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* BladeEnthusiast: Sam Bowe eschews guns, preferring to use her myriad collection of knives.
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* KnifeNut: Sam Bowe eschews guns, preferring to use her myriad collection of knives.
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* FriendlySniper: BoisterousBruiser Edward ‘Call Me Eddy” McBride; at least if you’re on his good side.
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* FriendlySniper: BoisterousBruiser Edward ‘Call Me Eddy” McBride; [=McBride=]; at least if you’re on his good side.
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* ActionDressRip: Assassins intent on killing the French monarch attack a ball the crew of the Dame Fortuna attending, Sam Bowe shreds her skirts for easier movement. Since she hates wearing the dress in the first place, she takes great pleasure in destroying it over the course of the battle until she is left in nothing but her underclothes by the aftermath.
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* ActionDressRip: When Assassins intent on killing the French monarch attack a ball the crew of the Dame Fortuna are attending, Sam Bowe shreds her skirts for easier movement. Since she hates wearing the dress in the first place, she takes great pleasure in destroying it over the course of the battle until she is left in nothing but her underclothes by the aftermath.
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* BadassBookworm: James Coltrane inventor and pilot of the Coltrane Battlesuit[[spoiler:or perhaps more accurately Jillian]].
* BadassGrandpa: Captain Fisher is an old man who literally ties himself to his ship’s wheel to see if safely through one of the worst storms he’s ever seen.
* BadassGrandpa: Captain Fisher is an old man who literally ties himself to his ship’s wheel to see if safely through one of the worst storms he’s ever seen.
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* BadassBookworm: James Coltrane is the inventor and pilot of the Coltrane Battlesuit[[spoiler:or Battlesuit. [[spoiler: It's perhaps more accurately Jillian]].
* BadassGrandpa: Captain Fisheraccurate to say that this is an old man who literally ties himself to his ship’s wheel to see if safely through one of the worst storms he’s ever seen.Jillian Coltrane]].
* BadassGrandpa: Captain Fisher
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* BallroomBlitz: A party for the visiting French Monarch is crashed by assassins, forcing the crew to fight in their formal wear (and fewer weapons).
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* BallroomBlitz: A party for the visiting French Monarch is crashed by assassins, forcing the crew to fight in their formal wear (and with fewer weapons).
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* BunnyEarsLawyer: Eddy [=McBride=] is a rifle expert and a war hero: who just happens to be very, very picky about how he's addressed.
* CoolAirship: Plenty. A flotilla of airships is part of the reason for the British Empire’s dominance and victory in the Napoleonic War. Then there is the Dame Fortuna, a customised drop ship for the Coltrane Battlesuit, on which the heroes travel the world.
* CoolAirship: Plenty. A flotilla of airships is part of the reason for the British Empire’s dominance and victory in the Napoleonic War. Then there is the Dame Fortuna, a customised drop ship for the Coltrane Battlesuit, on which the heroes travel the world.
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* BunnyEarsLawyer: Eddy [=McBride=] is a rifle expert and a war hero: hero who just happens to be very, very picky about how he's addressed.
* CoolAirship: Plenty. A flotilla of airships is part of the reason for the British Empire’s dominance and victory in the Napoleonic War. Then there is the Dame Fortuna, acustomised customized drop ship for the Coltrane Battlesuit, on which the heroes travel the world.world.
* CoolOldGuy: Captain Fisher is an old man who literally ties himself to his ship’s wheel to see if safely through one of the worst storms he’s ever seen.
* CoolAirship: Plenty. A flotilla of airships is part of the reason for the British Empire’s dominance and victory in the Napoleonic War. Then there is the Dame Fortuna, a
* CoolOldGuy: Captain Fisher is an old man who literally ties himself to his ship’s wheel to see if safely through one of the worst storms he’s ever seen.
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* HappilyMarried: According to her commentary, Gregory and Cordelia end up as this too. They're together for decades, until he died of old age, and her entries speak well of him.
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* HappilyMarried: According to her commentary, Gregory and Cordelia end up as this too.this. They're together for decades, until he died of old age, and her entries speak well of him.
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* KnifeNut: Sam Bowe eschews guns preferring to use her myriad collection of knives.
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** James Coltrane to a tee as he is a war hero that has retired to inventing and is still active in social circles.
** Gregory and Eddy to varying degrees as both of them were soldiers but the former lacks James' presence and the latter is somewhat quirky.
** Gregory and Eddy to varying degrees as both of them were soldiers but the former lacks James' presence and the latter is somewhat quirky.
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** James Coltrane fits this trope to a tee as he is a war hero that has retired to inventing and is still active in social circles.
** Gregory and Eddy fit to varying degrees as both of them were soldiers but the former lacks James' presence and the latter is somewhat quirky.
** Gregory and Eddy fit to varying degrees as both of them were soldiers but the former lacks James' presence and the latter is somewhat quirky.
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* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: Sam is the tomboy to Jillian’s girly girl because the former is a resident of the American Frontier and the later is a lady of England High Society. This causes much intra-crew conflict. [[spoiler:As it turns out, Jillian is more tomboyish than everyone thought; she is the true Coltrane war hero because she was the one in the battle suit and would rather be in her workshop than a tea party.]]
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* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: Sam is the tomboy to Jillian’s girly girl because the former is a resident of the American Frontier and the later latter is a lady of England High Society. This causes much intra-crew conflict. [[spoiler:As it turns out, Jillian is more tomboyish than everyone thought; she is the true Coltrane war hero because she was the one in the battle suit and would rather be in her workshop than a tea party.]]
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* ActionDressRip: assassins intent on killing the French monarch attack a ball the crew of the Dame Fortuna attending, Sam Bowe shreds her skirts for easier movement. Since she hates wearing the dress in the first place, she takes great pleasure in destroying it over the course of the battle until she is left in nothing but her underclothes by the aftermath.
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* ActionDressRip: assassins Assassins intent on killing the French monarch attack a ball the crew of the Dame Fortuna attending, Sam Bowe shreds her skirts for easier movement. Since she hates wearing the dress in the first place, she takes great pleasure in destroying it over the course of the battle until she is left in nothing but her underclothes by the aftermath.
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** Sam Bowe is a daughter of the American Wild West. She can kill gunman with knives.
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** Sam Bowe is a daughter of the American Wild West. She can kill gunman gunmen with knives.
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* AmazonChaser: [[spoiler: After it is revealed that Jillian, not James, was the one in the battle suit, Eddy falls in love with her because it proved that she was not, in his words "an intelligent but mostly useless decoration".]]
* BadassBookworm: James Coltrane inventor and pilot of the Coltrane Battlesuit[[spoiler: or perhaps more accurately Jillian]].
* BadassBookworm: James Coltrane inventor and pilot of the Coltrane Battlesuit[[spoiler: or perhaps more accurately Jillian]].
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* AmazonChaser: [[spoiler: After [[spoiler:After it is revealed that Jillian, not James, was the one in the battle suit, Eddy falls in love with her because it proved that she was not, in his words "an intelligent but mostly useless decoration".]]
* BadassBookworm: James Coltrane inventor and pilot of the ColtraneBattlesuit[[spoiler: or Battlesuit[[spoiler:or perhaps more accurately Jillian]].
* BadassBookworm: James Coltrane inventor and pilot of the Coltrane
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* BrainUploading: Sam’s ornithopter companion, Bubsy, contains the mind of a sheepdog. [[spoiler: More horrifyingly, the cause of death for Mrs Mitchell was an attempt at this.]]
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* BrainUploading: Sam’s ornithopter companion, Bubsy, contains the mind of a sheepdog. [[spoiler: More [[spoiler:More horrifyingly, the cause of death for Mrs Mitchell was an attempt at this.]]
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* DistressedDude: For most of the second book, [[spoiler: James Coltrane]] is held captive.
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* DistressedDude: For most of the second book, [[spoiler: James [[spoiler:James Coltrane]] is held captive.
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* SamusIsAGirl: Dr. Robert Bowe’s son Sam Bowe, whom the crew are sent to employ as a guide, turns out to be Samantha Bowe. [[spoiler: In a more literal example it turns out that the designer and pilot of the Coltrane Battlesuit is Jillian and not James]].
* ShipperOnDeck: Jillian for Eddy and Harriet. She's determined to see her cousin married to the Scottsman because he's a man of fame, fortune, and most importantly, loves her. [[spoiler: Ironically, she marries him herself by the end of ''Gods of the Sun''. Harriet wasn't interested in him anyway.]]
* ShipperOnDeck: Jillian for Eddy and Harriet. She's determined to see her cousin married to the Scottsman because he's a man of fame, fortune, and most importantly, loves her. [[spoiler: Ironically, she marries him herself by the end of ''Gods of the Sun''. Harriet wasn't interested in him anyway.]]
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* SamusIsAGirl: Dr. Robert Bowe’s son Sam Bowe, whom the crew are sent to employ as a guide, turns out to be Samantha Bowe. [[spoiler: In [[spoiler:In a more literal example it turns out that the designer and pilot of the Coltrane Battlesuit is Jillian and not James]].
* ShipperOnDeck: Jillian for Eddy and Harriet. She's determined to see her cousin married to the Scottsman because he's a man of fame, fortune, and most importantly, loves her.[[spoiler: Ironically, [[spoiler:Ironically, she marries him herself by the end of ''Gods of the Sun''. Harriet wasn't interested in him anyway.]]
* ShipperOnDeck: Jillian for Eddy and Harriet. She's determined to see her cousin married to the Scottsman because he's a man of fame, fortune, and most importantly, loves her.
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* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: Sam is the tomboy to Jillian’s girly girl because the former is a resident of the American Frontier and the later is a lady of England High Society. This causes much intra-crew conflict. [[spoiler: As it turns out, Jillian is more tomboyish than everyone thought; she is the true Coltrane war hero because she was the one in the battle suit and would rather be in her workshop than a tea party.]]
* VictoriasSecretCompartment: Julietta keeps a stiletto knife here amongst otherthings.
* VictoriasSecretCompartment: Julietta keeps a stiletto knife here amongst otherthings.
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* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: Sam is the tomboy to Jillian’s girly girl because the former is a resident of the American Frontier and the later is a lady of England High Society. This causes much intra-crew conflict. [[spoiler: As [[spoiler:As it turns out, Jillian is more tomboyish than everyone thought; she is the true Coltrane war hero because she was the one in the battle suit and would rather be in her workshop than a tea party.]]
* VictoriasSecretCompartment: Julietta keeps a stiletto knife here amongstotherthings.other things.
* VictoriasSecretCompartment: Julietta keeps a stiletto knife here amongst
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Dawn of Steam is a trilogy of alternate history/SteamPunk novels and associated short stories written by Jeffrey Cook and Sarah Symonds.
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Additionally there are two short stories there are two short stories set after the main trilogy:
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*DifficultButAwesome: The Coltrane battle suit can turn the tide of any battle but its control system is so hard to learn that only its designer can operate it effectively.
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* SteamPunk: The main part of the series is set a little bit before the usual period for Steampunk but employs plenty of expected tropes such as airships and powered armor. By Cordelia’s time England seems to have more fully embraced this trope.
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* SteamPunk: The main part of the series is set a little bit before the usual period for Steampunk but employs plenty of expected tropes such as airships and powered armor. By Cordelia’s time time, England seems to have more fully embraced this trope.
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* FootnoteFever: Cordelia often breaks into the flow of the narrative to explain certain parts of the setting the reader or to add additional depth to the story.
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* FootnoteFever: Cordelia often breaks into the flow of the narrative to explain certain parts of the setting to the reader or to add additional depth to the story.
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* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: Sam is the tomboy to Jillian’s girly girl because the former is a resident of the American Frontier and the later is a lady of England High Society. This causes much intra-crew conflict. [[spoiler: As it turns out, Jillian is more tomboyish than everyone thought; she is the true Coltrane war hero because she was the one in the battle suit.]]
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* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: Sam is the tomboy to Jillian’s girly girl because the former is a resident of the American Frontier and the later is a lady of England High Society. This causes much intra-crew conflict. [[spoiler: As it turns out, Jillian is more tomboyish than everyone thought; she is the true Coltrane war hero because she was the one in the battle suit.suit and would rather be in her workshop than a tea party.]]
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*AmazonChaser: [[spoiler: After it is revealed that Jillian, not James, was the one in the battle suit, Eddy falls in love with her because it proved that she was not, in his words "an intelligent but mostly useless decoration".]]
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* ShipperOnDeck: Jillian for Eddy and Harriet. She's determined to see her cousin married to the Scottsman because he's a man of fame, fortune, and most importantly, loves her dearly.
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* ShipperOnDeck: Jillian for Eddy and Harriet. She's determined to see her cousin married to the Scottsman because he's a man of fame, fortune, and most importantly, loves her dearly. her. [[spoiler: Ironically, she marries him herself by the end of ''Gods of the Sun''. Harriet wasn't interested in him anyway.]]
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* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: Sam is the tomboy to Jillian’s girly girl because the former is a resident of the American Frontier and the later is a lady of England High Society. This causes much intra-crew conflict.
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* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: Sam is the tomboy to Jillian’s girly girl because the former is a resident of the American Frontier and the later is a lady of England High Society. This causes much intra-crew conflict. [[spoiler: As it turns out, Jillian is more tomboyish than everyone thought; she is the true Coltrane war hero because she was the one in the battle suit.]]
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* ActionDressRip: Sam Bowe, when assassins intent on killing the French monarch attack a ball the crew of the Dame Fortuna attending. Since she hates wearing the dress in the first place, she takes great pleasure in destroying it over the course of the battle until she is left in nothing but her underclothes by the aftermath.
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* ActionDressRip: Sam Bowe, when assassins intent on killing the French monarch attack a ball the crew of the Dame Fortuna attending.attending, Sam Bowe shreds her skirts for easier movement. Since she hates wearing the dress in the first place, she takes great pleasure in destroying it over the course of the battle until she is left in nothing but her underclothes by the aftermath.
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** [[spoiler:Jillian Coltrane is no slouch in this department either.]]
* {{Badass}}: Comes in a number of flavours throughout the series: war heroes in battle suits, ghost-like snipers, frontier knife wielders, etc.
* {{Badass}}: Comes in a number of flavours throughout the series: war heroes in battle suits, ghost-like snipers, frontier knife wielders, etc.
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** [[spoiler:Jillian Coltrane is no slouch in this department either.]]
* {{Badass}}: Comes in a number of flavours throughoutthe series: war heroes in battle suits, ghost-like snipers, frontier knife wielders, etc. true operator of the Coltrane suit of metal armor.]]
* {{Badass}}: Comes in a number of flavours throughout
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* BadassGrandpa: Captain Fisher, who literally ties himself to his ship’s wheel to see if safely through one of the worst storms he’s ever seen.
* BadassCrew: The band aboard the Dame Fortuna starts of with some of Britan’s greatest war heroes and continues to pick up [[{{Badass}} Badasses]] and [[ActionGirl Action Girls]] along the way.
* BallroomBlitz: A party for the visiting French Monarch doesn’t go exactly to plan.
* BadassCrew: The band aboard the Dame Fortuna starts of with some of Britan’s greatest war heroes and continues to pick up [[{{Badass}} Badasses]] and [[ActionGirl Action Girls]] along the way.
* BallroomBlitz: A party for the visiting French Monarch doesn’t go exactly to plan.
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* BadassGrandpa: Captain Fisher, Fisher is an old man who literally ties himself to his ship’s wheel to see if safely through one of the worst storms he’s ever seen.
* BadassCrew: The band aboard the Dame Fortuna starts of with some of Britan’s greatest war heroes and continues topick picks up [[{{Badass}} Badasses]] and [[ActionGirl Action Girls]] other {{action hero}}es along the way.
* BallroomBlitz: A party for the visiting French Monarchdoesn’t go exactly is crashed by assassins, forcing the crew to plan.fight in their formal wear (and fewer weapons).
* BadassCrew: The band aboard the Dame Fortuna starts of with some of Britan’s greatest war heroes and continues to
* BallroomBlitz: A party for the visiting French Monarch
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* BrainUploading: Sam’s ornithopter companion, Bubsy, contains the mind of a sheepdog. [[spoiler: More horrifyingly the cause of death for Mrs Mitchell was an attempt at this.]]
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* BrainUploading: Sam’s ornithopter companion, Bubsy, contains the mind of a sheepdog. [[spoiler: More horrifyingly horrifyingly, the cause of death for Mrs Mitchell was an attempt at this.]]
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* DawnOfTheWildWest: The period the original trilogy takes place in. The last third of First Light, in particular, takes place on the American Frontier.
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* DawnOfTheWildWest: The period the original trilogy takes place in.in is the exploration of the American west. The last third of First Light, in particular, takes place on the American Frontier.
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* FriendlySniper: BoisterousBruiser Edward ‘Call Me Eddy” McBride. At least if you’re on his good side.
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* FriendlySniper: BoisterousBruiser Edward ‘Call Me Eddy” McBride. At McBride; at least if you’re on his good side.
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* HappilyMarried: According to her commentary Gregory and Cordelia end up as this too. They're together for decades, until he died of old age, and her entries speak well of him.
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* HappilyMarried: According to her commentary commentary, Gregory and Cordelia end up as this too. They're together for decades, until he died of old age, and her entries speak well of him.
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** Gregory and Eddy to varying degrees as well as both of them were soldiers but the former lacks James' presence and the latter is somewhat quirky.
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** Gregory and Eddy to varying degrees as well as both of them were soldiers but the former lacks James' presence and the latter is somewhat quirky.
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* PoweredArmour: The Coltrane Battlesuit. A nine foot tall steam-powered bulletproof behemoth that fires rockets, can bend steel and jump higher than a house.
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* PoweredArmour: The Coltrane Battlesuit. A Battlesuit is a nine foot tall steam-powered bulletproof behemoth that fires rockets, can bend steel and jump higher than a house.
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* SamusIsAGirl: Dr. Robert Bowe’s son Sam Bowe, whom the crew are sent to employ as a guide turn out to be Samantha Bowe. [[spoiler: In a more literal example it turns out that the designer and pilot of the Coltrane Battlesuit is Jillian and not James]].
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* SamusIsAGirl: Dr. Robert Bowe’s son Sam Bowe, whom the crew are sent to employ as a guide turn guide, turns out to be Samantha Bowe. [[spoiler: In a more literal example it turns out that the designer and pilot of the Coltrane Battlesuit is Jillian and not James]].
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* BunnyEarsLawyer: Eddy McBride is a rifle expert and a war hero: who just happens to be very, very picky about how he's addressed.
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* BunnyEarsLawyer: Eddy McBride [=McBride=] is a rifle expert and a war hero: who just happens to be very, very picky about how he's addressed.
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** Mrs Fisher has made it her goal to ensure that every woman on the crew should behave like this. She critiques Harriet's behavior and makes every effort make Sam comply.
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** Mrs Fisher has made it her goal to ensure that every woman on the crew should behave like this. She critiques Harriet's behavior and makes every effort to make Sam comply.
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Example Indentation. Badass tropes all supposed to be on the first level. Moved Woobie to YMMV
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* ActionGirl: Sam Bowe. [[spoiler:Jillian Coltrane is no slouch in this department either.]]
* Badass: Comes in a number of flavours throughout the series.
** BadassBookworm: James Coltrane inventor and pilot of the Coltrane Battlesuit[[spoiler: or perhaps more accurately Jillian]].
** BadassGrandpa: Captain Fisher, who literally ties himself to his ship’s wheel to see if safely through one of the worst storms he’s ever seen.
* Badass: Comes in a number of flavours throughout the series.
** BadassBookworm: James Coltrane inventor and pilot of the Coltrane Battlesuit[[spoiler: or perhaps more accurately Jillian]].
** BadassGrandpa: Captain Fisher, who literally ties himself to his ship’s wheel to see if safely through one of the worst storms he’s ever seen.
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* ActionGirl: Sam Bowe. [[spoiler:Jillian ActionGirl:
**Sam Bowe is a daughter of the American Wild West. She can kill gunman with knives.
**[[spoiler:Jillian Coltrane is no slouch in this department either.]]
*Badass: {{Badass}}: Comes in a number of flavours throughout the series.
**series: war heroes in battle suits, ghost-like snipers, frontier knife wielders, etc.
* BadassBookworm: James Coltrane inventor and pilot of the Coltrane Battlesuit[[spoiler: or perhaps more accurately Jillian]].
** * BadassGrandpa: Captain Fisher, who literally ties himself to his ship’s wheel to see if safely through one of the worst storms he’s ever seen.
**Sam Bowe is a daughter of the American Wild West. She can kill gunman with knives.
**[[spoiler:Jillian Coltrane is no slouch in this department either.]]
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* BadassBookworm: James Coltrane inventor and pilot of the Coltrane Battlesuit[[spoiler: or perhaps more accurately Jillian]].
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* TheBet: A high stakes wager in the House of Lords kicks off the plot.
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* TheBet: A high stakes wager in the House of Lords kicks off the plot. They want to know if Dr. Robert Bowe's journal is a work of fiction or not.
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* BratsWithSlingshots: Matthew Fisher-Swift in the original trilogy.
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* BratsWithSlingshots: Matthew Fisher-Swift in the original trilogy.trilogy is a kid equipped with a sling.
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* CoolAirship: Plenty. A flotilla of airships is part of the reason for the British Empire’s dominance and victory in the Napoleonic War. Then of course there is the Dame Fortuna, a customised drop ship for the Coltrane Battlesuit, on which the heroes travel the world.
* DistressedDude: For most of the second book, [[spoiler: James Coltrane]].
* DistressedDude: For most of the second book, [[spoiler: James Coltrane]].
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* CoolAirship: Plenty. A flotilla of airships is part of the reason for the British Empire’s dominance and victory in the Napoleonic War. Then of course there is the Dame Fortuna, a customised drop ship for the Coltrane Battlesuit, on which the heroes travel the world.
* DistressedDude: For most of the second book, [[spoiler: JamesColtrane]].Coltrane]] is held captive.
* DistressedDude: For most of the second book, [[spoiler: James
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* Dynamic Entry: The favoured method of deployment for the Coltrane Battle suit – being dropped on the adversary from the Dame Fortuna.
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* Dynamic Entry: DynamicEntry: The favoured method of deployment for the Coltrane Battle suit – being dropped on the adversary from the Dame Fortuna.
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* EnglishRose: Jillian. Harriet very much wishes to be this. Sam Bowes vehemently does not. Mrs Fisher has made it her goal to ensure that every woman on the crew should behave like this, though.
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* EnglishRose: Jillian. Harriet Jillian is the very much wishes to be this. Sam Bowes vehemently does not. Mrs Fisher has made it her goal to ensure that every woman on the crew should behave like this, though.archetype of an English lady; polite, elegant, refined, generous etc.
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* ForegoneConclusion: The framing device with Cordelia indicates a number of characters will survive the events of the main narrative.
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* ForegoneConclusion: The framing device with Cordelia indicates a number of characters will survive the events of the main narrative. It also confirms before hand that she and Gregory marry when it's all over.
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* HappilyMarried: The Fishers. According to her commentary Gregory and Cordelia end up as this too.
* TheKlutz: Harriet with anything not related to mechanics.
* TheKlutz: Harriet with anything not related to mechanics.
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* HappilyMarried: The Fishers. According to her commentary Gregory and Cordelia end up as this too.
too. They're together for decades, until he died of old age, and her entries speak well of him.
%%**The Fishers.
* TheKlutz: Harriet is useless with anything not related tomechanics.mechanics. In her first act alone, she dirties her sleeves by dragging them through butter while imitating her cousin.
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* MadScientist: Dr Mitchell. A scientist so crazed he’s been ostracised by the setting’s other mad scientists and is now forced to live in seclusion in a cove full of technological marvels he’s created.
* OfficerAndAGentleman: James Coltrane to a tee. Gregory and Eddy to varying degrees as well.
* PerpetualFrowner: Mr Toomes.
* OfficerAndAGentleman: James Coltrane to a tee. Gregory and Eddy to varying degrees as well.
* PerpetualFrowner: Mr Toomes.
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* MadScientist: Dr Mitchell. A Mitchell is a scientist so crazed he’s been ostracised by the setting’s other mad scientists and is now forced to live in seclusion in a cove full of technological marvels he’s created.
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**James Coltrane to atee. tee as he is a war hero that has retired to inventing and is still active in social circles.
** Gregory and Eddy to varying degrees aswell.
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* ProperLady: Jillian ProperLady:
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estate with all the grace of an EnglishRose.
**Harriet very much wishes to be this and is often copying Jillian's every move.
**Sam Bowes [[DefiedTrope vehemently is not this trope.]]
**Mrs Fisher has made it her goal to ensure that every woman on the crew should behave like this. She critiques Harriet's behavior and makes every effort make Sam comply.
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**Harriet very much wishes to be this and is often copying Jillian's every move.
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* SteamPunk: The main part of the series is set a little bit before the usual period for Steampunk but employs plenty of expected tropes. By Cordelia’s time England seems to have more fully embraced this trope.
* SupportingProtagonist: Gregory tends to act as a supporting character to the plot. But the original trilogy is narrated mostly from his point of view.
* TankGoodness: A steam tank, no less. Employed to combat the Coltrane Basttlesuit.
* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: Sam is the tomboy to Jillian’s girly girl. Harriet falls somewhere in the middle.
* SteamPunk: The main part of the series is set a little bit before the usual period for Steampunk but employs plenty of expected tropes. By Cordelia’s time England seems to have more fully embraced this trope.
* SupportingProtagonist: Gregory tends to act as a supporting character to the plot. But the original trilogy is narrated mostly from his point of view.
* TankGoodness: A steam tank, no less. Employed to combat the Coltrane Basttlesuit.
* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: Sam is the tomboy to Jillian’s girly girl. Harriet falls somewhere in the middle.
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Harriet. She's determined to see her cousin married to the Scottsman because he's a man of fame, fortune, and most importantly, loves her dearly.
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* WorfEffect: Franzini is repeatedly reported to have the fastest hands that Gregory has ever seen. However, whenever this trait comes up in context it is always to show that some is faster than he. This is particularly notable during Sam Bowe’s EstablishingCharacterMoment.
* WrenchWench: Harriet Wright. A mechanical savant who can build or repair anything she has taken apart or seen the instructions or plans for.
* WorfEffect: Franzini is repeatedly reported to have the fastest hands that Gregory has ever seen. However, whenever this trait comes up in context it is always to show that some is faster than he. This is particularly notable during Sam Bowe’s EstablishingCharacterMoment.
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Dawn of Steam is a trilogy of alternate history/SteamPunk novels and associated short stories written by Jeffrey Cook and Sarah Symonds.
In [[RegencyEngland 1815]], in the aftermath of the Napoleonic Wars, two of England's wealthiest lords place a [[TheBet high-stakes wager]] on whether a popular set of books, which claim that the author, Dr. Robert Bowe, has travelled to many unknown corners of the globe, are fact or fiction. To this end former soldier and aide-de-camp Gregory Conan Watts is tasked with recruiting a band of adventurers and chronicling their progress around the globe as they aim to prove the truth once and for all. Along the way they have to contend with a rival expedition, out to thwart them at any cost and by any means necessary, hostile geography and even the weather itself as they must brave the so called year without summer.
Together this intrepid band of adventurers will blaze a trail across the world that will lay the foundations for a new age of [[SteamPunk technological advancement and enlightenment]] that is to come.
The books which comprise the main trilogy are:
* ''First Light'' (2014)
* ''Gods of the Sun'' (2014)
* ''Rising Suns'' (2015)
Additionally there are two short stories there are two short stories set after the main trilogy:
* ''The Rat King'' (published in ''Free-flowing Stories'')
* ''Voodoo Murders'' (Tbd)
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!!Dawn of Steam contains examples of:
* ActionDressRip: Sam Bowe, when assassins intent on killing the French monarch attack a ball the crew of the Dame Fortuna attending. Since she hates wearing the dress in the first place, she takes great pleasure in destroying it over the course of the battle until she is left in nothing but her underclothes by the aftermath.
* ActionGirl: Sam Bowe. [[spoiler:Jillian Coltrane is no slouch in this department either.]]
* Badass: Comes in a number of flavours throughout the series.
** BadassBookworm: James Coltrane inventor and pilot of the Coltrane Battlesuit[[spoiler: or perhaps more accurately Jillian]].
** BadassGrandpa: Captain Fisher, who literally ties himself to his ship’s wheel to see if safely through one of the worst storms he’s ever seen.
* BadassCrew: The band aboard the Dame Fortuna starts of with some of Britan’s greatest war heroes and continues to pick up [[{{Badass}} Badasses]] and [[ActionGirl Action Girls]] along the way.
* BallroomBlitz: A party for the visiting French Monarch doesn’t go exactly to plan.
* TheBet: A high stakes wager in the House of Lords kicks off the plot.
* BrainUploading: Sam’s ornithopter companion, Bubsy, contains the mind of a sheepdog. [[spoiler: More horrifyingly the cause of death for Mrs Mitchell was an attempt at this.]]
* BratsWithSlingshots: Matthew Fisher-Swift in the original trilogy.
* BunnyEarsLawyer: Eddy McBride is a rifle expert and a war hero: who just happens to be very, very picky about how he's addressed.
* CoolAirship: Plenty. A flotilla of airships is part of the reason for the British Empire’s dominance and victory in the Napoleonic War. Then of course there is the Dame Fortuna, a customised drop ship for the Coltrane Battlesuit, on which the heroes travel the world.
* DistressedDude: For most of the second book, [[spoiler: James Coltrane]].
* DawnOfTheWildWest: The period the original trilogy takes place in. The last third of First Light, in particular, takes place on the American Frontier.
* DramaPreservingHandicap: Sam Bowe can easily wipe the floor with most assailants using her knives. Unfortunately, she’s stuffed into a restrictive dress and corsets when she comes under attack at a ball.
* Dynamic Entry: The favoured method of deployment for the Coltrane Battle suit – being dropped on the adversary from the Dame Fortuna.
* EpistolaryNovel: The vast majority of the original trilogy is depicted through the letters and journal entries of Gregory Conan Watts with the occasional input of other characters throughout the series.
* EnglishRose: Jillian. Harriet very much wishes to be this. Sam Bowes vehemently does not. Mrs Fisher has made it her goal to ensure that every woman on the crew should behave like this, though.
*FootnoteFever: Cordelia often breaks into the flow of the narrative to explain certain parts of the setting the reader or to add additional depth to the story.
* ForegoneConclusion: The framing device with Cordelia indicates a number of characters will survive the events of the main narrative.
*ForkFencing: Sam Bowe’s preferred method of improvised weaponry tends to be whatever cutlery she can get her hands on at any given moment.
* FriendlySniper: BoisterousBruiser Edward ‘Call Me Eddy” McBride. At least if you’re on his good side.
* TheGhost: Dr. Robert Bowe is yet to appear on page, but his existance and exploits have a large impact on the story of the main trilogy.
* HappilyMarried: The Fishers. According to her commentary Gregory and Cordelia end up as this too.
* TheKlutz: Harriet with anything not related to mechanics.
* KnifeNut: Sam Bowe eschews guns preferring to use her myriad collection of knives.
* MadScientist: Dr Mitchell. A scientist so crazed he’s been ostracised by the setting’s other mad scientists and is now forced to live in seclusion in a cove full of technological marvels he’s created.
* OfficerAndAGentleman: James Coltrane to a tee. Gregory and Eddy to varying degrees as well.
* PerpetualFrowner: Mr Toomes.
* PoweredArmour: The Coltrane Battlesuit. A nine foot tall steam-powered bulletproof behemoth that fires rockets, can bend steel and jump higher than a house.
* ProperLady: Jillian Coltrane who runs the Coltrane estate
* Regency England: The original trilogy takes place in the aftermath of the Napoleonic War.
* SamusIsAGirl: Dr. Robert Bowe’s son Sam Bowe, whom the crew are sent to employ as a guide turn out to be Samantha Bowe. [[spoiler: In a more literal example it turns out that the designer and pilot of the Coltrane Battlesuit is Jillian and not James]].
* ShipperOnDeck: Jillian for Eddy and Harriet.
* SteamPunk: The main part of the series is set a little bit before the usual period for Steampunk but employs plenty of expected tropes. By Cordelia’s time England seems to have more fully embraced this trope.
* SupportingProtagonist: Gregory tends to act as a supporting character to the plot. But the original trilogy is narrated mostly from his point of view.
* TankGoodness: A steam tank, no less. Employed to combat the Coltrane Basttlesuit.
* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: Sam is the tomboy to Jillian’s girly girl. Harriet falls somewhere in the middle.
* VictoriasSecretCompartment: Julietta keeps a stiletto knife here amongst otherthings.
* {{Woobie}}: Harriet so desperately wants to be a ProperLady like Jillian but is completely out of her depth due to her clumsiness. It’s almost impossible not to feel sorry for her.
* WorfEffect: Franzini is repeatedly reported to have the fastest hands that Gregory has ever seen. However, whenever this trait comes up in context it is always to show that some is faster than he. This is particularly notable during Sam Bowe’s EstablishingCharacterMoment.
* WrenchWench: Harriet Wright. A mechanical savant who can build or repair anything she has taken apart or seen the instructions or plans for.
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Dawn of Steam is a trilogy of alternate history/SteamPunk novels and associated short stories written by Jeffrey Cook and Sarah Symonds.
In [[RegencyEngland 1815]], in the aftermath of the Napoleonic Wars, two of England's wealthiest lords place a [[TheBet high-stakes wager]] on whether a popular set of books, which claim that the author, Dr. Robert Bowe, has travelled to many unknown corners of the globe, are fact or fiction. To this end former soldier and aide-de-camp Gregory Conan Watts is tasked with recruiting a band of adventurers and chronicling their progress around the globe as they aim to prove the truth once and for all. Along the way they have to contend with a rival expedition, out to thwart them at any cost and by any means necessary, hostile geography and even the weather itself as they must brave the so called year without summer.
Together this intrepid band of adventurers will blaze a trail across the world that will lay the foundations for a new age of [[SteamPunk technological advancement and enlightenment]] that is to come.
The books which comprise the main trilogy are:
* ''First Light'' (2014)
* ''Gods of the Sun'' (2014)
* ''Rising Suns'' (2015)
Additionally there are two short stories there are two short stories set after the main trilogy:
* ''The Rat King'' (published in ''Free-flowing Stories'')
* ''Voodoo Murders'' (Tbd)
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!!Dawn of Steam contains examples of:
* ActionDressRip: Sam Bowe, when assassins intent on killing the French monarch attack a ball the crew of the Dame Fortuna attending. Since she hates wearing the dress in the first place, she takes great pleasure in destroying it over the course of the battle until she is left in nothing but her underclothes by the aftermath.
* ActionGirl: Sam Bowe. [[spoiler:Jillian Coltrane is no slouch in this department either.]]
* Badass: Comes in a number of flavours throughout the series.
** BadassBookworm: James Coltrane inventor and pilot of the Coltrane Battlesuit[[spoiler: or perhaps more accurately Jillian]].
** BadassGrandpa: Captain Fisher, who literally ties himself to his ship’s wheel to see if safely through one of the worst storms he’s ever seen.
* BadassCrew: The band aboard the Dame Fortuna starts of with some of Britan’s greatest war heroes and continues to pick up [[{{Badass}} Badasses]] and [[ActionGirl Action Girls]] along the way.
* BallroomBlitz: A party for the visiting French Monarch doesn’t go exactly to plan.
* TheBet: A high stakes wager in the House of Lords kicks off the plot.
* BrainUploading: Sam’s ornithopter companion, Bubsy, contains the mind of a sheepdog. [[spoiler: More horrifyingly the cause of death for Mrs Mitchell was an attempt at this.]]
* BratsWithSlingshots: Matthew Fisher-Swift in the original trilogy.
* BunnyEarsLawyer: Eddy McBride is a rifle expert and a war hero: who just happens to be very, very picky about how he's addressed.
* CoolAirship: Plenty. A flotilla of airships is part of the reason for the British Empire’s dominance and victory in the Napoleonic War. Then of course there is the Dame Fortuna, a customised drop ship for the Coltrane Battlesuit, on which the heroes travel the world.
* DistressedDude: For most of the second book, [[spoiler: James Coltrane]].
* DawnOfTheWildWest: The period the original trilogy takes place in. The last third of First Light, in particular, takes place on the American Frontier.
* DramaPreservingHandicap: Sam Bowe can easily wipe the floor with most assailants using her knives. Unfortunately, she’s stuffed into a restrictive dress and corsets when she comes under attack at a ball.
* Dynamic Entry: The favoured method of deployment for the Coltrane Battle suit – being dropped on the adversary from the Dame Fortuna.
* EpistolaryNovel: The vast majority of the original trilogy is depicted through the letters and journal entries of Gregory Conan Watts with the occasional input of other characters throughout the series.
* EnglishRose: Jillian. Harriet very much wishes to be this. Sam Bowes vehemently does not. Mrs Fisher has made it her goal to ensure that every woman on the crew should behave like this, though.
*FootnoteFever: Cordelia often breaks into the flow of the narrative to explain certain parts of the setting the reader or to add additional depth to the story.
* ForegoneConclusion: The framing device with Cordelia indicates a number of characters will survive the events of the main narrative.
*ForkFencing: Sam Bowe’s preferred method of improvised weaponry tends to be whatever cutlery she can get her hands on at any given moment.
* FriendlySniper: BoisterousBruiser Edward ‘Call Me Eddy” McBride. At least if you’re on his good side.
* TheGhost: Dr. Robert Bowe is yet to appear on page, but his existance and exploits have a large impact on the story of the main trilogy.
* HappilyMarried: The Fishers. According to her commentary Gregory and Cordelia end up as this too.
* TheKlutz: Harriet with anything not related to mechanics.
* KnifeNut: Sam Bowe eschews guns preferring to use her myriad collection of knives.
* MadScientist: Dr Mitchell. A scientist so crazed he’s been ostracised by the setting’s other mad scientists and is now forced to live in seclusion in a cove full of technological marvels he’s created.
* OfficerAndAGentleman: James Coltrane to a tee. Gregory and Eddy to varying degrees as well.
* PerpetualFrowner: Mr Toomes.
* PoweredArmour: The Coltrane Battlesuit. A nine foot tall steam-powered bulletproof behemoth that fires rockets, can bend steel and jump higher than a house.
* ProperLady: Jillian Coltrane who runs the Coltrane estate
* Regency England: The original trilogy takes place in the aftermath of the Napoleonic War.
* SamusIsAGirl: Dr. Robert Bowe’s son Sam Bowe, whom the crew are sent to employ as a guide turn out to be Samantha Bowe. [[spoiler: In a more literal example it turns out that the designer and pilot of the Coltrane Battlesuit is Jillian and not James]].
* ShipperOnDeck: Jillian for Eddy and Harriet.
* SteamPunk: The main part of the series is set a little bit before the usual period for Steampunk but employs plenty of expected tropes. By Cordelia’s time England seems to have more fully embraced this trope.
* SupportingProtagonist: Gregory tends to act as a supporting character to the plot. But the original trilogy is narrated mostly from his point of view.
* TankGoodness: A steam tank, no less. Employed to combat the Coltrane Basttlesuit.
* TomboyAndGirlyGirl: Sam is the tomboy to Jillian’s girly girl. Harriet falls somewhere in the middle.
* VictoriasSecretCompartment: Julietta keeps a stiletto knife here amongst otherthings.
* {{Woobie}}: Harriet so desperately wants to be a ProperLady like Jillian but is completely out of her depth due to her clumsiness. It’s almost impossible not to feel sorry for her.
* WorfEffect: Franzini is repeatedly reported to have the fastest hands that Gregory has ever seen. However, whenever this trait comes up in context it is always to show that some is faster than he. This is particularly notable during Sam Bowe’s EstablishingCharacterMoment.
* WrenchWench: Harriet Wright. A mechanical savant who can build or repair anything she has taken apart or seen the instructions or plans for.
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