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* This troper forgets what chapter it's in, but there's one scene between Pound Cake and Twilight, which happens after the pegasi of Ponyville see the flight harness in action. He comes up to Twilight with a bag of bits in his mouth and asks her if he can buy one. As Twilight tries to explain that they don't have one in filly size yet he keeps talking, mentioning that he asked his dad if he could have an allowance and got a paper route so that he'll have enough money to be able to afford one harness if what he brought isn't enough. He eventually breaks down crying, saying that he never wants to see Pumpkin mocked for not being able to fly ever again. Twilight promises him that as soon as they make foal-sized harnesses, he'll be the first to know.
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* Everypony's reactions to hearing about the above start as FunnyMoments, before moving onto this once their initial shock wears off.
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* Everypony's reactions to hearing about the above start as FunnyMoments, SugarWiki/FunnyMoments, before moving onto this once their initial shock wears off.
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* The Ponyville Pegasi's delight about the flight harness. Two stand outs include desiring parent-child bonding. One pony (heavily hinted to be Blossomforth) talks about how they want to show their parents how flower gardens look from the air and a second talks about how she wants to teach her Unicorn son how to fly just like her parents taught her.
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* After Luna decides to sponser the Harmony Aeronautics team in the Pegalathon, they show their thanks by remodeling the flight harness and renaming it the "Lunar Moth". Luna is moved to tears by this.
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* After Luna decides to sponser the Harmony Aeronautics team in the Pegalathon, Pegathalon, they show their thanks by remodeling the flight harness and renaming it the "Lunar "Luna Moth". Luna is moved to tears by this.
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* Applejack and Soarin's reunion at the end of the Pegalathon.
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* Applejack and Soarin's reunion at the end of the Pegalathon.Pegathalon.
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-->'''Celestia laid her wing across her prize student's withers with a fond smile''': Indeed it is, my dearest one. Indeed it is.
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-->'''Celestia''': Indeed it is, my dearest one. Indeed it is.
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* The final chapter is full of these moments. Twilight forgiving the Flim-Flam Brothers and [[CutLexLuthorACheck offering them both freedom and a job where their genius will be appreciated]], Pound Cake giving his little sister her own Harmony Harness for Hearth's Warming, Applejack and Soarin's wedding...
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* The final chapter is full of these moments. Twilight forgiving the Flim-Flam Brothers and [[CutLexLuthorACheck offering them both freedom and a job where their genius will be appreciated]], Pound Cake giving his little sister her own Harmony Harness for Hearth's Warming, Applejack and Soarin's wedding...wedding...
* This exchange in particular, when Twilight has given Celestia the grand tour of the newly opened Harmony Aeronautics factory:
-->'''Twilight''': It's an amazing feeling, seeing something you had a hoof in going out into the world, maybe changing it for the better.
-->'''Celestia laid her wing across her prize student's withers with a fond smile''': Indeed it is, my dearest one. Indeed it is.
* This exchange in particular, when Twilight has given Celestia the grand tour of the newly opened Harmony Aeronautics factory:
-->'''Twilight''': It's an amazing feeling, seeing something you had a hoof in going out into the world, maybe changing it for the better.
-->'''Celestia laid her wing across her prize student's withers with a fond smile''': Indeed it is, my dearest one. Indeed it is.
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* When Flim and Flam are brought before Celestia for punishment, they both individually try to take all the blame for their actions in order to spare each other. It's a small, but still touching moment, showing that for all their faults, they still [[EvenEvilHasLovedOnes care about each other]].
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* When Flim and Flam are brought before Celestia for punishment, they both individually try to take all the blame for their actions in order to spare each other. It's a small, but still touching moment, showing that for all their faults, they still [[EvenEvilHasLovedOnes care about each other]].other]].
* The final chapter is full of these moments. Twilight forgiving the Flim-Flam Brothers and [[CutLexLuthorACheck offering them both freedom and a job where their genius will be appreciated]], Pound Cake giving his little sister her own Harmony Harness for Hearth's Warming, Applejack and Soarin's wedding...
* The final chapter is full of these moments. Twilight forgiving the Flim-Flam Brothers and [[CutLexLuthorACheck offering them both freedom and a job where their genius will be appreciated]], Pound Cake giving his little sister her own Harmony Harness for Hearth's Warming, Applejack and Soarin's wedding...
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* Diamond Tiara tracking down Silver Spoon and begging forgiveness for all the wrong she's caused to Silver and all the other ponies she's known. You can feel the anguish and guilt as she apologizes, even saying that Silver has every right to still be mad at her. And then... Silver Spoon starts their old foal-hood SecretHandshake.
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* Diamond Tiara tracking down Silver Spoon and begging forgiveness for all the wrong she's caused to Silver and all the other ponies she's known. You can feel the anguish and guilt as she apologizes, even saying that Silver has every right to still be mad at her. And then... Silver Spoon starts their old foal-hood SecretHandshake.SecretHandshake.
* When Flim and Flam are brought before Celestia for punishment, they both individually try to take all the blame for their actions in order to spare each other. It's a small, but still touching moment, showing that for all their faults, they still [[EvenEvilHasLovedOnes care about each other]].
* When Flim and Flam are brought before Celestia for punishment, they both individually try to take all the blame for their actions in order to spare each other. It's a small, but still touching moment, showing that for all their faults, they still [[EvenEvilHasLovedOnes care about each other]].
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-->'''Soarin''': Even better.
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-->'''Soarin''': Even better.better.
* Diamond Tiara tracking down Silver Spoon and begging forgiveness for all the wrong she's caused to Silver and all the other ponies she's known. You can feel the anguish and guilt as she apologizes, even saying that Silver has every right to still be mad at her. And then... Silver Spoon starts their old foal-hood SecretHandshake.
* Diamond Tiara tracking down Silver Spoon and begging forgiveness for all the wrong she's caused to Silver and all the other ponies she's known. You can feel the anguish and guilt as she apologizes, even saying that Silver has every right to still be mad at her. And then... Silver Spoon starts their old foal-hood SecretHandshake.
