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-->'''Sheena:''' You're Judy's fox. So are you, like, hot for my sister?
-->'''Nick:''' [[StunnedSilence ...?!]] What?!
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-->'''Grandpa:''' Good Riddance. They made me stand on those bleachers for hours.
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-->'''Nick:''' WHAT'S THAT RACKET?!
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-->'''The Siblings:''' RANDY REBECCA RABBIT!!!
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-->'''Tulip:''' ''(Sitting on his lap without permission)'' I've never met a fox before... Are you all so... ''foxy?'' <3 <3
-->'''Her Siblings:''' TULIP!!
-->'''Tulip:''' That bandage makes you look ''really'' hot -
--> ''(The other three pull her away from him)''
-->'''Chet:''' Mr. Wilde, I apologize for my sister's depravity.
-->'''Diane:''' I don't think this guy is into rabbits.
-->'''Fiona:''' Not to mention he's old enough to be your dad.
-->'''Tulip:''' ''(With hearts in her eyes)'' How old are you?
-->'''Nick:''' ''(With an expression that's either confused or offended)'' Little girl, I am 32!
-->'''Tulip:''' 13 y/o DADDY!! I'M 59% HIS AGE!!
-->'''Her Siblings:''' TULIP!!
-->'''Tulip:''' That bandage makes you look ''really'' hot -
--> ''(The other three pull her away from him)''
-->'''Chet:''' Mr. Wilde, I apologize for my sister's depravity.
-->'''Diane:''' I don't think this guy is into rabbits.
-->'''Fiona:''' Not to mention he's old enough to be your dad.
-->'''Tulip:''' ''(With hearts in her eyes)'' How old are you?
-->'''Nick:''' ''(With an expression that's either confused or offended)'' Little girl, I am 32!
-->'''Tulip:''' 13 y/o DADDY!! I'M 59% HIS AGE!!
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-->'''Nick:''' And Nick is feeling very stuck right now. Very stuck indeed.
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-->'''Nick:''' ...Who's she?
--> ''(Jillian gives them a disbelieving look)''
-->'''Nick:''' ''(Sees her babies and waves)'' Hi babies.
-->'''Judy:''' ''(Smug look crosses her face)'' Jillian. ''(Leans into Nick's back)'' Mmmm - ''(sniff)'' Babe you smell so good.
-->'''Nick:''' ''(Still out of it)'' [[CallBack George was right about rabbits!]]
-->'''Judy:''' It's that natural fox musk. Irresistible. Let's go somewhere ~PRIVATE~
--> ''(Jillian looking infuriated)''
-->'''Nick:''' Haha. MUSK. What a funny word. Musk. Mmmusk. Musk. Rhymes with busk. Busk is a word, right?
-->'''Judy:''' Shhh don't talk babe, you'll wear yourself out.
-->'''Nick:''' [[AccidentalInnuendo I feel lucky.]]
--> ''(Jillian is looking as if she needs BrainBleach.)''
--> ''(Jillian gives them a disbelieving look)''
-->'''Nick:''' ''(Sees her babies and waves)'' Hi babies.
-->'''Judy:''' ''(Smug look crosses her face)'' Jillian. ''(Leans into Nick's back)'' Mmmm - ''(sniff)'' Babe you smell so good.
-->'''Nick:''' ''(Still out of it)'' [[CallBack George was right about rabbits!]]
-->'''Judy:''' It's that natural fox musk. Irresistible. Let's go somewhere ~PRIVATE~
--> ''(Jillian looking infuriated)''
-->'''Nick:''' Haha. MUSK. What a funny word. Musk. Mmmusk. Musk. Rhymes with busk. Busk is a word, right?
-->'''Judy:''' Shhh don't talk babe, you'll wear yourself out.
-->'''Nick:''' [[AccidentalInnuendo I feel lucky.]]
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-->'''Nick:''' Lieutenant, did you pretend I was your boyfriend so you could rustle you're bitchy sister's jimmies?
-->'''Judy:''' [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial You hallucinated that.]]
-->'''Judy:''' [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial You hallucinated that.]]
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-->'''Judy:''' [With an annoyed expression] You're gonna make me drag ''THAT'' with me on an investigation?
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-->'''Judy:''' [With ''(With an annoyed expression] expression)'' You're gonna make me drag ''THAT'' with me on an investigation?
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-->'''Judy:''' [Pulls him close] You listen, FOX. No funny business, okay? No scheming, no conniving, none of that ''fox stuff.''
-->'''Nick:''' [With a shit-eating grin] You have such a way with words, [[InSeriesNickname Lieutenant Hippity-hop.]]
-->'''Judy:''' [Trying to look frightening] Because if you put one toe out of line...
-->'''Nick:''' [Looking more amused than anything] [[DeadpanSnarker I tremble in my orange jumpsuit.]]
-->'''Nick:''' [With a shit-eating grin] You have such a way with words, [[InSeriesNickname Lieutenant Hippity-hop.]]
-->'''Judy:''' [Trying to look frightening] Because if you put one toe out of line...
-->'''Nick:''' [Looking more amused than anything] [[DeadpanSnarker I tremble in my orange jumpsuit.]]
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-->'''Judy:''' [Pulls ''(Pulls him close] close)'' You listen, FOX. No funny business, okay? No scheming, no conniving, none of that ''fox stuff.''
-->'''Nick:'''[With ''(With a shit-eating grin] grin)'' You have such a way with words, [[InSeriesNickname Lieutenant Hippity-hop.]]
-->'''Judy:'''[Trying ''(Trying to look frightening] frightening)'' Because if you put one toe out of line...
-->'''Nick:'''[Looking ''(Looking more amused than anything] anything)'' [[DeadpanSnarker I tremble in my orange jumpsuit.]]
-->'''Nick:'''
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-->'''Nick:'''
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-->'''Judy:''' [With a disturbed look on her face] Up. Up now. No pie for you.
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-->'''Judy:''' [With ''(With a disturbed look on her face] face)'' Up. Up now. No pie for you.
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-->'''Guard:''' [Dangling Judy and Nick with ease] Found these two arguing outside. Fox says, he knows you.
-->'''Nick:''' [Looking put out]] Hi Koslov. Angel. Nilla. Cherry.
-->'''Nick:''' [Looking put out]] Hi Koslov. Angel. Nilla. Cherry.
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-->'''Guard:''' [Dangling ''(Dangling Judy and Nick with ease] ease)'' Found these two arguing outside. Fox says, he knows you.
-->'''Nick:'''[Looking ''(Looking put out]] out)'' Hi Koslov. Angel. Nilla. Cherry.
-->'''Nick:'''
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-->'''Nick:''' [On the ground now] Not entirely. No... You see, I have to help them solve a mystery first.
-->'''Nick:''' [Dangling Judy] This here is Lieutenant Carrots Hippity-Hop.
-->'''Nick:''' [Dangling Judy] This here is Lieutenant Carrots Hippity-Hop.
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-->'''Nick:''' [On ''(On the ground now] now)'' Not entirely. No... You see, I have to help them solve a mystery first.
-->'''Nick:'''[Dangling Judy] ''(Dangling Judy)'' This here is Lieutenant Carrots Hippity-Hop.
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-->'''The Siblings:''' [StunnedSilence]''(StunnedSilence)''
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-->'''Tulip:''' [Sitting on his lap without permission] I've never met a fox before... Are you all so... ''foxy?'' <3 <3
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-->'''Tulip:''' [Sitting ''(Sitting on his lap without permission] permission)'' I've never met a fox before... Are you all so... ''foxy?'' <3 <3
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-->'''Tulip:''' [With hearts in her eyes] How old are you?
-->'''Nick:''' [With an expression that's either confused or offended] Little girl, I am 32!
-->'''Nick:''' [With an expression that's either confused or offended] Little girl, I am 32!
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-->'''Tulip:''' [With ''(With hearts in her eyes] eyes)'' How old are you?
-->'''Nick:'''[With ''(With an expression that's either confused or offended] offended)'' Little girl, I am 32!
-->'''Nick:'''
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--> [Jillian gives them a disbelieving look]
-->'''Nick:''' [Sees her babies and waves] Hi babies.
-->'''Judy:''' [Smug look crosses her face] Jillian. [Leans into Nick's back] Mmmm - (sniff) Babe you smell so good.
-->'''Nick:''' [Still out of it] [[CallBack George was right about rabbits!]]
-->'''Nick:''' [Sees her babies and waves] Hi babies.
-->'''Judy:''' [Smug look crosses her face] Jillian. [Leans into Nick's back] Mmmm - (sniff) Babe you smell so good.
-->'''Nick:''' [Still out of it] [[CallBack George was right about rabbits!]]
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--> [Jillian ''(Jillian gives them a disbelieving look]
look)''
-->'''Nick:'''[Sees ''(Sees her babies and waves] waves)'' Hi babies.
-->'''Judy:'''[Smug ''(Smug look crosses her face] face)'' Jillian. [Leans ''(Leans into Nick's back] back)'' Mmmm - (sniff) ''(sniff)'' Babe you smell so good.
-->'''Nick:'''[Still ''(Still out of it] it)'' [[CallBack George was right about rabbits!]]
-->'''Nick:'''
-->'''Judy:'''
-->'''Nick:'''
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* If you go with the chrono-link on the main page so you can see WordOfGod the first thing you'll see is this.
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* If you go with the chrono-link on the main page so you can see WordOfGod WordOfGod, the first thing you'll see is this.this:
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* After an asker lampshades several reasons as to ''why'' EveryoneCanSeeIt the Author gives a rather funny responce shortly before posting #36.
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* After an asker lampshades several reasons as to ''why'' EveryoneCanSeeIt EveryoneCanSeeIt, the Author author gives a rather funny responce shortly before posting #36.#36:
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* The "Nick's Shit Taste" side series. So far there's only [[ two]] [[ parts]] but they manage to be pretty funny.
* While a lot of the author's side drawings usually have ''something'' to do with world building several are just silly. Like the 10/19/2016 image.
* While a lot of the author's side drawings usually have ''something'' to do with world building several are just silly. Like the 10/19/2016 image.
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* The "Nick's Shit Taste" side series. So far there's only [[ two]] [[ parts]] two parts but they manage to be pretty funny.
* While a lot of the author's side drawings usually have ''something'' to do with worldbuilding building, several are just silly. Like the 10/19/2016 image.image:
* While a lot of the author's side drawings usually have ''something'' to do with world
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* The Author is a little upset that a certain phrase is NewerThantheyThinkNewerThanTheyThink
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--> [[spoiler:'''Manchas''']]: I... suppose I don't have a say on this?
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--> [[spoiler:'''Manchas''']]: I... suppose I don't have a no say on in any of all this?
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* While the string of events Judy hears from [[spoiler:Woolfred U. Douglas]] are not at all funny, the way her face contorts in various manners due to her sheer disbelief is a sight to behold.
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* While the string of events Judy hears from [[spoiler:Woolfred U. Douglas]] are not at all funny, the way her face contorts in various manners due to her out of sheer disbelief is a sight to behold.
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--> [[spoiler:'''Manchas''']]: I... suppose I don't have a say on this?
--> '''Bucky and Ernest''': NO!
--> '''Bucky and Ernest''': NO!
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* In response to [[spoiler:Nick being hunted down for uncollaring several predators, several foxes decide to turn themselves in [[IAmSpartacus claiming to be Nick in order to buy him his freedom]]]], and these include [[spoiler:several ''vixens'']]. Why do they do that? Because [[spoiler:[[LoopholeAbuse Nick's wanted poster forgot to mention that Nick is male]]]].
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* After the very dark scene in [[spoiler:Carnifaux]], Bucky and Ernest are discussing about [[spoiler:giving the evidence of the experiments in Carnifaux to ZPD]]. Their guest, [[spoiler:the recently-freed Manchas]] asks if they may perhaps share opinion, and the two cops shoot them down without missing a beat.
* While the string of events Judy hears from [[spoiler:Woolfred U. Douglas]] are not at all funny, the way her face contorts in various manners due to her sheer disbelief is a sight to behold.
* While the string of events Judy hears from [[spoiler:Woolfred U. Douglas]] are not at all funny, the way her face contorts in various manners due to her sheer disbelief is a sight to behold.
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*** His correct assumption on just what kind of mammal she is.
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-->'''Nick:''' [With a blank expression] Oh my God.
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-->'''Nick:''' [With a blank horrified expression] Oh my God.
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-->'''Nick:''' Lieutenant, did you pretend I was your boyfriend so you rustle you're bitchy sister's Jimmie?
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-->'''Nick:''' Lieutenant, did you pretend I was your boyfriend so you could rustle you're bitchy sister's Jimmie?jimmies?
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* [[https://youtu.be/2oZIMTjTYbM The first blooper video from the dub.]] Especially when it depends into madness.
-->'''Judy's VA:''' Okay, [[LampshadeHanging too much.]] (Laughs)
-->'''Judy's VA:''' Okay, [[LampshadeHanging too much.]] (Laughs)
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* [[https://youtu.be/2oZIMTjTYbM The first blooper video from the dub.]] Especially when it depends descends into madness.
-->'''Judy's VA:''' Okay, [[LampshadeHanging too much.]](Laughs)''(Laughs)''
-->'''Judy's VA:''' Okay, [[LampshadeHanging too much.]]
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* The "Nick's Shit Taste" side series. So far there's only [[ two]] [[ parts]] but they manage to be pretty funny.
* While a lot of the author's side drawings usually have ''something'' to do with world building several are just silly. Like the 10/19/2016 image.
-->'''Nick:''' Why is it that I, [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial a TOTALLY STRAIGHT FOX,]] cannot ''aesthetically appreciate'' a rabbit's SWEET ASS!!!
* While a lot of the author's side drawings usually have ''something'' to do with world building several are just silly. Like the 10/19/2016 image.
-->'''Nick:''' Why is it that I, [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial a TOTALLY STRAIGHT FOX,]] cannot ''aesthetically appreciate'' a rabbit's SWEET ASS!!!
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-->'''Nick:''' Lieutenant, did you pretend I was your so you rustle you're bitchy sister's Jimmie?
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-->'''Nick:''' Lieutenant, did you pretend I was your boyfriend so you rustle you're bitchy sister's Jimmie?
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** Tulip idolizong Gazelle because she's "depraved and provocative." Also Nick getting stuck in the room and needing the siblings to dig him out.
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** Tulip idolizong idolizing Gazelle because she's "depraved and provocative." Also Nick getting stuck in the room and needing the siblings to dig him out.
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-->'''Judy:''' [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial You hallucinate that.]]
** Judy having to chase off two separate hords of nieces and nephew. (Made better by the fact that the first one seems to be lead by her brother Chet and second one by Tulip.)
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-->'''Judy:''' [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial You hallucinate hallucinated that.]]
** Judy having to chase off two separatehords hordes of nieces and nephew.nephews. (Made better by the fact that the first one seems to be lead by her brother Chet and second one by Tulip.)
** Judy having to chase off two separate
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-->'''Author:''' Zistopia AU #39. disclaimer: to “rustle ones jimmies” is not in fact a real idiom of the era. Apparently it was made up in 2010 to SOUND like greaser slang. That really rustles my jimmies.
-->'''Author:''' Zistopia AU #39. disclaimer: to “rustle ones jimmies” is not in fact a real idiom of the era. Apparently it was made up in 2010 to SOUND like greaser slang. That really rustles my jimmies.
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--> [Jillian is looking as if she needs BrainBleach.]]]
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** Judy having to chase off two separate hords of nieces and nephew. (Made better by the fact that the first one seems to be lead by her brother Chet and second one by Tulip.
Tulip.)
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-->'''Judy's VA:''' Okay, [[LampshadeHanging: too much.]] (Laughs)
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-->'''Judy's VA:''' Okay, [[LampshadeHanging: [[LampshadeHanging too much.]] (Laughs)
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** Tulip idolizong Gazelle because she's "depraved and provocative." Also Nick getting stuck in the room and needing the sibling to dig him out.
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** Tulip idolizong Gazelle because she's "depraved and provocative." Also Nick getting stuck in the room and needing the sibling siblings to dig him out.
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** Nick having to use a laundry shoot to get to Judy. Which Diane and Fiona dub "laundry slide adventure."
*** When Nick gets stuck Fiona calls her nieces and nephews to help push him down. When he gets to the bottom he's assaulted with raining baby buns falling on top of him.
** Nick [[SuddenlyShouting embarrassing]] himself by [[spoiler: proving the urban legend about Foxes shouting when they see their true love upon finally finding Judy.]] Unfortunately this moment is lessened by the fact that [[spoiler: his collar injured him again due to excitement.]]
** After Judy [[spoiler: takes his collar off again]] she and (a slightly not fully functioning) Nick run into her bitchy sister Jillian.
-->'''Nick:''' ...Who's she?
--> [Jillian gives them a disbelieving look]
-->'''Nick:''' [Sees her babies and waves] Hi babies.
-->'''Judy:''' [Smug look crosses her face] Jillian. [Leans into Nick's back] Mmmm - (sniff) Babe you smell so good.
-->'''Nick:''' [Still out of it] [[CallBack George was right about rabbits!]]
-->'''Judy:''' It's that natural fox musk. Irresistible. Let's go somewhere ~PRIVATE~
-->[Jillian looking infuriated]
-->'''Nick:''' Haha. MUSK. What a funny word. Musk. Mmmusk. Musk. Rhymes with busk. Busk is a word, right?
-->'''Judy:''' Shhh don't talk babe, you'll wear yourself out.
-->'''Nick:''' [[AccidentalInnuendo I feel lucky.]]
--> [Jillian is looking as if she needs BrainBleach.]]
*** the fact that this part is simply titled ''"(eat shit)"''
** After Nick comes to from the above.
-->'''Nick:''' Lieutenant, did you pretend I was your so you rustle you're bitchy sister's Jimmie?
-->'''Judy:''' [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial You hallucinate that.]]
** Judy having to chase off two separate hords of nieces and nephew. (Made better by the fact that the first one seems to be lead by her brother Chet and second one by Tulip.
*** When Nick gets stuck Fiona calls her nieces and nephews to help push him down. When he gets to the bottom he's assaulted with raining baby buns falling on top of him.
** Nick [[SuddenlyShouting embarrassing]] himself by [[spoiler: proving the urban legend about Foxes shouting when they see their true love upon finally finding Judy.]] Unfortunately this moment is lessened by the fact that [[spoiler: his collar injured him again due to excitement.]]
** After Judy [[spoiler: takes his collar off again]] she and (a slightly not fully functioning) Nick run into her bitchy sister Jillian.
-->'''Nick:''' ...Who's she?
--> [Jillian gives them a disbelieving look]
-->'''Nick:''' [Sees her babies and waves] Hi babies.
-->'''Judy:''' [Smug look crosses her face] Jillian. [Leans into Nick's back] Mmmm - (sniff) Babe you smell so good.
-->'''Nick:''' [Still out of it] [[CallBack George was right about rabbits!]]
-->'''Judy:''' It's that natural fox musk. Irresistible. Let's go somewhere ~PRIVATE~
-->[Jillian looking infuriated]
-->'''Nick:''' Haha. MUSK. What a funny word. Musk. Mmmusk. Musk. Rhymes with busk. Busk is a word, right?
-->'''Judy:''' Shhh don't talk babe, you'll wear yourself out.
-->'''Nick:''' [[AccidentalInnuendo I feel lucky.]]
--> [Jillian is looking as if she needs BrainBleach.]]
*** the fact that this part is simply titled ''"(eat shit)"''
** After Nick comes to from the above.
-->'''Nick:''' Lieutenant, did you pretend I was your so you rustle you're bitchy sister's Jimmie?
-->'''Judy:''' [[SuspiciouslySpecificDenial You hallucinate that.]]
** Judy having to chase off two separate hords of nieces and nephew. (Made better by the fact that the first one seems to be lead by her brother Chet and second one by Tulip.
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* After an asker lampshades several reasons as to ''why'' EveryoneCanSeeIt the Author gives a rather funny responce shortly before posting #36.
-->'''Author:''' Nicolas "I am not a preyophile" Wilde | Nick "I need Judy" Wilde | Nicolas "P is for Pansexual" Wilde
-->'''Author:''' Nicolas "I am not a preyophile" Wilde | Nick "I need Judy" Wilde | Nicolas "P is for Pansexual" Wilde
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** Tulip idolizong Gazelle because she's "depraved and provocative." Also Nick getting stuck in the room and needing the sibling to dig him out.
-->'''Nick:''' And Nick is feeling very stuck right now. Very stuck indeed.
-->'''Nick:''' And Nick is feeling very stuck right now. Very stuck indeed.
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* [[https://youtu.be/2oZIMTjTYbM The first blooper video from the dub.]]
]] Especially when it depends into madness.
-->'''Judy's VA:''' Okay, [[LampshadeHanging: too much.]] (Laughs)
-->'''Judy's VA:''' Okay, [[LampshadeHanging: too much.]] (Laughs)
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** The flashback revealing Nick's first kiss was taken by none other than ''Gazelle.''
** Nick's interaction with [[AllWomenAreLustful Tulip.]]
-->'''Tulip:''' [Sitting on his lap without permission] I've never met a fox before... Are you all so... ''foxy?'' <3 <3
-->'''Her Siblings:''' TULIP!!
-->'''Tulip:''' That bandage makes you look ''really'' hot -
--> [The other three pull her away from him]
-->'''Chet:''' Mr. Wilde, I apologize for my sister's depravity.
-->'''Diane:''' I don't think this guy is into rabbits.
-->'''Fiona:''' Not to mention he's old enough to be your dad.
-->'''Tulip:''' [With hearts in her eyes] How old are you?
-->'''Nick:''' [With an expression that's either confused or offended] Little girl, I am 32!
-->'''Tulip:''' 13 y/o DADDY!! I'M 59% HIS AGE!!
** Nick's interaction with [[AllWomenAreLustful Tulip.]]
-->'''Tulip:''' [Sitting on his lap without permission] I've never met a fox before... Are you all so... ''foxy?'' <3 <3
-->'''Her Siblings:''' TULIP!!
-->'''Tulip:''' That bandage makes you look ''really'' hot -
--> [The other three pull her away from him]
-->'''Chet:''' Mr. Wilde, I apologize for my sister's depravity.
-->'''Diane:''' I don't think this guy is into rabbits.
-->'''Fiona:''' Not to mention he's old enough to be your dad.
-->'''Tulip:''' [With hearts in her eyes] How old are you?
-->'''Nick:''' [With an expression that's either confused or offended] Little girl, I am 32!
-->'''Tulip:''' 13 y/o DADDY!! I'M 59% HIS AGE!!
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* Nick's stay in the Hopps home.
** Being swarmed by Judy's nieces and nephews.
** The constant ThousandYardStare as he attempts to traverse the confusing home.
** His inability to deal with their [[TheGlomp brand of affection.]]
** Nick meeting Sheena, Judy's punk little sister.
-->'''Sheena:''' You're Judy's fox. So are you, like, hot for my sister?
-->'''Nick:''' [[StunnedSilence ...?!]] What?!
*** His correct assumption on just what kind of mammal she is.
--->'''Nick:''' Ohh my god you're from one of those punk-rocker, anti-social, anti-common decency subcultures, aren't you?
--->'''Sheena:''' That's cute. He thinks he knows more about invasive questions than an actual rabbit.
** Grandpa Hopps being a-okay with Sheena defacing the family photo... for the exact same reason she used as motivation.
-->'''Grandpa:''' Good Riddance. They made me stand on those bleachers for hours.
** Nick getting so excited over hearing The Slicks that he dives right into the room (through a bunny hole) without question and surprises Chet, Diane, Fiona and Tulip.
-->'''Nick:''' WHAT'S THAT RACKET?!
-->'''The Siblings:''' [StunnedSilence]
-->'''The Siblings:''' RANDY REBECCA RABBIT!!!
** Being swarmed by Judy's nieces and nephews.
** The constant ThousandYardStare as he attempts to traverse the confusing home.
** His inability to deal with their [[TheGlomp brand of affection.]]
** Nick meeting Sheena, Judy's punk little sister.
-->'''Sheena:''' You're Judy's fox. So are you, like, hot for my sister?
-->'''Nick:''' [[StunnedSilence ...?!]] What?!
*** His correct assumption on just what kind of mammal she is.
--->'''Nick:''' Ohh my god you're from one of those punk-rocker, anti-social, anti-common decency subcultures, aren't you?
--->'''Sheena:''' That's cute. He thinks he knows more about invasive questions than an actual rabbit.
** Grandpa Hopps being a-okay with Sheena defacing the family photo... for the exact same reason she used as motivation.
-->'''Grandpa:''' Good Riddance. They made me stand on those bleachers for hours.
** Nick getting so excited over hearing The Slicks that he dives right into the room (through a bunny hole) without question and surprises Chet, Diane, Fiona and Tulip.
-->'''Nick:''' WHAT'S THAT RACKET?!
-->'''The Siblings:''' [StunnedSilence]
-->'''The Siblings:''' RANDY REBECCA RABBIT!!!
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-->'''Judy:''' [With an annoyed expression] You're gonna make me drag ''[[ItIsDemeaning THAT]]'' with me on an investigation?
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-->'''Judy:''' [With an annoyed expression] You're gonna make me drag ''[[ItIsDemeaning THAT]]'' ''THAT'' with me on an investigation?
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-->'''Nick:''' [Looking more amused than anything] [[DeadpanSnarker I tremble in my orange jumpsuit.
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-->'''Nick:''' [Looking more amused than anything] [[DeadpanSnarker I tremble in my orange jumpsuit.]]
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Just because Zistopia is a very dark ''"Racist Animal Hell AU"'' doesn't mean it's without any humor.
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* Nick and Judy first meeting shortly after she prevented him from escaping jail... and her dealing with the fact that she needs him to solve a case.
-->'''Judy:''' [With an annoyed expression] You're gonna make me drag ''[[ItIsDemeaning THAT]]'' with me on an investigation?
-->'''Nick:''' Khk
-->'''Judy:''' [Pulls him close] You listen, FOX. No funny business, okay? No scheming, no conniving, none of that ''fox stuff.''
-->'''Nick:''' [With a shit-eating grin] You have such a way with words, [[InSeriesNickname Lieutenant Hippity-hop.]]
-->'''Judy:''' [Trying to look frightening] Because if you put one toe out of line...
-->'''Nick:''' [Looking more amused than anything] [[DeadpanSnarker I tremble in my orange jumpsuit.
** The author note only makes it better.
-->'''Author:''' Zistopia AU #02. Turns out that escaped convict you chased down and humiliated in front of an apartment of mice the other day is your only lead in solving a mystery. Good fuckin luck.
* In #03 Nick is amused by Judy saying "Just the carrots." He then proceeds to ask about an urban legend he had heard previously.
-->'''Nick:''' Hey-hey. Is it true that rabbits are in heat like, all the time? Are you in heat right now? Is that why you're so mad?
-->'''Judy:''' [With a disturbed look on her face] Up. Up now. No pie for you.
-->'''Nick:''' Come on carrots, it's just a question.
* The entirety of the all too short #05.
* You may find some DarkHumor in ''"Zistopia AU #06. Nick Wilde making friends in jail."'' due to the [[MoodWhiplash abruptness in the change of the mood.]]
-->'''Nick:''' [Tells the three humped camel joke from the movie]
-->'''Lion Inmate:''' My wife died in labor of collar convulsions.
-->'''Nick:''' [With a blank expression] Oh my God.
* ''"Zistopia AU #11. Fun times in Tundratown."'' We have both the introduction of Koslov, Angel, Nilla, and Cherry. Also Nick's reaction to Judy denying Koslov's offered borscht.
-->'''Guard:''' [Dangling Judy and Nick with ease] Found these two arguing outside. Fox says, he knows you.
-->'''Nick:''' [Looking put out]] Hi Koslov. Angel. Nilla. Cherry.
-->'''Koslov and the snow vixens:''' NIIIICK!!! You got out of jail!!!
-->'''Nick:''' [On the ground now] Not entirely. No... You see, I have to help them solve a mystery first.
-->'''Nick:''' [Dangling Judy] This here is Lieutenant Carrots Hippity-Hop.
* From ''"Zistopia AU #12.5. For inquiries call 555-COMFORT"'' we have Cherry saying she'd consider dating Nick if he wasn't so [[RunningGag "needy and pathetic,"]] to which Nilla and Angel agree.
* The running gag of characters boo-ing Bellwhether.
* The introduction of Honey, Finnick and Clawhauser - Which spans the entirety of #14-#16.
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Other]]
* If you go with the chrono-link on the main page so you can see WordOfGod the first thing you'll see is this.
-->'''Author:''' (Stoned voice) duuuuuuude…… What if the behavior collars are just part of a big conspiracy…….. What if they cause predators to act aggressively so that the prey overlords can have an excuse to repress them……. Duuuuuuuuude
[[/folder]]
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* Nick and Judy first meeting shortly after she prevented him from escaping jail... and her dealing with the fact that she needs him to solve a case.
-->'''Judy:''' [With an annoyed expression] You're gonna make me drag ''[[ItIsDemeaning THAT]]'' with me on an investigation?
-->'''Nick:''' Khk
-->'''Judy:''' [Pulls him close] You listen, FOX. No funny business, okay? No scheming, no conniving, none of that ''fox stuff.''
-->'''Nick:''' [With a shit-eating grin] You have such a way with words, [[InSeriesNickname Lieutenant Hippity-hop.]]
-->'''Judy:''' [Trying to look frightening] Because if you put one toe out of line...
-->'''Nick:''' [Looking more amused than anything] [[DeadpanSnarker I tremble in my orange jumpsuit.
** The author note only makes it better.
-->'''Author:''' Zistopia AU #02. Turns out that escaped convict you chased down and humiliated in front of an apartment of mice the other day is your only lead in solving a mystery. Good fuckin luck.
* In #03 Nick is amused by Judy saying "Just the carrots." He then proceeds to ask about an urban legend he had heard previously.
-->'''Nick:''' Hey-hey. Is it true that rabbits are in heat like, all the time? Are you in heat right now? Is that why you're so mad?
-->'''Judy:''' [With a disturbed look on her face] Up. Up now. No pie for you.
-->'''Nick:''' Come on carrots, it's just a question.
* The entirety of the all too short #05.
* You may find some DarkHumor in ''"Zistopia AU #06. Nick Wilde making friends in jail."'' due to the [[MoodWhiplash abruptness in the change of the mood.]]
-->'''Nick:''' [Tells the three humped camel joke from the movie]
-->'''Lion Inmate:''' My wife died in labor of collar convulsions.
-->'''Nick:''' [With a blank expression] Oh my God.
* ''"Zistopia AU #11. Fun times in Tundratown."'' We have both the introduction of Koslov, Angel, Nilla, and Cherry. Also Nick's reaction to Judy denying Koslov's offered borscht.
-->'''Guard:''' [Dangling Judy and Nick with ease] Found these two arguing outside. Fox says, he knows you.
-->'''Nick:''' [Looking put out]] Hi Koslov. Angel. Nilla. Cherry.
-->'''Koslov and the snow vixens:''' NIIIICK!!! You got out of jail!!!
-->'''Nick:''' [On the ground now] Not entirely. No... You see, I have to help them solve a mystery first.
-->'''Nick:''' [Dangling Judy] This here is Lieutenant Carrots Hippity-Hop.
* From ''"Zistopia AU #12.5. For inquiries call 555-COMFORT"'' we have Cherry saying she'd consider dating Nick if he wasn't so [[RunningGag "needy and pathetic,"]] to which Nilla and Angel agree.
* The running gag of characters boo-ing Bellwhether.
* The introduction of Honey, Finnick and Clawhauser - Which spans the entirety of #14-#16.
[[/folder]]
[[folder: Other]]
* If you go with the chrono-link on the main page so you can see WordOfGod the first thing you'll see is this.
-->'''Author:''' (Stoned voice) duuuuuuude…… What if the behavior collars are just part of a big conspiracy…….. What if they cause predators to act aggressively so that the prey overlords can have an excuse to repress them……. Duuuuuuuuude
[[/folder]]
