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** Diamond Tiara organizes the students into a surprisingly effective sales force to cover all of Ponyville, including commuters to and from the train station. She frets about having ordered too much chocolate when the sales period ends. They've sold enough to cover an entire wall of the Crusaders' clubhouse with the empty boxes, and how much was left over? ''Four bars.''
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** Diamond Tiara organizes the students into a surprisingly effective sales force to cover all of Ponyville, including train commuters to into and from the train station.out of town. She frets about having ordered too much chocolate when the sales period ends. They've sold enough to cover an entire wall of the Crusaders' clubhouse with the empty boxes, and how much was left over? ''Four bars.''
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** Diamond Tiara organizes the students into a surprisingly effective sales force, covering both Ponyville and Canterlot. She frets about having ordered too much chocolate when the sales period ends. They've sold enough to cover an entire wall of the Crusaders' clubhouse with the empty boxes, and how much was left over? ''Four bars.''
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** Diamond Tiara organizes the students into a surprisingly effective sales force, covering both Ponyville force to cover all of Ponyville, including commuters to and Canterlot.from the train station. She frets about having ordered too much chocolate when the sales period ends. They've sold enough to cover an entire wall of the Crusaders' clubhouse with the empty boxes, and how much was left over? ''Four bars.''
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--> ''The cold of a glacier. The mass and sheer power of its movements. Nothing she could hope to stand against, and the chill of that realization had reached her soul. But there had been another truth lurking in the comparison, that the pony was cold and powerful and''
-->'''slow.'''
-->''It was all he was. All he could ever be.''
-->''And so she had been the one who came out.''
-->'''slow.'''
-->''It was all he was. All he could ever be.''
-->''And so she had been the one who came out.''
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--> ''The cold of a glacier. The mass and sheer power of its movements. Nothing she could hope to stand against, and the chill of that realization had reached her soul. But there had been another truth lurking in the comparison, that the pony was cold and powerful and''
-->'''slow.'''
-->''Itand''\\\
'''slow.'''\\\
''It was all he was. All he could ever be.''
-->''And''\\\
''And so she had been the one who came out.''
-->'''slow.'''
-->''It
'''slow.'''\\\
''It was all he was. All he could ever be.
-->''And
''And so she had been the one who came out.''
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* "School Fundrazer," which focuses on a schoolwide candy-selling drive, spreads the awesomeness around.
** Diamond Tiara organizes the students into a surprisingly effective sales force, covering both Ponyville and Canterlot. She frets about having ordered too much candy when the sales period ends. They've sold enough candy to cover an entire wall of the Crusaders' clubhouse with the empty boxes, and how much was left over? ''Four bars.''
** The reps promise to pay the students five bits for every box sold, to be deducted from the school's share of the proceeds. They cheat the school out of the money at the end of the sale, angering Cheerilee so much that she stomps the floor hard enough to splinter it and jolt her desk out of place before ordering them to clear out:
** Diamond Tiara organizes the students into a surprisingly effective sales force, covering both Ponyville and Canterlot. She frets about having ordered too much candy when the sales period ends. They've sold enough candy to cover an entire wall of the Crusaders' clubhouse with the empty boxes, and how much was left over? ''Four bars.''
** The reps promise to pay the students five bits for every box sold, to be deducted from the school's share of the proceeds. They cheat the school out of the money at the end of the sale, angering Cheerilee so much that she stomps the floor hard enough to splinter it and jolt her desk out of place before ordering them to clear out:
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* "School Fundrazer," which focuses on a schoolwide candy-selling chocolate-selling drive, spreads the awesomeness around.
** Diamond Tiara organizes the students into a surprisingly effective sales force, covering both Ponyville and Canterlot. She frets about having ordered too muchcandy chocolate when the sales period ends. They've sold enough candy to cover an entire wall of the Crusaders' clubhouse with the empty boxes, and how much was left over? ''Four bars.''
** The Horsesheys reps promise to pay the students five bits for every box sold, to be deducted from the school's share of the proceeds. They cheat the school out of the money at the end of the sale, angering Cheerilee so much that she stomps the floor hard enough to splinter it and jolt her desk out of place before ordering them to clear out:
** Diamond Tiara organizes the students into a surprisingly effective sales force, covering both Ponyville and Canterlot. She frets about having ordered too much
** The Horsesheys reps promise to pay the students five bits for every box sold, to be deducted from the school's share of the proceeds. They cheat the school out of the money at the end of the sale, angering Cheerilee so much that she stomps the floor hard enough to splinter it and jolt her desk out of place before ordering them to clear out:
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** When Filthy Rich finds out about the swindle, he cancels any future candy orders for all Barnyard Bargains locations, gets the reps fired, and arranges for the company to pay the school its full share. The reps come in for a job interview soon afterward, only for him to reveal that he's on to their scam. He blacklists them from ever working at any of his stores and throws them out.
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** When Filthy Rich finds out about the swindle, he cancels any future candy Horsesheys orders for all Barnyard Bargains locations, gets the reps fired, and arranges for the company to pay the school its full share. The reps come in for a job interview soon afterward, only for him to reveal that he's on to onto their scam. He blacklists them from ever working at any of his stores and throws them out.out.
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* Twilight finally talks back to Princess Celestia in Passing Storm Passing.
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* Twilight finally talks back to Princess Celestia in Passing Storm Passing.Passing.
* "School Fundrazer," which focuses on a schoolwide candy-selling drive, spreads the awesomeness around.
** Diamond Tiara organizes the students into a surprisingly effective sales force, covering both Ponyville and Canterlot. She frets about having ordered too much candy when the sales period ends. They've sold enough candy to cover an entire wall of the Crusaders' clubhouse with the empty boxes, and how much was left over? ''Four bars.''
** The reps promise to pay the students five bits for every box sold, to be deducted from the school's share of the proceeds. They cheat the school out of the money at the end of the sale, angering Cheerilee so much that she stomps the floor hard enough to splinter it and jolt her desk out of place before ordering them to clear out:
-->"Take your share of the bits and get out of my classroom. Feel free to give the company my name. '''Never come back.'''"
** Diamond then uses her allowance to pay the other students what they've earned. She's their boss, they're her employees, and she'll make them whole no matter what.
** When Filthy Rich finds out about the swindle, he cancels any future candy orders for all Barnyard Bargains locations, gets the reps fired, and arranges for the company to pay the school its full share. The reps come in for a job interview soon afterward, only for him to reveal that he's on to their scam. He blacklists them from ever working at any of his stores and throws them out.
* "School Fundrazer," which focuses on a schoolwide candy-selling drive, spreads the awesomeness around.
** Diamond Tiara organizes the students into a surprisingly effective sales force, covering both Ponyville and Canterlot. She frets about having ordered too much candy when the sales period ends. They've sold enough candy to cover an entire wall of the Crusaders' clubhouse with the empty boxes, and how much was left over? ''Four bars.''
** The reps promise to pay the students five bits for every box sold, to be deducted from the school's share of the proceeds. They cheat the school out of the money at the end of the sale, angering Cheerilee so much that she stomps the floor hard enough to splinter it and jolt her desk out of place before ordering them to clear out:
-->"Take your share of the bits and get out of my classroom. Feel free to give the company my name. '''Never come back.'''"
** Diamond then uses her allowance to pay the other students what they've earned. She's their boss, they're her employees, and she'll make them whole no matter what.
** When Filthy Rich finds out about the swindle, he cancels any future candy orders for all Barnyard Bargains locations, gets the reps fired, and arranges for the company to pay the school its full share. The reps come in for a job interview soon afterward, only for him to reveal that he's on to their scam. He blacklists them from ever working at any of his stores and throws them out.
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-->''slow.''
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--> ''The cold of a glacier. The mass and sheer power of its movements. Nothing she could hope to stand against, and the chill of that realization had reached her soul. But there had been another truth lurking in the comparison, that the pony was cold and powerful and
slow.
It was all he was. All he could ever be.
And so she had been the one who came out.''
slow.
It was all he was. All he could ever be.
And so she had been the one who came out.''
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--> ''The cold of a glacier. The mass and sheer power of its movements. Nothing she could hope to stand against, and the chill of that realization had reached her soul. But there had been another truth lurking in the comparison, that the pony was cold and powerful and
slow.
Itand''
-->''slow.''
-->''It was all he was. All he could everbe.
Andbe.''
-->''And so she had been the one who came out.''
slow.
It
-->''slow.''
-->''It was all he was. All he could ever
And
-->''And so she had been the one who came out.''
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--> ''The cold of a glacier. The mass and sheer power of its movements. Nothing she could hope to stand against, and the chill of that realization had reached her soul. But there had been another truth lurking in the comparison, that the pony was cold and powerful and
slow.
It was all he was. All he could ever be.
And so she had been the one who came out.''
slow.
It was all he was. All he could ever be.
And so she had been the one who came out.''
