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** The theme for [[DownloadableContent Reckonin' at Gun Manor]] ([[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XYbBHcA4Lus "Ecto Perfecto"]]) is a remix of "Draw" that puts a new spin on it.
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** The theme for [[DownloadableContent Reckonin' at Gun Manor]] ([[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XYbBHcA4Lus "Ecto Perfecto"]]) is a remix of "Draw" that puts a new spin on it.
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* [[https://youtu.be/zjjh2PA38qQ Misbehave (In This Cave)]], theme of the Kurtzfit, mixes disco and banjo, it has to be heard to be believed.
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* [[https://youtu.be/zjjh2PA38qQ be/9hRL34r3ZJE Misbehave (In This Cave)]], theme of the Kurtzfit, mixes disco and banjo, it has to be heard to be believed.
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* The [[https://youtu.be/zjjh2PA38qQ "Kurtzfit" lounge theme]] mixes disco and banjo, it has to be heard to be believed.
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* The [[https://youtu.be/zjjh2PA38qQ "Kurtzfit" lounge theme]] Misbehave (In This Cave)]], theme of the Kurtzfit, mixes disco and banjo, it has to be heard to be believed.
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* The battle theme, [[https://youtu.be/dQPsrcike4k "Draw!"]] is an intense piece that makes the fights all the more hilarious. It also helps that the best parts of the theme, which are much more climactic and dramatic, are only seen further into the tune, [[DevelopersForesight meaning that you'll probably only hear them in harder fights]].
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* The battle theme, [[https://youtu.be/dQPsrcike4k "Draw!"]] is an intense piece that makes the fights all the more hilarious. It also helps that the best parts of the theme, which are much more climactic and dramatic, are only seen heard further into the tune, [[DevelopersForesight meaning that you'll probably only hear them in harder fights]].
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* The battle theme, [[https://youtu.be/dQPsrcike4k "Draw!"]] is an intense piece that makes the fights all the more hilarious. Not only that, the best parts of the theme, which are much more climactic and dramatic, [[DevelopersForesight are only seen further into the song, which means that you'll probably only hear them in harder fights]].
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* The battle theme, [[https://youtu.be/dQPsrcike4k "Draw!"]] is an intense piece that makes the fights all the more hilarious. Not only that, It also helps that the best parts of the theme, which are much more climactic and dramatic, [[DevelopersForesight are only seen further into the song, which means tune, [[DevelopersForesight meaning that you'll probably only hear them in harder fights]].
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* The battle theme, [[https://youtu.be/dQPsrcike4k "Draw!"]] is an intense piece that makes the fights all the more hilarious. Not only that, [[DevelopersForesight the best parts of the song, which are much more climactic and dramatic, are only seen in longer i.e. harder fights]].
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* The battle theme, [[https://youtu.be/dQPsrcike4k "Draw!"]] is an intense piece that makes the fights all the more hilarious. Not only that, [[DevelopersForesight the best parts of the song, theme, which are much more climactic and dramatic, [[DevelopersForesight are only seen further into the song, which means that you'll probably only hear them in longer i.e. harder fights]].
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* The battle theme, [[https://youtu.be/dQPsrcike4k "Draw!"]] is an intense piece that makes the fights all the more hilarious. Not only that [[TheDevsThoughtOfEverything the best parts of the song, which are much more climactic and dramatic, are only seen in longer i.e. harder fights]].
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* The battle theme, [[https://youtu.be/dQPsrcike4k "Draw!"]] is an intense piece that makes the fights all the more hilarious. Not only that [[TheDevsThoughtOfEverything that, [[DevelopersForesight the best parts of the song, which are much more climactic and dramatic, are only seen in longer i.e. harder fights]].
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* The battle theme, [[https://youtu.be/dQPsrcike4k "Draw!"]] is an intense piece that makes the fights all the more hilarious. The best parts of the song, which are much more climactic and dramatic, are only seen in longer ie: harder fights.
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* The battle theme, [[https://youtu.be/dQPsrcike4k "Draw!"]] is an intense piece that makes the fights all the more hilarious. The Not only that [[TheDevsThoughtOfEverything the best parts of the song, which are much more climactic and dramatic, are only seen in longer ie: i.e. harder fights.fights]].
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This page is NOT about you. NEVER use "this troper" when writing for the wiki. Ever. And especially don't link to This Troper, a page which says exactly what I've just said in this edit reason.
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* The battle theme, [[https://youtu.be/dQPsrcike4k "Draw!"]] is an intense piece that makes the fights all the more hilarious. The best parts of the song, which are much more climactic and dramatic, are only seen in longer ie: harder fights. ThisTroper really appreciated that tiny detail.
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* The battle theme, [[https://youtu.be/dQPsrcike4k "Draw!"]] is an intense piece that makes the fights all the more hilarious. The best parts of the song, which are much more climactic and dramatic, are only seen in longer ie: harder fights. ThisTroper really appreciated that tiny detail.
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* The battle theme, [[https://youtu.be/dQPsrcike4k "Draw!"]] is an intense piece that makes the fights all the more hilarious.
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* The battle theme, [[https://youtu.be/dQPsrcike4k "Draw!"]] is an intense piece that makes the fights all the more hilarious. The best parts of the song, which are much more climactic and dramatic, are only seen in longer ie: harder fights. ThisTroper really appreciated that tiny detail.
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* The [[https://youtu.be/FuJvxhDCbw4 "Wild White Yonder" theme]] that plays on the maps is pretty much everything good about westerns packed into one intense tune, it's so good that it was even used on the game's [[https://youtu.be/GDmOmxv2U4k launch trailer]].
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* The [[https://youtu.be/FuJvxhDCbw4 "Wild White Yonder" theme]] that plays on the maps is pretty much everything good about westerns packed into one intense tune, it's tune. It's so good that it was even used on the game's [[https://youtu.be/GDmOmxv2U4k launch trailer]].
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* The [[https://youtu.be/FuJvxhDCbw4 "Wild White Yonder" theme]] that plays on the maps is pretty much everything good about westerns packed into one intense tune, it's so good that it was even used on the game's [[https://youtu.be/GDmOmxv2U4k launch trailer]].
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* The [[https://youtu.be/zjjh2PA38qQ "Kurtzfit" lounge theme]] mixes disco and banjo, it has to be heard to be believed.
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* [[https://youtu.be/DvNSbKmUZZw The main theme]], which has a great "setting out" vibe to it.
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* [[https://youtu.be/DvNSbKmUZZw The main theme]], which theme]] has a great "setting out" vibe to it.
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For a game that leans on humor, absurdity, and StylisticSuck, ''Videogame/WestOfLoathing'' actually has some really awesome tunes.
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For a game that leans on humor, absurdity, and the occasional StylisticSuck, ''Videogame/WestOfLoathing'' actually has some really awesome tunes.
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And while I'm at it, game titles go in italics.
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For a game that leans on humor, absurdity, and StylisticSuck, Videogame/WestOfLoathing actually has some really awesome tunes.
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For a game that leans on humor, absurdity, and StylisticSuck, Videogame/WestOfLoathing ''Videogame/WestOfLoathing'' actually has some really awesome tunes.
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First, it's not "case and point". It's "case in point". Second, it's pure Word Cruft in this context.
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For a game that leans on humor, absurdity, and StylisticSuck, Videogame/WestOfLoathing actually has some really awesome tunes. Case and point:
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For a game that leans on humor, absurdity, and StylisticSuck, Videogame/WestOfLoathing actually has some really awesome tunes. Case and point:tunes.
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* The [[https://youtu.be/zjjh2PA38qQ "Kurtzfit" lounge theme]] is a mixes of disco and banjo, it has to be heard to be believed.
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* The [[https://youtu.be/zjjh2PA38qQ "Kurtzfit" lounge theme]] is a mixes of disco and banjo, it has to be heard to be believed.
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* The [[https://youtu.be/zjjh2PA38qQ "Kurtzfit" lounge theme]] is a mixture of disco and wild west, it has to be heard to be believed.
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* The [[https://youtu.be/zjjh2PA38qQ "Kurtzfit" lounge theme]] is a mixture mixes of disco and wild west, banjo, it has to be heard to be believed.
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* The [[https://youtu.be/zjjh2PA38qQ "Kurtzfit" lounge theme]] is a mixture of disco and wild west themes, it has to be heard to be believed.
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* The [[https://youtu.be/zjjh2PA38qQ "Kurtzfit" lounge theme]] is a mixture of disco and wild west themes, west, it has to be heard to be believed.
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For a game that leans on humor, absurdity, and StylisticSuck, Videogame/WestOfLoathing actually has some really awesome tunes. Case and point:
* [[https://youtu.be/DvNSbKmUZZw The main theme]], which has a great "setting out" vibe to it.
* The battle theme, [[https://youtu.be/dQPsrcike4k "Draw!"]] is an intense piece that makes the fights all the more hilarious.
* The [[https://youtu.be/zjjh2PA38qQ "Kurtzfit" lounge theme]] is a mixture of disco and wild west themes, it has to be heard to be believed.
* [[https://youtu.be/DvNSbKmUZZw The main theme]], which has a great "setting out" vibe to it.
* The battle theme, [[https://youtu.be/dQPsrcike4k "Draw!"]] is an intense piece that makes the fights all the more hilarious.
* The [[https://youtu.be/zjjh2PA38qQ "Kurtzfit" lounge theme]] is a mixture of disco and wild west themes, it has to be heard to be believed.
