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* MagnificentBastard: Loki, who has the telling nickname "TheMagnificent". True, he probably gave himself the title as an act of arrogance, but as he proves in Chapter 14, he ''more'' than deserves it. He engineered the ''entire plot'' up until that point, both eliminating Celestia as a threat and creating a situation wherein Big Mac would have no choice but to [[spoiler: surrender Thor's powers to him]], which is exactly what happened. Then, when [[spoiler: [[BastardUnderstudy Trixie]] betrays him]], he shows that he anticipated it, and handles it easily. Hell, he even manages to [[spoiler: [[KilledOffForReal die]]]] with class -- when Thor defeats him, [[spoiler: he revels in the fact that his death will [[MassEmpoweringEvent create]] the world ruled by magic he wanted, then [[GoOutWithASmile goes out with a smile]]]].
** Oh, and it's worth noting that the only reason he lost is because Pinkie turned out to be a bigger SpannerInTheWorks than he was able to anticipate.
** Oh, and it's worth noting that the only reason he lost is because Pinkie turned out to be a bigger SpannerInTheWorks than he was able to anticipate.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Loki and Trixie border on this when they threaten to [[spoiler: kill Pinkie]] in order to force Thor to surrender. Especially Trixie, who seems a little ''too'' happy describing how it would happen.
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* MoralEventHorizon: Loki and Trixie border on this when they threaten to [[spoiler: kill Pinkie]] in order to force Thor to surrender. Especially Trixie, who seems a little ''too'' happy describing how it would happen.happen.
*StrangledByTheRedString: Some of the romance between Caramel and Spitfire is a bit forced, with them shifting towards being a couple after interacting for less than half a month.
*StrangledByTheRedString: Some of the romance between Caramel and Spitfire is a bit forced, with them shifting towards being a couple after interacting for less than half a month.
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** Oh, and it's worth noting that the only reason he lost is because Pinkie turned out to be a bigger SpannerInTheWorks than he was able to anticipate.
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** Oh, and it's worth noting that the only reason he lost is because Pinkie turned out to be a bigger SpannerInTheWorks than he was able to anticipate.anticipate.
* MoralEventHorizon: Loki and Trixie border on this when they threaten to [[spoiler: kill Pinkie]] in order to force Thor to surrender. Especially Trixie, who seems a little ''too'' happy describing how it would happen.
* MoralEventHorizon: Loki and Trixie border on this when they threaten to [[spoiler: kill Pinkie]] in order to force Thor to surrender. Especially Trixie, who seems a little ''too'' happy describing how it would happen.
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* MagnificentBastard: Loki, who has the telling nickname "TheMagnificent". True, he probably gave himself the title as an act of arrogance, but as he proves in Chapter 14, he ''more'' than deserves it. He engineered the ''entire plot'' up until that point, both eliminating Celestia as a threat and creating a situation wherein Big Mac would have no choice but to [[spoiler: surrender Thor's powers to him]], which is exactly what happened. Then, when [[spoiler: [[BastardUnderstudy Trixie]] betrays him]], he shows that he anticipated it, and handles it easily. Hell, he even manages to [[spoiler: [[KilledOffForReal die]]]] with class -- when Thor defeats him, [[spoiler: he revels in the fact that his death will [[MassEmpoweringEvent create]] the world ruled by magic he wanted, then [[GoOutWithASmile goes out with a smile]]]].
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* MagnificentBastard: Loki, who has the telling nickname "TheMagnificent". True, he probably gave himself the title as an act of arrogance, but as he proves in Chapter 14, he ''more'' than deserves it. He engineered the ''entire plot'' up until that point, both eliminating Celestia as a threat and creating a situation wherein Big Mac would have no choice but to [[spoiler: surrender Thor's powers to him]], which is exactly what happened. Then, when [[spoiler: [[BastardUnderstudy Trixie]] betrays him]], he shows that he anticipated it, and handles it easily. Hell, he even manages to [[spoiler: [[KilledOffForReal die]]]] with class -- when Thor defeats him, [[spoiler: he revels in the fact that his death will [[MassEmpoweringEvent create]] the world ruled by magic he wanted, then [[GoOutWithASmile goes out with a smile]]]].smile]]]].
** Oh, and it's worth noting that the only reason he lost is because Pinkie turned out to be a bigger SpannerInTheWorks than he was able to anticipate.
** Oh, and it's worth noting that the only reason he lost is because Pinkie turned out to be a bigger SpannerInTheWorks than he was able to anticipate.
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* MagnificentBastard: Loki, who has the telling nickname "TheMagnificent". True, he probably gave himself the title as an act of arrogance, but as he proves in Chapter 14, he ''more'' than deserves it. He engineered the ''entire plot'' up until that point, both eliminating Celestia as a threat and creating a situation wherein Big Mac would have no choice but to [[spoiler: surrender Thor's powers to him]], which is exactly what happened. Then, when [[spoiler: [[BastardUnderstudy Trixie]] betrays him]], he shows that he anticipated it, and handles it easily. Hell, he even manages to [[spoiler: [[KilledOffForReal die]]]] with class -- when Thor defeats him, [[spoiler: he revels in the fact that his death will [[MassSuperpoweringEvent create]] the world ruled by magic he wanted, then [[GoOutWithASmile goes out with a smile]]]].
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* MagnificentBastard: Loki, who has the telling nickname "TheMagnificent". True, he probably gave himself the title as an act of arrogance, but as he proves in Chapter 14, he ''more'' than deserves it. He engineered the ''entire plot'' up until that point, both eliminating Celestia as a threat and creating a situation wherein Big Mac would have no choice but to [[spoiler: surrender Thor's powers to him]], which is exactly what happened. Then, when [[spoiler: [[BastardUnderstudy Trixie]] betrays him]], he shows that he anticipated it, and handles it easily. Hell, he even manages to [[spoiler: [[KilledOffForReal die]]]] with class -- when Thor defeats him, [[spoiler: he revels in the fact that his death will [[MassSuperpoweringEvent [[MassEmpoweringEvent create]] the world ruled by magic he wanted, then [[GoOutWithASmile goes out with a smile]]]].
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* MagnificentBastard: Loki, who has the telling nickname "TheMagnificent". True, he probably gave himself the title as an act of arrogance, but as he proves in Chapter 14, he ''more'' than deserves it. He engineered the ''entire plot'' up until that point, both eliminating Celestia as a threat and creating a situation wherein Big Mac would have no choice but to [[spoiler: surrender Thor's powers to him]], which is exactly what happened. Then, when [[spoiler: [[BastardUnderstudy Trixie]] betrays him]], he shows that he anticipated it, and handles it easily. Hell, he even manages to [[spoiler: [[KilledOffForReal die]]]] with class -- when Thor defeats him, [[spoiler: he revels in the fact that his death will [[MassSuperpoweringEvent create]] the world ruled by magic he wanted, then [[GoOutWithASmile goes out with a smile]]]].
