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* Victoria's MyGodWhatHaveIDone confession to Tristran after he returns, with Tristran forgiving her. Later on, she also befriends Yvaine.
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* Victoria's MyGodWhatHaveIDone confession to Tristran after he returns, with Tristran forgiving her. Later on, she also befriends Yvaine.Yvaine.
* When Tristran returns to Yvaine from Wall, the following exchange occurs.
-->"I'm sorry," he told her. "I won't leave you again."\\
"No," she said, seriously and with certainty, "you will not."
* When Tristran returns to Yvaine from Wall, the following exchange occurs.
-->"I'm sorry," he told her. "I won't leave you again."\\
"No," she said, seriously and with certainty, "you will not."
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* '''Yvaine''': What do stars do best? '''''Shine.'''''
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* '''Yvaine''': What Yvaine's PreAssKickingOneLiner of "What do stars do best? '''''Shine.''''''''''"
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-->'''Yvaine:''' ''(smiles and starts glowing)'' "Tristan."
* '''Yvaine''': What do stars do best? Shine.
* '''Yvaine''': What do stars do best? Shine.
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-->'''Yvaine:''' ''(smiles ''[smiles and starts glowing)'' "Tristan."
glowing]'' Tristan.
* '''Yvaine''': What do stars do best?Shine.'''''Shine.'''''
* '''Yvaine''': What do stars do best?
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* This interaction between Primus and Tristan.
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* This interaction between Primus and Tristan.Tristran.
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'''Tristan:''' My family are sheepfarmers, but if you ever pass our way, we'll give you a bed to sleep in, and woolen clothes, and all the mutton stew you can eat.\\
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* Victoria's MyGodWhatHaveIDone confession to Tristan after he returns, with Tristan forgiving her. Later on, she also befriends Yvaine.
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* Victoria's MyGodWhatHaveIDone confession to Tristan Tristran after he returns, with Tristan Tristran forgiving her. Later on, she also befriends Yvaine.
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* The rough-and-tumble crew revealing that they've always known that Captain Shakespeare is 'a bit of a whoopsie', and that no matter what else he is, [[UndyingLoyalty he is their captain]].
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* The rough-and-tumble crew revealing that they've always known that Captain Shakespeare is 'a bit of a whoopsie', and but that no matter what else he is, [[UndyingLoyalty he is their captain]].
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** There's also the scene earlier, where Una steals Dishwater Sal's caravan and drives it to the Wall, just to save Yvaine from turning into a rock in the human realm (and given that Una was Sal's ''slave'', she must have known she'd get in huge trouble for it). And when Una is freed of Sal, instead of running and escaping, she stands her ground and refuses to let Lamia kidnap Yvaine. It doesn't work out so well, but it still was very kind of her.
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** There's also the scene earlier, earlier where Una steals Dishwater Sal's caravan and drives it to the Wall, just to save Yvaine from turning into a rock in the human realm (and given that Una was Sal's ''slave'', she must have known she'd get in huge trouble for it). And when When Una is freed of Sal, instead of running and escaping, she stands her ground and refuses to let Lamia kidnap Yvaine. It doesn't work out so well, but it still was very kind of her.
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* '''Yvaine''': What do stars do? Shine.
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* '''Yvaine''': What do stars do? do best? Shine.
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* The princes seem to genuinely love their sister Una; which may or may not have to due with the fact that being female she does not have to compete with the siblings' heir race. When the brothers see her for the first time after years of separation (due to Una being Sal's slave for decades) they are delighted.
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* The princes seem to genuinely love their sister Una; Una, which may or may not have to due do with the fact that being female female, she does not have to compete with in the siblings' heir race. race for the throne. When the brothers see her for the first time after years of separation (due to Una being Sal's slave for decades) decades), they are delighted.
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* Primus and Tristan's interaction, especially since they are unknowingly uncle and nephew.
* Septimus seems very keen on keeping Primus alive - even though he coldly murders at least two siblings, he tells Primus to "stay in his tower" and leave the hunting for the stone to him. He doesn't care when he dies, but at the very least he respected his eldest brother.
* Septimus seems very keen on keeping Primus alive - even though he coldly murders at least two siblings, he tells Primus to "stay in his tower" and leave the hunting for the stone to him. He doesn't care when he dies, but at the very least he respected his eldest brother.
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* Primus and Tristan's interaction, interactions, especially since they are unknowingly uncle and nephew.
* Septimus seems very keen on keeping Primus alive- -- even though he coldly murders at least two siblings, he tells Primus to "stay in his tower" and leave the hunting for the stone to him. He doesn't care when he dies, but at the very least he respected his eldest brother.
* Septimus seems very keen on keeping Primus alive
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* '''Yvaine''': What do stars do? They shine.
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* '''Yvaine''': What do stars do? They shine.Shine.
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'''Tristran:''' My family are sheepfarmers, but if you ever pass our way, we'll give you a bed to sleep in, and woolen clothes, and all the mutton stew you can eat.\\
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** It becomes heartwarming when you realize that Tristran has offered to share everything his family owns with a near-complete stranger, but that it may also be the first time anyone has given Primus anything, no strings attached, just because they like him.
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** It becomes heartwarming when you realize that Tristran Tristan has offered to share everything his family owns with a near-complete stranger, but that it may also be the first time anyone has given Primus anything, no strings attached, just because they like him.
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** There's also the scene earlier, where Una steals Dishwater Sal's caravan and drives it to the Wall. Just to save Yvaine from turning into a rock in the human realm (and given that Una was Sal's ''slave'', she must have known she'd get in huge trouble for it). And when Una is freed of Sal, instead of running and escaping, she stands her ground and refuses to let Lamia kidnap Yvaine. It doesn't work out so well, but it still was very kind of her.
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** There's also the scene earlier, where Una steals Dishwater Sal's caravan and drives it to the Wall. Just Wall, just to save Yvaine from turning into a rock in the human realm (and given that Una was Sal's ''slave'', she must have known she'd get in huge trouble for it). And when Una is freed of Sal, instead of running and escaping, she stands her ground and refuses to let Lamia kidnap Yvaine. It doesn't work out so well, but it still was very kind of her.
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** There's also the scene earlier, where Una steals Dishwater Sal's caravan and drives it to the Wall. Just to save Yvaine from turning into a rock in the human realm (and given that Una was Sal's ''slave'', she must have known she'd get in huge trouble for it). And when Una is freed of Sal, instead of running and escaping. She stands her ground and refuses to let Lamia kidnap Yvaine. It doesn't work out so well, but it still was very kind of her.
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** There's also the scene earlier, where Una steals Dishwater Sal's caravan and drives it to the Wall. Just to save Yvaine from turning into a rock in the human realm (and given that Una was Sal's ''slave'', she must have known she'd get in huge trouble for it). And when Una is freed of Sal, instead of running and escaping. She escaping, she stands her ground and refuses to let Lamia kidnap Yvaine. It doesn't work out so well, but it still was very kind of her.
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* Yvaine's [[spoiler: confession of love to Tristan while he's in mouse form.]]
** [[spoiler: "You want to know what the captain really said to me? He told me that my true love was right in front of my eyes... ''(Yvaine starts to glow)''... and he was right."]]
** [[spoiler: "You want to know what the captain really said to me? He told me that my true love was right in front of my eyes... ''(Yvaine starts to glow)''... and he was right."]]
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* Yvaine's [[spoiler: confession of love to Tristan while he's in mouse form.]]
** [[spoiler: "Youform.
-->"You want to know what the captain really said to me? He told me that my true love was right in front of my eyes... ''(Yvaine starts to glow)''... and he was right."]]"
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-->"You want to know what the captain really said to me? He told me that my true love was right in front of my eyes... ''(Yvaine starts to glow)''... and he was right.
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* When [[spoiler:Una]] and Yvaine are kidnapped by Lamia, and [[spoiler:Una]] holds a sobbing Yvaine and strokes her hair.
** There's also the scene earlier, where [[spoiler:Una steals Dishwater Sal's caravan and drives it to the Wall.]] Just to save Yvaine from turning into a rock in the human realm (and given that [[spoiler:Una was Sal's ''slave'',]] she must have known she'd get in huge trouble for it). And when [[spoiler:Una is freed of Sal, instead of running and escaping. She stands her ground and refuses to let Lamia kidnap Yvaine. It doesn't work out so well, but it still was very kind of her.]]
* Yvaine's reaction when Tristan shows up to save her [[spoiler:at the witches' fortress.]]
** There's also the scene earlier, where [[spoiler:Una steals Dishwater Sal's caravan and drives it to the Wall.]] Just to save Yvaine from turning into a rock in the human realm (and given that [[spoiler:Una was Sal's ''slave'',]] she must have known she'd get in huge trouble for it). And when [[spoiler:Una is freed of Sal, instead of running and escaping. She stands her ground and refuses to let Lamia kidnap Yvaine. It doesn't work out so well, but it still was very kind of her.]]
* Yvaine's reaction when Tristan shows up to save her [[spoiler:at the witches' fortress.]]
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* When [[spoiler:Una]] Una and Yvaine are kidnapped by Lamia, and [[spoiler:Una]] Una holds a sobbing Yvaine and strokes her hair.
** There's also the scene earlier, where[[spoiler:Una Una steals Dishwater Sal's caravan and drives it to the Wall.]] Wall. Just to save Yvaine from turning into a rock in the human realm (and given that [[spoiler:Una Una was Sal's ''slave'',]] ''slave'', she must have known she'd get in huge trouble for it). And when [[spoiler:Una Una is freed of Sal, instead of running and escaping. She stands her ground and refuses to let Lamia kidnap Yvaine. It doesn't work out so well, but it still was very kind of her.]]
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* Yvaine's reaction when Tristan shows up to save her[[spoiler:at at the witches' fortress.]]
** There's also the scene earlier, where
* Yvaine's reaction when Tristan shows up to save her
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* '''Yvaine''': What do stars do? [[spoiler:They shine.]]
* The ending, when [[spoiler:Tristan and Yvaine, having ruled Stormhold for many happy years, light the Babylon candle and return to the stars.]] Nothing like the ending of the book, but still... awww.
* The princes seem to genuinely love their [[spoiler: sister Una]]; which may or may not have to due with the fact that [[spoiler: being female she]] does not have to compete with the siblings' heir race. When the brothers see [[spoiler: her]] for the first time after years of separation ([[spoiler: due to Una being Sal's slave for decades]]) they are delighted.
--> '''Septimus:''' [[spoiler: Una?!]]
-->'''[[GreekChorus The Dead Princes]]:''' [[spoiler:Sister!]]
* The ending, when [[spoiler:Tristan and Yvaine, having ruled Stormhold for many happy years, light the Babylon candle and return to the stars.]] Nothing like the ending of the book, but still... awww.
* The princes seem to genuinely love their [[spoiler: sister Una]]; which may or may not have to due with the fact that [[spoiler: being female she]] does not have to compete with the siblings' heir race. When the brothers see [[spoiler: her]] for the first time after years of separation ([[spoiler: due to Una being Sal's slave for decades]]) they are delighted.
--> '''Septimus:''' [[spoiler: Una?!]]
-->'''[[GreekChorus The Dead Princes]]:''' [[spoiler:Sister!]]
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* '''Yvaine''': What do stars do? [[spoiler:They shine.]]
They shine.
* The ending, when[[spoiler:Tristan Tristan and Yvaine, having ruled Stormhold for many happy years, light the Babylon candle and return to the stars.]] stars. Nothing like the ending of the book, but still... awww.
* The princes seem to genuinely love their[[spoiler: sister Una]]; Una; which may or may not have to due with the fact that [[spoiler: being female she]] she does not have to compete with the siblings' heir race. When the brothers see [[spoiler: her]] her for the first time after years of separation ([[spoiler: due (due to Una being Sal's slave for decades]]) decades) they are delighted.
--> '''Septimus:'''[[spoiler: Una?!]]
Una?!
-->'''[[GreekChorus The Dead Princes]]:'''[[spoiler:Sister!]]Sister!
* The ending, when
* The princes seem to genuinely love their
--> '''Septimus:'''
-->'''[[GreekChorus The Dead Princes]]:'''
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-->'''Yvaine:''' ‘’(smiles and starts glowing) Tristan’’.
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-->'''Yvaine:''' ‘’(smiles ''(smiles and starts glowing) Tristan’’.glowing)'' "Tristan."
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** There's also the scene earlier, where [[spoiler:Una steals Dishwater Sal's caravan and drives it to the Wall,]] just to save Yvaine from turning into a rock in the human realm (and given that [[spoiler:Una was Sal's ''slave'',]] she must have known she'd get in huge trouble for it). And when [[spoiler:Una is freed of Sal, instead of running and escaping, she stands her ground and refuses to let Lamia kidnap Yvaine. It doesn't work out so well, but it still was very kind of her.]]
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** There's also the scene earlier, where [[spoiler:Una steals Dishwater Sal's caravan and drives it to the Wall,]] just Wall.]] Just to save Yvaine from turning into a rock in the human realm (and given that [[spoiler:Una was Sal's ''slave'',]] she must have known she'd get in huge trouble for it). And when [[spoiler:Una is freed of Sal, instead of running and escaping, she escaping. She stands her ground and refuses to let Lamia kidnap Yvaine. It doesn't work out so well, but it still was very kind of her.]]
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* At the coronation, seeing Dunstan and Una finally reunited.
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* The rough-and-tumble crew revealing that they've always known that Captain Shakespeare is 'a bit of a whoopsie', and that no matter what else he is, he is their captain.
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* The rough-and-tumble crew revealing that they've always known that Captain Shakespeare is 'a bit of a whoopsie', and that no matter what else he is, [[UndyingLoyalty he is their captain.captain]].