Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Not enough context (ZCE), Fixing indentation
Changed line(s) 13 (click to see context) from:
* AdaptationalVillainy: According to chapter 58, [[spoiler:J. Jonah Jameson is a colonel in the Thunderbolts and apparently as unethical as canon Blackwatch's senior officers.]]
to:
* AdaptationalVillainy: AdaptationalVillainy:
** According to chapter 58, [[spoiler:J. Jonah Jameson is a colonel in the Thunderbolts and apparently as unethical as canon Blackwatch's senior officers.]]
** According to chapter 58, [[spoiler:J. Jonah Jameson is a colonel in the Thunderbolts and apparently as unethical as canon Blackwatch's senior officers.]]
Changed line(s) 18 (click to see context) from:
* ArcWords: "Stronger than tears."
to:
Changed line(s) 20,24 (click to see context) from:
* BattleInTheCenterOfTheMind: Peter vs [[spoiler: Hank]].
* BodyHorror: Lots. This is ''VideoGame/{{Prototype}}'', after all.
* BrokenBird: [[spoiler: Mary Jane]]
* TheChessmaster: Hank Pym.
* ChronicHeroSyndrome: This is pretty much Peter Parker.
* BodyHorror: Lots. This is ''VideoGame/{{Prototype}}'', after all.
* BrokenBird: [[spoiler: Mary Jane]]
* TheChessmaster: Hank Pym.
* ChronicHeroSyndrome: This is pretty much Peter Parker.
to:
Changed line(s) 30 (click to see context) from:
* DeceasedParentsAreTheBest
to:
Changed line(s) 32,34 (click to see context) from:
* EeriePaleSkinnedBrunette: [[spoiler: Jessica Drew]]
* EmergencyTransformation: [[spoiler:Done to Mary Jane in chapter 55.]]
* EntertaininglyWrong: [[spoiler:Bradley thinks Peter's his father.]]
* EmergencyTransformation: [[spoiler:Done to Mary Jane in chapter 55.]]
* EntertaininglyWrong: [[spoiler:Bradley thinks Peter's his father.]]
to:
Changed line(s) 44,51 (click to see context) from:
* ICannotSelfTerminate: [[spoiler: Dr. Connors.]]
* IWasNeverHere: Bradley to Peter in chapter 58.
* ImplacableMan: The Rhino/[[spoiler: Brian Watson]]
* LovecraftianSuperpower: As a ''VideoGame/{{Prototype}}'' crossover, this comes up a lot.
* MeatMoss: The underlying structures of Hives are covered in this.
* MegaManning: How power upgrades are gained.
* MsFanservice: Anna Watson, and she knows it.
* MoreExpendableThanYou: [[spoiler: Cain and Donna in chapter 46.]]
* IWasNeverHere: Bradley to Peter in chapter 58.
* ImplacableMan: The Rhino/[[spoiler: Brian Watson]]
* LovecraftianSuperpower: As a ''VideoGame/{{Prototype}}'' crossover, this comes up a lot.
* MeatMoss: The underlying structures of Hives are covered in this.
* MegaManning: How power upgrades are gained.
* MsFanservice: Anna Watson, and she knows it.
* MoreExpendableThanYou: [[spoiler: Cain and Donna in chapter 46.]]
to:
Changed line(s) 53,54 (click to see context) from:
* ThePowerOfLove: Lampshade hung in chapter 47.
--> Peter scowled down at her. "You weren't counting on the power of love keeping you safe were you?"
--> Peter scowled down at her. "You weren't counting on the power of love keeping you safe were you?"
to:
Changed line(s) 57 (click to see context) from:
* SomethingOnlyTheyWouldSay: Subverted in chapter 47, where MJ tells [[spoiler: Hank in Peter's body]] that telling her something only the two of them would know isn't enough because she knows about the memory-sharing thing.
to:
* SomethingOnlyTheyWouldSay: SomethingOnlyTheyWouldSay:
** Subverted in chapter 47, where MJ tells [[spoiler: Hank in Peter's body]] that telling her something only the two of them would know isn't enough because she knows about the memory-sharing thing.
** Subverted in chapter 47, where MJ tells [[spoiler: Hank in Peter's body]] that telling her something only the two of them would know isn't enough because she knows about the memory-sharing thing.
Changed line(s) 68,69 (click to see context) from:
* WallCrawl: It is an extended cossover to the Spider-Man mythos.
* WhatHaveIBecome: The question Peter keeps asking himself.
* WhatHaveIBecome: The question Peter keeps asking himself.
to:
Changed line(s) 71,72 (click to see context) from:
* {{Yandere}}: [[spoiler: Mary Jane]] is shaping up to be one.
* YouAreWhoYouEat: Comes with the ''VideoGame/{{Prototype}}'' territory.
* YouAreWhoYouEat: Comes with the ''VideoGame/{{Prototype}}'' territory.
to:
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Updating Link
Changed line(s) 1,2 (click to see context) from:
''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8642442/1/Variant-Strain Variant Strain]]'' ([[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/variant-strain-spiderman-marvel-prototype.236144/ discussion thread]], [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/variant-strain-spiderman-marvel-prototype-2nd-thread.278778/ continued]]) is a ''VideoGame/{{Prototype}}[=/=]Franchise/SpiderMan'' FusionFic by scriviner.
to:
''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8642442/1/Variant-Strain Variant Strain]]'' ([[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/variant-strain-spiderman-marvel-prototype.236144/ discussion thread]], [[http://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/variant-strain-spiderman-marvel-prototype-2nd-thread.278778/ continued]]) is a ''VideoGame/{{Prototype}}[=/=]Franchise/SpiderMan'' ''VideoGame/{{Prototype}}[=/=]ComicBook/SpiderMan'' FusionFic by scriviner.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
Updating Link
Changed line(s) 8 (click to see context) from:
* AdaptationalAttractiveness: Anna Watson, who in the Franchise/SpiderMan comics is an older middle-aged pudgy woman, is depicted here as a highly attractive woman in her mid-thirties.
to:
* AdaptationalAttractiveness: Anna Watson, who in the Franchise/SpiderMan ComicBook/SpiderMan comics is an older middle-aged pudgy woman, is depicted here as a highly attractive woman in her mid-thirties.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 47 (click to see context) from:
* LovecraftianSuperpower: As a ''VideoGame/{{Prototype}}'' crossover, this pretty much goes without saying.
to:
* LovecraftianSuperpower: As a ''VideoGame/{{Prototype}}'' crossover, this pretty much goes without saying.comes up a lot.
Changed line(s) 68 (click to see context) from:
* WallCrawl: It wouldn't be an extended shout-out to the Spider-Man mythos without it.
to:
* WallCrawl: It wouldn't be is an extended shout-out cossover to the Spider-Man mythos without it.mythos.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 41 (click to see context) from:
* FoeYay: Deliberately invoked with Jessica's MoreThanMindControl abilities, which Peter can resist, but he still can't help but find her incredibly attractive. [[spoiler: As the story progresses, Jessica begins to grow obsessed with Peter not only for his ability to NoSell her powers, but as an equal and potential ''mate''.]]
to:
* FoeYay: FoeRomanceSubtext: Deliberately invoked with Jessica's MoreThanMindControl abilities, which Peter can resist, but he still can't help but find her incredibly attractive. [[spoiler: As the story progresses, Jessica begins to grow obsessed with Peter not only for his ability to NoSell her powers, but as an equal and potential ''mate''.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Changed line(s) 27 (click to see context) from:
* DeadpanSnarker
to:
* DeadpanSnarkerCrazySane: Cletus Kassidy is a bloodthirsty serial killer, but he's very good at keeping his composure during stressful situations and often has to help Peter stop panicking. He also theorizes that being crazy to begin with helps people keep their minds once they're infected with Hydra.
* DeadpanSnarker: Peter still snarks to stave off his fear.
* DeadpanSnarker: Peter still snarks to stave off his fear.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
* CrazyPrepared: [[spoiler:Hey, remember all those kisses Peter and MJ keep having? Turns out he infected her with Hydra. Which he uses to save her life when she's fatally wounded by a Tracker.]]
Deleted line(s) 53 (click to see context) :
* RealityEnsues: [[spoiler:Hey, remember all those kisses Peter and MJ keep having? Turns out he infected her with Hydra. Which he uses to save her life when she's fatally wounded by a Tracker.]]
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
*AdaptationalWimp: [[ComicBook/TheMightyThor Donald Blake aka Thor]]. He's a far cry from the PhysicalGod of the comics, being a BadassNormal field medic for Thunderbolts Shield Team.
Is there an issue? Send a MessageReason:
None
Added DiffLines:
* DeathByAdaptation: A number of major Marvel characters get hit in the backstory by this including [[spoiler: [[ComicBook/BlackWidow Natasha Romanoff]], [[ComicBook/CaptainAmerica Captain Steve Rogers]], [[ComicBook/TheIncredibleHulk Dr. Bruce Banner]], [[ComicBook/TheWasp Janet van Dyne]],and [[ComicBook/FantasticFour Reed Richards, Ben Grimm, with Susan and Johnny Storm.]] ComicBook/HankPym dies as well.]]
