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-->'''Izzy''': [[ThisIsGonnaSuck ...Well that's not good.]]
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-->'''Izzy''': [[ThisIsGonnaSuck ...Well that's not good.]]]] [Slinks straight down out of frame.]
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** When Rick gives Izzy a short passionate declaration about how he's doing this to get Alex back, he gesticulates with the scepter he swiped from Jonathan, that Izzy is immediately enchanted by.
--->'''Izzy:''' O'Connell, you give me that gold stick there, and you can shave my head, wax my legs, and use me for a surf board!\\
'''Rick:''' [''Hands him the scepter''] [[NoodleIncident Didn't we do that in Tripoli]]? Oh, by the way, when did you [''gestures to the eyepatch''] lose your eye?\\
'''Izzy:''' Oh! [''Reveals his intact eye''] I didn't! I just thought it'd make me [[EyepatchOfPower look more dashing]].\\
'''Rick:''' [''Unimpressed''] Uh huh, come here. [''Tears off the patch''] Get to work.
--->'''Izzy:''' O'Connell, you give me that gold stick there, and you can shave my head, wax my legs, and use me for a surf board!\\
'''Rick:''' [''Hands him the scepter''] [[NoodleIncident Didn't we do that in Tripoli]]? Oh, by the way, when did you [''gestures to the eyepatch''] lose your eye?\\
'''Izzy:''' Oh! [''Reveals his intact eye''] I didn't! I just thought it'd make me [[EyepatchOfPower look more dashing]].\\
'''Rick:''' [''Unimpressed''] Uh huh, come here. [''Tears off the patch''] Get to work.
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--> "Those knickers are not mine."
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--> "Those '''Evie:''' Those knickers are not mine."\\
'''Rick:''' [''Grumbles under his breath''] ''Johnathan...''
'''Rick:''' [''Grumbles under his breath''] ''Johnathan...''
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** The sheer nonchalance in Evy's tone when she says that, combined with the fact that she considers Rick shooting the locks as "subtle" is itself hilarious, showing she's got no problems with his direct approach, also seen in other parts. Really, the only time she reacts negatively to his brute force is when he uses a crowbar to bust down a wall that opens a secret passage, since she was afraid he'd end up smashing a perfectly good mural to chunks. Thankfully, it fell in one piece.
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** The Between the sheer nonchalance in Evy's tone when she says that, combined with the fact that she considers Rick shooting the locks as "subtle" is itself hilarious, showing which she also doesn't even flinch at, she's got no problems with his shown to be completely unfazed anymore to Rick's...usual direct approach, approach to problem solving, also seen in other parts. Really, the only time she reacts negatively to his brute force is when he uses a crowbar to bust down a wall that opens a secret passage, since she was afraid he'd end up smashing a perfectly good mural to chunks. Thankfully, it fell in one piece.
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** When Rick pays him cash upfront for the job, Izzy tries to blow it off by rhetorically asking him what he needs money for and what he'd even spend it on...and then pockets it anyway. Meanwhile, while he's saying that, cut to Evie confusedly turning to look at the man sitting and reading the papers in the bathtub in the background behind her.
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* A tender kiss between the O'Connells is ruined when Evy catches sight of something that's not supposed to be thrown there.
--> "Those knickers are not mine."
--> "Those knickers are not mine."
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** Related to the point below, she's not even frightened or creeped out. She's just annoyed at the snake and just casually lifts it by the tip of her booth then sends it flying.
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** Related to the point below, she's not even frightened or creeped out. She's just annoyed at the snake and just casually lifts it by the tip of her booth boot then sends it flying.
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'''Alex:''' [''Suddenly very posh''] Rather weighty this.
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'''Alex:''' [''Suddenly very posh''] Rather weighty weighty, this.
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'''Evelyn:''' Belly dancer girl? Izzy, I think you and I should talk...\\
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'''Evelyn:''' Belly ''Belly dancer girl? girl?'' Izzy, I think you and I should talk...\\
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* Jonathan and one of the [[{{Mook}} mooks]] run into each other during the pursuit by the pygmy mummies. They take shelter in a circle of stones, with Jonathan reassuring the mook that they won't cross the sacred stones. [[spoiler: Cue a pygmy pole-vaulting over the stones to stab the mook, leaving him looking utterly aghast at Jonathan.]] Jonathan simply shouts "Sorry. My mistake." and runs.
** What's funnier is that this particular mook was a MauveShirt up until this point. Some particular camera focus was given to him early in the movie, and he'd managed to avoid getting killed expertly dodging the knife Rick throws back to them (and lands on another unfortunate mook's neck). Guess his luck ran out here.
** What's funnier is that this particular mook was a MauveShirt up until this point. Some particular camera focus was given to him early in the movie, and he'd managed to avoid getting killed expertly dodging the knife Rick throws back to them (and lands on another unfortunate mook's neck). Guess his luck ran out here.
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* Jonathan and one of the [[{{Mook}} mooks]] run into each other during the pursuit by the pygmy mummies. They take shelter in a circle of stones, with Jonathan reassuring the mook that they won't cross the sacred stones. [[spoiler: Cue a pygmy pole-vaulting over the stones to stab the mook, leaving him looking utterly aghast at Jonathan.]] Jonathan simply shouts "Sorry. My mistake." "Sorry, my mistake!" and runs.
** What's funnier is that this particular mook was a MauveShirt up until this point. Some particular camera focus was given to him early in the movie, and he'd managed to avoid getting killed by expertly dodging the knife Rickthrows threw back to them (and lands (which landed on another unfortunate mook's neck). Guess his luck ran out here.
** What's funnier is that this particular mook was a MauveShirt up until this point. Some particular camera focus was given to him early in the movie, and he'd managed to avoid getting killed by expertly dodging the knife Rick
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-->'''Ardeth:''' "By [[spoiler:putting this on]], you have started a chain reaction that could bringaboutthenextapocalypse!"\\
(''Alex gasps'')\\
'''Rick:''' (''blinks in frustration'') "(''to Ardeth'') You, lighten up. (''to Alex'') You, ''big'' trouble. (''to Jonathan'') You, get in the car."
(''Alex gasps'')\\
'''Rick:''' (''blinks in frustration'') "(''to Ardeth'') You, lighten up. (''to Alex'') You, ''big'' trouble. (''to Jonathan'') You, get in the car."
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-->'''Ardeth:''' "By By [[spoiler:putting this on]], you have started a chain reaction that could bringaboutthenextapocalypse!"\\
(''Alex gasps'')\\
bringaboutthenextapocalypse!\\
''[Alex gasps]''\\
'''Rick:'''(''blinks ''[blinks in frustration'') "(''to Ardeth'') frustration]'' ''[to Ardeth]'' You, lighten up. (''to Alex'') ''[to Alex]'' You, ''big'' '''big''' trouble. (''to Jonathan'') ''[to Jonathan]'' You, get in the car."
(''Alex gasps'')\\
''[Alex gasps]''\\
'''Rick:'''
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** Related to the point below, she's not even frightened or creeped out. She's just annoyed at the snake and just casually lifts it by the tip of her booth then sends it flying.
** And then, after the find the secret passageway further in, after a shot establishing the scorpion-riddled floor, while Evie casually tiptoes through the floor, Rick just ''stomps through without so much as looking where he's stepping''.
** And then, after the find the secret passageway further in, after a shot establishing the scorpion-riddled floor, while Evie casually tiptoes through the floor, Rick just ''stomps through without so much as looking where he's stepping''.
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--> '''Alex:''' "No ''ice''?!"
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--> '''Alex:''' "Woah, that was amazing! Perfect aim!" \\
'''Lock-Nah:''' "What are you talking about?...I ''missed''."
'''Lock-Nah:''' "What are you talking about?...I ''missed''."
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'''Lock-Nah:'''
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--->'''Alex:''' You broke it, you broke it you broke it! \\
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-->'''Izzy:''' [[NoodleIncident Remember that bank job in Marrakesh?]]\\
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-->'''Rick''': Izzy, you were right.
-->'''Izzy''': ''[uncertainly]'' I was?
-->'''Rick''': Yeah. You're gonna get shot! ''[pulls out a gun]''
-->'''Izzy''': ''[uncertainly]'' I was?
-->'''Rick''': Yeah. You're gonna get shot! ''[pulls out a gun]''
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-->'''Izzy:''' O'Connell! You almost got me killed!\\
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-->'''Rick''': "You want the shotgun?"\\
'''Ardeth Bey''': "No, [[MoreDakka I prefer the Thompson.]]"
'''Ardeth Bey''': "No, [[MoreDakka I prefer the Thompson.]]"
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'''Ardeth Bey''':
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-->'''Alex (''along with Jonathan'')''': Oh please!
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--> '''Rick:''' You know, couple of years ago, [[SeenItAll this would've seemed really strange to me]].
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* The scene in the pyramid when Imhotep tricks the Scorpion King into attacking Rick. Rick is confused, as he can't understand Ancient Egyptian, but is GenreSavvy enough to have a huge OhCrap expression.
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* The scene in the pyramid when Imhotep tricks the Scorpion King into attacking Rick. Rick is confused, as he can't understand Ancient Egyptian, but is GenreSavvy enough to have a huge OhCrap expression. His eyes flick between the two of them, and he's clearly thinking "I'm missing something here, and it's ''not'' good."
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** Lock-Nah's reaction to the above is just as priceless; [[EvenEvilHasStandards he almost looks offended that Alex would think him a pedo.]]
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'''Evie:''' Only if they bite you.
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'''Evie:''' [[DeadpanSnarker Only if they bite you.]]
* Alex certainly inherited his parents' ability to snark.
-->'''Alex:''' [''carrying the chest carrying the bracelet''] Mum, what do I do with this chest?! Sucker weighs a god dang ton!\\
'''Evie:''' Alex, watch your language!\\
'''Alex:''' [''Suddenly very posh''] Rather weighty this.
* Alex certainly inherited his parents' ability to snark.
-->'''Alex:''' [''carrying the chest carrying the bracelet''] Mum, what do I do with this chest?! Sucker weighs a god dang ton!\\
'''Evie:''' Alex, watch your language!\\
'''Alex:''' [''Suddenly very posh''] Rather weighty this.
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* Rick and Evie's reintroductions are amusing. Rick is first shown cutting a badass silhouette against a backlight in the ruins, looking wary of something, before being startled out of his wits by his son, Alex. When he meets up with Evie, she sees a venomous snake slithering around her foot, and kicks it away, almost hitting Rick.
-->'''Evie:''' Go away. [''kicks snake, which Rick narrowly dodges'']\\
'''Rick:''' Whoa! Those are poisonous, you know.\\
'''Evie:''' Only if they bite you.
-->'''Evie:''' Go away. [''kicks snake, which Rick narrowly dodges'']\\
'''Rick:''' Whoa! Those are poisonous, you know.\\
'''Evie:''' Only if they bite you.
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* Speaking of the pygmy mummies, when three of Imhotep's mooks stumble into quicksand around which some other fleeing characters circle, the pursuing mob of bone savages use the mooks' protruding heads as stepping stones to rush straight across the mire. Except for one malicious little shit, who pauses to ''jump up and down'' on a mook's head to force the poor guy down into the muck.
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* Speaking of the pygmy mummies, when three of Imhotep's mooks stumble into quicksand around which some other fleeing characters circle, the pursuing mob of bone savages use the mooks' protruding heads as stepping stones to rush straight across the mire. Except for one malicious little shit, who pauses to ''jump up and down'' on a mook's head to force the poor guy down into under the muck.
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* Speaking of the pygmy mummies, when three of Imhotep's mooks stumble into quicksand around which some other fleeing characters circle, the pursuing mob of bone savages use the mooks' protruding heads as stepping stones to rush straight across the mire. Except for one little shit who pauses to ''jump up and down'' on a mook's head to force the poor guy down into the muck.
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* Speaking of the pygmy mummies, when three of Imhotep's mooks stumble into quicksand around which some other fleeing characters circle, the pursuing mob of bone savages use the mooks' protruding heads as stepping stones to rush straight across the mire. Except for one malicious little shit shit, who pauses to ''jump up and down'' on a mook's head to force the poor guy down into the muck.
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* Speaking of the pygmy mummies, when three of Imhotep's mooks stumble into quicksand around which some other fleeing characters circle, the pursuing mob of bone savages use the mooks' protruding heads as stepping stones to rush straight across the mire. Except for one little shit who pauses to ''jump up and down'' on a mook's head to force the poor guy down into the muck.
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* There's something funny about Lock-Nah, the sadistic brutish [[TheDragon dragon]] shaking in fear whenever he's in the presence of [[TheDreaded Imhotep]].
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* Some moments of hilarity once Imhotep is resurrected:
** When Meela makes herself known to her reincarnation's resurrected lover, he wastes no time charmingly speaking of him truly reviving Anck-Su-Namun's soul, and Hafez in the background awkwardly stares at the UnholyMatrimony moment before he walks away.
** Right after that, cutting to Rick musing to Ardeth at the balcony preparing for their rescue attempt.
--> '''Rick:''' You know, couple of years ago, [[SeenItAll this would've seemed really strange to me]].
** When Meela makes herself known to her reincarnation's resurrected lover, he wastes no time charmingly speaking of him truly reviving Anck-Su-Namun's soul, and Hafez in the background awkwardly stares at the UnholyMatrimony moment before he walks away.
** Right after that, cutting to Rick musing to Ardeth at the balcony preparing for their rescue attempt.
--> '''Rick:''' You know, couple of years ago, [[SeenItAll this would've seemed really strange to me]].
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* Meela has this winner when Jonathan tells her he told her everything so she wouldn't kill him.
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* Meela has this winner when Jonathan tells her he told her everything he knew about the Bracelet of Anubis so she wouldn't kill him.
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* The train scene with Alex and Lock-Nah:
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* The train scene with Alex and Lock-Nah: Lock-Nah. Especially when Lock-Nah takes Alex so he can use the restroom, though Alex refuses to "go", until Lock-Nah leaves:
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* Anck-su-namun has this winner when Jonathan tells her he told her everything so she wouldn't kill him.
-->'''Anck-su-namun:''' When did we make that arrangement?
* When Anck-su-namun tricks the three idiots to open the chest so Imhotep can recover his powers by killing them, they try to shoot him down with predictable results. The kicker? Imhotep fucks around pretending he's feeling the gunshots-- he flinches ''after'' being shot.
-->'''Anck-su-namun:''' When did we make that arrangement?
* When Anck-su-namun tricks the three idiots to open the chest so Imhotep can recover his powers by killing them, they try to shoot him down with predictable results. The kicker? Imhotep fucks around pretending he's feeling the gunshots-- he flinches ''after'' being shot.
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* Anck-su-namun Meela has this winner when Jonathan tells her he told her everything so she wouldn't kill him.
-->'''Anck-su-namun:''' -->'''Meela:''' When did we make that arrangement?
* WhenAnck-su-namun Meela tricks the three idiots to open the chest so Imhotep can recover his powers by killing them, they try to shoot him down with predictable results. The kicker? Imhotep fucks around pretending he's feeling the gunshots-- he flinches ''after'' being shot.
* When
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'''Jonathan:''' ''Yes it is! Yes it is!''
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'''Jonathan:''' ''Yes ''[[SkewedPriorities Yes it is! Yes it is!''is!]]''
