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* LateArrivalSpoiler: Later chapters of AVATS reveal that [[spoiler:Ebony has been the new Changeling queen since shortly after [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E26ACanterlotWeddingPart2 the invasion of Canterlot]], and that [[NamesTheSame her Changeling name is Chrysalis as well]]]]. The first chapter of ASATV, from Ebony's point of view, does not attempt to keep it a secret.
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* LateArrivalSpoiler: Later chapters of AVATS reveal that [[spoiler:Ebony has been the new Changeling queen since shortly after [[Recap/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagicS2E26ACanterlotWeddingPart2 the invasion of Canterlot]], and that [[NamesTheSame her Changeling name is Chrysalis as well]]]].well]]. The first chapter of ASATV, from Ebony's point of view, does not attempt to keep it a secret.
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** [[spoiler:Jess and Ebony start naming the changelings. For a changeling to have a name given to them is a great honor: Ebony once was named by [[NamesTheSame Queen Chrysalis with… Chrysalis]]. It should be noted that Jessica is a bit kinder to what she names them. Ebony… not so much.]]
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** [[spoiler:Jess and Ebony start naming the changelings. For a changeling to have a name given to them is a great honor: Ebony once was named by [[NamesTheSame Queen Chrysalis with… Chrysalis]].Chrysalis. It should be noted that Jessica is a bit kinder to what she names them. Ebony… not so much.]]
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''A Voice Among the Strangers'' is a ''WesternAnimation/MyLittlePonyFriendshipIsMagic'' FanFic by Tystarr and can be found [[http://www.fimfiction.net/story/95461/a-voice-among-the-strangers here]].
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* AdaptationExpansion: ''A Stranger Among the Voices'' - due to the multiple POV characters and increased first-hand dialogue, the story has taken over 118,000 words to cover the same time frame of the first two chapters of the original fic (just over 28,000 words). And then there's the 10,000 word first chapter, entirely set before Jessica arrived in Equestria.
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* AdaptationExpansion: ''A Stranger Among the Voices'' - -- due to the multiple POV characters and increased first-hand dialogue, the story has taken over 118,000 words to cover the same time frame of the first two chapters of the original fic (just over 28,000 words). And then there's the 10,000 word first chapter, entirely set before Jessica arrived in Equestria.
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* BrutalHonesty: Made Manifest, a Canterlot noble who is on good terms with the Princesses for precisely this reason - he tells Luna that their plan to bring Jessica to the castle in hopes of provoking the Changelings is "a bloody stupid idea," but notes that he would have said the same about Celestia's plan for Nightmare Moon if he'd been aware of it.
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* BrutalHonesty: Made Manifest, a Canterlot noble who is on good terms with the Princesses for precisely this reason - -- he tells Luna that their plan to bring Jessica to the castle in hopes of provoking the Changelings is "a bloody stupid idea," but notes that he would have said the same about Celestia's plan for Nightmare Moon if he'd been aware of it.
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* EnmityWithAnObject: A running gag, with Jessica swearing vengeance against various objects - a tree that she bashed her shoulder into, stones on the path that she stepped on in bare feet, a staircase (again, due to her bare feet), and her own brain, after getting a headache from her attempts to rationalise the world around her.
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* EnmityWithAnObject: A running gag, with Jessica swearing vengeance against various objects - -- a tree that she bashed her shoulder into, stones on the path that she stepped on in bare feet, a staircase (again, due to her bare feet), and her own brain, after getting a headache from her attempts to rationalise the world around her.
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* GoThroughMe: When Flim and Flam, along with a mob of ponies, attempt to recapture Jessica in Baltimare, Rainbow Dash and Ebony - whose relationship until that point had been at best adversarial, with Rainbow not trusting Jessica either - both place themselves between them and her.
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* GoThroughMe: When Flim and Flam, along with a mob of ponies, attempt to recapture Jessica in Baltimare, Rainbow Dash and Ebony - -- whose relationship until that point had been at best adversarial, with Rainbow not trusting Jessica either - -- both place themselves between them and her.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero[=/=]UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: Twilight and the other Elements sent the chimera back into the Everfree Forest, and if their timing had been later Dinky might never have encountered it. On the other hand, this might also have kept Jessica from stumbling into Ponyville, and the consequences would have in all probability been worse for her.
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* NiceJobBreakingItHero[=/=]UnwittingInstigatorOfDoom: NiceJobBreakingItHero: Twilight and the other Elements sent the chimera back into the Everfree Forest, and if their timing had been later Dinky might never have encountered it. On the other hand, this might also have kept Jessica from stumbling into Ponyville, and the consequences would have in all probability been worse for her.
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** Apparently there was an incident with "…Luna, Celestia’s pet phoenix Philomena, and several pairs of newly charred socks…"
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** Apparently there was an incident with "…Luna, "...Luna, Celestia’s pet phoenix Philomena, and several pairs of newly charred socks…"socks..."
* OwlsAskWho: There's an off-screen incident between Spike and Owlowicious, with Spike only realizing later that he fell into the same trap as always. This one is noteworthy because it happens in a story where the Equestrian language explicitly sounds nothing like English.
-->'''Twilight:''' We would have been here sooner but Owlowiscious and Spike got into an argument over who was cleaning up later today.\\
'''Spike:''' Hey, it's not my fault he kept asking who was meant to... be... [[LateToThePunchline doing]]--... [[{{Facepalm}} argh]].
-->'''Twilight:''' We would have been here sooner but Owlowiscious and Spike got into an argument over who was cleaning up later today.\\
'''Spike:''' Hey, it's not my fault he kept asking who was meant to... be... [[LateToThePunchline doing]]--... [[{{Facepalm}} argh]].
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* SpoilerTitle: ''Homecoming''. [[spoiler: Subverted - it's a homecoming for Starswirl the Bearded, whose spirit had been trapped within the book Jessica found for centuries, as part of a desperate plan to get back home from Earth.]]
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* SpoilerTitle: ''Homecoming''. [[spoiler: Subverted - -- it's a homecoming for Starswirl the Bearded, whose spirit had been trapped within the book Jessica found for centuries, as part of a desperate plan to get back home from Earth.]]
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* HowDoIUsedTense: As befits someone learning an entirely new language from the ground floor, Jessica runs into this issue while learning the ponies' language. [[spoiler:Luna and Twilight also have this issue when learning English.]]
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* LanguageBarrier: The language gulf between human and ponies is a main driver of the story. Only after half-a-dozen chapters does Jessica learn more than a handful of words in the pony language.
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* LanguageBarrier: The language gulf between human and ponies is a main driver drive of the story. Only after half-a-dozen chapters does Jessica learn more than a handful of words in the pony language.
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* [[WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes Why Did It Have To Be Unicorns?]]: Jessica's reaction to Doctor Carehoof, a unicorn stallion like her captors the Flim Flam brothers. Dinky doesn't {{trigger}} the same reaction from her, though, and she manages to get over it thanks to interaction with Twilight over the course of the chapter.
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* [[WhyDidItHaveToBeSnakes Why Did It Have To Be Unicorns?]]: Jessica's reaction to Doctor Carehoof, a unicorn stallion like her captors the Flim Flam brothers. Dinky doesn't {{trigger}} trigger the same reaction from her, though, and she manages to get over it thanks to interaction with Twilight over the course of the chapter.
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* AliensSpeakingEnglish: Averted; the language gulf between human and ponies is a main driver of the story. Only after half-a-dozen chapters does Jessica learn more than a handful of words in the pony language.
** Luna has been learning English through Jessica's dreams, and Jessica is teaching Twilight as of "Preparations". In addition, [[spoiler: Starswirl became fluent in English during his time on Earth.]]
** [[spoiler:Jessica is finally able to understand and speak Equestrian passably in the last chapter. It's also noted that Minder and Bastion have started to pick up a few words of her language.]]
** Luna has been learning English through Jessica's dreams, and Jessica is teaching Twilight as of "Preparations". In addition, [[spoiler: Starswirl became fluent in English during his time on Earth.]]
** [[spoiler:Jessica is finally able to understand and speak Equestrian passably in the last chapter. It's also noted that Minder and Bastion have started to pick up a few words of her language.]]
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* LanguageBarrierLanguageBarrier: The language gulf between human and ponies is a main driver of the story. Only after half-a-dozen chapters does Jessica learn more than a handful of words in the pony language.
** Luna has been learning English through Jessica's dreams, and Jessica is teaching Twilight as of "Preparations". In addition, [[spoiler: Starswirl became fluent in English during his time on Earth.]]
** [[spoiler:Jessica is finally able to understand and speak Equestrian passably in the last chapter. It's also noted that Minder and Bastion have started to pick up a few words of her language.]]
** Luna has been learning English through Jessica's dreams, and Jessica is teaching Twilight as of "Preparations". In addition, [[spoiler: Starswirl became fluent in English during his time on Earth.]]
** [[spoiler:Jessica is finally able to understand and speak Equestrian passably in the last chapter. It's also noted that Minder and Bastion have started to pick up a few words of her language.]]
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* AlwaysABiggerFish: After Jessica rescues Dinky from a chimera, Ebony helps by leading the chimera away and into the path of the hydra she almost ran into earlier.
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* BreakTheCutie: Jessica's first ponies she meets are the Flim Flam brothers, who are running a monster horror show. They added her to the monster roster, treating her poorly. This left her with a fear of unicorns and their magic, and a general distrust of ponies.
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* BreakTheCutie: Jessica's The first ponies she Jessica meets are the Flim Flam brothers, who are running a monster horror show. They added her to the monster roster, treating her poorly. This left her with a fear of unicorns and their magic, and a general distrust of ponies.