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Four Chapters in One

Yes, you read that right folks: not one, not two, but FOUR chapters. Because three of them are fairly short, one of them doesn't even cause a scroll bar to appear on the side of my browser.

With that said, let the bashing commence!


LOVE, BULLETS AND IMMORTALITY

Sonadow, Sonamy, Sonaze there will be lemons

All rights to Sega and Sonic team and Nintendo while Conor is my creation

Chapter 22 The Last Night

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Conor walked into Sonics cell to see him still looking at the ground.

Looks like someone's got a date Conor said smiling. Conor moved close to him and Sonic spoke.

Why...Why do all of this revenge on me is one thing but harming innocents is something completely different Sonic said.

Oh no, Sonic’s become an emo-hog.
I tried to find you guys for 9 years which you thought I was dead but following you trying to find you only to to find after a few days you had disappeared into another dimension and only recently returned I was gona track you down but I got a job from Amy and Blaze and turns out it was to kill Shadow I din't know it was you that was just a bonus.
Another dimension, you say? You know, I’d call bullshit, but with the Archie Sonicverse, you can never be sure…also, Blaze and Amy SPECIFICALLY STATED THAT THEY WANTED YOU TO KIDNAP SONIC, THEY NEVER MENTIONED KILLING SHADOW. AT ALL. BUT HEY YOU HAVEN’T CARED ABOUT CONTINUITY BEFORE SO WHY THE FUCK WOULD YOU START NOW?! Sorry about that…
Just get it over with Sonic said no emotion in his voice.

Conor grabbed him and dragged him to Blazes room.

Blaze sat waiting in her bedroom she was giddy with joy and couldn't help herself. Finally Conor knocked on the door and she almost did back flips Conor stepped in holding Sonic,

Blaze squealed with delight. Looks like some ones happy to see you Blaze ran over and grabbed Conor into a hug.

OH Thank you thank you thank you! She said hugging him.

Your...welcome...Blaze said Conor trying to breed.

This is easily the best mistake in the entire story.
Oops sorry Blaze said letting go.

Conor straightened his tie and glasses. Remind me to stop you and Amy from hugging me in future Conor said annoyed.

Look, I can understand Amy being like this, but Blaze is a cool, level-headed, yet admittedly temperamental—oh, who am I kidding? This guy doesn’t care about that.
Sorry Conor but you just hand delivered Sonic to my room how could I not be excited Blaze said.

Well here's a question what would you do for the key Conor said throwing it up and down in his hand.

Blaze looked at him for a minute and grabbed him into a kiss Conor looked shocked as she let go.

Uh…comedy…?
I meant a favour... ya know what good night this has been one long day Conor began to leave only to see Sonic laughing to himself.
The most in-character Sonic has been thus far…
Conor stopped and looked at him and smiled.

Let us see what tomorrow brings I might even bring you your boyfriend in one piece or bit by bit Conor said.

Sonic stopped laughing and looked at Conor.

They'll come for me watch Sonic said staring daggers at Conor.

…not that it’ll last long.
Conor showed his teeth as he smiled I'm counting on it I'm aiming to kill more than a hundred of your friends tomorrow should make up for today Conor said and he left.

Sonic stared at the door before turning his head to see Blaze grabbing the chains and tugging making Sonic move forward.

Well we got the whole night together what you want to do first blue? Blaze asked lying out on the bed.

Sonic looked at her and moved from the bed to the couch.

Blaze sat up and looked at him in truth she had known Conor, Amy and herself had put him through a lot lately. She got up and moved to him. Look Sonic I know right now you hate me Blaze began.

NO. FUCKING. SHIT.
I could forgive you if you had done this because we were friends but teaming with Conor just to have a night with me look at what he's done people running for their lives was it all worth it just for one night with me Sonic said anger rising in his voice.
That’s…actually a decent bit of dialogue.
Blaze looked at her hands for a second before looking up at him. I know sorry won't change anything but I'm not gona have sex with you like Amy did just because she got the chance I know you love Shadow but I love you and this could be your last night here or even mine I was hoping we could just...

Sonic looked at her he could see that she was sorry for what she had done. Blaze look I'm sorry for what I just said I...

No your right look at what Amy and I have done to you and everyone Blaze began to cry.

No Sonic said sharply Conor did this you didn't hurt anyone you just did what you needed to do to get me I can forgive you.

She looked up at him and saw his emerald eyes shining. Thanks she said drying her eyes.

Sonic moved closer to her. Look I know how much this means to you Sonic said he leaned in and gave Blaze a kiss. Blaze felt sparks go off in her stomach her hero was kissing her and he did it of his own free will. Look tonight will be the only time I'll do this I still love Shadow but tonight I'll be with you. Blazes ears pricked up and she hugged Sonic.

That was pretty decent, admittedly all of it was out-of-character (as Eponymous Kid commented in the introduction, this story would be somewhat better with original characters), but it was overall not that badly done. Besides the grammar, of course.
Would you let me out of the chains I promise not to run off he said.

Ok Blaze unlocked the chains holding Sonic and he took her hand and moved to the bed. She slowly lied down on the bed Sonic on top of her he gave her a kiss and she removed her clothes Sonic admired her beauty her golden eyes and perfect figure she began to blush as she saw him look at her. Sonic leaned in and gave her a kiss and then their last night began.

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Sorry to disappoint but I thought it would be good to leave off on this note instead of descriptive sex it just seemed nice but don't worry I'll always write more.

And you gained the tiniest sliver of respect for it. It won’t last long.
Conor.

LOVE, BULLETS AND IMMORTALITY

Sonadow, Sonamy, Sonaze there will be lemons

All rights to Sega and Sonic team and Nintendo while Conor is my creation

Chapter 23 Calm before the Storm Part 1.

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Sonic awoke beside Blaze who was still sleeping he got up and looked out the window to see Conors army in position.

So you haven't run away yet huh Conor said leaning up against the door way.

No need my friends will come Sonic said not turning around.

So you spent the night with Blaze of your own free will huh Conor said no longer in his usual tone.

Sonic turned around to face Conor. Yeah I did and I don't regret it Sonic said.

Sonic has been a little more in-character recently. He’s still horribly OOC, though.
Well then Bro let's see what today will bring but here's my question your friends come and save you and defeat my army you then move onto Amy, Tails and so on they will fall but what will you do about me I can't die and never will I don't tire out so tell me how will you kill me? Conor said as if sad.

I...I don't know Sonic said facing Conor.

You could ignore him. Hey, it works on Trolls, so why not Gary-Stu’s?
What happens happens for a reason said Conor he then turned and left.

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Hey I have a You Tube channel now up the link is now in my channel check it out if you want I'll add anyone as a friend. Plus next chapter maybe later 2 day i'm lazy and as of now i'm gona play xbox peace

POST THIS ON YOUR PROFILE. IT IS THERE FOR A REASON. IF IT HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH THE STORY DO NOT POST IT IN THE AUTHOR’S NOTE.
Conor

LOVE, BULLETS AND IMMORTALITY

Sonadow, Sonamy, Sonaze there will be lemons

All rights to Sega and Sonic team and Nintendo while Conor is my creation

Chapter 24 Calm before the Storm Part 2

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Shadow stood looking at the freedom fighters the wind had picked up making a rustling noise through the trees. Everything was ready all they had to do was attack free Sonic and finally move on to Conor.

Fighters today we take back what we lost, we'll free Sonic and put the rightful King and

Queen back on the throne Shadow turned Lets Move out.

The soldiers began to march behind Shadow heading towards the castle to face Conor for the final showdown.

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Ok Next part something will happen I promise.

That was really fucking short. Next.

LOVE, BULLETS AND IMMORTALITY

Sonadow, Sonamy, Sonaze there will be lemons

All rights to Sega and Sonic team and Nintendo while Conor is my creation

Chapter 25 WAR

Contains strong Discriptive Violence(A.K.A The good bit)

I’m sure it is.

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Everything was in position archers on the walls and roof and guards below. Conor walked out and looked out at the men Fiona beside him Rouge, Amy, Blaze, Sally and Tails behind them. Men, Comrades, Soldiers today we fight when they come show no mercy for they won't even if it means your life don't let them enter the castle deserters will be shot by myself or Tails IS THAT UNDERSTOOD? Conor shouted.

Sir Yes Sir came a chant.

Minutes later the freedom fighters led by Shadow marched onto a hill facing the castle Conor stood on the wall and Shadow stood on top of the hill although they were some distance they could see each other perfectly.

Conor smiled and ran his hand along the wall creating sparks. Shadow looked to see sparks flying he took a breath.

CHARGE! TAKE NO PRISIONERS He roared and they ran for the castle.

SLAUGHTER THEM! Conor shouted his men charged swords at the read.

Both sides ran at each other as they hit shadow made the first attack as he threw a solider into another impaling him on his sword. He fought a group of soldiers while his men attack guards the battle was fierce blood stain the ground and both sides limbs were gone many still alive Shadow ripped a soldier's head off and tore his stomach open while Antoine sliced a guards leg off and then quickly slit his throat blood ran down the sword but was quickly replaced with more. Knuckles dug a tunnel and jumped up through a soldier cutting him in two, Silver picked up 5 men and using his E.S.P crushed them together only blood and screams were left. Conor stood smiling watching the battle blood had covered the walls as it did the field.

“Only blood and screams were left”? Screams are sounds, not objects – they can’t be “left” somewhere.
Sire we're losing men they're being slaughtered we can't hope to win this battle Tails said worried.

I never intended to its just the battle a war has yet to begin Conor said still smiling.

You're enjoying this aren't you all this blood shed Rouge said in disgust.

“You better believe it, baby!”
Conor turned and looked at her.

Look stop toying just say you love me get it over with Conor said.

I DON'T LOVE YOU Rouge shouted at him.

I think you do Conor said he took a step forward.

Erm…this is a bit of an inappropriate time for a rape lemon, don’t you think?
Rouge slapped him across the face and knocked his glasses off.

Conor looked at her a sudden rage took over his body he quickly turned and smashed part of the wall into tiny fragments.

Conor turned and grabbed her.

That could have been you chaos help you if you ever do that again.

Oh, oh, an actual reference to something Sonic related? A clever replacement of God with Chaos because Chaos is a God in the Sonic series? Wow, it’s like this perfectly fits in with the continuity now! TOO LITTLE, TOO GODDAMN LATE, AUTHOR.
He bent down for his glasses but Rouge picked them up before him.

Stop pretending like that scar doesn't exist Rouge said.

Rouge give him the glasses Blaze said looking at Conor

It's there I can see it right on your face Rouge said.

Give him the glasses Rouge Amy said backing away.

Conor bit his lip so hard it began to bleed.

Maybe he’ll bleed to death! I mean…he can’t replace blood, surely?
Think wearing these it going to make it go away Rouge said.

Fiona looked at Conor she saw he was struggling to contain his anger his left arm shook his hand turned red.

Give Conor the glasses Rouge Please Fiona said.

Rouge took a step forward until their noses were 10 millimetres apart. She put one hand on his face. Conor stopped moving. Rouge kissed the scar and put his glasses back on.

Conor looked at her she went to step away but couldn't he held her.

Let me go Conor Rouge said.

Conor stood still no emotion on his face.

Conor… Let me go Rouge said.

Conor took a sharp breath but still didn't move.

Conor…Please…Let me go Rouge said.

This time Conor moved he grabbed her waist and pushed her back against a wall.

You dare do that to me I swear I was trying to think of 5 reasons why not to rip you little wings out and toss you over that wall I had 4 but she just kept saying let me go and I was thinking shut the fuck up but no she could stop fucking talking she took my glasses and even touched my scar I should have killed you the minute you even took those glasses but I won't kill you I have something else in mind he raised his robotic arm.

I think a little lesson will help you remember who I am he put his robotic hand on the side of her face as if about to kiss her but ran his finger along her cheek. I push hard enough I cut into you I push deeper it scars I push as hard as I can and it goes into your mouth.

Rouge looked at him scared. Conor I'm sorry I didn't mean…

Oh now you're sorry because I pose a threat to you. He ran his hand down to her chest and over to the top of her left breast. What are you gona do Rouge asked panicking.

I think you could do with a little tattoo right there Conor said smiling his teeth showed even Fiona was a little frightened.

Conor slowly ran his finger making a C shape on the top of her breast.

Conor don't please and she began to cry.

Conor stopped and looked at her.

I…seriously don’t care about this. I feel nothing for these characters.
Why are you crying I haven't even cut you yet he laughed and she tried breaking his grip but she couldn't move.

Her tears rolled down her cheeks ruining her makeup and landed on her chest. Conor pressed his finger to her skin and made a C shape pushing a little harder. Blood came out but only for a second Conor removed his hand. Finished shall I do another maybe somewhere else something's telling me go for the ass.

Stop please Conor I'm so sorry please Rouge begged tears streaming down her cheeks.

Why should I? He asked loosening his grip a little.

I…I still love you She said.

I’m sure.
She kissed him and wrapped her arms around kissed him for a minute and then let him go. Conor looked at her and wiped a tear from her cheek.

Never do that again and he let her go she dropped to her knees and then she looked at him.

He walked up to the wall not caring Rouge was lying out on the ground. Fiona ran over to Rouge and helped her up.

Rouge we tried to tell you are you alright? Fiona asked.

Even after that and I still love him he scarred me but I still love him no matter what.

Hey just remember I'm still his girlfriend Fiona said with a wink.

Well then again I could share Fiona whispered into Rouges ear.

OH MY GOD. MOOD WHIPLASH, MUCH?
There closing in Conor do something Amy said.

Conor clicked his fingers and a hail of arrows shot out. Incoming said Uncle Chuck.

Unfortunately some got hit many got hit in the chest quickly dying other got hit in the foot or arm and another got hit straight in the eye he tried to pull it out he finally managed to but it pull his eye out blood ran down his face he fell over backwards and slowly died. The rest quickly got up and ran for the castle the army was dead and only the archers remained.

FUCKING EW.
Its late shall we Conor said heading for the stairs Tails followed by Amy, Blaze and Sally headed for the stairs Fiona helped Rouge Conor looked back at her he walked over. Need a hand? He said seriously.

Thanks Rouge said. Conor bent down to let Rouge climb up onto his back she wrapped her arms around her and they headed off to the Throne room.

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Well I certainly have a way with women don't ya think. ;)

Shut your face, before I shut it for you. God, this story is really getting to me…5 more chapters everyone, then it is finally over. For now. Later!

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GIG Since: Dec, 1969
Jun 21st 2011 at 6:33:42 PM
Just a little longer, and the nightmare can end!
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