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* While the dream sequence itself counts as {{Nightmare Fuel}}, the text messages are what it lands it here or more specifically, the contacts on Chloe's phone. There's a message from Max, which is as creepy as usual, one from a [[AnimalMotif raven]], which simply says 'Caw' and a few from [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers Shakespeare]] of all people.
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* While the dream sequence itself counts as {{Nightmare Fuel}}, the text messages are what it lands it here or more specifically, the contacts on Chloe's phone. There's a message from Max, which is as creepy as usual, one from a [[AnimalMotif raven]], which simply says 'Caw' and a few from [[TheLastOfTheseIsNotLikeTheOthers Shakespeare]] Shakespeare of all people.
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-->'''Mikey''': That. Was sick!\\
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** Even better (in a clever bit of meta humour, since there's no way of knowing about the bard if you only go this route), if Durgaron survived the first episode's session, Drew will play him instead, and will be defeated by exploiting an injury which he suffered throwing said gnomish bard into the sea. Which is itself implied to be an in-universe RealitySubtext referencing an incident where Drew pushed a band kid into the swimming pool.
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** Even better (in a clever bit of meta humour, humor, since there's no way of knowing about the bard if you only go this route), if Durgaron survived the first episode's session, Drew will play him instead, and will be defeated by exploiting an injury which he suffered throwing said gnomish bard into the sea. Which is itself implied to be an in-universe RealitySubtext referencing an incident where Drew pushed a band kid into the swimming pool.
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* Chloe and Max's outrageous pirate accents, both at age 13 and ''especially'' at age 8.
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* Chloe and Max's outrageous pirate accents, both at age 13 13/14 and ''especially'' at age 8.8 on the cassette tape. William's own as "Bloody Bill" is just the cherry on top.
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* While it's sad that Chloe and David make each other so miserable, their tense relationship does generate some quality snark on Chloe's part.
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* While it's sad that David makes Chloe and David make each other so miserable, their tense relationship does generate some quality snark on Chloe's her part.
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--->'''David:''' Why do you women always take forever to get ready?
--->'''Chloe:''' We're hoping you men'll leave without us.
--->'''Chloe:''' We're hoping you men'll leave without us.
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--->'''David:''' Why do you women always take forever to get ready?
--->'''Chloe:'''ready?\\
'''Chloe:''' We're hoping you men'll leave without us.
--->'''Chloe:'''
'''Chloe:''' We're hoping you men'll leave without us.
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--->'''David:''' (''wordlessly beckons Chloe over with an obnoxiously imperious gesture'')
--->'''Chloe:''' (''inner monologue'') ''[[ImplausibleDeniability "No, Mom, I swear he beat himself to death with a tire iron. Repeatedly."]]''
--->'''Chloe:''' (''inner monologue'') ''[[ImplausibleDeniability "No, Mom, I swear he beat himself to death with a tire iron. Repeatedly."]]''
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--->'''David:''' (''wordlessly beckons Chloe over with an obnoxiously imperious gesture'')
--->'''Chloe:'''gesture'')\\
'''Chloe:''' (''inner monologue'')''[[ImplausibleDeniability [[ImplausibleDeniability "No, Mom, I swear he beat himself to death with a tire iron. Repeatedly."]]''"]]
--->'''Chloe:'''
'''Chloe:''' (''inner monologue'')
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--->'''David:''' Watch your - I can crap bigger than you, got it?
--->'''Chloe:''' Then I hope you're a better plumber than you are a mechanic.
--->'''Chloe:''' Then I hope you're a better plumber than you are a mechanic.
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--->'''Chloe:'''
'''Chloe:''' Then I hope you're a better plumber than you are a mechanic.
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--->'''David:''' Your mother... you're breaking her heart!
--->'''Chloe:''' At least she has a heart. All you have is... what's it called when you've got one pornstache and zero game?
--->'''Chloe:''' At least she has a heart. All you have is... what's it called when you've got one pornstache and zero game?
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--->'''David:''' Your mother... you're breaking her heart!
--->'''Chloe:'''heart!\\
'''Chloe:''' At least she has a heart. All you have is... what's it called when you've got one pornstache and zero game?
--->'''Chloe:'''
'''Chloe:''' At least she has a heart. All you have is... what's it called when you've got one pornstache and zero game?
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--->'''David:''' If you were a man, I'd...
--->'''Chloe:''' It's cool. If YOU were a man I wouldn't go so easy on you either.
--->'''Chloe:''' It's cool. If YOU were a man I wouldn't go so easy on you either.
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--->'''David:''' If you were a man, I'd...
--->'''Chloe:'''I'd...\\
'''Chloe:''' It's cool. If YOU were a man I wouldn't go so easy on you either.
--->'''Chloe:'''
'''Chloe:''' It's cool. If YOU were a man I wouldn't go so easy on you either.
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--->'''Chloe:''' Who says we should prevent fire? Fire is awesome.
--->'''Evan:''' While I realize you're being purposefully obstructive, you raise a good point. Many parts of our local ecosystem benefit from fire. Knobcone pine cones, for example, which require temperatures above 350 degrees to open.
--->'''Chloe:''' Say knobcone again.
* Steph asks about Chloe and Rachel's relationship. Chloe can ask Steph what her interest in that came from, which prompts Mikey sing-songing "Steph has a crush!", causing Steph to glare daggers into him. [[LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain She then asks if Chloe wants to join their game.]]
* If the player has Chloe play the tabletop game with Steph and Mikey, and has her get super into it, a backtalk sequence occurs where Chloe intimidates a prison guard so viciously that the prison guard dies of fear and the prisoners flee from Chloe's character once freed. [[GameMaster Steph's]] looks of absolute horror are a sight to see.
--->'''Evan:''' While I realize you're being purposefully obstructive, you raise a good point. Many parts of our local ecosystem benefit from fire. Knobcone pine cones, for example, which require temperatures above 350 degrees to open.
--->'''Chloe:''' Say knobcone again.
* Steph asks about Chloe and Rachel's relationship. Chloe can ask Steph what her interest in that came from, which prompts Mikey sing-songing "Steph has a crush!", causing Steph to glare daggers into him. [[LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain She then asks if Chloe wants to join their game.]]
* If the player has Chloe play the tabletop game with Steph and Mikey, and has her get super into it, a backtalk sequence occurs where Chloe intimidates a prison guard so viciously that the prison guard dies of fear and the prisoners flee from Chloe's character once freed. [[GameMaster Steph's]] looks of absolute horror are a sight to see.
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--->'''Chloe:''' Who says we should prevent fire? Fire is awesome.
--->'''Evan:'''awesome.\\
'''Evan:''' While I realize you're being purposefully obstructive, you raise a good point. Many parts of our local ecosystem benefit from fire. Knobcone pine cones, for example, which require temperatures above 350 degrees toopen.
--->'''Chloe:'''open.\\
'''Chloe:''' Say knobcone again.
* Steph asks about Chloe and Rachel's relationship. Chloe can ask Steph what her interest in that came from, which prompts Mikeysing-songing sing-songing, "Steph has a crush!", crush!" causing Steph to [[DeathGlare glare daggers into him.at him]]. [[LetUsNeverSpeakOfThisAgain She then asks if Chloe wants to join their game.]]
* If the player has Chloe play the tabletop game with Steph and Mikey, and has her get super into it, a backtalk sequence occurs where Chloe intimidates a prison guard so viciously that the prison guard dies of fear and the prisoners flee from Chloe's character once freed. [[GameMaster Steph's]] looks of absolute horror are asight delight to see.
--->'''Evan:'''
'''Evan:''' While I realize you're being purposefully obstructive, you raise a good point. Many parts of our local ecosystem benefit from fire. Knobcone pine cones, for example, which require temperatures above 350 degrees to
--->'''Chloe:'''
'''Chloe:''' Say knobcone again.
* Steph asks about Chloe and Rachel's relationship. Chloe can ask Steph what her interest in that came from, which prompts Mikey
* If the player has Chloe play the tabletop game with Steph and Mikey, and has her get super into it, a backtalk sequence occurs where Chloe intimidates a prison guard so viciously that the prison guard dies of fear and the prisoners flee from Chloe's character once freed. [[GameMaster Steph's]] looks of absolute horror are a
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--->'''Chloe''': I wanna punch that stupid man-cow in the '''''DICK!'''''
--->'''Steph''': [''concerned''] Like, [[ShareTheMalePain right in the dick?]]
--->'''Chloe''': [''[[SeriousBusiness completely serious]]''] [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Right. In. The]] '''[[PunctuatedForEmphasis dick!]]'''
** If she continues the trend to the campaign's boss, her fellow player points it out.
---> '''Mikey''': You punch a lot of dicks.\\
'''Chloe''': So?
--->'''Steph''': [''concerned''] Like, [[ShareTheMalePain right in the dick?]]
--->'''Chloe''': [''[[SeriousBusiness completely serious]]''] [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Right. In. The]] '''[[PunctuatedForEmphasis dick!]]'''
** If she continues the trend to the campaign's boss, her fellow player points it out.
---> '''Mikey''': You punch a lot of dicks.\\
'''Chloe''': So?
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--->'''Steph''':
'''Steph:''' [''concerned''] Like, [[ShareTheMalePain right in the
--->'''Chloe''':
'''Chloe:''' [''[[SeriousBusiness completely serious]]''] [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Right. In. The]] '''[[PunctuatedForEmphasis
** If she
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--->'''Steph''': [''dumbfounded''] Like, right in the dick?
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--->'''Steph''': [''dumbfounded''] [''concerned''] Like, [[ShareTheMalePain right in the dick?dick?]]
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** In the same segment, Chloe has multiple opportunities for her character to go for a GroinAttack.
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--->'''Chloe''': [''[[SeriousBusiness completely focused]]''] [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Right. In. The]] '''[[PunctuatedForEmphasis dick!]]'''
** In the same segment, Chloe has multiple opportunities for her character to go for a GroinAttack. If she continues the trend to the campaign's boss, her fellow player points it out.
** In the same segment, Chloe has multiple opportunities for her character to go for a GroinAttack. If she continues the trend to the campaign's boss, her fellow player points it out.
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--->'''Chloe''': [''[[SeriousBusiness completely focused]]''] serious]]''] [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Right. In. The]] '''[[PunctuatedForEmphasis dick!]]'''
**In the same segment, Chloe has multiple opportunities for her character to go for a GroinAttack. If she continues the trend to the campaign's boss, her fellow player points it out.
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--->'''Chloe''': I wanna punch that stupid man-cow in the '''''DICK!'''''
--->'''Steph''': [''dumbfounded''] Like, right in the dick?
--->'''Chloe''': [''[[SeriousBusiness completely focused]]''] [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Right. In. The]] '''[[PunctuatedForEmphasis dick!]]'''
--->'''Steph''': [''dumbfounded''] Like, right in the dick?
--->'''Chloe''': [''[[SeriousBusiness completely focused]]''] [[PunctuatedForEmphasis Right. In. The]] '''[[PunctuatedForEmphasis dick!]]'''
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** Even better (in a clever bit of meta humour, since there's no way of knowing about the bard if you only go this route), if Durgaron survived the first episode's session, Drew will play him instead, and will be defeated by exploiting an injury which he suffered throwing said gnomish bard into the sea.
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** Even better (in a clever bit of meta humour, since there's no way of knowing about the bard if you only go this route), if Durgaron survived the first episode's session, Drew will play him instead, and will be defeated by exploiting an injury which he suffered throwing said gnomish bard into the sea. Which is itself implied to be an in-universe RealitySubtext referencing an incident where Drew pushed a band kid into the swimming pool.
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* If you have Chloe open a certain drawer in her mom's bedroom, later, she will think:
-->'''Chloe:''' And you never saw the condoms, Chloe. [[PunctuatedForEmphasis You never. Saw. The condoms.]]
-->'''Chloe:''' And you never saw the condoms, Chloe. [[PunctuatedForEmphasis You never. Saw. The condoms.]]
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* Rachel then ''begs'' Chloe to do it for her, causing a GilliganCut with a grumpy Chloe decked out in her crow costume.
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* Rachel then ''begs'' Chloe to do it for her, causing a GilliganCut with a grumpy Chloe decked out in her crow costume. Even better, it's the very costume she had earlier described as looking like "[[Series/SesameStreet Big Bird's]] fugly cousin".
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* In the Drama Club, there are several notes around the room that reference an ongoing conflict about Steph's missing pencils. As revealed by lead writer Zak Garriss during a playthrough with Eurogamer, if you head to the back of the room and look up at the ceiling in a specific spot, you can see that all of the pencils are actually stuck in the roof panels. According to Garriss, this was Hayden's way of pranking Steph.
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* In the Drama Club, there are several notes around the room that reference an ongoing conflict about Steph's missing pencils. As revealed by lead writer Zak Garriss during a playthrough [[https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=Q6fM1gTl-v4 playthrough]] with Eurogamer, if you head to the back of the room and look up at the ceiling in a specific spot, you can see that all of the pencils are actually stuck in the roof panels. According to Garriss, this was Hayden's way of pranking Steph.
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* In the Drama Club, there are several notes around the room that reference an ongoing conflict about Steph's missing pencils. As revealed by lead writer Zak Garriss during a playthrough with Eurogamer, if you head to the back of the room and look up at the ceiling in a specific spot, you can see that all of the pencils are actually stuck in the roof panels. According to Garriss, this was Hayden's way of pranking Steph.
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** And if you win the challenge:
--->'''David:''' If you were a man, I'd...
--->'''Chloe:''' It's cool. If YOU were a man I wouldn't go so easy on you either.
--->'''David:''' If you were a man, I'd...
--->'''Chloe:''' It's cool. If YOU were a man I wouldn't go so easy on you either.