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** "s(AINT)" (graphic music video aside) is an awesome BadassBoast turned into a song, with an awesome guitar riff to go along with it.
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** "s(AINT)" (graphic music video aside) is an awesome BadassBoast turned into a song, with an awesome epic guitar riff to go along with it.
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* ''Music/SmellsLikeChildren,'' a remix album of ''Music/PortraitOfAnAmericanFamily'', is either a mess or a fascinating sonic collage depending on who you talk to, but the cover of "Sweet Dreams" is sleazy, indispensable awesome. "Everlasting Cocksucker" and "Kiddie Grinder" are also fairly strong remixes of the originals, and the covers of "[[Music/ScreaminJayHawkins I Put A Spell On You]]" and "[[Music/PattiSmith Rock 'N' Roll Nigger]]" are pretty energetic covers of the originals, and the riffs only make them better.
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* ''Music/SmellsLikeChildren,'' a remix album of ''Music/PortraitOfAnAmericanFamily'', is either a mess or a fascinating sonic collage depending on who you talk to, but the cover of "Sweet Dreams" is sleazy, indispensable awesome. "Everlasting Cocksucker" and "Kiddie Grinder" are also fairly strong remixes of the originals, and the covers of "[[Music/ScreaminJayHawkins I Put A Spell On You]]" and "[[Music/PattiSmith Rock 'N' Roll Nigger]]" are pretty energetic covers of the originals, and the riffs only make them better.
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** "s(AINT)" (graphic music video aside) is a pretty awesome BadassBoast turned into a song, with an awesome guitar riff to go along with it.
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** "s(AINT)" (graphic music video aside) is a pretty an awesome BadassBoast turned into a song, with an awesome guitar riff to go along with it.
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* ''Music/SmellsLikeChildren,'' a remix album of ''Music/PortraitOfAnAmericanFamily'', is either a mess or a fascinating sonic collage depending on who you talk to, but the cover of "Sweet Dreams" is sleazy, indispensable awesome. "Everlasting Cocksucker," "Kiddie Grinder," "[[Music/ScreaminJayHawkins I Put A Spell On You]]," and "[[Music/PattiSmith Rock 'N' Roll Nigger]]" also deserve mention.
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* ''Music/SmellsLikeChildren,'' a remix album of ''Music/PortraitOfAnAmericanFamily'', is either a mess or a fascinating sonic collage depending on who you talk to, but the cover of "Sweet Dreams" is sleazy, indispensable awesome. "Everlasting Cocksucker," Cocksucker" and "Kiddie Grinder," Grinder" are also fairly strong remixes of the originals, and the covers of "[[Music/ScreaminJayHawkins I Put A Spell On You]]," You]]" and "[[Music/PattiSmith Rock 'N' Roll Nigger]]" also deserve mention.are pretty energetic covers of the originals, and the riffs only make them better.
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* Their cover of "[[WesternAnimation/TheNightmareBeforeChristmas This is Halloween]]" is almost as good as the original song, in its own way.
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* Their cover of "[[WesternAnimation/TheNightmareBeforeChristmas This is Halloween]]" is almost as good as the original song, making the song much more haunting and hellish in its own way.the best way possible.
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* ''Music/SmellsLikeChildren,'' a remix album of ''Music/PortraitOfAnAmericanFamily'', is either a mess or a fascinating sonic collage depending on who you talk to, but the cover of "Sweet Dreams" is sleazy, indispensable awesome.
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* ''Music/SmellsLikeChildren,'' a remix album of ''Music/PortraitOfAnAmericanFamily'', is either a mess or a fascinating sonic collage depending on who you talk to, but the cover of "Sweet Dreams" is sleazy, indispensable awesome. "Everlasting Cocksucker," "Kiddie Grinder," "[[Music/ScreaminJayHawkins I Put A Spell On You]]," and "[[Music/PattiSmith Rock 'N' Roll Nigger]]" also deserve mention.
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A single second-level bullet is never correct, and saying a track "deserves special mention" is Word Cruft; just go straight to why. The second of these entries is zero-context anyway.
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* From ''The Golden Age Of Grotesque'': "This Is The New Shit" is basically DeadpanSnarker: The Song, and the stuttering guitars make it even better.
** Other tracks that deserve mention are "mOBSCENE," a song with a great EpicRiff reminiscent of Music/FaithNoMore and "s(AINT)" (graphic music video aside).
** Other tracks that deserve mention are "mOBSCENE," a song with a great EpicRiff reminiscent of Music/FaithNoMore and "s(AINT)" (graphic music video aside).
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* From ''The Golden Age Of Grotesque'': Grotesque'':
** "This Is The New Shit" is basically DeadpanSnarker: The Song, and the stuttering guitars make it even better.
**Other tracks that deserve mention are "mOBSCENE," a song with "mOBSCENE" has a great EpicRiff reminiscent of Music/FaithNoMore and Music/FaithNoMore.
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** "This Is The New Shit" is basically DeadpanSnarker: The Song, and the stuttering guitars make it even better.
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* While ''Music/PortraitOfAnAmericanFamily'' may have not aged as well compared to some of his most popular albums, "Cake And Sodomy," "Lunchbox," "Organ Grinder," "Get Your Gunn," and particularly "Dope Hat" still hold up fairly well.
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** Other tracks that deserve mention are "mOBSCENE," a song with a great EpicRiff reminiscent of Music/FaithNoMore and "s(AINT)" (graphic music video aside).
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** "The Dope Show," an alternative glam rock song criticizing celebrity status, with amazing guitar riffs that make it even better. It’s considered one of Manson’s [[SignatureSong most memorable songs]] for a reason.
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** "The Dope Show," an alternative glam rock song criticizing celebrity status, with amazing guitar riffs that make it even better. It’s It's considered one of Manson’s Manson's [[SignatureSong most memorable songs]] for a reason.
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** "The Dope Show," an alternative glam rock song criticizing celebrity status, with amazing guitar riffs that make it even better. It’s considered one of Manson’s [[SignatureSong most memorable songs]] for a reason.
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* For movie soundtracks, if you watched the ''Film/ResidentEvil'' movies before, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9L7mZH2u3Qc "Resident Evil Main Theme"]] and [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZUNNXecb6nA "Seizure of Power"]] are their two must-know works for you, they captured the atmosphere of Umbrella Corporation and zombie apocalypse.
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* For movie soundtracks, if you watched the ''Film/ResidentEvil'' movies ''Film/ResidentEvilFilmSeries'' before, [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9L7mZH2u3Qc "Resident Evil Main Theme"]] and [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZUNNXecb6nA "Seizure of Power"]] are their two must-know works for you, they captured the atmosphere of Umbrella Corporation and zombie apocalypse.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BG5sFUROGX0 Cry Little Sister]], originally used in ''Film/TheNewMutants''(but later got cut) and the trailer to ''Series/Titans2018'' is a industrial cover that's even better than the original.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BG5sFUROGX0 Cry Little Sister]], originally used in ''Film/TheNewMutants''(but ''Film/TheNewMutants'' (but later got cut) and the trailer to ''Series/Titans2018'' ''Series/Titans2018'', is a industrial cover that's even better than the original.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BG5sFUROGX0 Cry Little Sister]], originally used in ''Film/TheNewMutants''(but later got cut) and the trailer to ''Series/Titans2018'' is a industrial cover that's even better than the orignal.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BG5sFUROGX0 Cry Little Sister]], originally used in ''Film/TheNewMutants''(but later got cut) and the trailer to ''Series/Titans2018'' is a industrial cover that's even better than the orignal.original.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nu__TzWfpss God's Gonnaa Cut You Down]] invokes Music/JohnnyCash.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BG5sFUROGX0 Cry Little Sister]], originally used in ''Film/TheNewMutants''(but later got cut) and the trailer to ''Series/Titans2018'' is a industrial cover that's even better than the orignal.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BG5sFUROGX0 Cry Little Sister]], originally used in ''Film/TheNewMutants''(but later got cut) and the trailer to ''Series/Titans2018'' is a industrial cover that's even better than the orignal.orignal.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nu__TzWfpss God's Gonnaa Cut You Down]] invokes Music/JohnnyCash.
* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nu__TzWfpss God's Gonnaa Cut You Down]] invokes Music/JohnnyCash.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BG5sFUROGX0 Cry Little Sister]], used in ''Film/TheNewMutants'' and the trailer to ''Series/Titans2018'' is a industrial cover that's even better than the orignal.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BG5sFUROGX0 Cry Little Sister]], originally used in ''Film/TheNewMutants'' ''Film/TheNewMutants''(but later got cut) and the trailer to ''Series/Titans2018'' is a industrial cover that's even better than the orignal.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bmblT8_9-7U We Know Where You Fucking Live]] is an angry, rage-fueled industrial rock song.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A1_hdM1NGf4 Cat People]], a cover of Music/DavidBowie is even more haunting than the original.
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* His cover of Music/DavidBowie's [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A1_hdM1NGf4 Cat People]], a cover of Music/DavidBowie People]] is even more haunting than the original.
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* [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=A1_hdM1NGf4 Cat People]], a cover of Music/DavidBowie is even more haunting than the original.
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** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2wdx2Z5_GsM Warship My Wreck]] was included in the soundtrack to ''ComicBook/DarkNightsDeathMetal''.
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** [[https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2wdx2Z5_GsM Warship My Wreck]] Wreck]], a perfect soundtrack type song, was included in the soundtrack to ''ComicBook/DarkNightsDeathMetal''.
