there bed, maybe dreaming of their husband (or [[IceQueen justice]]), the nextBrides Mind after you make that deal with Corvo. (I was going to write the entry out here, but I don't want to bog down the page)Corfus takes them. WHAT DOES HE EVEN DO WITH THEM!!!
**Entire chunks of populations dying, going
**Dear lord the pure weaponised Nightmare Fuel of the Princesses!
***One second they are in there bed, maybe dreaming of their husband (or [[IceQueen justice]]), the next
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* The World: Imagine living in a world where Four Insane siblings, with near invincible automatic armies, are warring against each other because a Demon drove them insane. [[spoiler:]]Not to even mention when the demon decides to cut out the middleman and decides to rule the world himself.[[spoiler]]
** [[spoiler:]]His Party Platform? Let's create a War that never ends!!! [[spoiler]]
** [[spoiler:]]His Party Platform? Let's create a War that never ends!!! [[spoiler]]
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* The World: Imagine living in a world where Four Insane siblings, with near invincible automatic armies, are warring against each other because a Demon drove them insane. [[spoiler:]]Not [[spoiler:Not to even mention when the demon decides to cut out the middleman and decides to rule the world himself.[[spoiler]]
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**[[spoiler:]]His [[spoiler:His Party Platform? Let's create a War that never ends!!! [[spoiler]]ends!!!]]
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*The World: Imagine living in a world where Four Insane siblings, with near invincible automatic armies, are warring against each other because a Demon drove them insane. [[spoiler:]]Not to even mention when the demon decides to cut out the middleman and decides to rule the world himself.[[spoiler]]
**[[spoiler:]]His Party Platform? Let's create a War that never ends!!! [[spoiler]]
*The Princesses:(Depending on deals, the player may, or may not, take) Just think what must be going through the next Brides Mind after you make that deal with Corvo. (I was going to write the entry out here, but I don't want to bog down the page)
-Enemy Soldiers the Dragon Kills
—Dragons abilities (Pillar of Fire for example, that is some biblical s@#^)
-Enemy Soldiers the Shamans kill
-Juggernaut Imp Bunker Buster (aka nuke)
**[[spoiler:]]His Party Platform? Let's create a War that never ends!!! [[spoiler]]
*The Princesses:(Depending on deals, the player may, or may not, take) Just think what must be going through the next Brides Mind after you make that deal with Corvo. (I was going to write the entry out here, but I don't want to bog down the page)
-Enemy Soldiers the Dragon Kills
—Dragons abilities (Pillar of Fire for example, that is some biblical s@#^)
-Enemy Soldiers the Shamans kill
-Juggernaut Imp Bunker Buster (aka nuke)