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* SharedUniverse: With ''Fanfic/WeissReacts''.
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* WhoWouldWantToWatchUs: Homura asks this word-for-word to Mami when learning of the concept of fanfiction and that [[OhCrapThereAreFanficsOfUs there are those who write it of them]].
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* WhoWouldWantToWatchUs: Homura asks this word-for-word to Mami when learning of the concept of fanfiction and that [[OhCrapThereAreFanficsOfUs there are those people who write it of about them]].
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* SeriousBusiness: Food for Kyoko, as always.
** Madoka is this for Homura. Again, as always.
** Madoka is this for Homura. Again, as always.
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* WhoWouldWantToWatchUs: Homura asks this word-for-word to Mami when learning of the concept of fanfiction and that [[OhCrapThereAreFanficsOfUs there are those who write it of them]].them]].
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* SomethingCompletelyDifferent: This time, the focus of the fic is on the StalkerWithACrush Homura, rather than the {{Tsundere}} [[Fanfic/WeissReacts Weiss]] or the OnlySaneMan [[Fanfic/LucinaReacts Lucina]].
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* FiveManBand: The main protagonists fall into this:
** TheHero: Homura
** TheLancer: Mami
** TheSmartGuy: Sayaka
** TheChick: Madoka
** TheBigGuy: Kyoko
** SixthRanger: [[TheGhost Nagisa]]
** TheHero: Homura
** TheLancer: Mami
** TheSmartGuy: Sayaka
** TheChick: Madoka
** TheBigGuy: Kyoko
** SixthRanger: [[TheGhost Nagisa]]
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* SophisticatedAsHell:
-->Kyubey swished his tail around lightly. "It seems none of you understand the concept of, as you humans put it, 'keeping things on the down-low'."\\
The pinkette chuckled. "D-did Kyubey just say 'down-low'?"
-->Kyubey swished his tail around lightly. "It seems none of you understand the concept of, as you humans put it, 'keeping things on the down-low'."\\
The pinkette chuckled. "D-did Kyubey just say 'down-low'?"
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* BerserkButton: Hitomi, for Sayaka, and doing ''anything'' to harm Madoka in any form for Homura.
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* BerserkButton: Hitomi, for Sayaka, and doing ''anything'' to harm Madoka in any form form- even something as mild as writing dirty fanfic about her- for Homura.Homura.
* BlandNameProduct: Madoka apparently has an old [[Website/{{MySpace}} YourSpace]] page.
* BlandNameProduct: Madoka apparently has an old [[Website/{{MySpace}} YourSpace]] page.
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Homura's moral code revolving around eliminating all and any threats to Madoka. It's not a far cry from her canon one, either.
** Her world quite ''literally'' revolves around Madoka, to the point that she calls a ''charity event'' that does not benefit Madoka in any way [[SkewedPriorities pointless]].
** Her world quite ''literally'' revolves around Madoka, to the point that she calls a ''charity event'' that does not benefit Madoka in any way [[SkewedPriorities pointless]].
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* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Homura's moral code revolving around eliminating all and any threats to Madoka. It's not a far cry from her canon one, either.
**either. Her world quite ''literally'' revolves around Madoka, to the point that she calls a ''charity event'' that does not benefit Madoka in any way [[SkewedPriorities pointless]].
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* ItIsDehumanizing: In Redux, Homura refers to Kyubey as it, to which Mami responds “''Him'', Homura. Him.”
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* ShoutOut: The first chapter references a web novel Madoka read “[[Literature/{{Worm}} about a girl with superpowers involving the control of insects and other such small creatures]]”.
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** The first chapter references a web novel Madoka read “[[Literature/{{Worm}} about a girl with superpowers involving the control of insects and other such smallcreatures]]”.creatures]]”.
** Mami references ''VisualNovel/{{Clannad}}'' by name when mentioning that people love sad stories like theirs.
** The first chapter references a web novel Madoka read “[[Literature/{{Worm}} about a girl with superpowers involving the control of insects and other such small
** Mami references ''VisualNovel/{{Clannad}}'' by name when mentioning that people love sad stories like theirs.
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* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Homura, again, to Madoka.
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* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Homura, again, to Madoka.Madoka.
* WhoWouldWantToWatchUs: Homura asks this word-for-word to Mami when learning of the concept of fanfiction and that [[OhCrapThereAreFanficsOfUs there are those who write it of them]].
* WhoWouldWantToWatchUs: Homura asks this word-for-word to Mami when learning of the concept of fanfiction and that [[OhCrapThereAreFanficsOfUs there are those who write it of them]].
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* ShoutOut: The first chapter references a web novel Madoka read “[[Literature/{{Worm}} about a girl with superpowers involving the control of insects and other such small creatures]]”.
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-->'''Homura:''' ''"[[OhCrap ...I already have a feeling I won't like the road you're leading me down]], Mami."''
-->'''Mami:''' ''"Oh, Homura. [[TemptingFate Have a sense of adventure, will you?]]"''
-->'''The last lines of the first chapter.'''
-->'''Mami:''' ''"Oh, Homura. [[TemptingFate Have a sense of adventure, will you?]]"''
-->'''The last lines of the first chapter.'''
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* TheMatchmaker: Homura tries this in the reboot to keep Madoka all to herself by erasing all possible competition.
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...and the typical [[HilarityEnsues shenanigans]]. After six chapters, the author has placed the fic on [[DeadFic indefinite hiatus]], but has hinted at a possible revival later on.
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...and the typical [[HilarityEnsues shenanigans]]. After six chapters,
Some months later, the authorhas placed rebooted the fic story under ''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11582643/1/Homura-Reacts-Redux Homura Reacts: Redux]]'', planning to focus more on [[DeadFic indefinite hiatus]], but has hinted at its slice-of-life elements. (The original story is now a possible revival later on.DeadFic.)
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...and the typical [[HilarityEnsues shenanigans]].
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...and the typical [[HilarityEnsues shenanigans]]. After six chapters, the author has placed the fic on [[DeadFic indefinite hiatus]], but has hinted at a possible revival later on.
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-->''"And besides, not like we didn't basically end Witches during that thing we did."\\
Sayaka tilted her head. "You know, you keep saying we were there, but we can't remember what happened, Mami."''
Sayaka tilted her head. "You know, you keep saying we were there, but we can't remember what happened, Mami."''
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* NoodleIncident: Whatever Mami and Homura did that somehow [[spoiler:stopped Puella Magi from eventually turning into Witches]]. And evicted Kyubey from his planet. Which has made it safe for Madoka to contract.
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''[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11102517/1/Homura-Reacts Homura Reacts]]'' is the third [[Fanfic/TheReactsverse Reactsverse]] fanfic by [=ElfCollaborator=], this time set in [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Mitakhihara City]].
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11102517/1/Homura-Reacts Homura Reacts]] is the third [[Fanfic/TheReactsverse Reactsverse]] fanfic by [=ElfCollaborator=], this time set in [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Mitakhihara City]].
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-->'''Homura:''' ''"[[OhCrap ...I already have a feeling I won't like the road you're leading me down]], Mami."''
-->'''Mami:''' ''"Oh, Homura. [[TemptingFate Have a sense of adventure, will you?]]"''
-->'''The last lines of the first chapter.'''
[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11102517/1/Homura-Reacts Homura Reacts]] is the third [[Fanfic/TheReactsverse Reactsverse]] fanfic by [=ElfCollaborator=], this time set in [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Mitakhihara City]].
Homura, now living in Madoka's house several months after the events of the series, is rather rudely awakened to the world of normality after a chance encounter with a [[{{Rule34}} rather lewd]] FanFiction horrifies [[NaiveEverygirl Madoka.]] What follows is an exploration into the typical hobbies of normal people, including video games, fanfiction....
...and the typical [[HilarityEnsues shenanigans]].
!!This fanfiction contains examples of:
* BadassNormal: [[LadyOfWar Hitomi]], managing to take on both Sayaka and Kyoko in their Puella Magi forms.
** BewareTheNiceOnes: She invites the Puella Magi for tea before this incident, and Mami would have gladly accepted if Sayaka hadn't stopped her.
* BerserkButton: Hitomi, for Sayaka, and doing ''anything'' to harm Madoka in any form for Homura.
* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Homura's moral code revolving around eliminating all and any threats to Madoka. It's not a far cry from her canon one, either.
** Her world quite ''literally'' revolves around Madoka, to the point that she calls a ''charity event'' that does not benefit Madoka in any way [[SkewedPriorities pointless]].
* BigEater: Kyoko.
* CloudCuckooLandersMinder: Mami is this to all of them, and the premise is Mami attempting to introduce a 'normal' life to them.
* EarlyBirdCameo: Over in ''Fanfic/WeissReacts'', Homura and Mami made an appearance during the Winter Animecon, and Kyoko made one during the ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica'' chapter. Even earlier than that, Kyubey appeared during the the first two parter of the volume.
* FiveManBand: The main protagonists fall into this:
** TheHero: Homura
** TheLancer: Mami
** TheSmartGuy: Sayaka
** TheChick: Madoka
** TheBigGuy: Kyoko
** SixthRanger: [[TheGhost Nagisa]]
* LadyOfWar: Hitomi is upgraded to this, in part due to the [[MegatonPunch Megaton]] [[MemeticMutation Tummy Punch]] she delivers to Sayaka and Kyoko when they invade her house to get her back for [[ItMakesSenseInContext writing smutty fanfiction about them.]]
** Mami remains this from canon.
* LikeAnOldMarriedCouple: Sayaka and Kyoko.
* OnlySaneMan: Sayaka. Except if [[BerserkButton Hitomi]] is involved.
* PopCulturalOsmosisFailure: Homura doesn't know what ''Theatre/{{Hamlet}}'' is and only has the vaguest idea of what a WebSerialNovel is. Mami then makes it her mission to make Homura avert this.
* TeamMom: Mami is this once more, to the point that ''Homura'' backs down when Mami tells her to.
* RedOniBlueOni: Sayaka and Kyoko, but also Mami and Homura, with Mami as Red and Homura as Blue.
* SeriousBusiness: Food for Kyoko, as always.
** Madoka is this for Homura. Again, as always.
* SharedUniverse: With ''Fanfic/WeissReacts''.
* SomethingCompletelyDifferent: This time, the focus of the fic is on the StalkerWithACrush Homura, rather than the {{Tsundere}} [[Fanfic/WeissReacts Weiss]] or the OnlySaneMan [[Fanfic/LucinaReacts Lucina]].
* StalkerWithACrush: Homura for Madoka, to the point she even lives in her house.
* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Homura, again, to Madoka.
-->'''Mami:''' ''"Oh, Homura. [[TemptingFate Have a sense of adventure, will you?]]"''
-->'''The last lines of the first chapter.'''
[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11102517/1/Homura-Reacts Homura Reacts]] is the third [[Fanfic/TheReactsverse Reactsverse]] fanfic by [=ElfCollaborator=], this time set in [[Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica Mitakhihara City]].
Homura, now living in Madoka's house several months after the events of the series, is rather rudely awakened to the world of normality after a chance encounter with a [[{{Rule34}} rather lewd]] FanFiction horrifies [[NaiveEverygirl Madoka.]] What follows is an exploration into the typical hobbies of normal people, including video games, fanfiction....
...and the typical [[HilarityEnsues shenanigans]].
!!This fanfiction contains examples of:
* BadassNormal: [[LadyOfWar Hitomi]], managing to take on both Sayaka and Kyoko in their Puella Magi forms.
** BewareTheNiceOnes: She invites the Puella Magi for tea before this incident, and Mami would have gladly accepted if Sayaka hadn't stopped her.
* BerserkButton: Hitomi, for Sayaka, and doing ''anything'' to harm Madoka in any form for Homura.
* BlueAndOrangeMorality: Homura's moral code revolving around eliminating all and any threats to Madoka. It's not a far cry from her canon one, either.
** Her world quite ''literally'' revolves around Madoka, to the point that she calls a ''charity event'' that does not benefit Madoka in any way [[SkewedPriorities pointless]].
* BigEater: Kyoko.
* CloudCuckooLandersMinder: Mami is this to all of them, and the premise is Mami attempting to introduce a 'normal' life to them.
* EarlyBirdCameo: Over in ''Fanfic/WeissReacts'', Homura and Mami made an appearance during the Winter Animecon, and Kyoko made one during the ''Anime/PuellaMagiMadokaMagica'' chapter. Even earlier than that, Kyubey appeared during the the first two parter of the volume.
* FiveManBand: The main protagonists fall into this:
** TheHero: Homura
** TheLancer: Mami
** TheSmartGuy: Sayaka
** TheChick: Madoka
** TheBigGuy: Kyoko
** SixthRanger: [[TheGhost Nagisa]]
* LadyOfWar: Hitomi is upgraded to this, in part due to the [[MegatonPunch Megaton]] [[MemeticMutation Tummy Punch]] she delivers to Sayaka and Kyoko when they invade her house to get her back for [[ItMakesSenseInContext writing smutty fanfiction about them.]]
** Mami remains this from canon.
* LikeAnOldMarriedCouple: Sayaka and Kyoko.
* OnlySaneMan: Sayaka. Except if [[BerserkButton Hitomi]] is involved.
* PopCulturalOsmosisFailure: Homura doesn't know what ''Theatre/{{Hamlet}}'' is and only has the vaguest idea of what a WebSerialNovel is. Mami then makes it her mission to make Homura avert this.
* TeamMom: Mami is this once more, to the point that ''Homura'' backs down when Mami tells her to.
* RedOniBlueOni: Sayaka and Kyoko, but also Mami and Homura, with Mami as Red and Homura as Blue.
* SeriousBusiness: Food for Kyoko, as always.
** Madoka is this for Homura. Again, as always.
* SharedUniverse: With ''Fanfic/WeissReacts''.
* SomethingCompletelyDifferent: This time, the focus of the fic is on the StalkerWithACrush Homura, rather than the {{Tsundere}} [[Fanfic/WeissReacts Weiss]] or the OnlySaneMan [[Fanfic/LucinaReacts Lucina]].
* StalkerWithACrush: Homura for Madoka, to the point she even lives in her house.
* ViolentlyProtectiveGirlfriend: Homura, again, to Madoka.
