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Using works to scare children from engaging in incompetent and/or immoral behavior.
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Using works to scare children people, usually children, from engaging in incompetent and/or immoral behavior.
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This seems to apply if the viewers are kids and if the work is trying to scare them. Also, the second paragraph suggests the behavior can be both of those things.
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Using works to discourage viewers from engaging in incompetent or immoral behavior.
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Using works to discourage viewers scare children from engaging in incompetent or and/or immoral behavior.
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Using works to scare children from doing incompetent or immoral behavior.
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Using works to scare children discourage viewers from doing engaging in incompetent or immoral behavior.
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Nah, that line didn\'t really fit the trope.
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-->[-If you don't visit the unabridged version [[ScareEmStraight HERE]], [[SpaceWhaleAesop a giant monster will eat everyone!]]-]
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-->[-If you don't visit the unabridged version [[ScareEmStraight HERE]], [[SpaceWhaleAesop a giant monster awful, AWFUL things will eat everyone!]]-]happen and you'll meet a horrible fate!-]
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Using works to scare children from doing incompetent or immoral behavior.
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