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---> ''Janos'': Rumors that [=ComStar=] is experimenting with [[GettingSmiliesPaintedOnYourSoul drugs to pacify entire populations]], that [=ComStar=] intends to recreate the Terran Hegemony with itself as the ruling party, that it was responsible for [[MythologyGag that recent nasty pirate affair between the Lyrans and the Combine]], and, of course, the deeply disturbing slander that [=ComStar=] is [[CallForward conducting human experimentation to produce]] SuperSoldiers for the [=ComGuard=]. That the Primus intends to recreate the Star League with himself as the First Lord. And, of course, the usual age-old accusations that [=ComStar=] reads the mail we send that they might profit from private communications. Such base rumors about the [[BlatantLies noble couriers]] who carry our mail never seem to die. Human nature, I suppose.

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---> ''Janos'': --> '''Janos:''' Rumors that [=ComStar=] is experimenting with [[GettingSmiliesPaintedOnYourSoul drugs to pacify entire populations]], that [=ComStar=] intends to recreate the Terran Hegemony with itself as the ruling party, that it was responsible for [[MythologyGag that recent nasty pirate affair between the Lyrans and the Combine]], and, of course, the deeply disturbing slander that [=ComStar=] is [[CallForward conducting human experimentation to produce]] SuperSoldiers for the [=ComGuard=]. That the Primus intends to recreate the Star League with himself as the First Lord. And, of course, the usual age-old accusations that [=ComStar=] reads the mail we send that they might profit from private communications. Such base rumors about the [[BlatantLies noble couriers]] who carry our mail never seem to die. Human nature, I suppose.



---> '''Broker''': Seriously? The idiot had the audacity to try to molest a member of the Kurita family? [[LampshadeHanging I was aware Kneiss was stupid from your briefings, but I was under the impression the genetrash still had some basic survival instincts.]]
* TransHuman: The Kyphon dove straight into this, originally out of necessity to weed out genetic flaws due to their relatively low population and solar radiation, and only continued on from there.

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---> --> '''Broker''': Seriously? The idiot had the audacity to try to molest a member of the Kurita family? [[LampshadeHanging I was aware Kneiss was stupid from your briefings, but I was under the impression the genetrash still had some basic survival instincts.]]
* TransHuman: {{Transhuman}}: The Kyphon dove straight into this, originally out of necessity to weed out genetic flaws due to their relatively low population and solar radiation, and only continued on from there.
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* ArsonMurderAndJaywalking: The Captain-General confronts [=ComStar=]'s stand-in for their ambassador when he is called back to Terra about a series of 'rumors' that came along with the return of his treacherous cousin Anton to his custody. All of them being absolutely true.
---> ''Janos'': Rumors that [=ComStar=] is experimenting with [[GettingSmiliesPaintedOnYourSoul drugs to pacify entire populations]], that [=ComStar=] intends to recreate the Terran Hegemony with itself as the ruling party, that it was responsible for [[MythologyGag that recent nasty pirate affair between the Lyrans and the Combine]], and, of course, the deeply disturbing slander that [=ComStar=] is [[CallForward conducting human experimentation to produce]] SuperSoldiers for the [=ComGuard=]. That the Primus intends to recreate the Star League with himself as the First Lord. And, of course, the usual age-old accusations that [=ComStar=] reads the mail we send that they might profit from private communications. Such base rumors about the [[BlatantLies noble couriers]] who carry our mail never seem to die. Human nature, I suppose.
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* SimpleYetAwesome: Despite Executive Outcomes’s advanced technology, some of the things that shock the Irregulars at first are very simple ways to use current technology in ways nobody ever conceived of. One of the earliest examples is using dropships carrying only massive battery arrays to rapidly recharge jumpship drives to get around the one to two jump per week limitations involved with recharging drive batteries. It limits the capacity of the jumpship but allows you to get from point A to point B almost as quickly as you can attach and detach your battery ships.
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** The Kyphon's philosophies contain shoutouts to UsefulNotes/{{Objectivism}} and UsefulNotes/{{Discordianism}}, the former even lampshaded by an Executive Outcomes jumpship named the AynRand.

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** The Kyphon's philosophies contain shoutouts to UsefulNotes/{{Objectivism}} and UsefulNotes/{{Discordianism}}, the former even lampshaded by an Executive Outcomes jumpship named the AynRand.Creator/AynRand.
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* ActuallyPrettyFunny: During an intelligence briefing, where [[TheSpymaster Quintus]] is explaining to Hanse Davion the inability of any intelligence agency to infiltrate EO, Hanse is rather amused at what happened to the spies his Federated Suns and the Lyran Commonwealth sent, the former stranded in a Canopan Pleasure Circus, the latter stranded on a planet renowned for their luxurious spas, both cases fully paid up, but with no available transport away for over a month.
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* OutsideContextHero: Executive Outcomes comes across as this to the various factions of the Inner Sphere due to them supposedly being a security firm, yet producing enough jumpships and military vehicles to sell across the entire Inner Sphere, as well as their unusual philosophies.

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* OutsideContextHero: OutsideContextProblem: Executive Outcomes comes across as this to the various factions of the Inner Sphere due to them supposedly being a security firm, yet producing enough jumpships and military vehicles to sell across the entire Inner Sphere, as well as their unusual philosophies.
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** The Kyphon's philosophies contain shoutouts to {{Objectivism}} and {{Discordianism}}, the former even lampshaded by an Executive Outcomes jumpship named the AynRand.

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** The Kyphon's philosophies contain shoutouts to {{Objectivism}} UsefulNotes/{{Objectivism}} and {{Discordianism}}, UsefulNotes/{{Discordianism}}, the former even lampshaded by an Executive Outcomes jumpship named the AynRand.
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** One loudmouth once challenged procurement to make [[SchlockMercenary Ovalkwik]]. [[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor He asked for it,]] [[GargleBlaster he got it.]]

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** One loudmouth once challenged procurement to make [[SchlockMercenary [[WebComic/SchlockMercenary Ovalkwik]]. [[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor He asked for it,]] [[GargleBlaster he got it.]]



* TransHuman: The Kyphon dove straight into this, originally out of necessity to weed out genetic flaws due to their relatively low population and solar radiation, and only continued on from there.

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* TransHuman: The Kyphon dove straight into this, originally out of necessity to weed out genetic flaws due to their relatively low population and solar radiation, and only continued on from there.
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** One loudmouth once challenged procurement to make [[SchlockMercenary Ovalkwik]]. [[BeCarefulWhatYouWishFor He asked for it,]] [[GargleBlaster he got it.]]
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* [[OutsideContextVillain Outside Context Protagonist]]: Executive Outcomes comes across as this to the various factions of the Inner Sphere due to them supposedly being a security firm, yet producing enough jumpships and military vehicles to sell across the entire Inner Sphere, as well as their unusual philosophies.

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* [[OutsideContextVillain Outside Context Protagonist]]: OutsideContextHero: Executive Outcomes comes across as this to the various factions of the Inner Sphere due to them supposedly being a security firm, yet producing enough jumpships and military vehicles to sell across the entire Inner Sphere, as well as their unusual philosophies.
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** Executive Outcomes creates a diversion for [=ComStar=] by attacking their [[SubspaceAnsible Hyperpulse Generators]] on several worlds in the guise of [[ThePrincessBride the Dread Pirate Roberts]], demanding [[CrowningMomentOfFunny the return of Princess Buttercup]].

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** Executive Outcomes creates a diversion for [=ComStar=] by attacking their [[SubspaceAnsible Hyperpulse Generators]] on several worlds in the guise of [[ThePrincessBride [[Film/ThePrincessBride the Dread Pirate Roberts]], demanding [[CrowningMomentOfFunny the return of Princess Buttercup]].Buttercup.
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4639786/1/Fragmentation Fragmentation]] by Kickaha is a BattleTech fanfiction that starts during the Marik Civil War (circa 3014), wherein Cranston Snord of Snord's Irregulars gets an offer that sounds TooGoodToBeTrue, from a mysterious businessman who knows far too much about [[TheMole The Irregulars and Wolf's Dragoons]]. But Mr. Broker's motivations may fall in line with the Irregulars' and Dragoons' own mission against a common enemy to the entire Inner Sphere. And Broker's backers, Executive Outcomes, have some intentions that may make business very interesting very quickly.

Unlike many BattleTech stories, Fragmentation focuses more on the politics of the Inner Sphere than the warfare aspect, while doing a good job at keeping everything in character.

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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4639786/1/Fragmentation Fragmentation]] by Kickaha is a BattleTech TabletopGame/BattleTech fanfiction that starts during the Marik Civil War (circa 3014), wherein Cranston Snord of Snord's Irregulars gets an offer that sounds TooGoodToBeTrue, from a mysterious businessman who knows far too much about [[TheMole The Irregulars and Wolf's Dragoons]]. But Mr. Broker's motivations may fall in line with the Irregulars' and Dragoons' own mission against a common enemy to the entire Inner Sphere. And Broker's backers, Executive Outcomes, have some intentions that may make business very interesting very quickly.

Unlike many BattleTech [=BattleTech=] stories, Fragmentation focuses more on the politics of the Inner Sphere than the warfare aspect, while doing a good job at keeping everything in character.
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* CompanyTown: Janos Marik repeatedly tries this on Snord's Irregulars, Wolf's Dragoons and any other forces he can get his hands on, [[XanatosGambit throwing them against his brother's forces so that if they win, they'll be so battered, they'll be forced into debt to him for repairs, and if they lose,]] [[WeHaveReserves it keeps his own loyal forces in good shape.]] Broker's offer throws a SpannerInTheWorks repeatedly by giving them enough materiel to keep in shape, and giving them a ride off planet when Snord's forces take immense amounts of salvage that Janos was relying on, and later on [[spoiler: rescuing the Dragoons' hostages when Janos attempts to blackmail the Dragoons into becoming his own forces.]]
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[[https://www.fanfiction.net/s/4639786/1/Fragmentation Fragmentation]] by Kickaha is a BattleTech fanfiction that starts during the Marik Civil War (circa 3014), wherein Cranston Snord of Snord's Irregulars gets an offer that sounds TooGoodToBeTrue, from a mysterious businessman who knows far too much about [[TheMole The Irregulars and Wolf's Dragoons]]. But Mr. Broker's motivations may fall in line with the Irregulars' and Dragoons' own mission against a common enemy to the entire Inner Sphere. And Broker's backers, Executive Outcomes, have some intentions that may make business very interesting very quickly.

Unlike many BattleTech stories, Fragmentation focuses more on the politics of the Inner Sphere than the warfare aspect, while doing a good job at keeping everything in character.

Is still ongoing as of 2014, [[ScheduleSlip albeit slowly.]].

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* CrazyEnoughToWork: [=ComStar=]'s plans are a horrifying version of this. In canon, the Capellan Confederation, with [=ComStar=]'s support, attempted to replace Hanse Davion with a brainwashed duplicate. [[spoiler: In this story, [=ComStar=] planned to do so with the leaders of all five nations. In addition, they planned to re-introduce 'fosterage', which is, in essence, allowing [=ComStar=] to raise and {{Brainwash}} the heirs of the leaders of the Inner Sphere, thus making them totally loyal to [=ComStar=] alone.]] This was seen as this trope by several people, though [[LampshadeHanging lampshaded]] as bad melodrama if it wasn't so possible.
* ForWantOfANail: Executive Outcomes ends up [[spoiler: preventing the deaths of Joshua Wolf and the Dragoons' hostages by Anton Marik during the Marik Civil War.]]
* GroinAttack: A Dragoon soldier receives one of these as an [[CutHimselfShaving 'accident']] after he started a bar fight by groping a Kyphon woman who had some [[LittleBitBeastly unusual gene mods]] that the former mistook for a costume.
* HonorBeforeReason: Averting this is one of Executive Outcomes' sales pitches among periphery nations, where they sell [[ZergRush masses of inexpensive]] [[BoringButPractical low-tech vehicles]] such as [[DeathOfAThousandCuts the Pike]] to overwhelm [[HumongousMecha BattleMechs.]]
* LittleBitBeastly: A not-uncommon gene mod for bored Kyphon, including the woman in the above-mentioned GroinAttack.
* MiniMecha: The ''Guardians'' offered to be an analogue to [[PoweredArmor Elemental suits]] are considered this in comparison to Elementals or [[HumongousMecha BattleMechs.]]
*[[OutsideContextVillain Outside Context Protagonist]]: Executive Outcomes comes across as this to the various factions of the Inner Sphere due to them supposedly being a security firm, yet producing enough jumpships and military vehicles to sell across the entire Inner Sphere, as well as their unusual philosophies.
** This is taken even further when [[spoiler: EO deliberately allows [=ComStar=] to get a hold of a small amount of their technology, frustrating [=ComStar=] when they learn they can't reproduce it in any great amounts due to the advancements and incredibly expensive materials.]]
*ShoutOut: A couple here and there.
** The Kyphon's philosophies contain shoutouts to {{Objectivism}} and {{Discordianism}}, the former even lampshaded by an Executive Outcomes jumpship named the AynRand.
** Executive Outcomes creates a diversion for [=ComStar=] by attacking their [[SubspaceAnsible Hyperpulse Generators]] on several worlds in the guise of [[ThePrincessBride the Dread Pirate Roberts]], demanding [[CrowningMomentOfFunny the return of Princess Buttercup]].
* TheSingularity: The Kyphon are considered having encountered this due to having surpassed the Inner Sphere and even the Clans, both being on the receiving end of LostTechnology.
* TooDumbToLive: A [=ComStar=] mole was wanted in four out of the five Successor States for child molestation, particularly in the Draconis Combine where he picked the wrong target...
---> '''Broker''': Seriously? The idiot had the audacity to try to molest a member of the Kurita family? [[LampshadeHanging I was aware Kneiss was stupid from your briefings, but I was under the impression the genetrash still had some basic survival instincts.]]
* TransHuman: The Kyphon dove straight into this, originally out of necessity to weed out genetic flaws due to their relatively low population and solar radiation, and only continued on from there.

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