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''Twelve Red Lines'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' [[SelfInsertFic Self-Insert]] FanFiction by Vikingr. The suicide attempt of a gender-fluid young woman named Jones leads to her being rescued by the Straw Hat Pirates, and the truth of where she came from comes out the moment they see their Jolly Roger, painted mere days before, on her necklace. She joins the crew at Luffy’s insistence, and it takes no time at all for her presence to begin changing the story she knew.
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''Twelve Red Lines'' is a ''Manga/OnePiece'' [[SelfInsertFic Self-Insert]] FanFiction by Vikingr. The suicide attempt of a gender-fluid young woman named Jones leads to her being rescued by the Straw Hat Pirates, and the truth of where she came from comes out the moment they see their Jolly Roger, painted mere days before, on her necklace. She joins the crew at Luffy’s Luffy's insistence, and it takes no time at all for her presence to begin changing the story she knew.
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* CanadaEh:
** Jones's Canadian heritage comes up on occasion, specified in other tropes on this page.
** Drum Kingdom in general; most prominently, the island's inhabitants are all rabid hockey fans, including Chopper.
** Jones's Canadian heritage comes up on occasion, specified in other tropes on this page.
** Drum Kingdom in general; most prominently, the island's inhabitants are all rabid hockey fans, including Chopper.
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-->'''Jones (narrative)''': Well, at least I had experience jumping off cantering dinosaurs…\\
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Not something I'd ever expected to say as part of my everyday life.
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Not something I'd ever expected to say as part of my everyday life.
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-->'''Jones (narrative)''': Well, at least I had experience jumping off cantering dinosaurs…\\
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Notdinosaurs…Not something I'd ever expected to say as part of my everyday life.
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* MoodWhiplash: Jones sinks into a lake in her world, wondering if anyone will miss her after slicing [[TitleDrop twelve red lines]] in her arms. She then finds herself on the deck of the Merry with Zoro pressing on her chest, forcing her to cough up water.
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Found on ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13167711/1/Twelve-Red-Lines Fanfiction.net]]'' and ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/twelve-red-lines-a-one-piece-si-fanfic.511606/ Spacebattles.com]]''.
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Found on ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13167711/1/Twelve-Red-Lines Fanfiction.net]]'' and ''[[https://forums.spacebattles.com/threads/twelve-red-lines-a-one-piece-si-fanfic.511606/ Spacebattles.com]]''.
com]]''. [[DeadFic Has not been updated since 2021.]]
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* CliffHanger: Has happened a few times.
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* CliffHanger: {{Cliffhanger}}: Has happened a few times.
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* IncrediblyLamePun: While walking in Alabasta, Jones wonders if being a witch in a desert makes her a sandwich.
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* JoinTheArmyTheySaid: Geier grouses about this in Chapter 26:
-->'''Geier''': Join the police, they said. Serve your country, make lifelong friends, play with the latest technology. It'll be fun, they said. None of my aunts mentioned dealing with ''batshit insane'' rodents every day.
-->'''Geier''': Join the police, they said. Serve your country, make lifelong friends, play with the latest technology. It'll be fun, they said. None of my aunts mentioned dealing with ''batshit insane'' rodents every day.
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* MakeMeWannaShout: In Chapter 26, Ruatha develops a sonic scream, finally giving him a formidable weapon in combat.
* ManChild: Unsurprisingly, Shanks fits this to a T unless he's in the middle of a fight, especially when he's drunk.
* {{Masquerade}}: The Straw Hats learn the truth about Jones immediately. But for everyone else, she claims that [[AWizardDidIt she’s a witch]].
* ManChild: Unsurprisingly, Shanks fits this to a T unless he's in the middle of a fight, especially when he's drunk.
* {{Masquerade}}: The Straw Hats learn the truth about Jones immediately. But for everyone else, she claims that [[AWizardDidIt she’s a witch]].
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* MakeMeWannaShout: In Chapter 26, Ruatha develops a sonic scream, finally giving him a formidable weapon in combat.
* ManChild:{{Manchild}}: Unsurprisingly, Shanks fits this to a T unless he's in the middle of a fight, especially when he's drunk.
* {{Masquerade}}: The Straw Hats learn the truth about Jones immediately. But for everyone else, she claims that [[AWizardDidItshe’s she's a witch]].
* ManChild:
* {{Masquerade}}: The Straw Hats learn the truth about Jones immediately. But for everyone else, she claims that [[AWizardDidIt
* {{Pun}}: While walking in Alabasta, Jones wonders if being a witch in a desert makes her a sandwich.
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* SuperScream: In Chapter 26, Ruatha develops a sonic scream, finally giving him a formidable weapon in combat.
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* NotGoodWithPeople: It takes time for Jones to warm up to the Straw Hats, and she’s not comfortable interacting with most outside of the crew unless it's in an attempt to intimidate them.
** And even with the Straw Hats, as of Chapter 12, she still doesn’t feel comfortable enough to cry in front of any of them or sleep in the same room.
** And even with the Straw Hats, as of Chapter 12, she still doesn’t feel comfortable enough to cry in front of any of them or sleep in the same room.
