Line #7 Script/NumberTwo


1	Fans of ''Franchise/BackToTheFuture'' know that the basic plotline of ''Film/BackToTheFuturePartII'' was about Marty [=McFly=] and Doc Brown finding themselves in an alternate present ruled by Biff Tannen, and going to the year [[TheFifties 1955]] (where the events of the original movie took place) to SetRightWhatOnceWentWrong. But did you know that they were originally going to go back ''not'' to 1955, but rather [[TheSixties 1967]]?
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3	That is the premise of ''Number Two'', an early script for ''Back to the Future Part II''. From that point on, it begins to bear similarities to ''Part I'' -- Marty once again interferes in his parents' life, jeopardizing his own birth (Dave and Linda were already born by this time); and the [=DeLorean=]'s source of electricity needed to travel in time breaks down, forcing Marty and Doc to rely on Doc's past self to get them [[TitleDrop back to the future]].
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5	You can find the full script [[https://web.archive.org/web/20130313050244/http://www.bttf.com/scripts/Number_Two.pdf here]].
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8	!!This script provides examples of:
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10	* AngryGuardDog: 1967 Biff has a German Shepherd named Chopper that Marty runs into while trying to recover the Almanac.
11	* BrickJoke: When Marty learns that his future son's name is "Norman", he declares he would never name his kid with that name. Jennifer then reveals that she always wanted to name her son Norman, after her grandpa. Jennifer later has a similar reaction to Marty's when she learns that her daughter's name is "Doris", but we don't find out where it came from until later -- [[spoiler:it was the name of Marty's mom's aunt]].
12	* CallBack:
13	** At the end of the script, Marty and Jennifer are [[AlmostKiss about to kiss]] when they were interrupted. After the interruption, Marty asks, "Now, where were we?" Jennifer answers, "Right about here." They then get interrupted again when they almost kiss.
14	** The band at the hippie rally, Blue Nirvana, is an indirect Call Back to the Starlighters from the first movie, inasmuch as both bands play NothingButHits.
15	* TheCameo: Music/HueyLewisAndTheNews, when Marty first escapes from Griff and his gang.
16	* CrapsackWorld: 1985-A, or "Biff City," natch.
17	* DisproportionateRetribution: In 1985-A, Marty witnesses two cops bludgeoning a 14-year-old with their nightsticks, all because the kid drew a mustache on a picture of Biff.
18	* FutureSlang: Quite often in 2015, and it leads to a breakdown of communications between Marty, Jennifer, and the 2015 infostore clerk over "interfacing."
19	** Then lampshaded a moment later:
20	---> '''Clerk:''' ''[muttering]'' Assholes.
21	---> '''Marty:''' Now ''there's'' a word I understand.
22	* {{Homage}}: Marty and 1985 Doc ride a Harley while "[[StandardSnippet Born to Be Wild]]" plays, a homage to ''Film/EasyRider''.
23	* ImMrFuturePopCultureReference:
24	** Marty's alias this time around is "Marty [=DeLorean=]".
25	** Marty pretends to be "meditating" with a chant of "[[Film/ANewHope Oh-bee-wahn-ken-oh-bee]]", and later leads a crowd of hippies in a "meditative chant" consisting of the words "Subaru," "Mazda," and "Celica."
26	* MadScientist: '67 Doc takes LSD to get ideas, and his ultimate plan could potentially kill people if it goes wrong. "What's life without a few calculated risks?"
27	* MeaningfulName: Marty's middle name is revealed to be "Hopkins", after the Mark Hopkins Hotel in UsefulNotes/SanFrancisco, where George and Lorraine spent their 1967 anniversary weekend.
28	* MirrorRoutine: The '67 and '85 Docs do one.
29	* NinjaPirateZombieRobot: '67 Doc's costume is described as "a cross between an Indian guru, a rock star, and a scientist".
30	* NothingButHits: PLENTY of this in the '67 scenes. "White Rabbit" by Music/JeffersonAirplane is selected for a scene in the hippie pad, Steppenwolf's "Born to be Wild" is used when Marty and Doc ride a Harley down the highway, and "When I'm Sixty-Four" by Music/TheBeatles plays over the end credits. ([[Film/ForrestGump Another Zemeckis film]] would later make use of this trope in its fullest glory.)
31	** In addition, the band at the hippie rally plays covers of "Eve of Destruction," "Mr. Tambourine Man," and "Get Together."
32	* PatrioticFervor: Most of the Hill Valley of 1967. Marty in his hippie garb gets some dirty looks from passersby, and Biff even has a bumper sticker that says "AMERICA: Love It Or Leave It."
33	* RaceAgainstTheClock: Here, it's Marty and Doc flying the time vehicle on ailerons, lightening the load to be on the correct altitude to absorb an explosive charge.
34	* RunningGag: Otis Peabody repeatedly seeing the flying [=DeLorean=] after his extended stay in the sanitorium, building on Peabody's OneSceneWonder from the first movie.
35	* TheReasonYouSuckSpeech: Old Jennifer gives one to Old Marty.
36	* SceneryCensor: Done with Old Jennifer's face, until she finishes her speech.
37	* TheSixties: Zemeckis and Gale said that they planned to take the second movie from the "1950s greasers and malt shops" to the "1960s hippies and lava lamps".
38	* StealthPun: There's a radio station called "KSERA," whose name evokes the old song "Que sera, sera"--"whatever will be, will be."
39	* TechnologyMarchesOn: Remember when Biff and his cronies were pushing around George in the Lou's Cafe for not doing his homework? Now it's Griff and his cronies pushing around Norman. Albeit this time Norman had done Griff's homework, but it's still rejected by Griff because Norman had entered the data with his own passkey code. However, this time, Griff doesn't need time to re-copy it, he'll just have Norman redo it, after giving him the passkey code.
40	* ThemeNaming: '67 Doc's dog is named Newton, joining Copernicus and Einstein.
41	* TimelineAlteringMacGuffin:
42	** The former TropeNamer Gray's Sports Almanac appears in this script. Surprisingly, in this version, it takes Marty ''very'' little time to retrieve the book in the third act, and 1985-A fades away from a matchbook almost as soon as the almanac is back in Marty's possession (he doesn't even have to burn the book or anything).
43	** Later on, it's subverted: Marty is forced to throw the almanac out of the [=DeLorean=] to reduce the excess weight, whereupon [[spoiler:it's discovered by Otis Peabody, who is camping out nearby. The illiterate Peabody promptly burns it as useless garbage.]]
44	* TimeTravelTenseTrouble:
45	--> '''Doc:''' ''[referring to his 1967 self]'' Damn, I was crazy in those days. These days. Damn these pronouns!
46	* TranslationByVolume: Marty and Jennifer visit a store clerk in the year 2015. Marty asks for the TimelineAlteringMacGuffin, but the clerk asks, "On what?" After asking a few more times, Marty goes for the direct approach.
47	-->'''Marty:''' ''(very slowly, deliberately)'' Look, I just want to know how much money the Sports Almanac costs.
48	-->'''Clerk:''' ''(just as deliberately)'' And I just want to know what format you want? ROM-Cart, ROM-D, Standard-C, Mini-C or Micro-C? Rental, Lease or download? What's your memcap and baud rate? Interface with me, kid. You'll never get by in this world if you can't interface.
49	-->''(silence)''
50	-->'''Marty:''' Uh, right -- good advice.
51	* WronskiFeint: A variation. Marty and Doc are trying to escape the Hill Valley police and 1985-A in the flying [=DeLorean=], but the cops' gunfire damages a crucial acceleration circuit, meaning that the time machine can't accelerate to 88 while in flight. So Doc puts the car into a nosedive in order to reach the speed for temporal displacement.

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