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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: From what we know of him, Sarengo fits this bill more than any other villain in the series. He took on a [[OurDragonsAreDifferent fully-grown adder]], alone and unarmed, and ended in a ''MutualKill''.
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* EvilVirtues: [[VillainousValour Valor]]. Most villains in Redwall would turn tail and run upon ''seeing'' an adder, never mind being disarmed by one. Sarengo? ''[[{{Determinator}} He kept fighting]]'', even while dying from her venom.
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* EvilVirtues: [[VillainousValour Valor]].Valor]] and Determination. Most villains in Redwall would turn tail and run upon ''seeing'' an adder, never mind being disarmed by one. Sarengo? ''[[{{Determinator}} He kept fighting]]'', even while dying from her venom.
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* {{Rank Scales With Asskicking}}: From what we know of him, Sarengo fits this bill more than any other villain in the series. He took on a [[OurDragonsAreDifferent fully-grown adder]], alone and unarmed, and ended in a ''MutualKill''.
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* CannibalClan: Pretty much. They're a family of predators who devour other sentient beings for both nutrition and amusement, live in a concealed lair off the beaten path, and follow in the footsteps of their equally predatory mother.
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* CannibalClan: Pretty much. They're a family of predators who devour other sentient sapient beings for both nutrition and amusement, live in a concealed lair off the beaten path, and follow in the footsteps of their equally predatory mother.
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* HeroKiller: The most dangerous antagonists in the book, bar none. They kill a robber stoat, a crow, Ovus and Bluddbeak, Plugg Firetail, one of Princess Kurda's Ratguards, ''and'' Shogg, before dying, the latter two while fighting Kurda and Triss' entire forces.
* ImAHumanitarian: They eat other sentient beings.
* ImAHumanitarian: They eat other sentient beings.
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* HeroKiller: The most dangerous antagonists in the book, bar none. They kill a robber stoat, a crow, Ovus and Ovus, Bluddbeak, Plugg Firetail, one of Princess Kurda's Ratguards, ''and'' Shogg, before dying, the latter two while fighting Kurda and Triss' entire forces.
* ImAHumanitarian: They eat othersentient sapient beings.
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* TerribleTrio: As a set of unnaturally conjoined triplets they're this by default, with Zassaliss as TheLeader (and contender for BigBad of the novel) while Harssacss and Sesstra act as his lieutenants.
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* TerribleTrio: As a set of unnaturally conjoined triplets triplets, they're this by default, with Zassaliss as TheLeader (and contender for BigBad of the novel) while Harssacss and Sesstra act as his lieutenants.
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* VillainousFriendship: While he originally planned to kill Bladd along with Kurda, he starts developing a liking for the Prince, attempting to teach him to be a real Freebooter. When Bladd is killed Plugg seems sorry about it and tells Kurda that her brother had more guts than she'll ever possess.
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* VillainousFriendship: While he originally planned to kill Bladd along with Kurda, he starts developing a liking for the Prince, attempting to teach him to be a real Freebooter. When Bladd is killed killed, Plugg seems sorry about it and tells Kurda that her brother had more guts than she'll ever possess.
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* LightningCanDoAnything: Like fry him to a crisp.
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* AnAxeToGrind: Ends up taking Plugg Firetail's battleaxe for his own after [[spoiler:the original owner is eaten by the adders.]]
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* AnAxeToGrind: Favours the battleaxe.
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* BigScrewedUpFamily: Agarnu's father was a conquering warlord, he himself is a local tinpot dictator, his daughter is a sadist with an inflated sense of her own ability, and his son's a half-mad imbecile. What's more, Agarnu left his father, Sarengo, to die, and hates his daughter, Kurda. Kurda hates Agarnu equally, and treats her brother, Bladd, like crap. Riftun assumes that Bladd is planning to betray Kurda, but we never get to find out if this is true or not.
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* RoyallyScrewedUp: Agarnu's father was a conquering warlord, he himself is a local tinpot dictator, his daughter is a sadist with an inflated sense of her own ability, and his son's a half-mad imbecile. What's more, Agarnu left his father, Sarengo, to die, and hates his daughter, Kurda. Kurda hates Agarnu equally, and treats her brother, Bladd, like crap. Riftun assumes that Bladd is planning to betray Kurda, but we never get to find out if this is true or not.
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* PureIsNotGood: They consider themselves "pure" because of their shared albinism, but they are still cruel tyrants.
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* SuperDrowningSkills: He doesn't know how to swim [[spoiler: and ends up dying because of it. Being a FatBastard didn't help keep him afloat either.]]
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* SuperDrowningSkills: He doesn't know how to swim [[spoiler: and [[spoiler:and ends up dying because of it. Being a FatBastard didn't help keep him afloat either.]]
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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: From what we know of him, Sarengo fits this bill more than any other villain in the series. He took on a [[OurDragonsAreDifferent fully-grown female adder]], alone and unarmed, and ended in a ''MutualKill''.
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* AuthorityEqualsAsskicking: From what we know of him, Sarengo fits this bill more than any other villain in the series. He took on a [[OurDragonsAreDifferent fully-grown female adder]], alone and unarmed, and ended in a ''MutualKill''.
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* EpicFlail: His weapon of choice. Not that he ended up using it. [[DyingMomentOfAwesome Or needing it.]]
* EvilVirtues: [[VillainousValour Valor.]] Most villains in Redwall would turn tail and run upon ''seeing'' an adder, never mind being disarmed by one. Sarengo? ''[[{{Determinator}} He kept fighting,]]'' even while dying from her venom.
* GeniusBruiser: He didn't just LeeroyJenkins his way into Berussca's lair, oh no. He scouted it out first, making a plan that would have worked [[SpannerInTheWorks if not for]] [[DirtyCoward his son Agarnu.]]
* MutualKill: With Berussca, an adder. Yes, [[AuthorityEqualsAsskicking an ADDER.]]
* EvilVirtues: [[VillainousValour Valor.]] Most villains in Redwall would turn tail and run upon ''seeing'' an adder, never mind being disarmed by one. Sarengo? ''[[{{Determinator}} He kept fighting,]]'' even while dying from her venom.
* GeniusBruiser: He didn't just LeeroyJenkins his way into Berussca's lair, oh no. He scouted it out first, making a plan that would have worked [[SpannerInTheWorks if not for]] [[DirtyCoward his son Agarnu.]]
* MutualKill: With Berussca, an adder. Yes, [[AuthorityEqualsAsskicking an ADDER.]]
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* EpicFlail: His weapon of choice. Not that he ended up using it. [[DyingMomentOfAwesome Or needing it.]]
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* EvilVirtues: [[VillainousValourValor.]] Valor]]. Most villains in Redwall would turn tail and run upon ''seeing'' an adder, never mind being disarmed by one. Sarengo? ''[[{{Determinator}} He kept fighting,]]'' fighting]]'', even while dying from her venom.
* GeniusBruiser: He didn't just LeeroyJenkins his way into Berussca's lair, oh no. He scouted it out first, making a plan that would have worked [[SpannerInTheWorks if not for]] [[DirtyCoward his sonAgarnu.]]
Agarnu]].
* MutualKill: With Berussca, an adder. Yes, [[AuthorityEqualsAsskicking anADDER.]]ADDER]].
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* GeniusBruiser: He didn't just LeeroyJenkins his way into Berussca's lair, oh no. He scouted it out first, making a plan that would have worked [[SpannerInTheWorks if not for]] [[DirtyCoward his son
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* KingpinInHisGym: Like the trope's namesake, she loves to practice with her saber. [[spoiler:Eventually deconstructed. Kurda's never been in a real swordfight in her life, and when they start fighting for real, Triss hands Kurda her ass.]]
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* KingpinInHisGym: Like the trope's namesake, she loves to practice with her saber. [[spoiler:Eventually [[spoiler:This is eventually deconstructed. Kurda's never been in a real swordfight in her life, and when they start fighting for real, Triss hands Kurda her ass.]]
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* {{Sadist}}: The most openly sadistic member of her family, to the point where it disturbs her father and brother alike.
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* {{Sadist}}: The most openly sadistic member of her family, to the point where [[EvenEvilHasStandards it disturbs her father and brother alike.alike]].
* TheStarscream: She plans to eventually overthrow her father and take charge.
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* KindheartedSimpleton: Bumbling, simple-minded, and prone to mis-hearing what others say... and he's a pretty nice guy, despite his profession.
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* VillainousPrincess: She is TheHeavy of the book, who leads the royal guard in an attempt to recapture the heroes, who are escaped slaves. Kurda's brother, Prince Bladd, accompanies her, but he is not nearly as cruel or ambitious as her. The BigBad is technically their father, King Agarnu, but Agarnu is so lazy and spineless that he has very little effect on the story.
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* AlbinosAreFreaks: Inverted. The Pure Ferrets are all albinos. In their eyes, this makes them "pure" and distinguishes them from other creatures, which they see as being below them. In other words, ''they're'' the ones on top who are persecuting other creatures. However, to the reader, they are obvious villains, making it easy for the reader to see them as "freaks."
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* AdiposeRex: He's the current king of Riftgard, and he's a FatBastard who never gets up off his throne.
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* TooImportantToWalk: Agarnu never leaves his throne, so his slaves have to carry it around for him. Exploited at the end when [[spoiler:he is powerless to stop his slaves from throwing him into the ocean, where he drowns]].
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* BigScrewedUpFamily: Most of them are shown to be very inconsiderate of each other's well being. Agarnu left his father, Sarengo, to die, and hates his daughter, Kurda. Kurda hates Agarnu equally, and treats her brother, Bladd, like crap. Riftun assumes that Bladd is planning to betray Kurda, but we never get to find out if this is true or not.
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* WickedWeasel: An albino ferret, and heir to the throne of a kingdom that runs on slavery.
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* {{Kaiserreich}}: Downplayed. The book is set in medieval Europe, without much regard to specific, real life nations, but the Pure Ferrets are still a royal family with German accents.
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* {{Kaiserreich}}: Downplayed. The book is set in medieval Europe, without much regard to specific, real life nations, but the Pure Ferrets are still a royal family with German accents. They're overall quite cruel and [[SmugSnake overly proud of themselves]], believing their shared albinism makes them "pure."
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A royal family of evil, albino ferrets with German accents. They rule the land od Riftgard, and are major antagonists in the book.
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A royal family of evil, albino ferrets with German accents. They rule the land od of Riftgard, and are major antagonists in the book.
* BigScrewedUpFamily: Most of them are shown to be very inconsiderate of each other's well being. Agarnu left his father, Sarengo, to die, and hates his daughter, Kurda. Kurda hates Agarnu equally, and treats her brother, Bladd, like crap. Riftun assumes that Bladd is planning to betray Kurda, but we never get to find out if this is true or not.
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