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* In chapter 73, Mr. Hawking is instructing Mr. Smith on how to make developing solution, with Ali trying to understand as much of it as possible. Mr. Hawking evidently does not know any form of Arabic or Turkic and is speaking in English, while the reverse is true of Ali. Mr. Hawking's explanation of the developing solution ends with him handing them a pre-made bottle, leading to ''this'' exchange:
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* In chapter 73, Mr. Hawking is instructing Mr. Smith on how to make developing solution, with Ali trying to understand as much of it as possible. Mr. Hawking evidently does not know any form of Arabic Arabic, Farsi, or Turkic and is speaking in English, while the reverse is true of Ali. Mr. Hawking's explanation of the developing solution ends with him handing them a pre-made bottle, leading to ''this'' exchange:
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* On one of the bonus chapters, out of boredom Joruk jokingly tells Azel that he's seen a wolf. [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome In reaction]], Azel takes several men of the village out to hunt for the beast, as a nomadic tribe needs to take a threat to their livestock very seriously. Joruk was already in jitters at being caught having lied about it, when they found that there was indeed a whole pack of wolves that had already taken one of the sheep. Joruk's reaction upon seeing the carnage? He shouts "WHAT A RELIEF!", earning him a couple of glares.
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* On one of the bonus chapters, out of boredom Joruk jokingly tells Azel that he's seen a wolf. [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome In reaction]], reaction, Azel takes several men of the village out to hunt for the beast, as a nomadic tribe needs to take a threat to their livestock very seriously. Joruk was already in jitters at being caught having lied about it, when they found that there was indeed a whole pack of wolves that had already taken one of the sheep. Joruk's reaction upon seeing the carnage? He shouts "WHAT A RELIEF!", earning him a couple of glares.
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* In chapter two, the Carpenter carves Rostem a good-luck charm with a pictograph of a goat on it. When he brings it home, his siblings get insanely jealous... so their parents ask the Carpenter to make them all one. And what does Tileke ask for?
-->'''Tileke''': [[RunningGag Make mine a falcon, please!]]
-->'''Tileke''': [[RunningGag Make mine a falcon, please!]]
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* On one of the bonus chapters, out of boredom Joruk jokingly tells Azel that he's seen a wolf. [[RealityEnsues In reaction]], Azel takes several men of the village out to hunt for the beast, as a nomadic tribe needs to take a threat to their livestock very seriously. Joruk was already in jitters at being caught having lied about it, when they found that there was indeed a whole pack of wolves that had already taken one of the sheep. Joruk's reaction upon seeing the carnage? He shouts "WHAT A RELIEF!", earning him a couple of glares.
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* On one of the bonus chapters, out of boredom Joruk jokingly tells Azel that he's seen a wolf. [[RealityEnsues [[SurprisinglyRealisticOutcome In reaction]], Azel takes several men of the village out to hunt for the beast, as a nomadic tribe needs to take a threat to their livestock very seriously. Joruk was already in jitters at being caught having lied about it, when they found that there was indeed a whole pack of wolves that had already taken one of the sheep. Joruk's reaction upon seeing the carnage? He shouts "WHAT A RELIEF!", earning him a couple of glares.
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'''Smith:''' [to Hawking] Er, pardon me, but... You understand him?\\
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'''Smith:''' [to [[[{{Beat}} after watching the two,]] to Hawking] Er, pardon me, but... You understand him?\\
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* After Ali bails Smith out of the prison, in chapter fifteen, he gleefully abuses SacredHospitality to swindle a pair of camels and a large amount of supplies from the city guards, plus the head guard's hat just to be petty. In the next chapter, he also has the food bill sent to guards.
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* After Ali bails Smith out of the prison, in chapter fifteen, he gleefully abuses SacredHospitality to swindle a pair of camels and a large amount of supplies from the city guards, plus the head guard's hat just to be petty. In the next chapter, he also has the food bill sent to the guards.
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* When Mr. Smith gets arrested thanks to a certain xenophobe's false accusation, and the guards have trouble believing that Mr. Smith is just a scholar. So the city guards look through his things, including his notebooks, which are obviously not what they were made to expect, even though one of them understands English.
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* When In chapter fifteen, after Mr. Smith gets arrested thanks to a certain xenophobe's false accusation, and the guards have trouble believing that Mr. Smith is just a scholar. So the city guards look through his things, including his notebooks, which are obviously not what they were made to expect, even though one of them understands English.
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* After Ali bails Smith out of the prison, he gleefully abuses SacredHospitality to swindle a pair of camels and a large amount of supplies from the city guards, plus the head guard's hat just to be petty.
* The wedding, when Saahman and Farsahmi happen upon each other while getting food for their respective brides-to-be.
* The wedding, when Saahman and Farsahmi happen upon each other while getting food for their respective brides-to-be.
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* After Ali bails Smith out of the prison, in chapter fifteen, he gleefully abuses SacredHospitality to swindle a pair of camels and a large amount of supplies from the city guards, plus the head guard's hat just to be petty.
petty. In the next chapter, he also has the food bill sent to guards.
*The In chapter 25, during the wedding, when Saahman and Farsahmi happen upon each other while getting food for their respective brides-to-be.
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** "Veto on the tigers".
* Anis has a fluffy Persian cat that acts incredibly disgruntled every time she tries to cuddle it.
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** And in the next chapter:
---> "Veto on thetigers".
tigers."
* Anis has a fluffy Persian cat that acts incredibly disgruntled every time she tries to cuddle it.
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* Anis has a fluffy Persian cat that acts incredibly disgruntled every time she tries to cuddle it.
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* Karluk gets a cold, sending Amira into a panic. After everyone finally gets her to stop worrying ''herself'' sick, Karluk's fever finally breaks. The next day, as he goes back to the stables to work, he sneezes. Cue the sound of running feet...
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* In chapter four, Karluk gets a cold, sending Amira into a panic. After everyone finally gets her to stop worrying ''herself'' sick, Karluk's fever finally breaks. The next day, as he goes back to the stables to work, he sneezes. Cue the sound of running feet...feet...
* When Mr. Smith gets arrested thanks to a certain xenophobe's false accusation, and the guards have trouble believing that Mr. Smith is just a scholar. So the city guards look through his things, including his notebooks, which are obviously not what they were made to expect, even though one of them understands English.
-->'''Guard One:''' Embroidery, cooking... Nothing important here.\\
'''Guard Two:''' Maybe some kind of code?\\
'''Guard One:''' We're stuck if it's a code.\\
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'''Guard:''' [to the Head Guard] There's no need for further investigation. Who, besides a researcher, would write so much? Let's just close the case.
* When Mr. Smith gets arrested thanks to a certain xenophobe's false accusation, and the guards have trouble believing that Mr. Smith is just a scholar. So the city guards look through his things, including his notebooks, which are obviously not what they were made to expect, even though one of them understands English.
-->'''Guard One:''' Embroidery, cooking... Nothing important here.\\
'''Guard Two:''' Maybe some kind of code?\\
'''Guard One:''' We're stuck if it's a code.\\
...\\
'''Guard:''' [to the Head Guard] There's no need for further investigation. Who, besides a researcher, would write so much? Let's just close the case.
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* Chapter 38 shows just how [[BlindWithoutEm little Henry Smith can see without his]] OpaqueNerdGlasses. He answers Ali, only... he's facing ''a pillar''.
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* In chapter 73, Mr. Hawking is instructing Mr. Smith on how to make developing solution, with Ali trying to understand as much of it as possible. Mr. Hawking evidently does not know any form of Arabic or Turkic and is speaking in English, while the reverse is true of Ali. Mr. Hawking's explanation of the developing solution ends with him handing them a pre-made bottle, leading to ''this'' exchange:
-->'''Ali:''' [in Turkic] Hey, if you had some ready to go, why couldn't you just give us that one?\\
'''Hawking:''' [in English] You've got to be able to replenish your own stock and measure for your needs! If you don't know how to mix it, how do you expect to manage that?\\
'''Smith:''' [to Hawking] Er, pardon me, but... You understand him?\\
'''Hawking:''' Not a word.
-->'''Ali:''' [in Turkic] Hey, if you had some ready to go, why couldn't you just give us that one?\\
'''Hawking:''' [in English] You've got to be able to replenish your own stock and measure for your needs! If you don't know how to mix it, how do you expect to manage that?\\
'''Smith:''' [to Hawking] Er, pardon me, but... You understand him?\\
'''Hawking:''' Not a word.
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* The ''whole'' of chapter 76. NotHyperbole: the whole chapter is structured in an almost gag-a-panel way to build up upon the same joke of the tales that the successive new owners of the watch Smith [[BrickJoke threw away many episodes ago]] tell each other about the origin of the watch; each retelling growing more hilariously over-the-top.
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* The ''whole'' of chapter 76. NotHyperbole: the whole chapter is structured in an almost gag-a-panel way to build up upon the same joke of the tales that the successive new owners of the watch Smith [[BrickJoke threw away many episodes ago]] tell each other about the origin of the watch; each retelling growing more hilariously over-the-top.
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* The ''whole'' of chapter 76. NotHyperbole: the whole chapter is structured in an almost gag-a-panel way to build up upon the same joke of the tales that the sucessive new owners of the watch Smith [[BrickJoke threw away many episodes ago]] tell each other about the origin of the watch; each retelling growing more hilariously over-the-top.
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* The ''whole'' of chapter 76. NotHyperbole: the whole chapter is structured in an almost gag-a-panel way to build up upon the same joke of the tales that the sucessive successive new owners of the watch Smith [[BrickJoke threw away many episodes ago]] tell each other about the origin of the watch; each retelling growing more hilariously over-the-top.over-the-top.
* In chapter 75, on hearing that Niklovski and Ali both insist on traveling by foot:
-->'''Hawking:''' Do they shoe the men with iron here, too?\\
'''Smith:''' One is given to wonder.
* In chapter 75, on hearing that Niklovski and Ali both insist on traveling by foot:
-->'''Hawking:''' Do they shoe the men with iron here, too?\\
'''Smith:''' One is given to wonder.
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* On one of the bonus chapters, out of boredom Joruk jokingly tells Azel that he's seen a wolf. [[RealityEnsues In reaction, reaction]], Azel takes several men of the village out to hunt for the beast, as a nomadic tribe needs to take a threat to their livestock very seriously. Joruk was already in jitters at being caught having lied about it, when they found that there was indeed a whole pack of wolves that had already taken one of the sheep. Joruk's reaction upon seeing the carnage? He shouts "WHAT A RELIEF!", earning him a couple of glares.glares.
-->'''Joruk:''' [[VerbalBackspace That... we... found... them...]]?
-->'''Joruk:''' [[VerbalBackspace That... we... found... them...]]?
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* The ''whole'' of chapter 76. NotHyperbole: the whole chapter is structured in an almost gag-a-panel way to build up upon the same joke of the tales that the sucessive new owners of the watch Smith [[BrickJoke threw away many episodes ago]] tell each other about the origin of the watch; each retelling growing more hilariously over-the-top.
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* On one of the bonus chapters, out of boredom Joruk jokingly tells Azel that he's seen a wolf. In reaction, Azel takes several men of the village out to hunt for the beast. beast, as a nomadic tribe needs to take a threat to their livestock very seriously. Joruk was already in jitters at being caught having lied about it, when they found that there was indeed a whole pack of wolves that had already taken one of the sheep. Joruk's reaction upon seeing the carnage? He shouts "WHAT A RELIEF!", earning him a couple of glares.
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* Karluk gets a cold, sending Amira into a panic. After everyone finally gets her to stop worrying ''herself'' sick, Karluk's fever finally breaks. The next day, as he goes back to the stables to work, he sneezes. Cue the sound of running feet...
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* On one of the bonus chapters, out of boredom Joruk jokingly tells Azel that he's seen a wolf. In reaction, he Azel takes several men of the village out to hunt for the beast. Joruk was already in jitters when they found that there was indeed a wolf and whole pack of wolves that it has had already taken one of the sheep. Joruk's reaction upon seeing the carnage? He shouts "WHAT A RELIEF!", earning him a couple of glares.
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* The wedding, when Saahman and Farsahmi happen upon each other while getting food for their respective brides-to-be.
--> "Fry cakes?"\\
"Fry cakes."
* Anis has a fluffy Persian cat that acts incredibly disgruntled every time she tries to cuddle it.
** And when she's too distracted to play with it, it tries to get her attention only to walk away in a huff when she doesn't notice its efforts.
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--> "Fry cakes?"\\
"Fry cakes."
* Anis has a fluffy Persian cat that acts incredibly disgruntled every time she tries to cuddle it.
** And when she's too distracted to play with it, it tries to get her attention only to walk away in a huff when she doesn't notice its efforts.
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