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* AdaptationalVillainy: With Goku surviving the fight with Raditz, Piccolo doesn't get the chance to kidnap Gohan. Without Gohan to [[LimaSyndrome act as a positive influence]], he maintains a villainous mindset. While he does [[EnemyMine team up with the Z fighters against greater threats]], he tries to kill Goku again during the Buu arc.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: With Goku surviving the fight with Raditz, Piccolo doesn't get the chance to kidnap Gohan. Without Gohan to [[LimaSyndrome act as a positive influence]], he maintains a villainous mindset. While he does still [[EnemyMine team teams up with the Z fighters against greater threats]], he tries to kill Goku again during the Buu arc.
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* FixFic: When it comes to Hercule, definitely. He never gets to fight Cell (Raditz didn't allow any normal human to get close to the fighting ground), makes a fool of himself in live TV by trying to beat Raditz to no avail. Said TV crew also record the Z-Fighters defeating Cell, and unlike canon, nobody believes his claims that the Z-Fighters and Cell's ki attacks are just smoke and mirrors. It culminates with him challening Goku to a one on one fight, again, on live TV, which he obviosuly loses. This defeat is enough to break his huge ego, and sent him into an HeroicBSOD. However, Videl managed to snap him out of it, and he even begin to train how to use ki attacks.
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* FixFic: When it comes to Hercule, definitely. He never gets to fight Cell (Raditz didn't allow any normal human to get close to the fighting ground), ground) and makes a fool of himself in live TV by trying to beat Raditz to no avail. Said TV crew also record the Z-Fighters defeating Cell, and unlike canon, nobody believes his claims that the Z-Fighters and Cell's ki attacks are just smoke and mirrors. It culminates with him challening challenging Goku to a one on one fight, again, on live TV, which he obviosuly obviously loses. This defeat is enough to break his huge ego, and sent him into an HeroicBSOD. However, Videl managed to snap him out of it, and he even begin to train to learn how to use ki attacks.
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* SmugSnake: [[spoiler: In addition to everyone from canon, Glacius Shenron fits the mold.]]
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* SmugSnake: [[spoiler: In addition to everyone all the examples from canon, Glacius Shenron fits the mold.]]
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** [[spoiler:This gets taken UpToEleven in Even Further Beyond, where all the villains and new supporting characters are OC's except Ozotto (who gets a serious makeover himself). This includes all the 15-20 or so Shadow Dragons, the twelve Hakaishin besides Bills, Entropy and his forces, Samsara, Void and his Majins. Yeesh. Despite this, they're all done fairly well and even the minor characters aren't just carbon copies of each other with a different power level.]]
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** [[spoiler:This gets taken UpToEleven up to eleven in Even Further Beyond, where all the villains and new supporting characters are OC's except Ozotto (who gets a serious makeover himself). This includes all the 15-20 or so Shadow Dragons, the twelve Hakaishin besides Bills, Entropy and his forces, Samsara, Void and his Majins. Yeesh. Despite this, they're all done fairly well and even the minor characters aren't just carbon copies of each other with a different power level.]]
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''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8400080/1/Break-Through-the-Limit Break Through The Limit]]'' is a ''Franchise/DragonBall'' fanfiction written by Captain Space.
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Anyone who has ever wanted to see just what would happen if Raditz became a major DBZ character is in for a treat with ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8400080/1/Break-Through-the-Limit Break Through The Limit]]'', a ''Franchise/DragonBall'' fanfiction written by Captain Space.
Shortly after a much more drastic defeat in the 23rd World Martial Arts Tournament, Piccolo Jr. resolved to defeat Son Goku and trained far harder than he had done in ''Anime/DragonBallZ'' canon. The results are felt 5 years later when Raditz comes to Earth only to find himself outmatched by Piccolo. The series of events that follow eventually lead to a HeelFaceTurn by Raditz and a new take on the DBZ universe.
Now complete.
Shortly after a much more drastic defeat in the 23rd World Martial Arts Tournament, Piccolo Jr. resolved to defeat Son Goku and trained far harder than he had done in ''Anime/DragonBallZ'' canon. The results are felt 5 years later when Raditz comes to Earth only to find himself outmatched by Piccolo. The series of events that follow eventually lead to a HeelFaceTurn by Raditz and a new take on the DBZ universe.
Now complete.
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Shortly after a much more drastic defeat in the 23rd World Martial Arts Tournament, Piccolo Jr. resolved to defeat Son Goku and trained far harder than he had done in ''Anime/DragonBallZ'' canon. The results are felt 5 years later when Raditz comes to Earth only to find himself outmatched by
The series of events that follow eventually lead to a HeelFaceTurn by Raditz and a new take on the DBZ
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The story was completed in 2012.
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* TheAbridgedSeries: ''Break Thorugh the Limit Kai Abridged'', posted at the end of each arc, written in script format.
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* TheAbridgedSeries: ''Break Thorugh Through the Limit Kai Abridged'', posted at the end of each arc, written in script format.
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* AdaptationalVillainy: With Goku surviving the fight with Raditz, Piccolo doesn't get the chance to kidnap Gohan. Without Gohan to [[LimaSyndrome act as a positive influence]], he maintains a villainous mindset. While he does [[EnemyMine team up with the Z fighters against greater threats]], he tries to kill Goku again during the Buu arc.
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* TheAbridgedSeries: Break Thorugh the Limit Kai Abridged, posted at the end of each arc, written in script format.
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* MovesetClone: All three arcs of Even Further Beyond have villain groups with mostly elemental powers. Technically justified, since [[spoiler: the first two groups were both Entropy's minions and Void admits he stole the motif from him]], though that last bit seems like Space lampshading it.
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* EvenEvilHasLovedOnes: Vegeta and Tarble.
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** Android Eighteen in the Buu Arc. In canon, she's a housewife who pretty much does nothing against Buu. In BTtL, she gets remade into a Super Android and though she's not quite as strong as a Super Saiyan 3, she's still one of the Z Fighters' best and gets some good hits in against Super Buu.
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** Android Eighteen in the Buu Arc. In canon, she's a housewife who pretty much does nothing against Buu. In BTtL, [=BTtL=], she gets remade into a Super Android and though she's not quite as strong as a Super Saiyan 3, she's still one of the Z Fighters' best and gets some good hits in against Super Buu.
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Anyone who has ever wanted to see just what would happen if Raditz became a major DBZ character is in for a treat with ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8400080/1/Break-Through-the-Limit Break Through The Limit]]'', a ''Manga/DragonBall'' fanfiction written by Captain Space.
Shortly after a much more drastic defeat in the 23rd Tenkaichi Budoukai, Piccolo Jr. resolved to defeat Son Goku and trained far harder than he had done in DBZ canon. The results are felt 5 years later when Raditz comes to Earth only to find himself outmatched by Piccolo. The series of events that follow eventually lead to a HeelFaceTurn by Raditz and a new take on the DBZ universe.
Shortly after a much more drastic defeat in the 23rd Tenkaichi Budoukai, Piccolo Jr. resolved to defeat Son Goku and trained far harder than he had done in DBZ canon. The results are felt 5 years later when Raditz comes to Earth only to find himself outmatched by Piccolo. The series of events that follow eventually lead to a HeelFaceTurn by Raditz and a new take on the DBZ universe.
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Anyone who has ever wanted to see just what would happen if Raditz became a major DBZ character is in for a treat with ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8400080/1/Break-Through-the-Limit Break Through The Limit]]'', a ''Manga/DragonBall'' ''Franchise/DragonBall'' fanfiction written by Captain Space.
Shortly after a much more drastic defeat in the 23rdTenkaichi Budoukai, World Martial Arts Tournament, Piccolo Jr. resolved to defeat Son Goku and trained far harder than he had done in DBZ ''Anime/DragonBallZ'' canon. The results are felt 5 years later when Raditz comes to Earth only to find himself outmatched by Piccolo. The series of events that follow eventually lead to a HeelFaceTurn by Raditz and a new take on the DBZ universe.
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* AFateWorseThanDeath: [[spoiler: Nail, who's been completely absorbed into the Majin Piccolo psyche.]]
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* AFateWorseThanDeath: [[spoiler: Nail, who's been completely absorbed into TheAbridgedSeries: Break Thorugh the Majin Piccolo psyche.]]Limit Kai Abridged, posted at the end of each arc, written in script format.
* ActionGirl: As in canon, Android 18 and Videl, but also Break, [[spoiler: her mother Launch, Chi-Chi, Pan and Marron.]]
* ActionMom: Though not a fighter per se, Chi-Chi is shown to have trained and learned how to fly in the Buu Saga and transfers her energy to Gohan along with the rest of her family during the [[spoiler: God of Destruction]] Saga. [[spoiler: Also, Launch.]]
* ActionMom: Though not a fighter per se, Chi-Chi is shown to have trained and learned how to fly in the Buu Saga and transfers her energy to Gohan along with the rest of her family during the [[spoiler: God of Destruction]] Saga. [[spoiler: Also, Launch.]]
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* ActionGirl: As in canon, Android 18 and Videl, but also Break, [[spoiler: her mother Launch, Chi-Chi, Pan and Marron.]]
* ActionMom: Though not a fighter per se, Chi-Chi is shown to have trained and learned how to fly in the Buu Saga and transfers her energy to Gohan along with the rest of her family during the [[spoiler: God of Destruction]] Saga. [[spoiler: Also, Launch.]]
* ActionMom: Though not a fighter per se, Chi-Chi is shown to have trained and learned how to fly in the Buu Saga and transfers her energy to Gohan along with the rest of her family during the [[spoiler: God of Destruction]] Saga. [[spoiler: Also, Launch.]]
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* ActionGirl: As in canon, Android 18 and Videl, but also Break, AFateWorseThanDeath: [[spoiler: her mother Launch, Chi-Chi, Pan and Marron.]]
* ActionMom: Though not a fighter per se, Chi-Chi is shown to have trained and learned how to fly inNail, who's been completely absorbed into the Buu Saga and transfers her energy to Gohan along with the rest of her family during the [[spoiler: God of Destruction]] Saga. [[spoiler: Also, Launch.Majin Piccolo psyche.]]
* ActionMom: Though not a fighter per se, Chi-Chi is shown to have trained and learned how to fly in
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** Gohan, Videl, and [[spoiler: Kuriza]] have a miniarc in the Countdown Saga.
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** Gohan, Videl, and [[spoiler: Zarbon and Kuriza]] have a miniarc in the Countdown Saga.
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* TheAtoner: One of the reasons Raditz doesn't wish to be revived. [[spoiler: Alpha Shenron's reason for joining the heroes.]]
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* TheAtoner: TheAtoner:
** One of the reasons Raditz doesn't wish to be revived. [[spoiler: Alpha Shenron's reason for joining the heroes.]]
** [[spoiler: After being freed from Cell, Eighteen and Seventeen go with Future Break to her time in order to help rebuild the world and make up for both their past transgressions and the actions of their alternate timeline selves.]]
** One of the reasons Raditz doesn't wish to be revived. [[spoiler: Alpha Shenron's reason for joining the heroes.]]
** [[spoiler: After being freed from Cell, Eighteen and Seventeen go with Future Break to her time in order to help rebuild the world and make up for both their past transgressions and the actions of their alternate timeline selves.]]
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** A more comedic example would be any time Hercule tries to fight a Saiyan.
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* FixFic: When it comes to Hercule, definitely. He never gets to fight Cell (Raditz didn't allow any normal human to get close to the fighting ground), makes a fool of himself in live TV by trying to beat Raditz to no avail. Said TV crew also record the Z-Fighters defeating Cell, and unlike canon, nobody believes his claims that the Z-Fighters and Cell's ki attacks are just smoke and mirrors. It culminates with him challening Goku to a one on one fight, again, on live TV, which he obviosuly loses. This defeat is enough to break his huge ego, and sent him into an HeroicBSOD. However, Videl managed to snap him out of it, and he even begin to train how to use ki attacks.
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* WeHardlyKnewYe: [[spoiler: Katas Jr, the fusion of Piccolo and Kami, only lasts a single chapter before being defeated by Imperfect Cell and forced to merge with Nail]].
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** [[spoiler:This gets taken UpToEleven in Even Further Beyond, where all the villains and new supporting characters are OC's except Ozotto (who gets a serious makeover himself). This includes all the 15-20 or so Shadow Dragons, the twelve Hakaishin besides Bills, Entropy and his forces, Samsara, Void and his Majins. Yeesh.]]
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** [[spoiler:This gets taken UpToEleven in Even Further Beyond, where all the villains and new supporting characters are OC's except Ozotto (who gets a serious makeover himself). This includes all the 15-20 or so Shadow Dragons, the twelve Hakaishin besides Bills, Entropy and his forces, Samsara, Void and his Majins. Yeesh. Despite this, they're all done fairly well and even the minor characters aren't just carbon copies of each other with a different power level.]]
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* SmugSnake: [[spoiler: Glacius Shenron.]]
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* SmugSnake: [[spoiler: In addition to everyone from canon, Glacius Shenron.Shenron fits the mold.]]
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** As well as pretty much most of the human characters. Tien in particular is the only character who knows the Spirit Bomb. He deals the deciding blow against [[spoiler: Alpha Shenron]] with a Universal Spirit Bomb, and he even [[spoiler: manages to unlock that power on his own and get an Infinity Core, making him useful even at the very end of the series.]]
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** As well as pretty much most of the human characters. Tien in particular is the only character who knows the Spirit Bomb. He deals the deciding blow against [[spoiler: Alpha Shenron]] with a Universal Spirit Bomb, and he even [[spoiler: manages to unlock that power on his own and get an Infinity Core, making him useful even at the very end of the series.]]
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* TheUnfought: Though the Z Fighters do briefly fight Frieza in his first and second forms, Frieza is literally torn from the battle by Cooler. [[spoiler:Raditz and Vegeta do later fight Metal Frieza however]].
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* TheUnfought: Though the Z Fighters do briefly fight Frieza in his first and second forms, Frieza is literally torn from the battle by Cooler. The story skips over most of his fight with Cooler, and his third form doesn't appear at all. [[spoiler:Raditz and Vegeta do later fight Metal Frieza however]].
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* TheCavalry: [[spoiler: The Gods of Destruction, alongside Gohan, during the Shadow Dragon Saga in Even Further Beyond.]]
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** [[spoiler:A non-reformed Piccolo joined the fight against the Saiyans.]]
** [[spoiler:Raditz and Vegeta vs. Mecha Frieza.]]
** [[spoiler:Raditz and Vegeta vs. Mecha Frieza.]]
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** [[spoiler:A non-reformed [[spoiler:Though Piccolo joined was an ally of the fight group against the Saiyans.Saiyans and Androids, he never reformed and even tried to kill Goku in the Buu Arc. However, he's forced to ally with the Z Fighters again when Majin Buu is more than he can handle.]]
** [[spoiler:Raditz and Vegeta vs.Mecha Metal Frieza.]]
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* BloodKnight: [[spoiler: Helios Shenron and the Warrior are this, maybe even more than the Saiyans. Alpha might also count.]]
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* CurbStompBattle: Vegeta vs. Ginyu and Guldo, Gohan vs. [[spoiler: Broly]], Full Power Perfect Cell vs the Z Fighters [[spoiler: before Break transformed]], Super Buu vs the non-saiyans, Beerus vs everyone who wasn't [[spoiler: Gohan]].
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* CurbStompBattle: Vegeta vs. Ginyu and Guldo, Gohan vs. [[spoiler: Broly]], Full Power Perfect Cell vs the Z Fighters [[spoiler: before Break transformed]], Super Buu vs the non-saiyans, non-Saiyans, Beerus vs everyone who wasn't [[spoiler: Gohan]].Gohan]], [[spoiler: The Sorcerer vs Kronos Shenron]], and [[spoiler: Raditz vs Entropy]].
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** [[spoiler: Due to the events of the story, Piccolo and Vegeta are never reformed, Piccolo's personality is suppressed when Kami/Piccolo fuse with Nail, and Vegeta eventually dies in battle against Dr Raichi. As a result, Trunks is not a half-sayian, but rather the son of Bulma and Zarbon]]
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** [[spoiler: Due to the events of the story, Piccolo and Vegeta are never reformed, Piccolo's personality is suppressed when Kami/Piccolo fuse with Nail, and Vegeta eventually dies in battle against Dr Raichi. As a result, Trunks is not a half-sayian, half-Saiyan, but rather the son of Bulma and Zarbon]]Zarbon.]]
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** [[spoiler:This gets taken UpToEleven in Even Further Beyond, where all the villains and new supporting characters are OC's except Ozotto.Ozotto (who gets a serious makeover himself). This includes all the 15-20 or so Shadow Dragons, the twelve Hakaishin besides Bills, Entropy and his forces, Samsara, Void and his Majins. Yeesh.]]
* SmugSnake: [[spoiler: Glacius Shenron.]]
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** Android Eighteen in the Buu Arc. In canon, she's a housewife who pretty much does nothing against Buu. In BTtL, she gets remade into a Super Android and though she's not quite as strong as a Super Saiyan 3, she's still one of the Z Fighters' best and gets some good hits in against Super Buu.
** As well as pretty much most of the human characters.But especially Tien.Tien in particular is the only character who knows the Spirit Bomb. He deals the deciding blow against [[spoiler: Alpha Shenron]] with a Universal Spirit Bomb, and he even [[spoiler: manages to unlock that power on his own and get an Infinity Core, making him useful even at the very end of the series.]]
** As well as pretty much most of the human characters.
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* TheUnfought: Though the Z Fighters do briefly fight Frieza in his first and second forms, Frieza is literally torn from the battle by Cooler. [[spoiler:Raditz and Vegeta do later fight Meta Metal Frieza however]].
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* ShoutOut: As the author is a fan of ''WebVideo/DragonBallZAbridged'', there's plenty of references to the series throughout the story.
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* HeelFaceTurn: Raditz, [[spoiler:Zarbon,]] [[spoiler:Kuriza]] and [[spoiler:Dr.Myuu]]. Also, [[spoiler: the remaining Shadow Dragons and Void's Majins, in the end.]]
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* ForWantOfANail: The entire story began because Goku dodged one attack from Piccolo he didn't dodge in canon.
** [[spoiler: Due to the events of the story, Piccolo and Vegeta are never reformed, Piccolo's personality is suppressed when Kami/Piccolo fuse with Nail, and Vegeta eventually dies in battle against Dr Raichi. As a result, Trunks is not a half-sayian, but rather the son of Bulma and Zarbon]]
* HeelFaceTurn: Raditz, [[spoiler:Zarbon,]] [[spoiler:Kuriza]] and [[spoiler:Dr. Myuu]]. Also, [[spoiler: the remaining Shadow Dragons and Void's Majins, in the end.]]
** [[spoiler: Due to the events of the story, Piccolo and Vegeta are never reformed, Piccolo's personality is suppressed when Kami/Piccolo fuse with Nail, and Vegeta eventually dies in battle against Dr Raichi. As a result, Trunks is not a half-sayian, but rather the son of Bulma and Zarbon]]
* HeelFaceTurn: Raditz, [[spoiler:Zarbon,]] [[spoiler:Kuriza]] and [[spoiler:Dr. Myuu]]. Also, [[spoiler: the remaining Shadow Dragons and Void's Majins, in the end.]]
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** [[spoiler: Due to the events of the story, Piccolo and Vegeta are never reformed, Piccolo's personality is suppressed when Kami/Piccolo fuse with Nail, and Vegeta eventually dies in battle against Dr Raichi. As a result, Trunks is not a half-sayian, but rather the son of Bulma and Zarbon]]
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** [[spoiler:This gets taken UpToEleven in Even Further Beyond, where all the villains and new supporting characters are OC's except Ozotto. This includes all the 15-20 or so Shadow Dragons, the twelve Hakaishin besides Bills, Entropy and his forces, Samsara, Void and his Majins. Yeesh.]]
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* AbsurdlySharpBlade: Raditz's Katchin Sword and Tapion's Blade
* ADayInTheLimelight: Tien and Krillin have a couple chapters that focus on them
** Gohan, Videl, and [[spoiler: Kuriza]] have a miniarc in the Countdown Saga
* ADayInTheLimelight: Tien and Krillin have a couple chapters that focus on them
** Gohan, Videl, and [[spoiler: Kuriza]] have a miniarc in the Countdown Saga
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* AbsurdlySharpBlade: Raditz's Katchin Sword and Tapion's Blade
Blade.
* ADayInTheLimelight: Tien and Krillin have a couple chapters that focus onthem
them near the end of the Countdown Saga.
** Gohan, Videl, and [[spoiler: Kuriza]] have a miniarc in the CountdownSagaSaga.
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* ActionMom: Though not a fighter persay, Chi-Chi is shown to have trained and learned how to fly in the Buu Saga and transfers her energy to Gohan along with the rest of her family during the [[spoiler: God of Destruction]] Saga. [[spoiler: Also, Launch.]]
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* ActionMom: Though not a fighter persay, per se, Chi-Chi is shown to have trained and learned how to fly in the Buu Saga and transfers her energy to Gohan along with the rest of her family during the [[spoiler: God of Destruction]] Saga. [[spoiler: Also, Launch.]]
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* CallingTheOldManOut: During the events of the Janemba arc, [[spoiler: Kuriza has the opportunity to do this with his father Frieza and his grandfather Cold over their arrogance and cruelty]]
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* CallingTheOldManOut: During the events of the Janemba Fusion Reborn arc, [[spoiler: Kuriza has the opportunity to do this with his father Frieza and his grandfather Cold over their arrogance and cruelty]]
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* CurbStompBattle: Vegeta vs. Ginyu and Guldo, Gohan vs. [[spoiler: Broly]]. SUper Buu vs the non-saiyans, Beerus vs everyone who wasn't [[spoiler: Gohan]].
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* CurbStompBattle: Vegeta vs. Ginyu and Guldo, Gohan vs. [[spoiler: Broly]]. SUper Broly]], Full Power Perfect Cell vs the Z Fighters [[spoiler: before Break transformed]], Super Buu vs the non-saiyans, Beerus vs everyone who wasn't [[spoiler: Gohan]].
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* DoorStopper: Clocking at over 100 chapters and 600,000 words.
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* DoorStopper: Clocking at over 100 150 chapters and 600,000 words.around 850,000 words, making it one of the longest DBZ stories ever.
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* HeelFaceTurn: Raditz, [[spoiler:Zarbon,]] [[spoiler:Kuriza]] and [[spoiler:Dr.Myuu]]. Also, [[spoiler: The the remaining Shadow Dragons and Void's Majins, in the end.]]
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** [[spoiler:Raditz sacrifices himself in the final battle with Cell to save Goku]].
** [[spoiler:Vegeta uses his life energy for the Final Flash that defeats Myuu!Broly.]]
** [[spoiler:Vegeta uses his life energy for the Final Flash that defeats Myuu!Broly.]]
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** [[spoiler:Raditz sacrifices himself in the final battle with Cell to save Goku]].
Goku, after he's said he doesn't want to be wished back]].
** [[spoiler:Vegeta uses his life energy for the Final Flash that defeatsMyuu!Broly.Myuu-Broly.]]
** [[spoiler:Janemba sacrificed himself to block an attack meant for the Silent. Keep in mind Janemba killed everyone in the Silent's universe and the Silent had wanted to kill him for millennia ever since.]]
** [[spoiler:Vegeta uses his life energy for the Final Flash that defeats
** [[spoiler:Janemba sacrificed himself to block an attack meant for the Silent. Keep in mind Janemba killed everyone in the Silent's universe and the Silent had wanted to kill him for millennia ever since.]]
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* ForWantOfANail: [[spoiler: Due to the events of the story, Piccolo and Vegeta are never reformed, Piccolo's personality is suppressed when Kami/Piccolo fuse with Nail, and Vegeta eventually dies in battle against Dr Raichi. As a result, Trunks is not a half-sayian, but rather the son of Bulma and Zarbon]]
* InSpiteOfANail: Despite the major changes, the heroes still go to Namek, the Androids are still created and Cell still becomes perfect.
* InSpiteOfANail: Despite the major changes, the heroes still go to Namek, the Androids are still created and Cell still becomes perfect.
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* ForWantOfANail: The entire story began because Goku dodged one attack from Piccolo he didn't dodge in canon.
** [[spoiler: Due to the events of the story, Piccolo and Vegeta are never reformed, Piccolo's personality is suppressed when Kami/Piccolo fuse with Nail, and Vegeta eventually dies in battle against Dr Raichi. As a result, Trunks is not a half-sayian, but rather the son of Bulma and Zarbon]]
* InSpiteOfANail: Despite the major changes, the story still loosely follows the canon series. The heroes still go to Namek, the Androids are stillcreated and created, Cell still becomes perfect.perfect, Majin Buu is still released, etc. The Cell Arc in particular is very similar to its canon counterpart [[spoiler:until Gohan becomes a Super Saiyan 2 against Broly.]]
** [[spoiler: Due to the events of the story, Piccolo and Vegeta are never reformed, Piccolo's personality is suppressed when Kami/Piccolo fuse with Nail, and Vegeta eventually dies in battle against Dr Raichi. As a result, Trunks is not a half-sayian, but rather the son of Bulma and Zarbon]]
* InSpiteOfANail: Despite the major changes, the story still loosely follows the canon series. The heroes still go to Namek, the Androids are still
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* OriginalCharacter: [[spoiler:Break, the daughter of Raditz and Launch, who is this universe's equivalent of Future Trunks. Trunks still exists, but he is now the son of Bulma and Zarbon. All the Shadow Dragons, other universe's Gods and the forces of Entropy and Void are original creations of the author as well, with the exception of Ozotto.]]
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* OriginalCharacter: [[spoiler:Break, the daughter of Raditz and Launch, who is this universe's equivalent of Future Trunks. Trunks still exists, but he is now the son of Bulma and Zarbon. All ]]
[[spoiler:This gets taken UpToEleven in Even Further Beyond, where all the villains and new supporting characters are OC's except Ozotto. This includes all the 15-20 or so Shadow Dragons,other universe's Gods and the forces of twelve Hakaishin besides Bills, Entropy and his forces, Samsara, Void are original creations of the author as well, with the exception of Ozotto.and his Majins. Yeesh.]]
[[spoiler:This gets taken UpToEleven in Even Further Beyond, where all the villains and new supporting characters are OC's except Ozotto. This includes all the 15-20 or so Shadow Dragons,
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** The two sides of Launch's personality merge.
* SuperMode: [[spoiler:Raditz is the first to obtain Super Saiyan, followed shortly by Vegeta then Goku. Void absorbs the Majin's elements to become even more powerful, though this doesn't last very long.]].
* SuperMode: [[spoiler:Raditz is the first to obtain Super Saiyan, followed shortly by Vegeta then Goku. Void absorbs the Majin's elements to become even more powerful, though this doesn't last very long.]].
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** The two sides of Launch's personality merge.
merge after [[spoiler:Raditz dies against Cell.]]
* SuperMode: [[spoiler:Raditz is the first to obtain Super Saiyan, followed shortly by Vegeta then Goku. Void ]]
**[[spoiler:Void absorbs the Majin's elements to become even more powerful, though this doesn't last very long.]].
* SuperMode: [[spoiler:Raditz is the first to obtain Super Saiyan, followed shortly by Vegeta then Goku.
**[[spoiler:Void absorbs the Majin's elements to become even more powerful, though this doesn't last very long.]].
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** Launch, who trains herself to about the same level as the other earthlings and learns the Kaioken.
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** Launch, who trains herself to about into the same level as the other earthlings and strongest human, learns the Kaioken.Kaio-Ken and takes it up to a whole new level.
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** [[spoiler:Pan goes from being TheScrappy to being a major character in the last arc of the story, and she fights the final battle of the series against Void.]]
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** [[spoiler:Pan goes from being TheScrappy to being a major character in the last arc of the story, Even Further Beyond, and she fights the final battle of the series against Void.]]
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** [[spoiler: It didn't happen on-screen, but the Scholar is this even more than the other Hakaishin. When Janemba sent an avatar to her universe, she watched it kill her people until it ran out of energy and died, by which time half her universe was dead. She didn't care, and has never mentioned it to this day.]]
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** [[spoiler: It didn't happen on-screen, but the Scholar is this even more than the other Hakaishin. When Janemba sent an avatar to her universe, she watched it kill her people until it ran out of energy and died, by which time half her universe was dead. She didn't care, and has never mentioned it on-screen to this day.]]
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* JerkassGods: Bills, [[spoiler: the other Hakaishin, and Lord Entropy's army]]. Unlike in canon, Bills [[spoiler: and all the other Hakaishin]] are not only called out on this, but they get a wake-up call when the [[spoiler: Shadow Dragons make them victims for the first time in their lives.]]
** [[spoiler: It didn't happen on-screen, but the Scholar is this even more than the other Hakaishin. When Janemba sent an avatar to her universe, she watched it kill her people until it ran out of energy and died, by which time half her universe was dead. She didn't care, and has never mentioned it to this day.]]
** [[spoiler: It didn't happen on-screen, but the Scholar is this even more than the other Hakaishin. When Janemba sent an avatar to her universe, she watched it kill her people until it ran out of energy and died, by which time half her universe was dead. She didn't care, and has never mentioned it to this day.]]
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* InterspeciesRomance: [[spoiler: Launch and Raditz. Alpha Shenron and the Dreamer]]
** [[spoiler: Bulma and Zarbon]]
** [[spoiler: Bulma and Zarbon]]
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* InterspeciesRomance: [[spoiler: Launch and Raditz. Alpha Shenron and the Dreamer]]
Dreamer (which gets extra points for being lesbian too).]]
** [[spoiler: Bulma andZarbon]]Zarbon.]]
** [[spoiler: Bulma and
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* OriginalCharacter: [[spoiler:Break, the daughter of Raditz and Launch, who is this universe's equivalent of Future Trunks. Trunks still exists, but he is now the son of Bulma and Zarbon. All the Shadow Dragons, other universe's Gods and the forces of Entropy and Void are original creations of the author as well.(With the exception of Ozotto)]]
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* OriginalCharacter: [[spoiler:Break, the daughter of Raditz and Launch, who is this universe's equivalent of Future Trunks. Trunks still exists, but he is now the son of Bulma and Zarbon. All the Shadow Dragons, other universe's Gods and the forces of Entropy and Void are original creations of the author as well.(With well, with the exception of Ozotto)]]Ozotto.]]
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* SuperMode: [[spoiler:Raditz is the first to obtain Super Saiyan, followed shortly by Vegeta then Goku. Void absorbs the Majin's elements to become even more powerful]].
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* SuperMode: [[spoiler:Raditz is the first to obtain Super Saiyan, followed shortly by Vegeta then Goku. Void absorbs the Majin's elements to become even more powerful]].powerful, though this doesn't last very long.]].
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* TookALevelInBadass: Launch, who trains herself to about the same level as the other earthlings and learns the Kaioken.
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* TookALevelInBadass: Raditz is the obvious one, since he went from the weakest villain in Z to being able to [[spoiler:beat Hakaishin like nothing.]]
** Launch, who trains herself to about the same level as the other earthlings and learns the Kaioken.
** Launch, who trains herself to about the same level as the other earthlings and learns the Kaioken.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Raditz certainly TookALevelInBadass.]]Anyone who has ever wanted to see just what would happen if Raditz became a major DBZ character is in for a treat with ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8400080/1/Break-Through-the-Limit Break Through The Limit]]'', a DragonBall fanfiction written by Captain Space.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Raditz certainly TookALevelInBadass.]]Anyone ]]
Anyone who has ever wanted to see just what would happen if Raditz became a major DBZ character is in for a treat with ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8400080/1/Break-Through-the-Limit Break Through The Limit]]'', aDragonBall ''Manga/DragonBall'' fanfiction written by Captain Space.
Anyone who has ever wanted to see just what would happen if Raditz became a major DBZ character is in for a treat with ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8400080/1/Break-Through-the-Limit Break Through The Limit]]'', a
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* WorfHadTheFlu: [[spoiler:Gohan, who had already achieved Super Saiyan 2 in the fight with Broly, contracts Goku's heart disease right before the final battle with Cell and is out of commission for the entire fight]].
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* WorfHadTheFlu: [[spoiler:Gohan, who had already achieved Super Saiyan 2 in the fight with Broly, contracts Goku's heart disease right before the final battle with Cell and is out of commission for the entire fight]].fight]].
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* TheAtoner: One of the reasons Raditz doesn't wish to be revived.
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* TheAtoner: One of the reasons Raditz doesn't wish to be revived. [[spoiler: Alpha Shenron's reason for joining the heroes.]]
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* CurbStompBattle: Vegeta vs. Ginyu and Guldo, Gohan vs. [[spoiler: Broly]].
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* CurbStompBattle: Vegeta vs. Ginyu and Guldo, Gohan vs. [[spoiler: Broly]]. SUper Buu vs the non-saiyans, Beerus vs everyone who wasn't [[spoiler: Gohan]].
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* DoorStopper: Clocking at over 100 chapters and 600,000 words, and it is still continuing.
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* DoorStopper: Clocking at over 100 chapters and 600,000 words, and it is still continuing.words.
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* HeelFaceTurn: Raditz, [[spoiler:Zarbon,]] [[spoiler:Kuriza]] and [[spoiler:Dr.Myuu]].
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* HeelFaceTurn: Raditz, [[spoiler:Zarbon,]] [[spoiler:Kuriza]] and [[spoiler:Dr.Myuu]]. Also, [[spoiler: The Shadow Dragons and Majins, in the end.]]
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* InterspeciesRomance: [[spoiler: Launch and Raditz.]]
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* InterspeciesRomance: [[spoiler: Launch and Raditz.]] Alpha Shenron and the Dreamer]]
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* OriginalCharacter: [[spoiler:Break, the daughter of Raditz and Launch, who is this universe's equivalent of Future Trunks. Trunks still exists, but he is now the son of Bulma and Zarbon.]]
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* OriginalCharacter: [[spoiler:Break, the daughter of Raditz and Launch, who is this universe's equivalent of Future Trunks. Trunks still exists, but he is now the son of Bulma and Zarbon.]] All the Shadow Dragons, other universe's Gods and the forces of Entropy and Void are original creations of the author as well.(With the exception of Ozotto)]]
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* SuperMode: [[spoiler:Raditz is the first to obtain Super Saiyan, followed shortly by Vegeta then Goku]].
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* SuperMode: [[spoiler:Raditz is the first to obtain Super Saiyan, followed shortly by Vegeta then Goku]].Goku. Void absorbs the Majin's elements to become even more powerful]].
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** As well as pretty much most of the human characters.
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** As well as pretty much most of the human characters. But especially Tien.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Raditz certainly TookALevelInBadass.]]Anyone who has ever wanted to see just what would happen if Raditz became a major DBZ character is in for a treat with ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8400080/1/Break-Through-the-Limit# Break Through The Limit]]'', a DragonBall fanfiction written by Captain Space.
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[[caption-width-right:350:Raditz certainly TookALevelInBadass.]]Anyone who has ever wanted to see just what would happen if Raditz became a major DBZ character is in for a treat with ''[[http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8400080/1/Break-Through-the-Limit# net/s/8400080/1/Break-Through-the-Limit Break Through The Limit]]'', a DragonBall fanfiction written by Captain Space.