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A soldier of Landfall who got busted down to prison guard duty after she hesitated when ordered to drop bombs on civilians. Mother of Hazel, wife of Marko. Tends to be more impulsive and outgoing than her husband. Alana was the one who first read ''A Nighttime Smoke'' by D. Oswald Heist, which put the idea that people from Landfall and Wreath could co-exist in her head.
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A soldier of Landfall who got busted down to prison guard duty after she hesitated when ordered to drop bombs on civilians. Mother of Hazel, Hazel; wife of Marko. Tends to be more impulsive and outgoing than her husband. Alana was the one who first read ''A Nighttime Smoke'' by D. Oswald Heist, which put the idea that people from Landfall and Wreath could co-exist in her head.
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* RetiredMonster: These days he seems like a fun, laid back step-father, but once he was "La Buĉisto." We never see him do anything evil, never even see him in combat in fact, but there are implications he was a CompleteMonster.
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* RetiredMonster: These days he seems like a fun, laid back step-father, but once he was "La Buĉisto." We never see him do anything evil, never even see him in combat in fact, but there are implications he was a CompleteMonster.fact.
