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''Her Fractured Spirit'' is a ''VideoGame/{{Splatoon}}'' fanfic by [=LadyHood=]. It takes place after the events of the second game and is centered around Callie and Marie. It can be read [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/11897988/chapters/26877387 here]].
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''Her Fractured Spirit'' is a ''VideoGame/{{Splatoon}}'' ''Franchise/{{Splatoon}}'' fanfic by [=LadyHood=]. It takes place after the events of the second game and is centered around Callie and Marie. It can be read [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/11897988/chapters/26877387 here]].
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* RealityEnsues: Nobody just shrugs off getting kidnapped and held hostage, as this fan fic demonstrates.
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* YouAreBetterThanYouThinkYouAre: Marie tells Callie this during the first chapter when she starts getting down on herself.
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* RealityEnsues: Nobody just shrugs off getting kidnapped and held hostage, as this fan fic demonstrates.
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''Her Fractured Spirit'' is a ''Splatoon'' fanfic by [=LadyHood=]. It takes place after the events of the second game and is centered around Callie and Marie. It can be read [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/11897988/chapters/26877387 here]].
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''Her Fractured Spirit'' is a ''Splatoon'' ''VideoGame/{{Splatoon}}'' fanfic by [=LadyHood=]. It takes place after the events of the second game and is centered around Callie and Marie. It can be read [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/11897988/chapters/26877387 here]].
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** Octolad's real name is Salmonford. His mom is Sammy and his dad is Samwell. [[OddNameOut Then there's his little brother Hayden]].
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** Octolad's real name is Salmonford. His mom is Sammy and his dad is Samwell. [[OddNameOut Then there's his [[OddNameOut little brother Hayden]].
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* MentalHealthRecoveryArc: The story deals with Callie recovering from her PTSD after being kidnapped during ''Splatoon 2'''s story.
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* PardonMyKlingon: Marine-based puns such as "holy carp" and "squit" are used.
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* UnusualEuphemism:: Marine-based puns such as "holy carp" and "squit" are used.
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* SleepyDepressive: The normally energetic Callie's inability to get out of bed is a sign of her worsening depression.
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* OlderThanTheyLook: Callie is actually older than Marie. Everyone thinks it's the other way around because of how immature she seems, while in contrast how mature Marie looks and acts.
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: Callie is actually older than Marie. Everyone thinks it's the other way around because of how mature Marie looks and acts.
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: Callie is actually older than Marie. Everyone thinks it's the other way around because of how mature Marie looks and acts.is Callie's junior by an unspecified amount of time.
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* {{Sleepover}}: Chapter 8 has Callie and Marie having a sleepover. They're roommates, so it's more about image than anything.
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* {{Sleepover}}: SlumberParty: Chapter 8 has Callie and Marie having a sleepover. They're roommates, so it's more about image than anything.
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** Marina has a brother named Marny (his full name is "Marmaduke").
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** Marina has a brother named nicknamed Marny (his full name is "Marmaduke").
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* AlliterativeFamily: Marina has a brother named Marny.
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* AlliterativeFamily: AlliterativeFamily:
** Marina has a brother namedMarny.Marny (his full name is "Marmaduke").
** Octolad's real name is Salmonford. His mom is Sammy and his dad is Samwell. [[OddNameOut Then there's his little brother Hayden]].
** Marina has a brother named
** Octolad's real name is Salmonford. His mom is Sammy and his dad is Samwell. [[OddNameOut Then there's his little brother Hayden]].
* ClashingCousins: Octolad and Lady. They were [[WeUsedToBeFriends once like brother and sister]] but past events has caused their relationship to sour.
* CoolUncle: [=LadyHood=] notes that Octolad's parents are ([[spoiler:or "were" in the case of his dad]]) cool and idealistic.
* CoolUncle: [=LadyHood=] notes that Octolad's parents are ([[spoiler:or "were" in the case of his dad]]) cool and idealistic.
* DisappearedDad: [[spoiler:Octolad's]] father died two years ago.
* FullNameUltimatum: During a fight in the past, Octolad and [=rvMatt1=] refer to each other by their full names in anger.
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* OhMyGods: "Thank the ancestors" is used once. "Squid Jesus" also pops up. The characters do also outright use "oh my God", though.
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* OhMyGods: "Thank the ancestors" is used once. "Squid Jesus" and "oh my cod" (which is canon) also pops up. The characters do also outright use "oh my God", though.
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* SecretRelationship: Marina and Pearl are a couple. They'd rather not have their relationship in the public eye, however they act just flirty enough to cause rumors
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* SecretRelationship: Marina and Pearl are a couple. They'd rather not have their relationship in the public eye, however they act just flirty enough to cause rumorsrumors.
* SweetTooth: Callie orders an ultra-sweet mix of banana, strawberry, and cotton candy flavoured ice cream with sprinkles and marshmallows on top. She recommends it to Marie, who also likes it.
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* TroubledFetalPosition: During a Turf War, Callie gets triggered when a Octoling character uses bomb rush. She ends up sobbing in fetal position.
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* YoungerThanTheyLook: Callie is actually older than Marie. Everyone thinks it's the other way around because of how mature Marie looks and acts.
* YoungerThanTheyLook: Callie is actually older than Marie. Everyone thinks it's the other way around because of how mature Marie looks and acts.
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* FamilyThemeNaming: Discussed. It turns out Callie's mom brought up the idea that her daughter and her niece should have punny names.
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* AlliterativeFamily: Marina has a brother named Marny.
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* FictionalCounterpart: Callie once [[TheCameo cameoed]] on ''[[Series/MadMen Mad Squid]]''.
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** Callie once [[TheCameo cameoed]] on ''[[Series/MadMen MadSquid]]''.Squid]]''.
** [=McPrawnalds=] is referenced several times.
** Callie once [[TheCameo cameoed]] on ''[[Series/MadMen Mad
** [=McPrawnalds=] is referenced several times.
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* SecretRelationship: Marina and Pearl are a couple. They'd rather not have their relationship in the public eye, however they act just flirty enough to cause rumors
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* BetterToDieThanBeKilled: Used non-lethally during a Turf War. [=rvMatt1=] jumps off a tower instead of letting herself be splatted by someone else.
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* ShoutOut: Chapter 4 contains a ''Film/MeanGirls'' reference when a character says "fetch". Their friend even tells them that the term will never catch on, much like in ''Mean Girls''.
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* ShoutOut: ShoutOut:
** Chapter 4 contains a ''Film/MeanGirls'' reference when a character says "fetch". Their friend even tells them that the term will never catch on, much like in ''Mean Girls''.
** In the past, Callie did a celebrity cameo on ''[[Series/MadMen Mad Squid]]''.
* {{Sleepover}}: Chapter 8 has Callie and Marie having a sleepover. They're roommates, so it's more about image than anything.
** Chapter 4 contains a ''Film/MeanGirls'' reference when a character says "fetch". Their friend even tells them that the term will never catch on, much like in ''Mean Girls''.
** In the past, Callie did a celebrity cameo on ''[[Series/MadMen Mad Squid]]''.
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* TraumaButton: Callie often gets triggered easily by things that remind her of what happened. For example, her Agent shades causes her to panic and going near Ancho-V, [[spoiler:the place she was kidnapped at]], upsets her as well.
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* TraumaButton: Callie often gets triggered easily by things that remind her of what happened. For example, her Agent shades causes her to panic and going near Ancho-V, [[spoiler:the place she was kidnapped at]], upsets her as well.well.
* TroubledFetalPosition: During a Turf War, Callie gets triggered when a Octoling character uses bomb rush. She ends up sobbing in fetal position.
* TroubledFetalPosition: During a Turf War, Callie gets triggered when a Octoling character uses bomb rush. She ends up sobbing in fetal position.
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HoldYourHippogriffs: "The early squid gets the fish" instead of "The early bird gets the worm".
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* HoldYourHippogriffs: "The early squid gets the fish" instead of "The early bird gets the worm".
* MythologyGag: Marie and Callie's code names, Mar and Tina, are their Spanish names.
* MythologyGag: Marie and Callie's code names, Mar and Tina, are their Spanish names.
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* ShoutOut: Chapter 4 contains a ''Film/MeanGirls'' reference when a character says "fetch". Their friend even tells them that the term will never catch on, much like in ''Mean Girls''.
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* TraumaButton: Callie often gets triggered easily by things that remind her of what happened. For example, her Agent shades causes her to panic and going near Ancho-V, [[spoiler:the place she was kidnapped at]], upsets her as well.
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* HoldMyHippogriffs: Marine-based puns such as "holy carp" and "squit" are used.
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It's been a month since the events of ''VideoGame/{{Splatoon 2}}'' and Callie still refuses to leave her apartment. Depressed and troubled, Callie hasn't been herself since she came back home. Marie, however, is there to try and figure out how to mend her cousin's wounds.
''Her Fractured Spirit'' is a ''Splatoon'' fanfic by [=LadyHood=]. It can be read [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/11897988/chapters/26877387 here]].
''Her Fractured Spirit'' is a ''Splatoon'' fanfic by [=LadyHood=]. It can be read [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/11897988/chapters/26877387 here]].
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It's been a month since the events of ''VideoGame/{{Splatoon 2}}'' and Callie still refuses to leave her apartment. Depressed and troubled, Callie hasn't been herself since she came back home. Marie, however, is there to try and figure out how to mend her cousin's wounds.
''Her Fractured Spirit'' is a ''Splatoon'' fanfic by [=LadyHood=]. It takes place after the events of the second game and is centered around Callie and Marie. It can be read [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/11897988/chapters/26877387here]].here]].
''Her Fractured Spirit'' is a ''Splatoon'' fanfic by [=LadyHood=]. It takes place after the events of the second game and is centered around Callie and Marie. It can be read [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/11897988/chapters/26877387
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* DarkFic: Instead of Callie [[AngstWhatAngst shrugging off her trauma]], she begins to suffer from Post-Traumatic Stress Disorder. Though the fic isn't that dark, it deals with more serious topics than the games themselves and features some profanity.
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It's been a month since the events of ''VideoGame/{{Splatoon 2}}'' and Callie still refuses to leave her apartment. Depressed and troubled, Callie hasn't been herself since she came back home. Marie, however, is there to try and figure out how to mend her cousin's wounds.
''Her Fractured Spirit'' is a ''Splatoon'' fanfic by [=LadyHood=]. It can be read [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/11897988/chapters/26877387 here]].
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!!''Her Fractured Spirit'' contains examples of:
* FictionalCounterpart: Callie once [[TheCameo cameoed]] on ''[[Series/MadMen Mad Squid]]''.
* HolyMyHippogriffs: Marine-based puns such as "holy carp" and "squit" are used.
* OhMyGods: "Thank the ancestors" is used once.
* StepfordSmiler: Callie tries to pretend she's fine but Marie knows her well enough to see through her facade.
* TraumaButton: Callie gets triggered easily by things that remind her of what happened.
''Her Fractured Spirit'' is a ''Splatoon'' fanfic by [=LadyHood=]. It can be read [[http://archiveofourown.org/works/11897988/chapters/26877387 here]].
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!!''Her Fractured Spirit'' contains examples of:
* FictionalCounterpart: Callie once [[TheCameo cameoed]] on ''[[Series/MadMen Mad Squid]]''.
* HolyMyHippogriffs: Marine-based puns such as "holy carp" and "squit" are used.
* OhMyGods: "Thank the ancestors" is used once.
* StepfordSmiler: Callie tries to pretend she's fine but Marie knows her well enough to see through her facade.
* TraumaButton: Callie gets triggered easily by things that remind her of what happened.
