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Deleted a couple of aversions. These are just tropes that the story didn't do.
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* AliensSpeakingEnglish: Averted. [=MorningLightMountain=] is able to communicate with Dudley Bose only because [[spoiler: it places his memories into another immotile; even such, its thoughts appear disjointed and alien]].
** [=MorningLightMountain=] can only talk to the SI after the SI hacked into its communications network and by utilizing the knowledge gained while interacting with Bose.
* AllPlanetsAreEarthlike: Averted. In one chapter, a planet is methodically reached, explored, and rejected for settlement potential in the course of several hours.
** [=MorningLightMountain=] can only talk to the SI after the SI hacked into its communications network and by utilizing the knowledge gained while interacting with Bose.
* AllPlanetsAreEarthlike: Averted. In one chapter, a planet is methodically reached, explored, and rejected for settlement potential in the course of several hours.
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* EasilyThwartedAlienInvasion: Averted. The Primes hit hard, and take out 23 planets in their first strike, with humanity barely able to respond.
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* LanguageBarrier:
** [=MorningLightMountain=] is able to communicate with Dudley Bose only because [[spoiler: it places his memories into another immotile; even such, its thoughts appear disjointed and alien]].
** [=MorningLightMountain=] can only talk to the SI after the SI hacked into its communications network and by utilizing the knowledge gained while interacting with Bose.
** [=MorningLightMountain=] is able to communicate with Dudley Bose only because [[spoiler: it places his memories into another immotile; even such, its thoughts appear disjointed and alien]].
** [=MorningLightMountain=] can only talk to the SI after the SI hacked into its communications network and by utilizing the knowledge gained while interacting with Bose.
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renamed to Clone Angst
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* CloningBlues: touched upon briefly by Wilson, as this is how the citizens of the commonwealth maintain their scientific immortality. It's implied that this is largely a vestige of the people who were alive pre rejuvenation, and that the younger generations have no problem with it.
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* DidYouJustFlipOffCthulhu: The SI tells MorningLightMountain to its face that [[InsaneTrollLogic "your logic is flawed"]].
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* DidYouJustFlipOffCthulhu: The SI tells MorningLightMountain [=MorningLightMountain=] to its face that [[InsaneTrollLogic "your logic is flawed"]].
