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Strips 221-225 (Attack of the Psycho Bisexual Clone)
=.= —yawn— s'up dudes? I'm gonna due a quickie, since I don't feel like going full throttle just yet.
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Strip 221
Art:
- Nanase and Susan are, like, wearing the exact same outfit only Nanase is putting out more.
- Also, why is Susan wearing middrift. Don't straw feminists not like putting out for the man? Or is that just me?
- The spiky bangs are new
. Even the sketchbook did not have it.
- Once again, Shive fails to process the fact that boobs are not so important that they jut out from jackets. Jackets add another layer Shive.
- Also, is it just me, or is Nanase bustier than normal?
Content:
- You know, this plus Nanase's all over ness on Elliot and her love of skimpy clothing would imply she's rather slut-like. Only the better the art gets, the more this is just shoved to a corner and implied of never happening.
- Although, considering how Nanase is a lesbian, he probably did it for other reasons.
- Whether that was smart or not is up for debate.
- Biz-atch. Once again, Shive staying away from cursing makes me wonder if he did this because it sounded funny or because he doesn't want to use the actual word. I mean, I would use it, but I've also used the word bitch, cunt, fuck and anyother general term with little problem either. Not that that's a GOOD thing, just that it's hard to tell what's supposed to be corky and whats supposed to be censorship.
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Sketchbook Strip 102002
IT'S FUNNY CAUSE HE'S GAY!
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Strip 222
Art:
- The Skree sound effect is nice and all, but it kind of makes it hard to make out what the hell is happening in those first three panels.
- ...wait...six panels?
- Are there NINE panels to this?
- Are they...is the goo going through a door? but...they were in same hallway!
- same here!
sorta!
- Also, looking back on that last one...that snake kinda looks like a cock head.
Content:
- Hey guys, lawl. Remember I was gonna die? CAUSE I JUST DID!
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Strip 223
Art:
- The next time you see someone running with their fist facing the same direction they are running, stop them, take them to the side, beat them to a bloody pulp, and inform them that that is no such way to run.
- That sound effect panel does not fit with the current mood at all
- ...believe it or not. When crashing into someone else, you tend to fall backwards.
- Greg better be wearing shoulder pads.
Content:
- Sarah's reaction annoys me. True, she got imperfect information, but Ellen is still Elliot in almost every form except for the vagina part.
- No Sarah, she is still Elliot. She's just a duplicate. But she's really no less of Elliot than the Elliot you knew.
- Not that you would know this, but I hate bad communication.
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Strip 224
Art:
- Now that's what I call an action scene!
- ...
- ...
- -__-
- BOOOO-RIINNNNG!
- What do we get from this strip?
- NOTHING!
- It's boring!
- Ellen ducks.
- And her hair didn't even get singed!
- Oi! Goo! Set the erfin floor on fire! That would make more sense!
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Strip 225
Art:
- Does anyone else remember that Gurren Lagen video I posted? How she arced back to show case her boobs?
- Yeah...
- Also, holy shitfuckcrud this is badly choreographed.
- Those three Ellen fight cut scenes make my eyes bleed. How can you mess up THAT BADLY when it comes to incoherency?
Content:
- You? Really Ellen? Don't you think you could at least call him Greg? you knew him well enough to invite him over to Tedd's house and have him watch over who you assumed to be an under aged girl.
- And Ellen gets a new power. Because along with martial arts, tamakashi gedo or whatever it's called, and all the abilities she got from that, IT'S NOT ENOUGH!
- No wonder Sarah never does anything. She doesn't get super powers ever year or so like the rest of y'all seem to do.
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Might do the next five later.
11th Dec '10 12:13:37 PM flag for mods
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