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** Racism doesn't has to be about a group considered "inferior" but also a group which considers itself "superior" is racist. Also "purity" and "not mixing races" is often important for them. Of course there is also the old truth that most racists are irrational idiots.
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** Racism doesn't has have to be about a group considered "inferior" but also a group which considers itself "superior" is racist. Also "purity" and "not mixing races" is often important for them. Of course there is also the old truth that most racists are irrational idiots.
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*** Maybe not racism but still bigotry. Perhaps Damsel picked up on the latter, couldn't bring herself to ask Corefire about it, and assumed he was squicked because of racism rather than speciesism or "ew, clones".
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Headscratchers is for questions about the story, not the discussion of future sequels.
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* Where's the sequel?
** Dr. Impossible already failed his character development, probably forever. What else is there to tell?
** If one does get written, expect it to deconstruct an entirely different pair of tropes, leaving the protagonists of this book in the background.
*** Perhaps the next story could focus on new characters? The universe depicted in the book is too fascinating to just be not looked at again.
** Dr. Impossible already failed his character development, probably forever. What else is there to tell?
** If one does get written, expect it to deconstruct an entirely different pair of tropes, leaving the protagonists of this book in the background.
*** Perhaps the next story could focus on new characters? The universe depicted in the book is too fascinating to just be not looked at again.
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* Why did Doctor Impossible try to hide his identity with a napkin in the big fight with the New Champions? He didn't have a mask in prison, he's probably been scanned down to the subatomic level, and the Feds would clearly have a photograph of him without his costume. Heck, even a couple in the diner recognized him.
** Well, part of his InternalMonologue is about how he sometimes couldn't help himself: building Domesday machines, spouting one-liners; heck he had trouble preventing himself from explaining his plan at one point. Maybe wearing a disguise when fighting heroes was one of those things he felt was necessary... or he just couldn't help himself.
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** We never see the story from CoreFire's point of view: he may be xenophobic, or prejudiced, or sexist, but we only have Damsel's assertion that it is so.
** There is a real chance Damsel is just rationalizing. She calls CoreFire a "racist" because he finds her origins to be full of squick and a complete wood killer. I'm not sure you can categorize being part alien or a gender flipped clone in the same box as ethnicity in terms of the contemporary demand for tolerance.
** There is a real chance Damsel is just rationalizing. She calls CoreFire a "racist" because he finds her origins to be full of squick and a complete wood killer. I'm not sure you can categorize being part alien or a gender flipped clone in the same box as ethnicity in terms of the contemporary demand for tolerance.
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** We never see the story from CoreFire's [=CoreFire=]'s point of view: he may be xenophobic, or prejudiced, or sexist, but we only have Damsel's assertion that it is so.
so. It is for example possible that [=Corefire=] felt there was something creepy and wrong about have sex with the daughter/clone of his childhood hero and role model.
** There is a real chance Damsel is just rationalizing. She callsCoreFire [=CoreFire=] a "racist" because he finds her origins to be full of squick and a complete wood killer. I'm not sure you can categorize being part alien or a gender flipped clone in the same box as ethnicity in terms of the contemporary demand for tolerance.
** There is a real chance Damsel is just rationalizing. She calls
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****Doctor Impossible may have mistakenly thought he'd spotted a trend in future people. Lily is also transparent near to the point of invisibility. He probably never actually looked that closely.
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*** Perhaps the next story could focus on new characters? The universe depicted in the book is too fascinating to just be not looked at again.
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** Aside from the other reasons, Dr. Impossible wants to shock his nemesis Corefire with a dramatic reveal of who he is, which wouldn't work if Corefire can just look up his identity.
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*** I don't think that's strictly the case, sure [=CoreFire=] has some JerkAss tendencies, but who among us doesn't? His entire ''life'' post-accident has been a case of ButForMeItWasTuesday as he moves from one crisis to the next. He doesn't even ''have'' a SecretIdentity anymore because he never had time to use it.
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** [=CoreFire=] is a JerkAss, so he can't fathom why his non-superpowered ex-girlfriend would count for anything.
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** It's because he's out of uniform. As he puts it himself when recovering his costume: "I wear the flag of a country that never existed and the uniform of its glorious army, spreading forth the dominion of the invincible empire of me." To be out of costume is to literally not be himself, and one of the most crucial steps to reassuming his proper identity is covering his face because the face is the most identifiable part of a person.
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** How many girlfriends has [=CoreFire=] had? How many DesignatedVictim-types has Impossible kidnapped to lure his ArchNemesis out? At one point he mentions he got bored with kidnapping Erica and when on to other targets -- even kidnapping a puppy was enough to draw [=CoreFire=] out.
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*** I assumed the throwing up thing was to imply she was bulimic.
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** There is a real chance Damsel is just rationalizing. She calls CoreFire a "racist" because he finds her origins to be full of squick and a complete wood killer. I'm not sure you can categorize being part alien or a gender flipped clone in the same box as ethnicity in terms of the contemporary demand for tolerance.
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** We never see the story from CoreFire's point of view: he may be xenophobic, or prejudiced, or sexist, but we only have Damsel's assertion that it is so.
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** If one does get written, expect it to deconstruct an entirely different pair of tropes, leaving the protagonists of this book in the background.
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** My theory is that this is a joke on the ContinuityDrift found in comics and how characters have different Origin Storys, depending on writers/story needs/etc.
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** My theory is that this is a joke on the ContinuityDrift found in comics and how characters have different Origin Storys, [[OriginStory background stories]], depending on writers/story needs/etc.
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** or it could be a "Style Thing" after all he did swear he wouldn't be taken down in "Street Clothes". He has some kinda weird self standard when it comes to his Supervillian Persona.
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** or Or it could be a "Style Thing" after all he did swear he wouldn't be taken down in "Street Clothes". He has some kinda weird self standard when it comes to his Supervillian Supervillain Persona.
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** I have no idea how much amnesia is involved in returning from the dead. He certainly doesn't seem to remember the results of the last time he fought a guy armed with that hammer...
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** or it could be a "Style Thing" after all he did swear he wouldn't be taken down in "Street Clothes". He has some kinda weird self standard when it comes to his Supervillian Persona.
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** There's a bit of a contradiction in Doctor Impossible's logic. At the start of the book he declares that villains can't bother with secret identities because it cheapens their work if they can just take off their mask and walk away from their crimes. Yet all throughout the book he goes to great lengths to hide his face. It might be less about hiding a traceable criminal identity as hiding his identity as a failed graduate student.
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** It's possible he does remember. It's just been so long since Erica became Lily that he doesn't really care about her any more. The same thing happens to Doctor Impossible at the end of the book.
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** Dr. Impossible already failed his character development, probably forever. What else is there to tell?
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*** Or it was Doc Impossible convincing himself of what he wants to believe.
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* Why is CoreFire surprised when Dr. Impossible mentions Erica? Apparently he kidnapped her a good number of times, so shouldn't CoreFire assume that's where he knows her from. He's seen them together before!
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* Why is CoreFire [=CoreFire=] surprised when Dr. Impossible mentions Erica? Apparently he kidnapped her a good number of times, so shouldn't CoreFire [=CoreFire=] assume that's where he knows her from. from? He's seen them together before!
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** Also, doesn't EVERYONE know/think that Damsel is a half-alien princess? If anything he should have been finding out how close to human she really is.
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** Also, yes, everything on this page can be explained by ContinuityDrift.
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** Doctor Impossible erased all records of his identity beforehand.
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** Racism doesn't has to be about a group considered "inferior" but also a group which considers itself "superior" is racist. Also "purity" and "not mixing races" is often important for them. Of course there is also the old truth that most racists are irrational idiots.
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** My theory is that this is a joke on the ContinuityDrift found in comics and how characters have different Origin Storys, depending on writers/story needs/etc.
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*Why does Impossible make a huge deal about hiding his identity when he's been in prison for a few years? I doubt they let him wear his mask the whole time in there.
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* Two facts taken together just don't gel. Early in the book, Doctor Impossible notes that, once you get familiar with her facial structure, Lily does in fact look like a person that came from the future that she said she came from. Yet Fatale says that her face is the same as it was when she was Erica. So what was it?
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*** Racism, or indeed prejudice, isn't always tied directly to being told specifically to hate this group when your young. There are several reasons Corefire could have be prejudiced against her: she's "unnatural," there's something disgusting about her creation, she's "other." (Which would be kind of hypocritical, yet totally meshing with the story's themes, if you think about it). In the end, it could just be petty revulsion of something unknown or different. It wouldn't be anything new, depressingly enough.
